The First Queen Comments
Barb Austin
hmmm yea it just ended 🤪
12/17/2023 01:26Barb Austin
totally different story am I missing something
12/09/2023 06:24Barb Austin
awww🥰❤️❤️❤️
11/24/2023 02:18
Reader-897421
Ron should know by now what’s coming.
09/05/2023 01:32
Fearlesscami
Only 3 pages in the story and I'm already hooked. That's what I've been looking for 🤌🏻☺️
09/05/2023 01:17Reader-897421
She has something I her. Let’s find out
09/05/2023 01:00John Robinson
o9p5 Absolutely love the Prologue, then the first chapter poor Lilly how could they be so cruel hopefully they will get what they deserve & who is the mystery visitor? Great story so far
09/05/2023 00:20Adele Rosencrance
Maybe she is a Lycan with dark powers from ancient times,?. Just my thoughts.
09/05/2023 00:18Rafael
#o9p5# I like the introduction. it hasn't to many information but the book seems very interesting. I like the mystery that it seems to have. I will read it soon
09/05/2023 00:16
Tracey Morgan
o9p5 a good captivated me straight away well done
09/05/2023 00:08Bianca Bratu
o9p5 this story started bit differently which makes it all the better. this one is surely a must read for me
09/05/2023 00:07Me Myself
o9p5 I am liking the book so far. I hope it is complete so I can finish
09/04/2023 23:58Reader-731248
o9p5 From the introduction the storyline seems like a good one.
09/04/2023 23:58Merle Langevoord
o9p5 interesting story so far. want to keep reading it
09/04/2023 23:39Kat Waters
o9p5 you sure have to feel sorry for her guess she will show them all up hopefully she leaves them all in the dust
09/04/2023 23:26
Sammy
o9p5 I've read quite a few comments saying that this book is plagiarised. Sorry, I'm going to give this book a miss as we can't prove otherwise
09/04/2023 23:07Jennifer Marie Terlaje Fegurgur
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09/04/2023 21:57Jackie Hooper
was a great start but definitely not some more to it like what about the baby and the way you Transitioned it from Lily and Lucas to Elliot and Iris it just felt like a jump I wasn’t sure I was ready for but definitely don’t stop writing.
09/04/2023 12:06
Ava
chapters are way to short 🙁
09/04/2023 10:15Janet Rohovich
not bad the story line is good
09/04/2023 10:09
Melanie Hughes
I love this story
09/04/2023 08:34
Mokshada Swan
A fascinating book. Loving it
09/04/2023 08:16Nkoloko Mma Naledi Moekoa
Maj is ellias story also loaded on here under a different name?
09/04/2023 07:47
Anthony
If you notice the name on iReader it's called Queen's Restraint and the authors name is Majidreams. Look at the name here it is almost the same MajlovesJ. Surely that lets you know it's the same author
09/04/2023 07:39Hannah Johnson
love!!! recommended, at some points I found it a tad confusing but everything fell into place. the author is extremely talented!! LOVE
09/04/2023 07:19
Tina Jones
where's my story, it hung up, i backed out, came in and it's in a different story!
09/04/2023 07:11
Dana McCaskill
can’t unlock the chapters
09/04/2023 07:07
Christabel esohe
why didn't you add the 3rd book?
09/04/2023 07:07
Melissa Agyemang
not bad
09/04/2023 07:04Krissy
I'm enjoying the story so far but the extreme overuse of the words troublesome weakling and slowpoke are now just boring and frustrating
09/04/2023 07:04Krissy
enjoying the story so far but the extreme overused words; weakling, slowpoke and troublesome are seriously starting to bore me
09/04/2023 07:04Krissy
enjoying the story so far but the extreme overused words; weakling, slowpoke and troublesome are seriously starting to bore me
09/04/2023 07:04
mrs wrench
isn't this the queen's restraint
09/04/2023 07:00
Fuji Apple
isn’t this the same book as “The Queen’s Restraint” ?
09/04/2023 06:59Nat Powell
how can u get points? without buying
09/04/2023 06:58Fuji Apple
I love both books, so well written. I hope their is a third book, I want to see if Lucas and Lilly have kids
09/04/2023 06:58
Jem Jem
Do you have a beta reader? I'd be happy to do that for you.
09/04/2023 06:58Stephanie E Chumbley
That's how it ends? will there be a sequel or more to Elliots's story? what about the birth of their baby?
09/04/2023 06:58
Jennifer vories
I love this story, but felt like the ending was a bit to abrupt.
09/04/2023 06:57HK21
I am so in love with this story! I love the character development and mystery behind them!
09/04/2023 06:57
An_angel_21
I really like the story when we able to read other chapters
09/04/2023 06:56
A.K.Knight
Nice Blurb.
09/04/2023 06:56Ebonie Ealim
whens the next update cant wait please
09/04/2023 06:56
