The First Queen Comments

  • Fearlesscami

    Only 3 pages in the story and I'm already hooked. That's what I've been looking for 🤌🏻☺️

    05/22/2023 06:54

  • Reader-897421

    She has something I her. Let’s find out

    04/29/2023 01:41

  • Reader-897421

    Ron should know by now what’s coming.

    04/29/2023 01:20

  • Adele Rosencrance

    Maybe she is a Lycan with dark powers from ancient times,?. Just my thoughts.

    04/16/2023 20:30

  • Sammy

    o9p5 I've read quite a few comments saying that this book is plagiarised. Sorry, I'm going to give this book a miss as we can't prove otherwise

    04/09/2023 23:20

  • Rafael

    #o9p5# I like the introduction. it hasn't to many information but the book seems very interesting. I like the mystery that it seems to have. I will read it soon

    04/09/2023 20:58

  • Merle Langevoord

    o9p5 interesting story so far. want to keep reading it

    04/09/2023 13:56

  • Bianca Bratu

    o9p5 this story started bit differently which makes it all the better. this one is surely a must read for me

    04/09/2023 13:25

  • Me Myself

    o9p5 I am liking the book so far. I hope it is complete so I can finish

    04/09/2023 12:42

  • Reader-731248

    o9p5 From the introduction the storyline seems like a good one.

    04/09/2023 12:28

  • John Robinson

    o9p5 Absolutely love the Prologue, then the first chapter poor Lilly how could they be so cruel hopefully they will get what they deserve & who is the mystery visitor? Great story so far

    04/09/2023 08:06

  • Tracey Morgan

    o9p5 a good captivated me straight away well done

    04/09/2023 06:39

  • Debra Sykes

    o9p5 I think the start of the book was good different but nicely done will be saving it to my library for later

    04/09/2023 06:32

  • Kat Waters

    o9p5 you sure have to feel sorry for her guess she will show them all up hopefully she leaves them all in the dust

    04/09/2023 01:43

  • Jennifer Marie Terlaje Fegurgur

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  • Jennifer Marie Terlaje Fegurgur

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    02/28/2023 23:09

  • Jennifer Marie Terlaje Fegurgur

    02/28/2023 23:05

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  • Jackie Hooper

    was a great start but definitely not some more to it like what about the baby and the way you Transitioned it from Lily and Lucas to Elliot and Iris it just felt like a jump I wasn’t sure I was ready for but definitely don’t stop writing.

    02/25/2022 15:48

  • Ava

    chapters are way to short 🙁

    01/15/2022 01:57

  • Janet Rohovich

    not bad the story line is good

    01/11/2022 18:28

  • Melanie Hughes

    I love this story

    10/04/2021 01:14

  • Nkoloko Mma Naledi Moekoa

    Maj is ellias story also loaded on here under a different name?

    06/17/2021 11:33

  • Mokshada Swan

    A fascinating book. Loving it

    05/30/2021 19:52

  • Anthony

    By the way, I loved this series especially this story. I don't know if it was written different on this app or not though.

    01/19/2021 01:52

  • Anthony

    If you notice the name on iReader it's called Queen's Restraint and the authors name is Majidreams. Look at the name here it is almost the same MajlovesJ. Surely that lets you know it's the same author

    01/19/2021 01:50

  • Hannah Johnson

    love!!! recommended, at some points I found it a tad confusing but everything fell into place. the author is extremely talented!! LOVE

    10/26/2020 09:49

  • Tina Jones

    where's my story, it hung up, i backed out, came in and it's in a different story!

    09/16/2020 22:57

  • Shannon Gerke

    This book is also on Readict titled Luna. And its free. Good job stealing.

    09/14/2020 13:46

  • San Fran

    This is my first time ever reading something like this and I can’t finish it. I found it truly interesting and I do want to find out how it continues but I refuse to buy the coins because had it been pay up front is one thing. I feel like this was a bait and switch. to the writer I will say from what little I was able to read, good story I will actual find me a second hand book store and buy a few lil paperbacks to keep reading others like it. thank you for opening my eyes to something new

    09/09/2020 03:27

  • Antaneijah Garrett

    I HATE HAVING TO BUY COINS! I JUST WANNA FINISH THE STORY!👿👿👿👿

    09/07/2020 00:51

  • Dana McCaskill

    can’t unlock the chapters

    09/05/2020 18:00

  • Cherish McDaniel

    This app only has 116 chapters. The wattpad only has 23 chapters. The story lite app has all 182 chapters but is so freaking expensive. You have to spend roughly around $20.00 to buy the book. I have no problem paying for the book but good lord that is 2 months worth of Amazon Kindle unlimited reading. It has been deleted by some apps & others do not have it. Can someone please tell me where to find this WHOLE book without paying a ridiculous amount for one chapter at a time?

    09/04/2020 10:49

  • Christabel esohe

    why didn't you add the 3rd book?

    09/02/2020 06:41

  • Reader-690225

    I liked the base of the story, but my god do a spell check and verbiage check for grammar accuracy. it’s painful to read......

    08/29/2020 03:14

  • Krissy

    I'm enjoying the story so far but the extreme overuse of the words troublesome weakling and slowpoke are now just boring and frustrating

    08/20/2020 09:30

  • Krissy

    enjoying the story so far but the extreme overused words; weakling, slowpoke and troublesome are seriously starting to bore me

    08/20/2020 09:27

  • Krissy

    enjoying the story so far but the extreme overused words; weakling, slowpoke and troublesome are seriously starting to bore me

    08/20/2020 09:27

  • Electrovana

    Nice plaguarism. Book is now called “Luna” on Wattpad.

    08/14/2020 15:33

  • Sarah Whittaker-Jones

    your story is being plagiarism and is called the queen’s restraint and advertised on Facebook

    08/08/2020 21:02

  • Melissa Agyemang

    not bad

    08/07/2020 15:21

  • Fuji Apple

    isn’t this the same book as “The Queen’s Restraint” ?

    07/29/2020 07:01

  • mrs wrench

    isn't this the queen's restraint

    07/28/2020 16:14

  • Nat Powell

    how can u get points? without buying

    07/15/2020 20:26

  • Felicia Resendez

    all of my chapters are locked again and the book is on there twice

    07/10/2020 21:05

  • Fuji Apple

    I love both books, so well written. I hope their is a third book, I want to see if Lucas and Lilly have kids

    07/09/2020 03:13

  • Jem Jem

    Do you have a beta reader? I'd be happy to do that for you.

    07/09/2020 02:37

  • Stephanie E Chumbley

    That's how it ends? will there be a sequel or more to Elliots's story? what about the birth of their baby?

    07/05/2020 23:25

  • HK21

    I am so in love with this story! I love the character development and mystery behind them!

    07/04/2020 01:03

  • Jennifer vories

    I love this story, but felt like the ending was a bit to abrupt.

    06/21/2020 03:25

  • Zoany P East

    the story is beautiful but I can't unlocked the chapters

    06/16/2020 08:14

  • Ebonie Ealim

    whens the next update cant wait please

    06/02/2020 15:33

  • An_angel_21

    I really like the story when we able to read other chapters

    05/31/2020 10:57

  • A.K.Knight

    Nice Blurb.

    05/22/2020 12:05