"Well, well, well," hearing a low voice behind me with a teasing tone, I could only turn my head to the side to face his gaze.

"What?" my voice was quiet.

He smiled slowly.
"Do you understand that you belong only to me here? From the moment you broke into my house?"

I could only blink my eyes.
"You are threatening me?"

Laughing at my question as if he had heard the best joke, I felt his eyes slide over my body.
"Oh no, dear. That's a promise."

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I don’t understand how any of you can be so excited over a story with so many errors that a lot of it doesn’t make sense. I am already 2 chapters in and I just can’t do it. I had hoped it would get easier to read because it sounded like a good story.

I did, I am sorry that there isn’t someone to look over it and help edit it so it is easier to understand. I really wanted to read it because the concept was very good. I was frustrated because the comments make it sound awesome and a lot of the wording makes the story hard to understand so I was extremely disappointed. I just wish I could read it and understand it because it sounded like such a good story. Maybe with more practice your English will reach a point where you can edit it so I can enjoy it.🙂

Lara Hart

Regina Ellis

I’m sorry if this story doesn’t meet your expectations but still I hope you understand that I’m not fluent in English, there might be grammar mistakes and sometimes I write too fast so there’s more to read than some short chapters. At least you gave it a try! 😊 

wow. This is an amazing story. Well done. Everyone must read. Need more stories like this.

Daniels Koo

Nicci

Loud Mouth Beauty

more updates please ! this chapter was great 

Sabian Teautama

Robinanne

Cheryl Hiscott

Stay tuned! <3 The next chapters coming pretty soon, one is up already. 

that is a great story, how often do you post updates ? 

Thank you for your support! And for this particular story I post pretty often. New update will be today or tomorrow morning :)

Please continue. I enjoyed reading this book! 

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