The Luna Queen Comments
Aneesahs
so here parents didn't come or weren't invited?
09/04/2023 21:12Kathy Kinsley
It is Sarah traveling with Frederick to the witches.
09/04/2023 20:42Bridg Davis
is this book a standalone?
09/04/2023 19:46
Reader-139197
are we going to ignore the fact that Daphne Rosen is the name of a pornstar? lol
09/04/2023 19:17Rebecca Farmer
awesome story!!!
09/04/2023 18:22
Mez
Joesph Major stole the blurb and content from your book. The book is called “The Alpha’s Pet”.
09/04/2023 15:46Jennifer Kaltz
you have Daphne and Sarah name confused in the paragraph when they are close to the border
09/04/2023 14:07Lilo Lutu
So far I love Dwayne and how he treats Daphne. it’s very romantic
09/04/2023 12:38Audrey Fairbourn
so I’m guessing he didn’t sleep with the imposter???
09/04/2023 09:27man I'm loving this Daphne. very high spirited and I'm only in the second chapter
09/04/2023 09:27Well Daphne was definitely something The Apna King was not expecting haha!
09/04/2023 09:20petty much
09/04/2023 09:16Mariam Metreveli
ahhhhhhhhh next chapter is gonna be good
09/04/2023 08:54Mary-Ann Kutu
used a few words wrong, but nice book over all
09/04/2023 08:53the phrase is “count for something” not “account for…”
09/04/2023 08:43my
09/04/2023 08:39Kika Conner-Ramirez
nice
09/04/2023 08:38anna mclaughlin
The alpha king: Is written so good I had a difficult time putting this book down Dwayne and Daphne are the perfect team perfect couple. I love how Dwayne chooses Daphne she's so different from everybody else she is a true Luna a true leader. She is brave and courageous put through so many trials she never wished to be the alpha Kings Luna.
09/04/2023 08:30Champagne not Champaigne. 🙂
09/04/2023 08:28
Yangi Dyanga
this book is awesome 😎 and I like it 😊😊 thanks author for writing the book 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:27
Bella Jersey 2
dear lord better buckle up and have iv fluids on stand by and the kitchen ready to go
09/04/2023 08:25Bella Jersey 2
I know Daphne not ready for full blown sex. but come on they could explore each other’s bodies
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
Daphne and Dwayne seem to like each other and will be one hell’va power couple
09/04/2023 08:22Bella Jersey 2
I know that’s what he thought be tell her he messed me all up
09/04/2023 08:22Bella Jersey 2
I human are extinct let’s slang time to ear some crow Dwayne
09/04/2023 08:21Bella Jersey 2
what role will Fiona play?
09/04/2023 08:21Sandra Humphries
interesting so far.
09/04/2023 08:17Punctuation should go inside of quotes. So if you did a search for “, and replaced with ,” it’d fix a lot of those.
09/04/2023 08:17Ta1sha
very short chapters but I like the story and I am very interested to keep reading it.The main character is interesting.
09/04/2023 08:17Reader-844186
I love it so far 🤗
09/04/2023 08:17
Shellian Mckenzie
in the chapter titled baby bump you put Daphne instead of Sarah
09/04/2023 08:15Bella Jersey 2
I think she needs a shot or two of wolfsbane
09/04/2023 08:15Bella Jersey 2
I was waiting for this the stupid people did not disappoint
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
oh sweetie you can kiss you tip goodbye. I will give waitress the befit of the doubt. she could’ve been that way before the king walk in the door
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
make sure Sarah has her sneakers somewhere after the official stuff is done. it’s annoying ceremony but the core to know she is value and taken care of
09/04/2023 08:13Bella Jersey 2
I need explanation how is the bond made ?
09/04/2023 08:13Bella Jersey 2
she is gonna be exactly what this world needs. a good kick in the ass
09/04/2023 08:13A'smile Alexander
3/16/21 started reading
09/04/2023 08:13A'smile Alexander
I highly recommend this book. it is officially apart of my top 20 recommend reading list!!!!
09/04/2023 08:13Bella Jersey 2
I like Dwayne defended her. but Eric was clearly playing a game and he won. why did Dwayne stop aging?
09/04/2023 08:12Bella Jersey 2
I know somebody that’s not gonna reach 258 birthday
09/04/2023 08:12Bella Jersey 2
oh boy who’s gonna tell her how the meeting should go?
09/04/2023 08:12Ta1sha
oh man for sure the queen needed to be humbled she was just getting a little bit of a big head but I hope she can find a true friend. can’t wait to read what’s next. loving the story.
09/04/2023 08:11Bella Jersey 2
you know what I want to take a certain alpha and daughter down a peg or two. can’t wait for Daphne’s mom to see her in love
09/04/2023 08:11Bella Jersey 2
it doesn’t sound like she wants to go back
09/04/2023 08:10Bella Jersey 2
you could just how uncomfortable she was. I hope shopping goes the way I want
09/04/2023 08:10Ta1sha
aww I love how he is treating her. still wanna know why her mom is terrible?
09/04/2023 08:10Deb Warren
Amazing book. In my top 10. Read it in one day I loved it much. could not put it down!!
09/04/2023 08:10Leena Dees
is this the second book?
09/04/2023 08:09Kim haining
I can't get over how this story portrays masterbation as "dirty". how delightfully 1930's
09/04/2023 08:09SandyJR524
loafer = a type of shoe. Loofah is a type of body sponge. when she’s in the shower scrubbing her neck w a loafer I so confused 😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:07Bella Jersey 2
why is he purposely pushing buttons?
09/04/2023 08:01Bella Jersey 2
oh boy the stuck Lunas are not gonna like being kept waiting. it’s gonna be cool to me the cool ones
09/04/2023 08:01Bella Jersey 2
why Dwayne go so cold so fast?
09/04/2023 08:01Reader-164651
I can’t unlock this chapter!!!
09/04/2023 08:01is it bad that I laughed when Dwayne said to case Roland's ear? (i'm crazy and weird I know but it was funny to me)
09/04/2023 07:56I love this book
09/04/2023 07:56
wh0.Ash1
Oh my God when she say “when I heard my name called I almost choked on my champagne in the first thing that came to mind was to make a “B LINE” for the door” lmoaoooo I died 🤣🤣
09/04/2023 07:54Bella Jersey 2
will Daphne meekly accept or is she gonna raise hell. can we find oh so future farther in law of the king. I want to see his face
09/04/2023 07:53Andrea Wesson
Really liking the story. The characters pace so far is terrific & not just a meet, sexual interaction; then either Happy forever or loss & devastation.
09/04/2023 07:47Bella Jersey 2
yes cool friend Fiona
09/04/2023 07:45Bella Jersey 2
he just allowed him to go on and on dig his own hole. asked was that all he said yes. great now allow my guards to kindly escort you to the dungeons. OMG LOL
09/04/2023 07:43
Tenesia Tee
this is book one? and the rise of the humans is book 2?
09/04/2023 07:42
Jonelle Henrickson
I am loving this story! May I please give some constructive criticism? I hope I do not offend... but she is in the hospital hooked to IV's. And medication will be given through that IV clamp and she would not have a separate needle for sedative. Just some medical knowledge for future reference. But baby, you have captivated me with this story. Thank you for your hard work just to entertain us!! ✌❤🌞
09/04/2023 07:40
Cassia Lim
Just a little help not that u need any though.Just dont drag your suspense that long cause some readers tend to lose interest. Like me,but I mean not everybody's like that so good work🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😁😁😁😁
09/04/2023 07:30
Kira Fheart
i liked when places like this did a time. check to unlock chapters
09/04/2023 07:29Sarah White
lmaooooo we skipped over SO many steps of the birthing process love it 😂😂
09/04/2023 07:27Angela Francis
what is the name of the first book
09/04/2023 07:26Cassia Lim
I love how u respond to your readers comments that pretty awesome.
09/04/2023 07:24Bethany Clulow
LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH!!
09/04/2023 07:19Tiara Tiara
May I ask for help to create an Anystories account, I'm a writer from Indonesia
09/04/2023 07:08Annette Purscelley
loved the story 🤩 can’t wait for rise of the humans 😊
09/04/2023 07:07Sabrina Lopez
nee reader ..great so far
09/04/2023 07:01
Josey Byrd
any one have any redemption codes
09/04/2023 07:01Josey Byrd
does anyone no any redemption coded
09/04/2023 07:01
THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑
Heyyyy!!! So, I can remember a reader talking about how they would love a book about the vampire Lord and the witch head as well, even though I cannot find the comment now☹ Do you think I should honor the request?
09/04/2023 06:59Reader-969959
is chapter 1 missing
09/04/2023 06:58
Nastassha S
I can’t download the next chapter. 😫
09/04/2023 06:58
Irish Eyes81
love! lease keep updating!!
09/04/2023 06:58Lauren Coray
loving the story but the last chapter is left on a cliff hanger wish you could open another chapter please :)
09/04/2023 06:58Nastassaja Lewis-Young
love the book so far but at this point I just want it to be finished before I lose interest. The suspense is too mucu
09/04/2023 06:58
blazing star
can’t wait for more!!!
09/04/2023 06:57
Sabrina Fernald
wow yummy lol
09/04/2023 06:57Christina Jaquez
love the book so far
09/04/2023 06:57Reader-817689
I love thus story but I need it to be added to the last chapter has left off on a cliffhanger and I need to know how it ends
09/04/2023 06:57THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑
To all my beautiful reader, I am happy to say that the first chapter of Rise of The Humans is out
09/04/2023 06:56Stephanie Harrison
dying for more than one chapter a day. I have re-read the book 5 times now waiting for new chapters. Loving it and can't wait for more.
09/04/2023 06:56
Crystal Kostenbauder
can't wait till I get to read the 2nd book I really loved the 1st book
09/04/2023 06:56
Nicole McKinnon
I love this story, just wish there would be more than 1 chapter a day uploaded
09/04/2023 06:56Christina Jaquez
is the 2nd book out yet rise of the human
09/04/2023 06:56
giselle caraballo
having trouble seeing new chapter
09/04/2023 06:56
cloudy
gosh! give me a guy like him!!! so strong, yet tender and caring! I’m a fan of their love
09/04/2023 06:56Reader-505251
I can’t find the second book to this one ☹️
09/04/2023 06:56Katelyn Klevgard
Wont let me download Chapter 62. How do I send a troubleshoot?
09/04/2023 06:56Katelyn Klevgard
Having issues downloading chapter 62. What can I do?
09/04/2023 06:56
Lilithrevised
The story was very entertaining. I do wish that Daphne and Dwayne had addressed that Dwayne raped her a week before he was under the spell. Kind of a big deal in their relationship. The only point it's addressed was to say that he "ruffled her up" which is detrimental to his characterization. Throughout the whole story you worked so hard to create a problematic yet loving couple. That particular scene derails that effort. At the end, I can't believe in his love for her, and I can't believe that she's genuine because of that scene. Aside from that, the story was very enjoyable, and I fully intend this comment to be helpful and give insight to reader reaction, and NOT criticize your plot choices. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more from you in the future.
09/04/2023 06:55
Noemie Nilsson
such a lucky girl! love the Cinderella plot!
09/04/2023 06:55
