The Wrong Alpha - A Twist of Fate? Comments

Visitor
When doing 1st person pov from multiple people it would helpful to which character the pov belongs to
10/02/2025 20:40
Visitor
pretty sure chapter 1 and 2 could be combined with less detail. Kinda dragged it out
10/02/2025 20:35
Visitor
pretty good so far
09/11/2025 12:51
Visitor
so far , mediocre
09/11/2025 02:41
Visitor
I like it can we get a bit less description for everything
08/21/2025 15:43E T
don't listen to the audio terrible
11/22/2024 20:11Bonnie C🖤
just badly written
10/24/2024 22:39Bonnie C🖤
the overuse of (............) is turning me off reading further
10/24/2024 18:24I F Abigail Shores-Muirhead
really good story, thoroughly enjoyed it
09/03/2024 01:41
Nadine Oliver
loved it great book 🎊🎊
09/12/2023 13:27
deb
Will there be updates soon? Goid book!
09/11/2023 22:16
deb
Can you do another chapter please! Dis they find out why Logan was they he was? What happened to her friend Dey, Stu and the boys? And did Anya’s friends get in trouble too?
09/06/2023 00:52