Fated to Fall (Series collection) Comments
Linda G
these "books" are not complete stories. they build you up to leave you hanging. well written, great characters, but no ending to the story
03/29/2025 07:09
Visitor
Hi! I've read both of your books and I absolutely loved them! I'm actually trying to write a book of my own and would love to reach out to you and get some tips and if you could help me that'd be so awesome! I'm a 26 year old aspiring writer! lots of love -Madi
03/19/2025 19:27Hl Drake
this novel is so good Hollywood should make a movie out of it.. Loved it..This book needs to continue tho..
12/10/2023 19:56Visitor
I need the 3rd book
11/12/2023 19:46Jessica Clark
I'm looking for the 3rd book. any ideas on where to find ?
09/05/2023 04:51Nicollette Deveraux
is there an update on the third book???
09/04/2023 23:31
Amatle Maps
Dear author, Was the third book ever released??
09/04/2023 21:45
Lady Rachael De Nova
Ares IV: I don't excuse what Tali did to Angel but I will always feel sorry for him 😔 😕🥺
09/04/2023 08:53
CuriousT
Dinner service: Angel 💔🥺😭...Tali 🥺😭💔
09/04/2023 08:52
Nora Blue Moon
I'm so sad it ended. 😢 😕 And....☹ Beautiful conclusion to book 2 though ❤
09/04/2023 08:51
CuriousTt
Chapter: The Storm...so glad to see (read about) Thia and the hellraisers...it's been long I was about to complain 😅❤🤝🏿
09/04/2023 08:49Amatle Maps
Ok, how Dark always have nicknames ready for everyone is cracking me up 🤣🤣😭 I LOVE IT!!!😂
09/04/2023 08:49CuriousTt
Doppelganger: Finally!!! Someone pleads' Tali's case!! I love the other Angel already 😍❤
09/04/2023 08:48CuriousTt
Dark Ange: I'm not sure how many times I'm gonna say this but I LOVE THE OTHER ANGEL Dark Angel)...so excited to see what she gets up to💃🏿
09/04/2023 08:46Nora Blue Moon
Off to the only book of yours I haven't read yet...is Dark Desires complete??
09/04/2023 08:45CuriousTt
Chapter: Turning...I can't help but feel bad for Tali🥺🥺
09/04/2023 08:44Lady Rachael De Nova
Tantalus I: Is there no love in Asteria's heart for anyone?? Even Tantalus?? Can't she plead for him to Angel, just anything to help him?? Whether it would work or not....😔🥺💔
09/04/2023 08:43CuriousT
Chapter: Simulation...Ares pressing level 4 instead of 3 and going on about why he didn't do an undo button 🤣🤣😂
09/04/2023 08:43Ashley Sisson
I love your books! Great job
09/04/2023 08:40
Diamond Black
Chapter: The Challenge....I am so excited for her powers and I can't wait to know what those are exactly...I have a feeling she's got it ALL😊❤
09/04/2023 08:40
Colleen Mullett
will there be an update soon please
09/04/2023 08:40Lisa Hoops
Love this book, can't wait to read the next. couldn't put it down, so happy to actually read it instead of chapter to chapter. will follow
09/04/2023 08:36Diamond Black
Chapter: If NOT Love, Then What??...Couldn't Tali leave her a note?? I almost felt sorry for him because of Asteria's visit (given what she said to him😔) but leaving Angel like that😔😔
09/04/2023 08:34Amatle Maps
Are you in...or out?: A drunk Angel in Hades' office is HILARIOUS 😂 🤣
09/04/2023 08:34
Unlikely Optimist 🖤
Final update is coming today!! be on the look out 🖤 15.5k words 🥺
09/04/2023 08:32
That's Great😀
09/04/2023 08:29E.j. Boney
I was in love with this, you’re a great storyteller!
09/04/2023 08:29Lini Vaiangina
I just randomly pick this book up and I can’t put it down!!! it’s so good I just love me some hades tho ❤️
09/04/2023 08:27
Crystal Scharf
omg loved it can't wait for the next book your an amazing writer and thank you for sharing your books reading has been a way for me to escape from my depression and your books have been able to help me so much thank you again and can't wait for the next books
09/04/2023 08:25Lady Rachael De Nova
Persephone:... What's up with all these contracts EVERYWHERE???🙆🏿♀️
09/04/2023 08:25Nora Blue Moon
We all go a little mad sometimes: Thank you Thia, I was beginning to think the same about CONTRACTS!!I am so tired of them now. Is Poisoden going to seriously get it on with our Angel?? Did I mistake-reading somewhere that he was married??(even though there hasn't been a mention of the wife since then)...Interesting nonetheless 🤔 😅
09/04/2023 08:25Lady Rachael De Nova
Dear Writer, you've done it again!! I'm thoroughly enjoying the book❤❤
09/04/2023 08:25Lady Rachael De Nova
And Then There Were Three: Tali is alive 💃🏿💃🏿. Is it weird of me to wish Dark takes him with to hell???🤭❤
09/04/2023 08:25Amatle Maps
Power: it seems all the men in Angel's life keep doing her wrong one way or another, used or not🙆🏿♀️👀😱...Loved her power though, even if dark 😉 ❤
09/04/2023 08:25Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey reader family! usually I update weekly but in the spirit of binge reading and not writing chapter to chapter, I’ll be posting the remaining chapters in this story all at once. you all should have a full conclusion to the story before the month is over ❤️ love you all lots! xoxoxoxoxo
09/04/2023 08:24Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey gang! I wanna be upfront so no one is anxiously waiting. I’m still working on the chapters but I’ll post them as soon as they’re finished and I’m working as fast as humanly possible! 🖤
09/04/2023 08:22Can't wait for the next update! It's getting interesting!
09/04/2023 08:22Hl Drake
i really love this book. But i really.really. hate reading it 1chap at a time. So finish it writer.
09/04/2023 08:21Minnie Mouse
omg soo good!!! so patiently waiting for the next update 😍
09/04/2023 08:21Nora Blue Moon
Sensations: What a good talk between Dark and Hades...it reminded me of why I love Hades - as well❤
09/04/2023 08:18just found this story and I’m so addicted! is there a way to download this story?
09/04/2023 08:17
Modjadji Rain
This just left me undecided...There's Tali (interested to know the full story there) then there's Hades-we met her "with" him...now who should have her???🙆🏿♀️🙆🏿♀️😫
09/04/2023 08:15Nora Blue Moon
Can Persephone's limb remain missing??
09/04/2023 08:15Modjadji Rain
At the mercy of the sea: It seems like the gods will be fighting each other over Dark Angel instead of solely focusing on Asteria🙆🏿♀️🙆🏿♀️😱...I must say I sort of saw Poisedon and (Dark) Angel coming....and the titans🤦🏿♀️
09/04/2023 08:14hey readers! comments are funky right now! tech department is working on it. plz be patient
09/04/2023 08:14
Trisha Reynolds
so excited to see how this works out so happy hades has accepted all of her need more updates lol
09/04/2023 08:14
Kago Rams
Chapter: Revelations...I don't know why in the beginning I thought her parents died from a car accident in their business trip...this is just sad for Angel ☹💔
09/04/2023 08:14Unlikely Optimist 🖤
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09/04/2023 08:13I am really loving this book. I am so happy that Dark and Hades are getting together. I am team Hades al the way!
09/04/2023 08:12
Katja Knip
I love your story. thx for sharing
09/04/2023 08:12
Awesome Sauce
yes more ares and Alicia please 🥰
09/04/2023 08:11anyone else having trouble opening the book? I keep getting OPP, Try again
09/04/2023 08:10
Cara
What’s going on with updates? it’s been so long I had to go back quite a bit to remember what was going on and who some of the characters were. 😩 I love this book and really want to see it through.
09/04/2023 08:09Victoria Brinson
I don’t believe she would have chose death over him.. maybe she’s thinking that right now but don’t believe she would have.
09/04/2023 08:09Unlikely Optimist 🖤
Hey lovely readers! I see a lot of commenting about updates so I figured I should come chat for a second. I unfortunately have a chronic health condition that gives me trouble from time to time and right now I’m struggling with pretty bad fatigue so the chapters are a lot harder to get through. i haven’t even been able to keep up with replying to your comments 😩 I hope you’ll bear with me during this slow time as I really am trying hard to get chapters completed for you. I’ve mapped out that we’ve got a good amount of chapters (probably 25 or so) left until the story is complete. Hopefully you’ll all stick around until I’m feeling better! As always, much love and thanks so much for your support xoxoxoxo
09/04/2023 08:09
Shannel Merkley
I vote an Ares and Alicia book!
09/04/2023 08:09
HauntedLife
im addicted to this book hoping for a sequel
09/04/2023 08:08Unlikely Optimist 🖤
comments are back to being fully operational and I’m back to my normal writing schedule! I’ll be post every other day or so ❤️
09/04/2023 08:06
Roberta Jones
yes a Alicia and ares book but something about Alicia and poseidon also
09/04/2023 08:02I completely forgot about the reverse harem part because the book as so good! but if you want to apologize you can through hyperion in too 👀😂
09/04/2023 08:02
Iani328
hi how often do you update? do you update one chapter at a time or a bunch at a time? I really like your book!
09/04/2023 08:02Trisha Reynolds
one of my favorite books I’ve read you are doing an amazing job. I look forward to the new chapters
09/04/2023 08:00Katie Gwilt
how often do the chapters get updated?
09/04/2023 08:00Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey lovely readers! this month fated to fall is my focus so I’ll be doing my best to do daily updates by 6pm EST (if you don’t see it by then, just remember there is sometimes a lengthy delay when I upload) and I’ll let you know when I’m planning to take my vacation ❤️❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:00
Justmee
This is going to be interesting for sure 💥! Is that a third showing interest? My 🥶
09/04/2023 08:00Andrea Aludden
Yes! Hades knows whats up, he'll help dark and angel become one again. but I would not mind some poseidon and dark smut 😊
09/04/2023 07:59Nelly Perez-Yip
can't get enough of this story.. love it🥰🥰
09/04/2023 07:59dee brack
I’m team Dark Angel. I think they may need each other to balance! By far one of the best books I’ve read thank you!
09/04/2023 07:57Andrea Aludden
hiping she wilm aort of merge togetjer sgain and be dark angel, not just dark or angel with the other one hidden away.. also need her and poseidon to get down and dirty, she needs someone other then h and t, and he needs to feel for someone else, and also some freaking revenge on tantalus
09/04/2023 07:57Unlikely Optimist 🖤
So sorry guys taking a small hiatus to finish another book so I can better divide my time! 4 books is too many 😩😰😵 bear with me! ❤️
09/04/2023 07:56
Chicken N A Biscuit
it’s about to go down!
09/04/2023 07:56Katie Gwilt
the wait is killing me 🖕
09/04/2023 07:55Karina Marthinsen
this is just awesome, read it in 3days and cant wait for an update, i do think that, age Will be awesome if she become one person, i think she could be the one to rulle Them All, and i do Hope she beat cally and persphones asses at some point
09/04/2023 07:51Chicken N A Biscuit
yesssss!!!! 💞💗
09/04/2023 07:51Tonia Hoy
Absolutely amazing! love this story... have been hooked from the first page
09/04/2023 07:50Nelly Perez-Yip
I'm so happy I was able to continue reading this book.. Love Book 2🥰.. Can't wait for more chapters👍
09/04/2023 07:50Lanie Knight
I love both sides of her each has their own strength I can’t wait to see what happens further in to the new book I have this feeling that at some point both halves are going to come together and make one hell of a person you are doing an awesome job keep up the great work and I can’t wait to see what happens next
09/04/2023 07:50Justmee
Oh my 😅🔥🔥🔥🔥! Glad you're back!!
09/04/2023 07:49Taystrick
holy hotness! what an update! 🔥
09/04/2023 07:48Tiara Kharizzma
This was sooooo good.. That cliffhanger 😩😩😩 I can’t wait for part2
09/04/2023 07:48This book is literally robbing me of sleep!! It's amazing!!
09/04/2023 07:45
Bella Jersey 2
how did she even breach the underworld? are they really gonna take her to Hades? 1
09/04/2023 07:45Crystal Scharf
omg love both i have a idea for you maybe you can find a way to have both angel and dark exist outside of the other like dark could be her own person and then angel could be her own person and dark can be with tali and angel can have hades
09/04/2023 07:44Minnie Mouse
omg soo good I love this book💕
09/04/2023 07:44Mica
Thank you for an amazing story & can't wait to read the next book part2. 💜
09/04/2023 07:43Tonia Hoy
AMAZING!!! Thank you for the update. Loved the chapters... 💕
09/04/2023 07:42Lanie Knight
OMG I’m so happy for part 2 and the first 3 chapters are so good I can’t wait to see what happens next 😄👏👏👏👏
09/04/2023 07:42Reader-760622
I love them both. I just hope they find a way to coexist
09/04/2023 07:42Lisa Marie
part two is off to a great start!!!
09/04/2023 07:42Victoria Brinson
I really like Dark. I guess bc I’m so tired of the cry baby Angel 😂 but they are the same.
09/04/2023 07:41Roberta Jones
what is book 2 called? I absolutely loved this book u did a wonderful job soon as I started reading I couldn't no didn't want to stop
09/04/2023 07:41Beauty & Brews
I prefer neither angel nor dark seperately. they are incomplete. they need to merge together keeping the strongest bits of each.
09/04/2023 07:41Mica
Hopefully Dark will love Hades as well.
09/04/2023 07:41Chicken N A Biscuit
NOOOOOO!!!!! I need like 5 chapters at once! lol
09/04/2023 07:39Martin Charles Mussa
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09/04/2023 07:39
Jane Stuart
Some books on these apps are hit or miss. This has definitely been a hit! Cannot wait for the 2nd book on Christmas Eve!
09/04/2023 07:39Unlikely Optimist 🖤
Hey lovely readers! I wanted to add a few bonus chapters of Ares and Alicia since I don’t plan on doing a spin off or anything! Shouldn’t be more than a few chapters while you wait for part 2! I hope you enjoy ❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:39Minnie Mouse
Omg so good!!! literally read this in a day 😍😍😍
09/04/2023 07:36Unlikely Optimist 🖤
Hey to all my lovely readers! If you’re looking for something new to read until Christmas Eve, Check out my new story LUNA IN THE LIMELIGHT! xoxoxoxo
09/04/2023 07:36Beauty & Brews
OMG part two started epically!!
09/04/2023 07:36
