Entangled With The Substitute Teacher Comments
Rebecca Farmer
wish there was another story of these two actually getting together they both deserve a happy ending!!!! poor ruby and adonis
08/15/2023 17:56Jasmine Gonzalez
Love the book
05/31/2023 03:20
Lola Ben
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02/04/2023 08:28Lola Ben
Hey guys! Lola Ben here. Thank you for reading my story ❤️ So... I was bored and tired and somehow, I ended up creating a Facebook page and group. And.. hey! That's not a terrible thing. You can search for Author LOLA BEN to like my page and search for Lola Ben's Stories to join the group so we can all have a great time together 🙃
03/01/2022 22:13
Sonia McLeod
Realistically I knew they were not going to live happily ever after😢😢 he is from a different world but he will always look after her I wish he could have left the gang for her I like to believe one day he will thank you for a wonderful story can't wait for the next one 😘😘🇬🇧
02/21/2022 22:56Sonia McLeod
omg I am happy he is alive but hate that he went back to the gang even though he is a teacher he is Ruby first love she lived without for 3 years so I guess she can continue to live without him hell no I will take the risk and love him for as long as I can it's his gang and he is only getting rid of the bad guys 😘😘🇬🇧
02/15/2022 18:59Sonia McLeod
I knew it he survived 😁😁
02/13/2022 21:14Sonia McLeod
😢😢
02/11/2022 20:42Sonia McLeod
please don't kill of Adonis he is Ruby hero and mine 😀 🙏 update soon 😘😘🇬🇧
02/08/2022 21:50Lola Ben
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01/14/2022 09:07Sonia McLeod
omg how the hell did Bryan get away does he have nine life's so glad she told her mother thanks for the update Adonis is my hero 😘😘🇬🇧
12/01/2021 13:20Sonia McLeod
omg I hope she is dreaming and Bryan didn't really come for her unless he has a twin 😭😭 please don't let him hurt her I am sure you aced your exams
11/25/2021 16:03Lola Ben
Hey guys. I am so sorry, I wasn't able to update the previous week. I started exams and I could only focus on that. Fortunately, my exams end this Wednesday, so a chapter or two should be ready for you guys before this week ends.. Thank you all for reading ❤️
11/22/2021 22:40Sonia McLeod
wow Bryan is a cold psycho bastard I hope they take time killing him but why is the threat still on Adonis maybe Ruby father can't wait for the next chapter thank you😘😘🇬🇧
11/14/2021 14:42Lola Ben
Hey guys. I hope you are all good. So I was going to try to improve on how many times I update but it is so hard these days because of the tests and assignments that keep coming up and I'm usually tired after a long day in classes. I really hope you guys bear with me and please keep supporting my story. Much love 💕
09/28/2021 19:08Sonia McLeod
No please don't hurt Ruby or Adonis thank you for the update more please 😘😘🇬🇧
09/25/2021 12:00Alicia Flores
I need more updates please 🤓
09/20/2021 14:59Alicia Flores
I need more updates please 🤓
09/20/2021 14:59Alicia Flores
I need more updates please 🤓
09/20/2021 14:59Alicia Flores
I need more updates please 🤓
09/20/2021 14:59Sonia McLeod
more please
09/19/2021 15:06Sonia McLeod
more please
09/19/2021 15:06Sonia McLeod
more please
09/19/2021 15:06Sonia McLeod
more please 😘😘🇬🇧
09/19/2021 15:05Sonia McLeod
more please 😘😘🇬🇧
09/19/2021 15:05Sonia McLeod
more please 😘😘🇬🇧
09/19/2021 15:05Victoria DeCuir Stewart
reading this book and seeing how many people have secrets is so exciting. can’t wait to see it all play out
09/14/2021 11:27Jasmin Prunkl
I love this story. I already read the story of Grace and Dominic and this is good to read that there's a second book. I'm wondering for what else Maximus wants her? And I believe the bald headed mean is the bodyguard hired by her father in secret for her protection. This Clara girl still creeps me out... and I don't believe her mentioned reasons... that she wanted Ruby all to herself??? There's something else... I hope she won't get hurt by Adonis and that Max won't get her but my hunch is he's failing to protect her and gets back involved with Max gang... it's getting very interesting and more hot... love the little steamy situations they have... and oh boy, her dad finds out... maybe bc of him Max wants her and maybe bc of Dom everything goes south?! Can't wait... when are you're updating times??? 💕💕💕
09/14/2021 08:19Alicia Flores
I wonder if M wants Ruby for somwthing regarding her mother 🤔 and how old is Adonis again? I'm trying to picture the face on Ruby's dad wen he saw them 😬😬😬
09/13/2021 16:56Jasmin Prunkl
Sooo... Caitlin is becoming a friend now, just as she asked in the beginning... and Clara is extremely creepy... so definitely a foe. She needs to be extremely careful around her. I believe she snoops around for Bryan or sth, at least she's somehow connected to him. Just don't know how atm... his sister? girlfriend? Idk... The story about her health/heart is true but there is this other "tiny" secret they just left out... She won't like it, if she gets to find out on her own... I hope her parents tell her before that happens... 🙏 Jake is secretly in love with Ruby, though I'm not sure if he told Abby or not...?! 🤔 But still he's extremely secretive and acts weird though atm... is he also in a gang now or sth? maybe together with Bryan? I hope he has nothing to do with the nudes... but Caitlin knows sth about it. Was it really Bryan? Or was it Caitlin herself? She was my first thought though bc she was sure it wasn't Bryan though... or someone else??? dear author, you really know how to suspend your readers... its so thrilling with all those mysteries... and who orded Dianes death? I don't think it was Dominic or Grace though, they might not like her but they would never order someone to kill her, right?? I hope nothing happened to Jake... and I hope she's going to confide to Adonis, Abby and her parents about everything!!! She really needs people she can trust and who're going to help her. I know it's hard to ask for help or to confide in someone but she needs that now. great story!!! 💕💕💕
09/13/2021 14:30Jasmin Prunkl
This celery is such a bitch. Really? Jake shouldn't do that. Maybe Ruby's dad can help again. He's kinda family, right?
09/13/2021 10:48Jasmin Prunkl
I think it was Celery with those nudes and Ruby doesn't consider bc she forgot all about her threat. And Celery was just jealous that Bryan wanted to befriend her I guess. But doing this on the memorial of Maddison is really mean, not only Ruby but mostly for Maddison. She has no respect for the dead. She should really get punished! What if Celery also pushed Maddison off the roof bc of jealousy???
09/13/2021 09:58Jasmin Prunkl
Okay... I can't get rid of the feeling that this substitute english teacher is a foe and not a friend. He's extremely weird... and is his name really Adonis??? bwaaahaaa... 🤣🤣🤣 She has a lot of enemies now... this celery bitch, Bryan the murderer and perhaps Mr. Adonis. and also Diane seems to be plotting sth... everything is so chaotic...
09/12/2021 23:18Jasmin Prunkl
OMG!!! 😳😳 I guess this Bryan guy IS a murderer. Damn this teacher distracted her. I'm confused. too much attention on 1 day. I'd definitely take the bodyguard her dad offered... but I can understand where she's coming from....
09/12/2021 22:06Sonia McLeod
oh boy 😳 welcome back thank you for the update 😘😘🇬🇧
09/11/2021 15:23Stephanie Woerner Cooper
Uh oh... Daddy found out. 😂
09/11/2021 14:07Sonia McLeod
He is just leaving her wanting more. 😘😘🇬🇧
08/30/2021 00:45Sonia McLeod
spongebob panties I am dying laughing 😁
08/30/2021 00:44Sonia McLeod
I knew it that he was the one calling her to the principal office as an excuse to see her and touch her 😁😁
08/22/2021 17:27Alicia Flores
wow that was hot 🔥🔥🔥🔥
08/13/2021 00:03Sonia McLeod
I love me some Adonis I picture him so handsome with a hardcore body 10 years difference in age is not so bad at least he is mature can't wait for the next chapter to see what part of her dream he made come true 😘😘🇬🇧
08/12/2021 17:01Sonia McLeod
I just realize you changed the title 😁
08/05/2021 22:27Sonia McLeod
omg Bryan is crazy
08/05/2021 21:06Sonia McLeod
l love the name Adonis sounds like a God so jake loves Ruby but she loves Adonis sorry jake maybe you can date Ruby best friend
08/05/2021 21:05Alicia Flores
I knew Jake had feelings for Ruby... sorry Jake her heart is with Adonis 😊
07/21/2021 21:15Lola Ben
I was supposed to update last week, I apologize for not meeting up with that time, exam's have started and there are assignments to be done apart from that. But I will try to make it up this week. Do bear with me guys. Thank you 🙃
07/05/2021 18:10Alicia Flores
I think Jake is in love with ruby and jelaous of Adonis 🙄... first kiss 💕💕💕
06/25/2021 20:17Alicia Flores
awwww their firts date 😁💖
06/20/2021 18:40Alicia Flores
I wonder what is Adonis plan to protect Ruby all the time... will he tell her all? or at least the important part that she is a target? will he kiss her already? will Ruby tell her parent she is in danger? too many question I need answer for 😬😬😬 I hope the update is soon 🙄
06/17/2021 15:34
terri4388
loving the book so far!! curious to see if it’s true or not about dom having another child
04/30/2021 18:02Lola Ben
I am so sorry guys for not updating regularly. Truthfully, school has been so burdening so far, it makes me less enthusiastic to write. And I won't lie, I am so tired 🤧 But I'll try to work on an update or two before the end of this week. Thank you guys for your patience. ❤️
04/20/2021 16:54
Sonia Mcleod
poor Zion to young to understand lovemaking 😃😄
03/31/2021 23:07enedina guzman
loveing this book already 🥰
03/07/2021 08:53
