The Four Mafia Men and Their Prize Comments

  • Amanda Beck

    simply amazing book! excited for more !

    02/23/2025 10:08
  • Kathy Rumelhart

    when will there be another update? Also need to get back to Madisons' kidnapping!

    01/24/2025 18:05
  • Sigrún María

    I am loving this book so much!!!! started a few days ago and I am nearly finished with what is already finished 😍

    12/09/2024 16:01
  • Sarah

    My dear Author!!! If you are still writing, please let me know where I can follow your the your books'new!!!

    11/01/2024 06:12
  • Lexis Salmon

    it's been like 4 months what's going on

    10/06/2024 09:18
  • Visitor

    ok so I love this book iv started again and it will be my 9th time, it's not just enjoyable it's also my thepy...it relaxed me and takes my mind away from life and into a world of imagination. thank you 😘

    07/07/2024 19:23
  • Kathy Rumelhart

    Is this the end of the story?

    06/03/2024 02:12
  • Visitor

    LOVE LOVE LOVE these books, just wish updates were closer together

    06/01/2024 14:32
  • Amy Manigold

    book one is amazing and so far book 2 is just as good. love it

    05/09/2024 02:36
  • Ann-Sofie Gustavsson

    I am so in love with this book love it so much thank you for writing this story ❤️

    04/04/2024 18:34
  • Visitor

    ok so this is my 7th time listening to this story, all i can say is Thank-you for this story, i love it so much, the comedy, action,torture the emotions,BDSM, thank you for your imagination ❤️

    04/01/2024 20:54
  • lori phillips

    has book 2 started yet? I'm obsessed

    03/24/2024 23:17
  • H. L

    Hello M C. I love the darker element to this story, it's what drew me in! Your writing is phenomenal! Can you give us an idea on when this story will be updated and/or completed? Is there a different platform other than here where we can read what happens next?

    03/16/2024 22:33
  • Konidala Naga Siri Chandana

    when are we going to get more chapters???

    03/09/2024 06:26
  • MarY

    Haven't started the book yet, because I haven't ended the others yet. I'd like to start next, because it sounds very interesting and I like a fierce FMC

    02/29/2024 20:02
  • Janaki Kollepalli

    the female lead is really strong and she is capable of handling all 4 guys... keeping me hook

    02/29/2024 13:07
  • Rohimat Anuoluwapo Raji

    The female lead was fierce and the book surely kept me on my toes.

    02/29/2024 04:39
  • Me Myself

    she's fierce. hope she keeps fighting. the book seems pretty good so far, but do men always have to be sssooo possessive and dominate

    02/28/2024 04:31
  • Sidon Smith

    Four dangerous men and a female, well I may need some wine and therapy after this read. I'm interested to see Aurora views this in her POV.

    02/26/2024 15:40
  • Kerry Goodgame

    I found this book to be very spicy and a little confusing; but over all it was pretty good..

    02/23/2024 22:20
  • Buffi Smith

    for guys who say they want this girl to be theirs they are definitely going about it the wrong way. Even if she agreed after all this she would never truly trust them

    02/17/2024 18:02
  • Anna Latimer

    Don't tell me he gived her a hickey while she was knocked out what a pervert

    01/06/2024 21:11
  • Anna Latimer

    and I hope that Aurora kick his ass

    01/06/2024 17:29
  • Anna Latimer

    I hope Ben is okay

    01/06/2024 10:29
  • Anna Latimer

    I think its the new maid Annabel that give Alexi the information

    01/06/2024 10:11
  • Anna Latimer

    Love it Love it author that was insanely 🔥

    01/06/2024 09:38
  • Anna Latimer

    I hope that her training comes to good use

    01/06/2024 08:08
  • Anna Latimer

    I hope whoever that son of a b---h doesn't get her and I still think it's Dimitry and good thinking Kai and I know that when you finished training her you will be pleased with the outcome

    01/06/2024 07:42
  • Anna Latimer

    Damm I'm loving it

    01/06/2024 01:28
  • Anna Latimer

    Why didn't she tell them that she is still a virgin and I think Jason might take her virginity she had a wet dream with Kai and Charlie wasn't with her yet so who knows

    01/05/2024 14:13
  • Anna Latimer

    I hope that they all come back home safely

    01/05/2024 06:44
  • Anna Latimer

    Damm damm this is getting good and it's about time they all start to get physical with each other and I hope that it's not another one of her wet dreams

    01/05/2024 06:19
  • Anna Latimer

    I love they Grammy Malinda she surely put Jason, Charlie,Kai and Ben in their place good for her that's what they needed

    01/05/2024 05:06
  • Anna Latimer

    My heart breaks for her and I hope that their not to harsh with her

    01/05/2024 03:34
  • Anna Latimer

    I have the biggest smile on my face that they found her and I know they is not going to let her out of they reach

    01/05/2024 02:09
  • Anna Latimer

    Oh so you think

    01/04/2024 23:30
  • Anna Latimer

    I'm surprised she didn't faint on the spot after what she witnessed

    01/04/2024 21:31
  • Anna Latimer

    I think this is Dimitry and he is so wrong if he thinks that those four glorious bad ass Mafia Men will let anything happen they Aurora not a chance

    01/04/2024 13:59
  • Anna Latimer

    Damm that was some intense wet dream

    01/04/2024 04:10
  • Anna Latimer

    I'm surprised that they didn't have s-x with her yet

    01/04/2024 03:06
  • Anna Latimer

    One up for Aurora good girl

    01/03/2024 18:32
  • Anna Latimer

    As good friends they both are Aurora is going to go and help Brianna

    01/03/2024 06:48
  • Anna Latimer

    They are disgusting and I hope that they outrun those monsters

    01/03/2024 06:32
  • Anna Latimer

    Love love love this story

    01/03/2024 05:23
  • Anna Latimer

    She just moved into the house but she figuring out how to escape let's hope it works

    01/03/2024 01:42
  • Anna Latimer

    Okay she escaped again where is she going not to far because she's going to get caught again and who knows what they'll do to her this time

    01/03/2024 01:03
  • Anna Latimer

    I would love to see where she runs to since she doesn't know the grounds surrounding and if she gets caught I know that all four is going to enjoy punishing her

    01/02/2024 22:08
  • c-diesel chill motav

    👍💯🔥❤️

    01/02/2024 12:58
  • Anna Latimer

    All I can say is Damm damm damm

    01/02/2024 08:34
  • Anna Latimer

    Damm this book is getting better and better with each chapter I read

    01/02/2024 07:59
  • Anna Latimer

    So far so good

    01/02/2024 07:15
  • Stephanie Moors

    Thank you for your creativity! I really liked this book! It had so many twist and turns with both the love story and the action around it. It very well written! Thank you for this!

    12/23/2023 15:19
  • Visitor

    thank you for this book iv have not been able to put it down since i started to read it and that was 48hrs ago, 💋💕💌 i cannot wait to read your others, michelle davison UK 🇬🇧

    12/21/2023 18:53
  • moonwolf417

    Amazing goosebumps book to read. Author has many twists and turn. Currently right is my favorite Mafia book.

    12/09/2023 15:48
  • 3rd

    the poor friend really doesn’t deserve this I feel bad for her 🥺😢☹️😕

    12/09/2023 01:56
  • Reader-905946

    is it bad Kai is my favorite

    12/05/2023 21:28
  • Anubis9000

    First Off! I Need That Burger! Second! Kai reminds me of Michelangelo from Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles! AND IM LOVIN IT!

    11/29/2023 05:09
  • Visitor

    good story

    11/20/2023 00:12
  • Rebecca davies

    .. n

    11/15/2023 08:57
  • JoAnn Buckles

    I like this book i'm reading the one Called forbes mafia men and their prize

    11/07/2023 17:45
  • Paula Lewis

    excellent writing! I’m really enjoying both of your books! romance, comedy and drama all wrapped into one!

    10/16/2023 12:41
  • Kayleigh

    I’m on the edge of my metaphorical seat MC! I can’t wait for chapters 86+!

    10/12/2023 02:06
  • SammyLu6

    I love both of your books on here so far, this one and the dragon kings one both have me waiting for updates.. very good writing cant wait for more updates and to see what you come up with next!

    10/08/2023 08:54
  • Rebecca Fairburn

    I really love this book but need more chapters than just 1 chapter I've been waiting for updates but doesn't update as much as I would like it too! Please add more chapters I want to know what happens really hoping Kai,Jason,Ben,charlie saves aurora soon! keep updating please! need more

    10/03/2023 13:04
  • Stephanie

    This story has a dark beginning, just stick through it folks. it is extremely well written. please don't be discouraged and read through it. The Arthur is doing an amazing job with plot twists and as soon as you think you have it figured it out, another curve ball to add to the mystery behind the plot.

    10/03/2023 05:07
  • Theresa Glapa

    leaving her alone drugged could be dangerous of emesis and choking.

    10/03/2023 01:30
  • Stacy Smith

    omg what's on the paper!?!??!? don't leave me hanging in suspense!!! how often are updates done?

    09/05/2023 07:08
  • Rupy Goodridge

    hi writer I am enjoying this book started reading in yesterday just wondering how often you update and the story so far is really good keep updating recalling enjoying this book well done author

    09/05/2023 07:07
  • Devon Burnett

    love the story❤️ when is the next update coming

    09/05/2023 06:58
  • just by reading what the book is about, I so want to read it. is it going to be a finished book? please be so, I really really want to read this book. she sounds like she can make me lol

    09/05/2023 06:52
  • Elianna Winter

    though, I do think she would be a little bit more upset about losing her best friend.

    09/05/2023 06:48
  • Essence of Red

    My new favorite story!

    09/05/2023 06:20
  • Rupy Goodridge

    hello writer are you gonna be adding more chapters soon I really wanna read more

    09/05/2023 06:08
  • deb

    why did they kill her friend! She is really going to hate them!

    09/05/2023 06:03
  • Elianna Winter

    Oh my God she is my favorite person in the world. The reactions are genuine. And she is hilarious.😂

    09/05/2023 06:00
  • Jill Barnes

    Wonderful book. I don’t like that they killed her best friend. I don’t know if I want her to stay with them because of that. How often are the updates?? More please!!

    09/05/2023 05:42
  • Linda R

    love the story and the way you’re showing her character. I’m reading in hope that she over powers them and takes over and makes them all her subs including the other guy trying to save her

    09/05/2023 05:31
  • Rupy Goodridge

    oh man I hope Auroras friend is okay Aurora sholud have told the guys that are after her to let her friend go cause her friend has nothing to do with what goingbon between Aurora and her four guys that like her

    09/05/2023 05:17

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