The Lone She Wolf Comments
Ashley Hersh
yeah I only got half way through the second chapter. There NEEDS TO BE A RAPE TRIGGER WARNING!!!! Also, too many errors and kinda hard to follow. And who the hell hides under the bed when their parents get a bad letter?!?!
09/04/2023 10:51Lisa Wells Jarnagin
Im loving this book so far
09/04/2023 10:48
DDalangpan
Doesn't he already know her name? why does he keep calling her young she wolf?
09/04/2023 10:46DDalangpan
It's "shaking like a leaf" not leave, and mop...not map. Too many grammatical errors. And we get it....she has big boobs and ass...no need to keep repeating it.
09/04/2023 10:41Heather Rubey
lost you
09/04/2023 10:39Ako Si Akai
I've lost interest already. it described everything in great details
09/04/2023 10:32LIANA ORTEGA
sis I haven't read ur book but keep on trucking u got this just get a better editing program!
09/04/2023 10:31Annette Dale
I’m sorry but your a good young author keep writing! some people are just overly critical and cranky!! i like the little sexy smutt , so go ahead and keeping writing!! I’ll read !!
09/04/2023 10:29Heather Rubey
SAY that. the present and past tense has to be corrected!!!!
09/04/2023 10:26Heather Rubey
it is a mop not a map that is so pulling me out of the story every time...ugh
09/04/2023 10:26Peggy Frederick
I love reading this book. Keep up the great work.
09/04/2023 10:25Heather Rubey
every scared is spelled as sacred.... totally different meaning!!! pulls you out of the story
09/04/2023 10:18DDalangpan
She's like a toddler, her way of protesting is by throwing herself on the ground. Story seems like it's just dragging on....I've lost my interest.
09/04/2023 10:10
Reader-882
the author is either actually a 12 yr old boy or wants to be one ….I want to like the story line but the vulgarity is ruining the whole thing.
09/04/2023 10:04Heather Ellis
lots of repeating about larg firm breast and her butt and vagina...like really how old is this author? sounds like a 16 year old!
09/04/2023 09:37I really wanted to enjoy it . but I can tell this was written by a man . kept talking about her big breast .. ugh
09/04/2023 09:12Ria Payton
I am tired of ripping other people clothes😒
09/04/2023 09:11
jgma
he lost me at “fleshy cunt”
09/04/2023 09:06
Sandra Aguayo
I am currently reading this book it’s seems like a good book so far I’d like to know if you are going to update on the deadly alpha
09/04/2023 08:36havnt read the book yet but y is the male main character have the same name as a member from 1D?? is the author a Directioner??
09/04/2023 08:35Leah Danielle Pyhala
This author has potential, but she really needs to invest in an editor. I don’t think English is her first language or maybe she’s very young. Sentences are choppy and words are misspelled. As a fellow author, I would HIGHLY recommend hiring a professional editor. The stories would be so much better!
09/04/2023 08:34Joanne Cleveland
I enjoyed the book thanks please right more
09/04/2023 08:32Jay Squad
the moment I saw those wolves I dont care if i didn't have any strength left i would have shifted and bolted
09/04/2023 08:32
Bonib2
I seriously think the writer has affinity for big breasts. He can't stopped writing about it. I hope you get an editor and proofreader soon as reading the story is a bit cringeworthy. I think I will hold off buying chapters for now as it has potential to be a good book once it is edited and re-written.
09/04/2023 08:31Reader-545241
I wish she would just grow a back bone already
09/04/2023 08:31Suzanne Harpur
Why is the grammar so bad? why do you call a leaf a leave and a mop a map do you not speak or understand the language you are writing in? And finally can you please try staying in the correct tense if its past then use that tense but if its present time you need to use present tense and PLEASE stop swelling on 50inch hair fat cunt large breasts and large ass it get very boring reading the same description of these assets over and over again
09/04/2023 08:28Maria Hadjioannou Georgiou
Avery must tell the truth to her mate
09/04/2023 08:26
Bella Jersey 2
I still do trust what’s going on here
09/04/2023 08:25
kbarr564
why does everyone hate her so much and treat her so badly??
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
is he gonna rape her?
09/04/2023 08:22Bella Jersey 2
I do think you describe breast, nipples, and ass to much. unless it has some meaning in sentence. it’s just taking up space
09/04/2023 08:22Bella Jersey 2
I’m having real hard time. does she hate her body or like it?
09/04/2023 08:22SandyJR524
in case anyone gets confused…I figured out a Coburg is actually a cupboard. (a type of cabinet) Coburg is a city name…inAustralia
09/04/2023 08:22I really enjoyed this book! thank you to the writer!
09/04/2023 08:21Amber Perry
I think coburg is meant to be cupboard or cabinet! Coburg is a place (in Germany) not an item!!!! also dust should definitely say dusk. dusk being the time of day when the sun is going down turning day into night!
09/04/2023 08:21I want to slap some sense into Avery!!! tell the truth! she was a child, and if Liam can’t understand that then he can go to hell and take his mommy exgf and herbal doc with him!! so my f exgf had a miscarriage was it natural or did she take the herb she wanted Alice to give Avery???
09/04/2023 08:20Sandra Aguayo
I just realized this book is the same as the deadly alpha it’s the same just different name
09/04/2023 08:20
Eden
it’s getting annoying to read her say that she has fat cunt, big ass, and huge breasts. Its like she’s saying “MMMM I have big fat juicy mommy milkers 🤤😩”
09/04/2023 08:19Bella Jersey 2
Liam and Alex can’t be that desperate over one woman or is it I saw it first??
09/04/2023 08:18Bella Jersey 2
the door effectively was locked from the outside. I’d don’t me to be stupid but break a window and go for it
09/04/2023 08:14
Sage Glidewell
this is really rough to read. an okay story but needs a ton of work
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
I like the doctor
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
sounds good to me girlfriend
09/04/2023 08:14Bella Jersey 2
maybe she can get away
09/04/2023 08:13Bella Jersey 2
I want to what the trials are
09/04/2023 08:13
Lozzig
Seems like a great story but has lots of issues. obviously never been edited as there are grammar mistakes everywhere and it’s constantly switching between past and present tense. A lot of unnecessary mentions and descriptions of her nipples, breasts, ass, “fat cunt.” we get it, she’s hot. And stop talking about her nipples getting hard in random moments like when she’s dying on the cave floor. I’m liking the story so far, and the steamy parts are written very steamy, but it’s a struggle to read.
09/04/2023 08:13Bella Jersey 2
the punishment is not over is it ?
09/04/2023 08:13Bella Jersey 2
what’s gonna happen next
09/04/2023 08:11
halima adam
do we also get points for comanting ?
09/04/2023 08:11Kalynn Kowitz
you should consider not repeating the same adjectives over and over again.... we don't need to hear about her large, firm breasts 50 times.... especially when she's just walking or crawling somewhere
09/04/2023 08:10
Martha Oakley
what's a couburg? In America we call them cupboards. Are you from a different country? or is English a second language? I'm not trying to be mean I'm really asking? As there can be a lot lost in translation.
09/04/2023 08:10Bella Jersey 2
who is she?
09/04/2023 08:10Bella Jersey 2
brave woman you go girl you earn my respect. we still have to find out why she loaths herself
09/04/2023 08:10Bella Jersey 2
he was hold her neck by his TEETH?
09/04/2023 08:10feedmebooks13
it’s weird to keep saying her hair is 50 inches long, no one would measure to find out ... it’s better to simply say “her waist length hair” or some other bodily measurement and it would have the same effect. when I read it as 50 inches I automatically think that I should grab a tape measure to see physically how long that would be.
09/04/2023 08:09Bella Jersey 2
I’m really enjoying this story and finding out why this girl thinks so low of herself
09/04/2023 08:08Bella Jersey 2
calm went right out the window. maybe you some valuum in that hut
09/04/2023 08:08Edie Gyorki
why is her reaction to everything to get naked and pull out her hair?
09/04/2023 08:07Bella Jersey 2
good question were are we?
09/04/2023 08:07Did anyone proofread this book? it's really hard to follow when changing the wording in your brain. Other than that, is a good story.
09/04/2023 08:06Martha Oakley
I'm reading and it's a good story line. but poorly written.
09/04/2023 08:06Raj Kanwar
okay
09/04/2023 07:54
dr.penguin
this is so rough to read the repetitive adjectives make me cringe its poorly written
09/04/2023 07:53
Wcha
why does it keep describing her body in that way and if she was starving and living as a wolf for 2 years I would think she be malnourished
09/04/2023 07:53Bella Jersey 2
this is literally disgusting. I’ll still read but hate him
09/04/2023 07:48Bella Jersey 2
didn’t Liam give her to Alexander?
09/04/2023 07:48Bella Jersey 2
i don’t know why she fight to live
09/04/2023 07:48
Susanne Karmacsi
is this book finished?
09/04/2023 07:47Victoria Brinson
so she hates her life and wants to die but when she gets into a hard situation, she wants someone to save her? hmm..
09/04/2023 07:45Bella Jersey 2
you like to put your woman through the ringers in your book.
09/04/2023 07:44Bella Jersey 2
there’s a seven day trial one down 6 to go
09/04/2023 07:44Bella Jersey 2
what is in the letter?
09/04/2023 07:43Bella Jersey 2
oh god what’s gonna happen
09/04/2023 07:42Bella Jersey 2
what the hell is going on?
09/04/2023 07:38Victoria Brinson
how did the old lady betray her? she is annoying!
09/04/2023 07:33
OLIVIA125
I love this novel; You have wonderful stories. Also I am mad at you for ending the Wolf without a name like that. you are heartless😧😳
09/04/2023 07:31Linda Hughes
What a horrible mother!! She needs to be *itch slapped into next week
09/04/2023 07:22
Donna Moncus
how do I find either book 1 or 2 from The Lone She Wolf. I really really enjoyed the book!!!
09/04/2023 07:22
gwendolyn bennett
I'm excited about the new book! but I am confuse who is speaking in this last chapter. and who is looking for paisley
09/04/2023 07:21Heather Covington
good read
09/04/2023 07:21
lil'momma25
Loving this story. but why do you say 50 inch hair instead of long hair?
09/04/2023 07:20
werewolf boy
I'm reading this novel😍 I shared it with some friends and they are loving it as well. *WONDERFUL STORIES** 👻HAPPY HALLOWEEN
09/04/2023 07:19lil'momma25
ugh I really hate how immature she is! I hate how no one told her anything about how you mark someone but how does her wolf not know the truth of marking?
09/04/2023 07:18gwendolyn bennett
I am currently re reading this book and it's really great! just thought you would like to know. and yes I cant wait for deadly alpha update all caught up!
09/04/2023 07:18Wendy Virginia
definitely getting better
09/04/2023 07:14Shelly Hay
awesome book!!
09/04/2023 07:14
Kei Lei Tomshak
I really enjoyed this story! I hope you continue to write and I will certainly be reading those as well
09/04/2023 07:13Psycho Kitten
wishing I didn't have to translate half the misspelled words or meaning. such as a mop bucket instead of map bucket. but otherwise good story
09/04/2023 07:13
Jennyjen
love the story......
09/04/2023 07:13Beky Mba
thats was amazing. hopefully there will be more stories like this
09/04/2023 07:13Sammy Ann
I bing read this in 24hrs. I forgot to even sleep 💤 lol
09/04/2023 07:13gwendolyn bennett
beautiful! thank you!
09/04/2023 07:13gwendolyn bennett
does liam know shes pregnant? is that why he rub her stomach?
09/04/2023 07:13
A.K.Knight
I'm sorry to say today's update will available tomorrow.
09/04/2023 07:12gwendolyn bennett
she needs to tell him! I cant take her anymore!
09/04/2023 07:12A.K.Knight
Two new chapters were published today. Thank you all for continuing to peruse the lone she wolf; as we come so close to the ending of the novel😢😭😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 07:12Wendy Virginia
I would of already told him and grew a back bone. I’m starting to not like this book because she’s so weak and sad all the time. it’s just chapter after chapter of a sad pathetic weak wolf that should’ve already gotten stronger and stood up for herself and told her mate everything. come on now....
09/04/2023 07:12Jennyjen
is she pregnant???
09/04/2023 07:11gwendolyn bennett
how did liam find out?
09/04/2023 07:11Tiffany Bryant
😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
09/04/2023 07:11
