I belong to five mobsters Comments

  • Estrella Snijder

    win bonusback#

    09/25/2023 14:06

  • Viola Cordell

    I see your other book is done. it does show it though. is this book finished? needs editing but I like your books

    09/15/2023 01:05

  • Nina Lilly

    Really needs some editing. It's a good story but is very confusing.

    09/12/2023 17:45

  • M C

    It’s an interesting read so far but I am having a hard time continuing reading past chapter 12. The story is extremely choppy and hard to follow. There is a lot of room for improvement and growth of the storyline. The grammar and overall dialogue of the characters is poor and needs a lot of work. I had a lot of hope for this story and I am disappointed.

    09/12/2023 16:34

  • Viola Cordell

    hi, is the book finished or will it be? 🤔 😀

    09/12/2023 16:02

  • Sakina van bokhoven

    the idea of this books looks promising... the thing that makes me not want to read it is that she and he are confused in the intro already. what does that say about the book? idk, but I've read enough books where he and she constantly get confused and its annoying. so maybe try to edit and you'll will get more readers...

    09/12/2023 15:24

  • Linden Vimislik

    Some editing needed. There are no other maids, except there are because they're jealous of her.

    09/12/2023 15:16