Alpha of Alpha's Comments
Mawusi Ford
How many years have they been together?
03/11/2021 01:41Aminabena
when do we know when a year has passed?
03/10/2021 05:04
Sadee Chavez
Oh my goodness I'm so hurt for her.
03/09/2021 16:37Edie Gyorki
how often does this update. I binge read and now check for updates all day every day.
03/09/2021 15:50Elin Kähäri
Love the book so far but is there not any bonus coins at all in this place?
03/09/2021 09:59Madison Fears
Is itme or have I missed the female protagonist's name?
03/08/2021 07:04Laura Lea Camutin Garcia
Cronus is an idiot!!!
03/08/2021 05:49Laura Lea Camutin Garcia
Cronus leveled the playing field, yes!!!!
03/08/2021 05:19Lidiane Barros
this is too much! she is being a drama queen now the guys is doing all he can he is broken he became a shell the least she ca do is try and actually talk to him just not accusations talk through it the tradition etc make him change things he has proved himself and now she is the one being a B!
03/07/2021 21:31
miasiacheyenne
this is just getting frustrating. like seriously, how long can you/her drag this shit out? the amount of excuses/reasons to keep turning him away is astounding. yet it’s still her selfishness that’s refusing to remotely fix it
03/07/2021 03:49Carol Spriggs
Read this book, you will not want to put it down.
03/07/2021 01:42Samantha Dogan
Just out of curiosity what defines a dark romance?
03/06/2021 21:05Donna DeNardo Grogan
come on He is pouring his heart out. Now she is getting me mad.
03/06/2021 17:39Edie Gyorki
love this story
03/06/2021 16:12
SweetThang
I enjoy dark romance (fav) hope it's worth reading and dark enough for me.
03/06/2021 02:45Susan Anderson
I have never had a book hit me as hard as this one has. I found myself crying several times because I felt Lumina's pain. Very good book!
03/06/2021 00:07
Reader-962428
Good book. Very well written.
03/05/2021 08:05Jesi
I’m upset because I’m all caught up and devoured this book over the last couple days. It’s SO good, what a talented author! Is there a regular schedule of updates? I shall be checking religiously! lol.
03/05/2021 04:46
Quinisee
I haven’t even read the book and I already know I’m going to love it. just by reading the whole intro. I love dark romance so excited
03/05/2021 03:44Kim Stewart Blankenship
I love this story and am looking forward to updates!! Hopefully they will be here soon🙂I really hope that Deimos and Lumina find they’re way back to each other
03/05/2021 00:05Fari
why doesn’t anyone uses her name? he always say mate
03/04/2021 09:47Selena Vega
I hope her and Deimos can find a way to each other. The moon goddess obviously put them together for a reason.
03/04/2021 02:37
Holli Winter
This book is great, any chance of an update soon?
03/04/2021 01:44
Carol Palmer
I don’t know if I’m allowed to say this but Aragon and Elariam are cockblockers..lol
03/03/2021 00:40Victoria Brinson
she expects Cronus to stay with her when he is feeling the same way she is. She isnt his actual mate but he cares for her. selfish! lol but I do like this story!!
03/02/2021 23:44Victoria Brinson
Cronus is so sweet to me! He is there to cheer her up and the only reason the alpha is showing interest is bc he is jealous right now! smh
03/02/2021 23:11Brandy MacKenzie-Pennington
when will the next update be, love it
03/02/2021 20:02
Mìtsy
She is being too much right now. I mean I understand what he did was wrong but she is not trying at all to see his side, and she is an Alpha as well so she should understand and talk to him to try overcome this situation but she just pushes him away... bringing up the way he treated he in the start seems like a low move at this point I mean if they have come this far and she still brings it up maybe she has been this whole time just pretending she forgave him 🙄 I don’t understand how she hates him so easily and says it to him... I am dying to see him stop chasing her so she can learn that everyone has a limit and she should stop taking him for granted!
03/02/2021 08:59Derek Bryant
wow you really captured the emotions of them. Bravo
03/02/2021 05:13Donna DeNardo Grogan
She is getting me mad. But please let them finally be Happy. .
03/02/2021 04:39Carol Palmer
I like her better strong not crying behind this dude..like you are the Queen sis hold your head up!!
03/02/2021 03:45Ashlee Swafford
love this so much. my heart is broken for them both and I’m hoping to see some happiness come after all the hurt and pain they have both had. can’t wait to read more!
03/01/2021 12:02miasiacheyenne
I feel like her hate is TOO much. I mean I get it, but at the same time he has done EVERYTHING for her and I do mean everything and yet she gives nothing. like she doesn’t even bother to see things from his side, take in what Cronus has said about his upbringing, traditions that were imbedded into him and forced into. she has literally done nothing but demanded everything. then she goes and says she hates him knowing that is the final straw? idk I’m over her character and her selfishness. not once has she tried to see anything from his side but demands everything. doesn’t even bother try to help change the laws/traditions nothing. just cause a whole lotta hate and pain towards Deimos and Ragon. the way it goes he will always lose no matter what, especially when all he does is put her first.
03/01/2021 06:25
Bobbi Saunders
loving it so far
02/28/2021 23:37
Mel Rock
Lizzy Fatima I love your book. You're a wonderful author. I was half way through my Stephen king book when I started yours now I'm on the 3rd reading of yours and my other book sits untouched. I've never chosen another author over my favorite Stephen King until yours. I cant wait for the next update. Have you written other stories?
02/28/2021 19:22Lidiane Barros
i understand that she was hurt but nos its for us to see happiness again I want tonsee them as a family now. its time for forgiveness she showed him the tradition was wrong and they shall adapt but enough of them being apart now she is crossing a line now hurting him way too much.
02/28/2021 11:28Kayla Swick
I've noticed that some people are saying she's too harsh or too cut throat for what she's doing to Deimos, but in a sense, I get it. 1) they appear to me to have more animalistic natures than human even if the two souls are separate. 2) lumina isn't the only one hurt, but her wolf as well. yes he wolf misses him and wants her mate, but she's also angry. it makes sense that Lumina's anger is as bad as it is, not to mention as an Alpha, she is offended. and 3) Deimos has constantly hurt Lumina. whether it be the way he was rejecting her in the beginning, making her believe (at first) that he cared for her when all he wanted was an heir from her or what he's done recently which was keep secrets from her knowing that when she did find out, it would hurt her. he's lied, and in a sense emotionally abused her. doesn't mean what she's doing is right, but it makes it easier to understand why she's acting as she is. I believe they will work it out. lumina feels betrayed yet again. how many times can someone feel as though they have been betrayed and not lash out as she has. not to mention, the feeling of betrayal wasn't leaving as Deimos refused fo send his chosen away once more after getting a male heir. he let her stay knowing her very presence was causing Lumina turmoil. I don't like or dislike how lumina is acting. to me, it comes off as kind of realistic. if it were me, I'd be just as harsh after everything she's been through.
02/28/2021 01:53
erinkate33
did I miss when he bought her the necklace at the market?
02/28/2021 00:46Reader-659559
empty bladder not uterus when urinating
02/27/2021 21:25
reader2121
Couldn’t put this book down! I get that she has been terribly hurt, but damn, she’s cutthroat. I’m so sad I’m all caught up because now I have to wait for updates 😭😆. Quick question, do you have plans on writing a book from Theia’s perspective?
02/27/2021 18:49Maneka Mathews
I hate the way she has treated him in these last few chapters. no he is not perfect but you of all should know that traditions are imbedded. she did not stop until she broke him and even though she saw what he went thru I feel she didn’t care. my heart hurts for him and his child that she did keep away from him.
02/27/2021 06:44
SINNOCENT
Is this the same Deimos that's on Wattpad? Just realized I added it to my library on both apps. 😂😂 (If that doesn't tell you it draws folks in, idk what will, lol) I think I'll probably read it here unless you have a preference?
02/27/2021 03:46Jennifer Larimer
what does A/N mean?
02/26/2021 19:09Bernice Faloon
wish to finish this....
02/26/2021 17:49Nichole83pa
Wow... Just WOW! This story is AMAZING! Can you tell me how often you do updates? I love this story and have read it twice in the past week. The suffering is just so heartbreaking and you can feel the emotions of both of them. I do hope Lumina can forgive him. I think they have suffered alone enough. Give us some happy chapters soon! Kal needs a sibling ASAP!!
02/26/2021 15:51Allison Underdonk Peterman
I havent even read this yet and I also can handle dark stories but cheating for some reason is a real rough trigger for me so I'd like to know ahead of time. I like how realistic and up front you were in the description this was the only part that wasn't included. if it doesn't I think this book will be what I am looking for in a story
02/26/2021 01:48Reader-837079
hi i love this book but I want to ask if there will be any cheating involved reading further? I just want to stop before I go ahead if there is seeing as that is a subject that heavily triggers me and I wouldn’t feel comfortable continuing.
02/26/2021 00:37Tammy Jones
I am a movie and book enthusiasts and many movies have made me cry, but never a book. The emotions and feelings in this book blew me away. I can't wait to finish reading it.
02/25/2021 01:47rajahh_
love this, when will there be an update?
02/24/2021 06:06Tiffany Bryant
hey so I unlocked up til they are in Italy and I went back to read it and they are all locked again, is there anything I can do without using my coins again ?
02/18/2021 18:37
Leeanne Donaldson
This is a fantastic read love it 😍📖👌
02/06/2021 16:48Hernandez Giuliana
This book is amazing , such a beautiful soul you are!! the way you write i love it.. and i want Cronus to be with her! you cannot hurt someone you love
01/29/2021 18:00Tiffany Bryant
I really like this book. it's different from the others. very well written
01/28/2021 17:07
