Unbreaking the Commander

Unbreaking the Commander

Laura Jayne

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Introduction

"You are beautiful," he whispers. "You have completely bewitched me, little human" Without another word, his hands sweep beneath my shirt, and I feel his thumbs brush from my throat to my shoulders as he parts the fabric of my shirt and then watches as it slips it down my arms.


Yearning for solace after a shattered heart, Laurel sought respite but found herself stranded in a military camp nestled deep within the enchanted forests of Valia. A world where magic, werewolves, and monsters roam freely and everything she thought she knew is turned on its head.
She encounters Ayris, a ruthless commander feared and respected by all. Little did she know that this man, whose name alone strikes fear into the hearts of men, would become entangled with an unassuming human woman.

She has no idea what lycans are, or fated mates, but apparently, he's both. She also cannot control how he plagues her thoughts or how her body heats for him every time they're together.

As Laurel navigates this dangerous realm and attempts to understand her growing connection with Ayris, they both become trapped in a tempestuous love affair that defies the boundaries of their worlds. Can Laurel's love melt the commander's icy facade and uncover the hidden depths of his heart?
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Laura Jayne

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  • Ms. Nicole

    I just hate when people ask you your name, & when you tell them, what it is...they still call you, "Gal or woman" or "Boy or Man!" Ughh

    01/24/2024 15:58
  • Amanda Jade

    hopefully everything is okay with the author. it's been almost 3 weeks and no update. I really love this story and hope they continue writing.

    11/03/2023 01:24
  • Reader-573037

    Couple costume idea: Laurel and Ayris! These 2 have come along way and their relationship has blossomed into something beautiful. #HalloweenVibes

    10/26/2023 00:50
  • Laura Jayne

    Hey guys, sorry I know I haven’t updated. I’m working on the next chapter right now. Hoping to have it uploaded tomorrow. Much love Laura

    10/10/2023 20:18
  • Reader-812945

    how often are updates?

    09/05/2023 05:00
  • Reader-789050

    I’m really enjoying so far :)

    09/05/2023 04:43
  • Karen Lessard

    I absolutely love this book!!

    09/05/2023 03:49
  • Vikki Hucks

    you r so talented

    09/05/2023 03:48
  • Vikki Hucks

    when do u update...This book is to good to keep everyone hanging

    09/05/2023 03:45
  • Vikki Hucks

    This is a great book and story please do not leave us hanging

    09/05/2023 03:01

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