The Lone She Wolf Comments

  • Ashley Hersh

    yeah I only got half way through the second chapter. There NEEDS TO BE A RAPE TRIGGER WARNING!!!! Also, too many errors and kinda hard to follow. And who the hell hides under the bed when their parents get a bad letter?!?!

    09/04/2023 10:51

  • Lisa Wells Jarnagin

    Im loving this book so far

    09/04/2023 10:48

  • DDalangpan

    Doesn't he already know her name? why does he keep calling her young she wolf?

    09/04/2023 10:46

  • DDalangpan

    It's "shaking like a leaf" not leave, and mop...not map. Too many grammatical errors. And we get it....she has big boobs and ass...no need to keep repeating it.

    09/04/2023 10:41

  • Heather Rubey

    lost you

    09/04/2023 10:39

  • Ako Si Akai

    I've lost interest already. it described everything in great details

    09/04/2023 10:32

  • LIANA ORTEGA

    sis I haven't read ur book but keep on trucking u got this just get a better editing program!

    09/04/2023 10:31

  • Annette Dale

    I’m sorry but your a good young author keep writing! some people are just overly critical and cranky!! i like the little sexy smutt , so go ahead and keeping writing!! I’ll read !!

    09/04/2023 10:29

  • Heather Rubey

    SAY that. the present and past tense has to be corrected!!!!

    09/04/2023 10:26

  • Heather Rubey

    it is a mop not a map that is so pulling me out of the story every time...ugh

    09/04/2023 10:26

  • Peggy Frederick

    I love reading this book. Keep up the great work.

    09/04/2023 10:25

  • Heather Rubey

    every scared is spelled as sacred.... totally different meaning!!! pulls you out of the story

    09/04/2023 10:18

  • DDalangpan

    She's like a toddler, her way of protesting is by throwing herself on the ground. Story seems like it's just dragging on....I've lost my interest.

    09/04/2023 10:10

  • Reader-882

    the author is either actually a 12 yr old boy or wants to be one ….I want to like the story line but the vulgarity is ruining the whole thing.

    09/04/2023 10:04

  • Heather Ellis

    lots of repeating about larg firm breast and her butt and vagina...like really how old is this author? sounds like a 16 year old!

    09/04/2023 09:37

  • I really wanted to enjoy it . but I can tell this was written by a man . kept talking about her big breast .. ugh

    09/04/2023 09:12

  • Ria Payton

    I am tired of ripping other people clothes😒

    09/04/2023 09:11

  • jgma

    he lost me at “fleshy cunt”

    09/04/2023 09:06

  • Sandra Aguayo

    I am currently reading this book it’s seems like a good book so far I’d like to know if you are going to update on the deadly alpha

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • havnt read the book yet but y is the male main character have the same name as a member from 1D?? is the author a Directioner??

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • Leah Danielle Pyhala

    This author has potential, but she really needs to invest in an editor. I don’t think English is her first language or maybe she’s very young. Sentences are choppy and words are misspelled. As a fellow author, I would HIGHLY recommend hiring a professional editor. The stories would be so much better!

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Joanne Cleveland

    I enjoyed the book thanks please right more

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Jay Squad

    the moment I saw those wolves I dont care if i didn't have any strength left i would have shifted and bolted

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Bonib2

    I seriously think the writer has affinity for big breasts. He can't stopped writing about it. I hope you get an editor and proofreader soon as reading the story is a bit cringeworthy. I think I will hold off buying chapters for now as it has potential to be a good book once it is edited and re-written.

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Reader-545241

    I wish she would just grow a back bone already

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Suzanne Harpur

    Why is the grammar so bad? why do you call a leaf a leave and a mop a map do you not speak or understand the language you are writing in? And finally can you please try staying in the correct tense if its past then use that tense but if its present time you need to use present tense and PLEASE stop swelling on 50inch hair fat cunt large breasts and large ass it get very boring reading the same description of these assets over and over again

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Maria Hadjioannou Georgiou

    Avery must tell the truth to her mate

    09/04/2023 08:26

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I still do trust what’s going on here

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • kbarr564

    why does everyone hate her so much and treat her so badly??

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Bella Jersey 2

    is he gonna rape her?

    09/04/2023 08:22

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I do think you describe breast, nipples, and ass to much. unless it has some meaning in sentence. it’s just taking up space

    09/04/2023 08:22

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I’m having real hard time. does she hate her body or like it?

    09/04/2023 08:22

  • SandyJR524

    in case anyone gets confused…I figured out a Coburg is actually a cupboard. (a type of cabinet) Coburg is a city name…inAustralia

    09/04/2023 08:22

  • I really enjoyed this book! thank you to the writer!

    09/04/2023 08:21

  • Amber Perry

    I think coburg is meant to be cupboard or cabinet! Coburg is a place (in Germany) not an item!!!! also dust should definitely say dusk. dusk being the time of day when the sun is going down turning day into night!

    09/04/2023 08:21

  • I want to slap some sense into Avery!!! tell the truth! she was a child, and if Liam can’t understand that then he can go to hell and take his mommy exgf and herbal doc with him!! so my f exgf had a miscarriage was it natural or did she take the herb she wanted Alice to give Avery???

    09/04/2023 08:20

  • Sandra Aguayo

    I just realized this book is the same as the deadly alpha it’s the same just different name

    09/04/2023 08:20

  • Eden

    it’s getting annoying to read her say that she has fat cunt, big ass, and huge breasts. Its like she’s saying “MMMM I have big fat juicy mommy milkers 🤤😩”

    09/04/2023 08:19

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Liam and Alex can’t be that desperate over one woman or is it I saw it first??

    09/04/2023 08:18

  • Bella Jersey 2

    the door effectively was locked from the outside. I’d don’t me to be stupid but break a window and go for it

    09/04/2023 08:14

  • Sage Glidewell

    this is really rough to read. an okay story but needs a ton of work

    09/04/2023 08:14

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I like the doctor

    09/04/2023 08:14

  • Bella Jersey 2

    sounds good to me girlfriend

    09/04/2023 08:14

  • Bella Jersey 2

    maybe she can get away

    09/04/2023 08:13

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I want to what the trials are

    09/04/2023 08:13

  • Lozzig

    Seems like a great story but has lots of issues. obviously never been edited as there are grammar mistakes everywhere and it’s constantly switching between past and present tense. A lot of unnecessary mentions and descriptions of her nipples, breasts, ass, “fat cunt.” we get it, she’s hot. And stop talking about her nipples getting hard in random moments like when she’s dying on the cave floor. I’m liking the story so far, and the steamy parts are written very steamy, but it’s a struggle to read.

    09/04/2023 08:13

  • Bella Jersey 2

    the punishment is not over is it ?

    09/04/2023 08:13

  • Bella Jersey 2

    what’s gonna happen next

    09/04/2023 08:11

  • halima adam

    do we also get points for comanting ?

    09/04/2023 08:11

  • Kalynn Kowitz

    you should consider not repeating the same adjectives over and over again.... we don't need to hear about her large, firm breasts 50 times.... especially when she's just walking or crawling somewhere

    09/04/2023 08:10

  • Martha Oakley

    what's a couburg? In America we call them cupboards. Are you from a different country? or is English a second language? I'm not trying to be mean I'm really asking? As there can be a lot lost in translation.

    09/04/2023 08:10

  • Bella Jersey 2

    who is she?

    09/04/2023 08:10

  • Bella Jersey 2

    brave woman you go girl you earn my respect. we still have to find out why she loaths herself

    09/04/2023 08:10

  • Bella Jersey 2

    he was hold her neck by his TEETH?

    09/04/2023 08:10

  • feedmebooks13

    it’s weird to keep saying her hair is 50 inches long, no one would measure to find out ... it’s better to simply say “her waist length hair” or some other bodily measurement and it would have the same effect. when I read it as 50 inches I automatically think that I should grab a tape measure to see physically how long that would be.

    09/04/2023 08:09

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I’m really enjoying this story and finding out why this girl thinks so low of herself

    09/04/2023 08:08

  • Bella Jersey 2

    calm went right out the window. maybe you some valuum in that hut

    09/04/2023 08:08

  • Edie Gyorki

    why is her reaction to everything to get naked and pull out her hair?

    09/04/2023 08:07

  • Bella Jersey 2

    good question were are we?

    09/04/2023 08:07

  • Did anyone proofread this book? it's really hard to follow when changing the wording in your brain. Other than that, is a good story.

    09/04/2023 08:06

  • Martha Oakley

    I'm reading and it's a good story line. but poorly written.

    09/04/2023 08:06

  • Raj Kanwar

    okay

    09/04/2023 07:54

  • dr.penguin

    this is so rough to read the repetitive adjectives make me cringe its poorly written

    09/04/2023 07:53

  • Wcha

    why does it keep describing her body in that way and if she was starving and living as a wolf for 2 years I would think she be malnourished

    09/04/2023 07:53

  • Bella Jersey 2

    this is literally disgusting. I’ll still read but hate him

    09/04/2023 07:48

  • Bella Jersey 2

    didn’t Liam give her to Alexander?

    09/04/2023 07:48

  • Bella Jersey 2

    i don’t know why she fight to live

    09/04/2023 07:48

  • Susanne Karmacsi

    is this book finished?

    09/04/2023 07:47

  • Victoria Brinson

    so she hates her life and wants to die but when she gets into a hard situation, she wants someone to save her? hmm..

    09/04/2023 07:45

  • Bella Jersey 2

    you like to put your woman through the ringers in your book.

    09/04/2023 07:44

  • Bella Jersey 2

    there’s a seven day trial one down 6 to go

    09/04/2023 07:44

  • Bella Jersey 2

    what is in the letter?

    09/04/2023 07:43

  • Bella Jersey 2

    oh god what’s gonna happen

    09/04/2023 07:42

  • Bella Jersey 2

    what the hell is going on?

    09/04/2023 07:38

  • Victoria Brinson

    how did the old lady betray her? she is annoying!

    09/04/2023 07:33

  • OLIVIA125

    I love this novel; You have wonderful stories. Also I am mad at you for ending the Wolf without a name like that. you are heartless😧😳

    09/04/2023 07:31

  • Linda Hughes

    What a horrible mother!! She needs to be *itch slapped into next week

    09/04/2023 07:22

  • Donna Moncus

    how do I find either book 1 or 2 from The Lone She Wolf. I really really enjoyed the book!!!

    09/04/2023 07:22

  • gwendolyn bennett

    I'm excited about the new book! but I am confuse who is speaking in this last chapter. and who is looking for paisley

    09/04/2023 07:21

  • Heather Covington

    good read

    09/04/2023 07:21

  • lil'momma25

    Loving this story. but why do you say 50 inch hair instead of long hair?

    09/04/2023 07:20

  • werewolf boy

    I'm reading this novel😍 I shared it with some friends and they are loving it as well. *WONDERFUL STORIES** 👻HAPPY HALLOWEEN

    09/04/2023 07:19

  • lil'momma25

    ugh I really hate how immature she is! I hate how no one told her anything about how you mark someone but how does her wolf not know the truth of marking?

    09/04/2023 07:18

  • gwendolyn bennett

    I am currently re reading this book and it's really great! just thought you would like to know. and yes I cant wait for deadly alpha update all caught up!

    09/04/2023 07:18

  • Wendy Virginia

    definitely getting better

    09/04/2023 07:14

  • Shelly Hay

    awesome book!!

    09/04/2023 07:14

  • Kei Lei Tomshak

    I really enjoyed this story! I hope you continue to write and I will certainly be reading those as well

    09/04/2023 07:13

  • Psycho Kitten

    wishing I didn't have to translate half the misspelled words or meaning. such as a mop bucket instead of map bucket. but otherwise good story

    09/04/2023 07:13

  • Jennyjen

    love the story......

    09/04/2023 07:13

  • Beky Mba

    thats was amazing. hopefully there will be more stories like this

    09/04/2023 07:13

  • Sammy Ann

    I bing read this in 24hrs. I forgot to even sleep 💤 lol

    09/04/2023 07:13

  • gwendolyn bennett

    beautiful! thank you!

    09/04/2023 07:13

  • gwendolyn bennett

    does liam know shes pregnant? is that why he rub her stomach?

    09/04/2023 07:13

  • A.K.Knight

    I'm sorry to say today's update will available tomorrow.

    09/04/2023 07:12

  • gwendolyn bennett

    she needs to tell him! I cant take her anymore!

    09/04/2023 07:12

  • A.K.Knight

    Two new chapters were published today. Thank you all for continuing to peruse the lone she wolf; as we come so close to the ending of the novel😢😭😭😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 07:12

  • Wendy Virginia

    I would of already told him and grew a back bone. I’m starting to not like this book because she’s so weak and sad all the time. it’s just chapter after chapter of a sad pathetic weak wolf that should’ve already gotten stronger and stood up for herself and told her mate everything. come on now....

    09/04/2023 07:12

  • Jennyjen

    is she pregnant???

    09/04/2023 07:11

  • gwendolyn bennett

    how did liam find out?

    09/04/2023 07:11

  • Tiffany Bryant

    😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

    09/04/2023 07:11
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