V for Virgin! Comments
K H
I like the story and the plot seems interesting but it's so very confusing to read with all the 'drafts' it honestly gave me a headache. I wish the author would pick one and stick to it instead of the chapters bouncing all over the place.
07/23/2023 02:05Love1419
I don’t understand the different drafts. it’s making it so hard to read. Personally I like the first draft or second draft. see I’m confused now. the draft that doesn’t have all the extra details.
02/18/2022 23:21Book with Luv
Hey can you help me please? I really need to know how can I be a signed writer. I hope you will help me
10/15/2020 06:17Cait Fore
It's a good read and well written. However it's so difficult to follow with the chapters mixed up. Maybe keeping them all in order with the second drafts after the completion of the story?
09/19/2020 23:54Kalista Sanders
I'm liking this story but it's hard to follow because of the way you formatted the "edits" maybe taking it down and only putting up your most recent edit in chronological order without all the other edit versions included would make this reading experience more enjoyable and a lot smoother for your followers
09/01/2020 13:49Wendy Syri
Okay, so she wants to loose her virginity, but she’s giving blow jobs instead?? You want to have sex with your gay best friend, but you don’t even know how to go after what you want. she’s basically like a blow up doll just waiting for something to happen. She doesn’t even know how to grow or feel a man up...any virgin could do that. Ethan becomes a complete virgin who doesn’t know what to do either. Seth is the main attraction. The puppet master, pulling both of their strings. Without him, this story would be soo boring.
07/31/2020 06:59Wendy Syri
this would be better if the chps weren’t all over the place and repeating more than once in all the edited chps.
07/31/2020 06:31Fiona Wright
huh. interesting
07/24/2020 22:13Merlyn Quadros Noronha
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06/18/2020 11:36HoneyToast Bunny
is Artifical insemination 2/2 the last chapter ever?
06/17/2020 18:06HoneyToast Bunny
This book is so jumbled it’s hard to read😭 I don’t know which chapters I’m supposed to read and in what order 😩😒
06/16/2020 01:05Kaitlyn Buckley
is this book good
05/27/2020 12:49Emily Brooks
I'm ready 👀👀
05/27/2020 02:21Malond Ray
I'm so ready to read more
04/30/2020 15:07Esther*
so sexyyyyyy! wonderful description! totally got me there I wish I’m this girl ! 🥰🤪
04/24/2020 04:19