Up North Comments
sktilley
If this story is abandoned, I would like a refund
09/04/2023 08:53I thought the writer signed with AnyStories…..by contract wouldn’t she have to finish the story??? Either way it’s been a great read!
09/04/2023 08:53when is the next update??
09/04/2023 08:53did this story get abandoned? been waiting a few weeks for next update.. kinda sad. really wanted to see what would of happened.
09/04/2023 08:52Yolanda Williams
"intimate sexuality" part did not make sense. these grammatical errors are killing me. The story line is ok.... so far
09/04/2023 08:52Jenny Best Camacho
excellent story, love it
09/04/2023 08:51Annabelle Garcia
in chapter 10 you have a duplicate paragraph. the second and final. it really throws things off.
09/04/2023 08:50Araima
omg I need more! this story is so different I want more!!
09/04/2023 08:48jubileeXO
looks very tempting will most likely read it, after the fighting spirit series ☺️
09/04/2023 08:47Carla Miró
I love this book. The characters, the way is narrated, the struggles of the main female character, the way the main male characters acts. Everything is so we'll written! I'm glad I decided to add it and read it. Bow I'm stuck always waiting like a junkie for an update lol
09/04/2023 08:47Alexis M.
love it so far!
09/04/2023 08:46April Borchers
So who was the witch that tried to sabotage her healing process
09/04/2023 08:45Debbie Brown
the updates are very slow
09/04/2023 08:45Alexis M.
ok why is it I get addicted to books that are not completed 😩 I’m dying here lol
09/04/2023 08:44love the story so far! I can’t wait for update ☺️
09/04/2023 08:44Bella Jersey 2
sad she can’t her worries to kids. the kids help her forget for awhile.
09/04/2023 08:40amber sweet
this book is simply amaizing been reading it all day.
09/04/2023 08:40Alexus Winder
how often do you update?
09/04/2023 08:40Johanna neal
need an update please!!💜💜💜
09/04/2023 08:39Please update soon!!! I love this story and can’t wait to read more!!!
09/04/2023 08:39Bella Jersey 2
Sage makes me wanted to pinch and kiss his cheeks
09/04/2023 08:38Bella Jersey 2
can I smack the useless alpha
09/04/2023 08:38wait, does ascen think ascian (vampire's) are going to attack the north to get her back? or for another reason?
09/04/2023 08:38Bella Jersey 2
the note thing was cute
09/04/2023 08:37Bella Jersey 2
I’m really not liking her alpha. I know all about respect. he doesn’t sound like he gives kids kid like punishment
09/04/2023 08:37Lux Foxy
Saved a horse, Ride an Alpha...
09/04/2023 08:37Katherine Tedford
what happened to her to be treated this way
09/04/2023 08:37nemone van Der bliake
There haven't been many new chapters recently 😪
09/04/2023 08:36Faith
I'm not then that into the book but I'm like in chapter 14 (ik I'm behind) but if there isn't a pic of Alpha Arsen could you add some in the future pls. Really want to know what he's think. This book is great!!!! <3
09/04/2023 08:36Female Alpha Skye
updates?? I’m dying to know what happens next!!
09/04/2023 08:35Erin Davis
chapter 10 is repeated twice in the chapter. it’s copied twice
09/04/2023 08:35Madeeha naaz
no no no ...u can't leave us hanging like this...I need more .I need to know what Aelin was going to say !
09/04/2023 08:35Bella Jersey 2
but Arsen wants to bare her soul and tell all her secrets. while Arsen and rest were not around she had to learn to cope the thing here is she does need to heal. to me it seems like Arsen wants her to heal too but his way
09/04/2023 08:35Debbie Brown
hi any updates please
09/04/2023 08:35eenboterham
As everyone has seen now, I was able to sign with AnyStories, locking the chapters. It’s a great opportunity for me so thank you to anyone that has been reading my story! However, I’m sorry I didn’t tell you in advance, I wasn’t sure when they were going to lock the chapters so it was a bit messy from my part. Lastly, a quick heads up on my update schedule for this month, I’ll be updating at least once per day. :) Thank you and sorry again!
09/04/2023 08:35Madeeha naaz
@eenboterham I have been noticing that the book is not being updated as regularly as it was before and whenever it is updated the chapters are very brief . Hope that this is just temporary setback and that you are doing OK.
09/04/2023 08:34Bella Jersey 2
he’s her mate or is she a vampire?
09/04/2023 08:34Aftermath
This was a great story right up too where I realized it's NOT completed! Really, Spent $'s only to realize it's more than likely not going be finished!
09/04/2023 08:34Bella Jersey 2
please tell she’s not staying in hell
09/04/2023 08:34I just discovered this book and read all the chapters in one swoop loving the story! how often are the updates?
09/04/2023 08:34Bella Jersey 2
please tell he put useless alpha through the wall
09/04/2023 08:33Bella Jersey 2
the mystery gets bigger. it was great how he put the fear of god in the doctor
09/04/2023 08:33Happy Early Fourth everyone‼️🤍💙!!!
09/04/2023 08:33Debbie Brown
ok have u stopped updating?
09/04/2023 08:33Bella Jersey 2
this just show how much an asshole useless alpha is. the only good thing is he doesn’t subject the kids to this
09/04/2023 08:33Female Alpha Skye
I’ve had the same problem😩😩😩it was distressing!! and now there haven’t been any updates
09/04/2023 08:33Bella Jersey 2
she’s not worthy of a last name. she’s not allowed to shift
09/04/2023 08:33Bella Jersey 2
why does she hate room 108 so much?
09/04/2023 08:32Bella Jersey 2
why was her alpha so nice? I mean he is an asshole
09/04/2023 08:32Madeeha naaz
Enjoyed reading the book. Great story so far
09/04/2023 08:30Trisha Reynolds
I’m sad for her it sounds like her and ascian were meant to be
09/04/2023 08:30This book is so good! Appreciate the updates!!
09/04/2023 08:30Katja Knip
thx for the Updates I love your book
09/04/2023 08:29I don’t understand why she cannot shift now? is it because of her Alphas command??
09/04/2023 08:29Female Alpha Skye
yay!!!!!
09/04/2023 08:29Nikki
Wow, Forrest certainly crossed a line there
09/04/2023 08:29Wcha
why is chapter 10 ending the same as its beginning
09/04/2023 08:28Updates were great, and low key knew that about Khann! Starting to wonder if Arsenal going to turn that boat around 😅😃
09/04/2023 08:28Female Alpha Skye
is there going to be an update soon? I’m dying to read what happens next ☺️
09/04/2023 08:28Love this book! I hope they get along, and so hope she gets her confidence back after all the years of being put down! They are cute! Don’t go inviting another character that’s his true mate, please. Some other books are like that and it’s so a turn off. I just quit reading one because of that, it was torture. I’m trying to believe in love not become a cynic! IJS!!!!
09/04/2023 08:27they are mates cool..
09/04/2023 08:27Bella Jersey 2
she does have the heart of an angel
09/04/2023 08:27Trisha Reynolds
is it because her wolf isn’t present that she doesn’t know he’s her mate. He should understand that ugh need an update soon
09/04/2023 08:27April Borchers
awe that was a good send off for the kids
09/04/2023 08:26I found thus book today & read it. I also love it. I was wondering about update schedu3? thank you & awesome nook
09/04/2023 08:26I’m just confused about the relationship, but I’ll hold out! 😅😃
09/04/2023 08:26Meg Roberts
im looking forward to more aelin history developments. Khann need his but kicked/killed. im sure arsen will organise it in time
09/04/2023 08:25Bella Jersey 2
I hope they took the nice doctor
09/04/2023 08:25Debbie Brown
I feel heart broken over this story but it's a great read ...it's just making me sad
09/04/2023 08:25Bella Jersey 2
Lia is scaring me in a good way. is this her good or evil nice?
09/04/2023 08:25Bella Jersey 2
had piss him off so much when he lost control over her
09/04/2023 08:25Bella Jersey 2
I want the story
09/04/2023 08:24NurseAimz18
ok, this is a good book and I am on the edge of my seat. I try not to read all of the updates at once but I can’t help it.
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
Arsen is wise by experience and leaning. I want to see when she gets her wolf back how much she’ll change
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
I like that he can read her so well. but me personally I think it drive me a little crazy
09/04/2023 08:24Johanna neal
when will the next update be!?! I need more 💜💜💜
09/04/2023 08:24Bella Jersey 2
what was the crime she committed that they decided to punish her?
09/04/2023 08:23Bella Jersey 2
interesting
09/04/2023 08:23OMG! I love these 2 characters, great update
09/04/2023 08:23KaterinaAdriah
So far, this is one of the best things I’ve read in a long time! I absolutely love it and look forward to the next update. 😊
09/04/2023 08:23Kristina Mitchell
I was going to start reading this book as it looks very good and the majority of readers praise it, but then I saw the updates have all but stopped. I hate starting a book, get hooked, and then left unable to finish it. once an updated schedule or some kind of communication from the writer is posted with assurances the book will be completed, I will then read it. unfortunately until then I think I'll leave it.... a shame really🤷♀️.
09/04/2023 08:22Madeeha naaz
my mind is occupied thinking what happens next and I just can't wait until tomorrow 😩
09/04/2023 08:22Madeeha naaz
3 chapters in a day!!!!....thank u so much 🙂
09/04/2023 08:22what is the current update schedule for the author?
09/04/2023 08:21Loving the frequent updates! So excited for more. Will we get to hear The Alpha of the North's POV?!
09/04/2023 08:21Bella Jersey 2
yes we’re taking the kids with us
09/04/2023 08:21Lux Foxy
Well, I'm hooked. and may I ask een boterham mee choco?
09/04/2023 08:21christina1111
this book is amazing I literally started reading it Friday and I’m all caught up and waiting for more
09/04/2023 08:20Madeeha naaz
Does anyone know what the update schedule is ... is it 1 chapter every day or 1 every week?
09/04/2023 08:20I like the rewrite. Thanks for reposting it! When will you be updating! 🤞🤗
09/04/2023 08:20Female Alpha Skye
more!!! more!! please! I love this story so much
09/04/2023 08:20are we getting an update tonight please!!!! thank
09/04/2023 08:20so loved this update! love this story! more please! 🥰
09/04/2023 08:19Reader-020685
keep checking for an update!
09/04/2023 08:19Nikki
This story keeps getting better
09/04/2023 08:18I want know her story so bad! Such a good book/short story! Sorry for my comment earlier, I was mad at another writer!!!! positive vibes only, my bad!
09/04/2023 08:18amber sweet
when are the updates
09/04/2023 08:17Bella Jersey 2
that’s enough of thought trading for now. let’s talk about hats
09/04/2023 08:17I must say alpha arsen is one of the most well rounded alpha characters I have found amongst all of the werewolf /alpha stories I have read thus far!!! he is good at communicating and listening to others...he is empathetic and kind but strong and aggressive when appropriate!! in other alpha stories most of the alphas come of as conceited narcissists who don't listen to others and think they are always right....but this alpha here is perfect....at least up to this point in the story!! hope he doesn't have any major skeletons in his closet lol
09/04/2023 08:17Gina DiMatteo
ohhhhh the cliff hanger! your killing me smalls! 😈
09/04/2023 08:16