Fated to Fall (Series collection) Comments

  • Hl Drake

    this novel is so good Hollywood should make a movie out of it.. Loved it..This book needs to continue tho..

    12/10/2023 19:56

  • Jessica Clark

    I'm looking for the 3rd book. any ideas on where to find ?

    06/19/2023 07:38

  • Nicollette Deveraux

    is there an update on the third book???

    03/11/2023 21:54

  • Amatle Maps

    Dear author, Was the third book ever released??

    01/21/2023 20:38

  • Modjadji Rain

    I sometimes come here just to try my luck, that maybe you've decided to bring the final book here? So you're no more writing books and they are just not on this platform??

    10/29/2022 16:58

  • Chenenigans

    I loved this book as well as the other I've read. I can't wait to read what's next. Once everything is released on amazon, I will definitely be rereading so I don't miss any of the added scenes/story. Great work!!

    05/02/2022 20:30

  • Reader-017917

    I love this story it’s amazing but was a bit upset at the ending, I know your doing another book in this series but you are now starting back on book one on Amazon and splitting that into 2 books then book 2 into 2 books so it’s going to be well over a year for the next instalment to come out ☹️ xx

    10/26/2021 18:57

  • E.j. Boney

    I was in love with this, you’re a great storyteller!

    09/09/2021 00:12

  • Nora Blue Moon

    Off to the only book of yours I haven't read yet...is Dark Desires complete??

    09/04/2021 08:47

  • Nora Blue Moon

    I'm so sad it ended. 😢 😕 And....☹ Beautiful conclusion to book 2 though ❤

    09/04/2021 08:42

  • Lini Vaiangina

    I just randomly pick this book up and I can’t put it down!!! it’s so good I just love me some hades tho ❤️

    09/01/2021 14:48

  • Nora Blue Moon

    Sensations: What a good talk between Dark and Hades...it reminded me of why I love Hades - as well❤

    08/31/2021 19:39

  • Modjadji Rain

    At the mercy of the sea: It seems like the gods will be fighting each other over Dark Angel instead of solely focusing on Asteria🙆🏿‍♀️🙆🏿‍♀️😱...I must say I sort of saw Poisedon and (Dark) Angel coming....and the titans🤦🏿‍♀️

    08/28/2021 03:32

  • Destiny Epp

    so the rest won't be offered here? I have amazon but anytime ive tried to download a book it hasn't worked :( so im really hoping i can continue to read the rest of the story here?

    08/26/2021 01:14

  • Lady Rachael De Nova

    And Then There Were Three: Tali is alive 💃🏿💃🏿. Is it weird of me to wish Dark takes him with to hell???🤭❤

    08/25/2021 20:54

  • Modjadji Rain

    Message Received: Cue is dead🥺... I am officially panicking, where is Circe?? Where is Aphrodite?? Where is Tali??🙆🏿‍♀️🥺

    08/25/2021 20:02

  • Amatle Maps

    Ok, how Dark always have nicknames ready for everyone is cracking me up 🤣🤣😭 I LOVE IT!!!😂

    08/25/2021 19:47

  • CuriousTt

    Dark Ange: I'm not sure how many times I'm gonna say this but I LOVE THE OTHER ANGEL Dark Angel)...so excited to see what she gets up to💃🏿

    08/25/2021 11:35

  • CuriousTt

    Doppelganger: Finally!!! Someone pleads' Tali's case!! I love the other Angel already 😍❤

    08/25/2021 06:05

  • Lady Rachael De Nova

    Tantalus I: Is there no love in Asteria's heart for anyone?? Even Tantalus?? Can't she plead for him to Angel, just anything to help him?? Whether it would work or not....😔🥺💔

    08/24/2021 21:34

  • Lady Rachael De Nova

    Ares IV: I don't excuse what Tali did to Angel but I will always feel sorry for him 😔 😕🥺

    08/24/2021 21:00

  • Nora Blue Moon

    Can Persephone's limb remain missing??

    08/24/2021 00:50

  • Nora Blue Moon

    We all go a little mad sometimes: Thank you Thia, I was beginning to think the same about CONTRACTS!!I am so tired of them now. Is Poisoden going to seriously get it on with our Angel?? Did I mistake-reading somewhere that he was married??(even though there hasn't been a mention of the wife since then)...Interesting nonetheless 🤔 😅

    08/24/2021 00:30

  • Amatle Maps

    Power: it seems all the men in Angel's life keep doing her wrong one way or another, used or not🙆🏿‍♀️👀😱...Loved her power though, even if dark 😉 ❤

    08/24/2021 00:14

  • CuriousT

    Dinner service: Angel 💔🥺😭...Tali 🥺😭💔

    08/23/2021 19:52

  • Amatle Maps

    Are you in...or out?: A drunk Angel in Hades' office is HILARIOUS 😂 🤣

    08/23/2021 13:30

  • Lady Rachael De Nova

    Persephone:... What's up with all these contracts EVERYWHERE???🙆🏿‍♀️

    08/22/2021 12:17

  • Modjadji Rain

    Deja Vu: OK, Hades' love for her is pure__just primarily BEAUTIFUL!! I still feel bad for Tali🥺- Asteria's influence (I think there me be more to that) plus literally being around Angel since she was a day old. damn🥺💔 poor Tali, he's messed up and he messed up!!!☹

    08/21/2021 13:16

  • CuriousTt

    Chapter: Turning...I can't help but feel bad for Tali🥺🥺

    08/21/2021 09:59

  • Kago Rams

    Chapter: Revelations...I don't know why in the beginning I thought her parents died from a car accident in their business trip...this is just sad for Angel ☹💔

    08/21/2021 07:35

  • CuriousTt

    Chapter: The Storm...so glad to see (read about) Thia and the hellraisers...it's been long I was about to complain 😅❤🤝🏿

    08/20/2021 20:28

  • CuriousT

    Chapter: Simulation...Ares pressing level 4 instead of 3 and going on about why he didn't do an undo button 🤣🤣😂

    08/20/2021 18:42

  • Diamond Black

    Chapter: If NOT Love, Then What??...Couldn't Tali leave her a note?? I almost felt sorry for him because of Asteria's visit (given what she said to him😔) but leaving Angel like that😔😔

    08/20/2021 13:11

  • Diamond Black

    Chapter: The Challenge....I am so excited for her powers and I can't wait to know what those are exactly...I have a feeling she's got it ALL😊❤

    08/20/2021 12:40

  • Modjadji Rain

    This just left me undecided...There's Tali (interested to know the full story there) then there's Hades-we met her "with" him...now who should have her???🙆🏿‍♀️🙆🏿‍♀️😫

    08/20/2021 11:30

  • Lady Rachael De Nova

    Dear Writer, you've done it again!! I'm thoroughly enjoying the book❤❤

    08/20/2021 08:32

  • Margaret Sliva

    Can't wait for the next update! It's getting interesting!

    08/09/2021 08:16

  • Colleen Mullett

    will there be an update soon please

    08/07/2021 00:22

  • Nelly Perez-Yip

    will you publish your books on paperback??

    07/27/2021 04:04

  • Ashley Sisson

    I love your books! Great job

    07/24/2021 02:57

  • Crystal Scharf

    omg loved it can't wait for the next book your an amazing writer and thank you for sharing your books reading has been a way for me to escape from my depression and your books have been able to help me so much thank you again and can't wait for the next books

    07/19/2021 05:40

  • Lisa Hoops

    Love this book, can't wait to read the next. couldn't put it down, so happy to actually read it instead of chapter to chapter. will follow

    07/15/2021 16:40

  • Donna Grogan

    So glad for the up date. I looked up Fated to fall on my kindle.it looks different. It's by Stephanie west is that you

    07/15/2021 14:28

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    Final update is coming today!! be on the look out 🖤 15.5k words 🥺

    07/14/2021 20:31

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    hey gang! I wanna be upfront so no one is anxiously waiting. I’m still working on the chapters but I’ll post them as soon as they’re finished and I’m working as fast as humanly possible! 🖤

    06/29/2021 18:30

  • Hl Drake

    i really love this book. But i really.really. hate reading it 1chap at a time. So finish it writer.

    06/26/2021 21:41

  • HauntedLife

    im addicted to this book hoping for a sequel

    06/24/2021 01:08

  • Donna Grogan

    That's Great😀

    06/16/2021 17:20

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    hey reader family! usually I update weekly but in the spirit of binge reading and not writing chapter to chapter, I’ll be posting the remaining chapters in this story all at once. you all should have a full conclusion to the story before the month is over ❤️ love you all lots! xoxoxoxoxo

    06/16/2021 01:23

  • admmgz

    just found this story and I’m so addicted! is there a way to download this story?

    06/09/2021 05:41

  • Minnie Mouse

    omg soo good!!! so patiently waiting for the next update 😍

    06/07/2021 18:50

  • Bella Jersey 2

    how did she even breach the underworld? are they really gonna take her to Hades? 1

    05/31/2021 03:01

  • Katja Knip

    I love your story. thx for sharing

    05/22/2021 13:06

  • Cara

    What’s going on with updates? it’s been so long I had to go back quite a bit to remember what was going on and who some of the characters were. 😩 I love this book and really want to see it through.

    05/15/2021 17:14

  • Trisha Reynolds

    so excited to see how this works out so happy hades has accepted all of her need more updates lol

    04/29/2021 14:52

  • Michelle Reece

    I am really loving this book. I am so happy that Dark and Hades are getting together. I am team Hades al the way!

    04/17/2021 21:16

  • Andrea Aludden

    Yes! Hades knows whats up, he'll help dark and angel become one again. but I would not mind some poseidon and dark smut 😊

    04/17/2021 09:19

  • susanashley

    This book is literally robbing me of sleep!! It's amazing!!

    04/08/2021 13:46

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    comments are back to being fully operational and I’m back to my normal writing schedule! I’ll be post every other day or so ❤️

    04/02/2021 20:23

  • Victoria Brinson

    I really like Dark. I guess bc I’m so tired of the cry baby Angel 😂 but they are the same.

    04/02/2021 15:52

  • Helen Malzac

    anyone else having trouble opening the book? I keep getting OPP, Try again

    03/29/2021 17:22

  • Iani328

    hi how often do you update? do you update one chapter at a time or a bunch at a time? I really like your book!

    03/29/2021 00:08

  • TheUnlikelyO

    hey readers! comments are funky right now! tech department is working on it. plz be patient

    03/28/2021 07:08

  • Andrea Aludden

    hiping she wilm aort of merge togetjer sgain and be dark angel, not just dark or angel with the other one hidden away.. also need her and poseidon to get down and dirty, she needs someone other then h and t, and he needs to feel for someone else, and also some freaking revenge on tantalus

    03/25/2021 12:35

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

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    03/25/2021 01:43

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    Hey lovely readers! I see a lot of commenting about updates so I figured I should come chat for a second. I unfortunately have a chronic health condition that gives me trouble from time to time and right now I’m struggling with pretty bad fatigue so the chapters are a lot harder to get through. i haven’t even been able to keep up with replying to your comments 😩 I hope you’ll bear with me during this slow time as I really am trying hard to get chapters completed for you. I’ve mapped out that we’ve got a good amount of chapters (probably 25 or so) left until the story is complete. Hopefully you’ll all stick around until I’m feeling better! As always, much love and thanks so much for your support xoxoxoxo

    03/24/2021 23:03

  • Roberta Jones

    yes a Alicia and ares book but something about Alicia and poseidon also

    03/23/2021 14:34

  • Roberta Jones

    what is book 2 called? I absolutely loved this book u did a wonderful job soon as I started reading I couldn't no didn't want to stop

    03/23/2021 14:22

  • Katie Gwilt

    the wait is killing me 🖕

    03/23/2021 12:38

  • Shannel Merkley

    I vote an Ares and Alicia book!

    03/19/2021 04:02

  • Katie Gwilt

    how often do the chapters get updated?

    03/17/2021 13:13

  • Awesome Sauce

    yes more ares and Alicia please 🥰

    03/16/2021 06:11

  • Victoria Brinson

    I don’t believe she would have chose death over him.. maybe she’s thinking that right now but don’t believe she would have.

    03/15/2021 16:14

  • TheUnlikelyO

    hey gang! I’ll be taking a vacation from March 11th-15th so no posting during that time ❤️

    03/06/2021 04:57

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    hey lovely readers! this month fated to fall is my focus so I’ll be doing my best to do daily updates by 6pm EST (if you don’t see it by then, just remember there is sometimes a lengthy delay when I upload) and I’ll let you know when I’m planning to take my vacation ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    03/03/2021 01:00

  • Justmee

    This is going to be interesting for sure 💥! Is that a third showing interest? My 🥶

    02/24/2021 02:20

  • Trisha Reynolds

    wow

    02/23/2021 15:14

  • Justmee

    Oh my 😅🔥🔥🔥🔥! Glad you're back!!

    02/23/2021 04:01

  • Taystrick

    holy hotness! what an update! 🔥

    02/23/2021 01:34

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    So sorry guys taking a small hiatus to finish another book so I can better divide my time! 4 books is too many 😩😰😵 bear with me! ❤️

    02/07/2021 05:43

  • Mica

    Hopefully Dark will love Hades as well.

    02/05/2021 04:54

  • Chicken N A Biscuit

    it’s about to go down!

    02/02/2021 20:52

  • Cara

    I shot through the whole book up to now in a day and a half and just need moooore! 😩 I do believe some Titan booty call should be included in the near future 😉

    01/31/2021 05:56

  • Zakiyyah Shamsiddeen

    I completely forgot about the reverse harem part because the book as so good! but if you want to apologize you can through hyperion in too 👀😂

    01/31/2021 01:20

  • Minnie Mouse

    omg soo good I love this book💕

    01/30/2021 19:36

  • Trisha Reynolds

    one of my favorite books I’ve read you are doing an amazing job. I look forward to the new chapters

    01/29/2021 21:22

  • Chicken N A Biscuit

    yesssss!!!! 💞💗

    01/29/2021 19:06

  • Tonia Hoy

    AMAZING!!! Thank you for the update. Loved the chapters... 💕

    01/29/2021 04:38

  • Nelly Perez-Yip

    can't get enough of this story.. love it🥰🥰

    01/28/2021 22:05

  • Reader-418831

    I love this story. I read part 1 on Readict and literally cried for an hour when I realised I got to the end. I’ve tried multiple reading apps hoping to find part 2 or more information and I’m so happy I found it

    01/28/2021 19:44

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    Double Update headed your way today guys! Look for it at 3pm est 🖤

    01/28/2021 17:09

  • Unlikely Optimist 🖤

    I need a mental health day everyone ❤️ I won’t be posting today. try not to be too mad 🙏🏽

    01/26/2021 13:55

  • Amber Savory

    omg no no no. ive ran out of chapters. ive spent the last two days reading this story. I love it. I'm hooked and I can so I was addicted from the first chapter. I can't believe I have to wait for chapters now. lol you need to publish your work!!!

    01/25/2021 11:17

  • Mica

    Thank you for an amazing story & can't wait to read the next book part2. 💜

    01/25/2021 04:34

  • Tonia Hoy

    Absolutely amazing! love this story... have been hooked from the first page

    01/24/2021 05:48

  • Minnie Mouse

    yasssss omg I’m excited for the next update!!!!!

    01/23/2021 20:01

  • Chicken N A Biscuit

    NOOOOOO!!!!! I need like 5 chapters at once! lol

    01/23/2021 04:03

  • dee brack

    Just a quick question how often do you update I am waiting with bated breath you right way too good to keep me hanging on like this. 😍👀

    01/22/2021 02:51

  • Minnie Mouse

    omg soo excited

    01/16/2021 08:09

  • Trisha Reynolds

    This is an amazing book and I’m so eager for the next chapters. It’s keeping me on edge

    01/15/2021 17:48
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