Between the Four Alphas Comments
Christine M
chapter two is confusing me.... is it about the girl or the guy Seth leaving the apartment bc I thought the girl left to find her find but it was a her...?...?
09/04/2023 08:18Mishy
This was such a great read! I really hope there will be more books for a series collection because there is so much that can be done and I'd love every moment! please please please write more!
09/04/2023 08:16Jessica Miller
awe...love that ending. good job. is there a 2nd book coming
09/04/2023 08:16❤️❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:15Tammy Lewis
would have been nice to know.how anton turned out... and truely enjoyed the book... would have loved more chapters.. but will have to use my mined on what their future holds.. many kids.. i see her full of pups for some time.. 😁
09/04/2023 08:14Taina Iosefo
Love Anastasia!! So like Seth in a way. haha I thought that was the cutest thing Seth said at the end.. “I hope you come home soon.”
09/04/2023 08:14Allison Underdonk Peterman
so there is going to be a book 2? or will there be more to this book since it says completed?
09/04/2023 08:14Dusty Dakota
I found this to be so much better then "The Unwanted Alpha". Excellent work on making it flow. There were a couple places where I either got lost; couldn't figure out why things were progressing the way they were; or wondered why certain things weren't present when they should have been, but overall a tremendous improvement. If you ever need help editing I'm happy to help.
09/04/2023 08:14Susan Rider
also she such a wimp for having alpha blood
09/04/2023 08:14Deb Warren
I LOVE THIS BOOK!!! amazing. so going to miss this. I wish it kept going and going or a sequel to it. loved it! Thank you.
09/04/2023 08:14Reader-752417
thank you
09/04/2023 08:14Stngray3
As always you have us on the edge of our seats waiting for the next page 📄 of wonder!!! I was just as upset as Seth when I thought Luciano might be dead. so glad this was “fake news”. sorry I couldn’t resist! really hoping it will end the way I have envisioned it because I think she deserves to have them all!!!! 😁
09/04/2023 08:13Reader-742236
loving this book I don’t want it to end lol
09/04/2023 08:13Not even through reading the new chapter yet and clear as day can see my shirt fluttering from my heart beat... WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME 😭
09/04/2023 08:13Hernandez Giuliana
Waiting for the final chapters!! cant wait
09/04/2023 08:13Ellie Vasileva
Ever since I read the Unwanted alpha, I have been in love with this author's work! Action is never dragging, twists are unbelievable, details are just the right amount and she keeps us on edge! The uproar in the comments about Luciano's fate only shows me how good of a writer you have to be to make all these people fall in love with your characters. I have read all complete works and currently testing my will power not to start any other ongoing - reading this book has only confirmed I am not a patient woman! God bless my husband 😆
09/04/2023 08:13Madison Spurlock
uggg I wish I could read the next chapter
09/04/2023 08:13I choose to focus on the phrasing the nurse used. “He was pronounced dead“ does not necessarily mean that he IS dead. Maybe they are trying to draw out those who tried to kill Seth. If it was a power-play, no King will bring out those people. JMHO. holding out hope that she will have all four in the end. However, I know that art imitates life and sometimes bad things happen. As others have said, this is not your typical trope.
09/04/2023 08:13Reader-167247
lmao! I love the authors warning note 😂
09/04/2023 08:12Maybe it's only me but I don't like Seth. Really really obnoxious character and one of the few protagonists I just can't stand. All she ever does is run. She never faces her problems or feelings. She's easy, needy, full of herself. She abuses the power she knows she has on the alphas. Just can't stand her.
09/04/2023 08:12Vtink08
Hope!!!! I loved this update!!!
09/04/2023 08:12Emma Read
Luciano*
09/04/2023 08:12Emma Read
If louciano is dead or she dosnt pick him I will be very sad, 1 of best things I've read....
09/04/2023 08:12I agree w Jessica Miller!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:12Tiara Kharizzma
I’m so stressed after this.. Gosh that was a lot
09/04/2023 08:12Carol Harris-Downing
Noooooo!!!! I need a epilogue part 1 & 2 please!!!!! Great story!
09/04/2023 08:12L. Danielle Williams
YOU'RE KILLING ME!!! The suspense is excruciating... Please update more...
09/04/2023 08:12Reader-371843
noooooooooooooo this just cannot be!!!! why did you let Luciano die???? my heart is breaking! I cannot deal with this. I am so 😢 disappointed
09/04/2023 08:12cjjames
Thank you for the last chapter. It was a good ending. I’m happy now. You are a talented writer, keep up the great work!!! 👍
09/04/2023 08:12Blueforeva-02
thank you so much for the epilogue! I really love this story. I understand where you are coming from, and where everyone else is coming from. I fell in love with the characters and their story. it feels like it just abruptly ended and the epilogue is helping bring it to a close. so I wanted to say thank you for taking the time bring some closure to us!!
09/04/2023 08:11Cheryl D'arcy
the end what are you fed up of writing
09/04/2023 08:11Natasha Anthony
ok so by chapter 52 I'm not liking Much of Seth anymore, she unfortunately is annoying me with her not so Individual attitude and giving in to easily but also being so childish and aggressive towards certain things. where is the strong independent woman I fell in love with to keep reading this story Even after looking over the confusing Grammer at times as I know not all writers are English first
09/04/2023 08:11good book
09/04/2023 08:11Jenny Best Camacho
awesome story…
09/04/2023 08:11Tzahala Cofield
“I’m leaving” IM CTFUUUUUU 😭💀
09/04/2023 08:11Rebecc S
nice kinky stuff!
09/04/2023 08:11Stacy Jefferson
omg is all I can say I’m so disappointed I really wanted them to be together omg
09/04/2023 08:11Jillydean
I think it’s the old King that was already on his deathbed that was pronounced dead.
09/04/2023 08:11Fixer
I'm really upset.😠 You mad her out to be nothing but a whore.Why would you say she hates Alphas only to be ruled by them. She isn't a strong woman at all . Just another tipical submissive birch.
09/04/2023 08:11Pam Milroy
So far I really like it
09/04/2023 08:11Katja Knip
thank you for your Story and the Extra chapters
09/04/2023 08:11Reader-167247
that girl has no chill
09/04/2023 08:10yesss Luciano !!! show her that all she needs is you 😂
09/04/2023 08:10Brandi
I think Seth needs to connect more with Clara. Then the two will decide what’s right for them. Personally I think Clara wants Luciano buy Seth hasn’t asked her what she thinks. Clara is much stronger now and deserves a say. it’s her life too and she has been cooped up for so much of it.
09/04/2023 08:10Bonnie
this story was H O T. loved it!
09/04/2023 08:10Tabitha Groves
please tell me we are getting a naughty epilogue 🙏
09/04/2023 08:10Bethany Westbrook
so is there a sequel? great book but the ending was a cliff hanger for sure!
09/04/2023 08:10Vtink08
So good!!! Thank you, K. K.!!!
09/04/2023 08:10Kirsten Burmeister
haha Classic cliffhanger 😁
09/04/2023 08:10Anamaria Papuc
🤔, hello? What's the point in continuing the book without Luciano? Really? Why you killed him? I don't think he's dead. How come? He's the strongest, the king. Where is he. Update asap, please 🙏?
09/04/2023 08:10LMvdB
love this story but hate it that she runs again, and why must she hide her scent? that that she had the ability herself and didn’t need any perfume for it
09/04/2023 08:10L. Danielle Williams
No. Can't. Be.
09/04/2023 08:10Salica Rae Tom
so is there more updates or another story to this? this cant be the end right????
09/04/2023 08:09THE WAZ FAM
awesome! to bad no more naughty scenes 😂 thanks for the great book!!!
09/04/2023 08:09Lacey June Naggs
When's the next update?
09/04/2023 08:09here we go!!! is it Vlad or Ryder??
09/04/2023 08:09Alyssa Schriner
Omg I loved every minute of this story actually was that it's over 😂❤
09/04/2023 08:09Reader-752417
omg! please hurry and update.
09/04/2023 08:09Lynne King
ILove Luciano 🥰
09/04/2023 08:09Christina
there has to be another book soon this is one of my favorite books
09/04/2023 08:09Tammy Lewis
ch 53, did vlad and luci met at seth cabin.. luci told vlad seth was his gf and they had an agruement... why is it like they havent talked about her before..
09/04/2023 08:09Ashley Gunderson
❤️❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:09Melina Ceiciene
I really want her to choose Luciano 😍
09/04/2023 08:09R.L. Marcelain
When are the next updates?
09/04/2023 08:09Yolanda Padrnos
I am on Ch 89 and I am confused. Is Dominic Lucinda the Fae’s dad?
09/04/2023 08:09Jessica Van Maanen
i cant stop reading!!
09/04/2023 08:09Reader-143849
I have faith in this author. I really enjoy reading her work but...the suspense may kill me 😂😂🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:09Allison Underdonk Peterman
yay Luciano and Seth in the same chapter?!?! finally I cannot wait. I've been looking forward to this!!!
09/04/2023 08:08Edie Gyorki
I think everyone is team Luciano. let's get them back together.
09/04/2023 08:08seth and Luciano needs to end together after having their fun haha
09/04/2023 08:08Sammie Heemi
dead....what...this must be a nightmare
09/04/2023 08:08THE WAZ FAM
no something had to have happened where he is presumed dead or something. I feel she would feel if he was for sure dead. I guess we will find out later. I love that this isn't your typical thrope story. keeps you on your feet. this is what makes a good writer.
09/04/2023 08:08Lyndsay
Please update
09/04/2023 08:08Deb Warren
Omg. Find Luciano now. make Seth ok. And ......Let her be pregnant. lol. you are killingly me.
09/04/2023 08:08Allison Underdonk Peterman
oh please let Luciano live through this and come back to Seth. I love their loyalty to eachother. the fae was a fun little fact
09/04/2023 08:08Dahlia Mynd
omggg I'm freaking out!!!! please don't do this!!! 😢😢😭😭😭
09/04/2023 08:08Cassi1234
omg this is so intense! btw I full on cracked out laughing when he said this little cunt 😂😂😂🙌🏼
09/04/2023 08:07Mizz Meka
excellent story!
09/04/2023 08:07Lacey June Naggs
Oh hell no WHY?! He has to come back though. Right?
09/04/2023 08:07Reader-752417
no! please update now! lol. it can’t be. I will be really disappointed.
09/04/2023 08:07Brandy Hunter
please tell me his not going to be with her
09/04/2023 08:07Brandi
Seth did not give him the 20 minutes of listening BUT he should have started talking and not beat around the bush. I don’t think she really means what she said and I still think Clara wants him
09/04/2023 08:07I think the newcomer is her best friend who got her the job !!
09/04/2023 08:07HeatherM1
Thank you for this story. 🙏🏻 Then you add these last two chapters and wow. I cannot wait to read the rest of your stories!!! Love seems to always find a way.
09/04/2023 08:06Shirley Wood
no no no not Luciano
09/04/2023 08:06Deb Warren
So awesome. Go Seth. you rock. b
09/04/2023 08:06Reader-752417
I’m confused. someone please explain. is this in his past. he sounds like a young man.
09/04/2023 08:06Ashley Mclagan Bonds
thanks for the update, I'm seriously hooked i can't wait for the rest..... ohhh I'm getting all getty
09/04/2023 08:06Fran Farley
Thank you so much for ending. I loved it. I could read more but I understand why your not continuing the story.
09/04/2023 08:06Kirsten Burmeister
the way the other alphas reacted it seems as if he is really dead..i am still hoping his beast maybe took ober and he wasn't able to surface..if he really is dead i would also be disappointed - but i guess I need to find out your reasoning behind things..
09/04/2023 08:05HeatherM1
I am in love with Anastasia!!!! Ahh so excited to see where he was and what will happen when they all get back. Cannot wait for the next update!!
09/04/2023 08:05Karina Marthinsen
looking forward to see were Talia fits in, or is this a background story that tells why Luciano became like that
09/04/2023 08:05emotional rollercoaster.. that I just can’t... stop reading 😭😭
09/04/2023 08:05Stephanie
is amy that friend that lied about luciano in the beginning?
09/04/2023 08:05Jennifer Ballard
Based on what Luciano says about how much time the king has left on the throne, and how he wants to change the tradition. And the fact that his men were willing to restrain him (he clearly wasn’t the Alpha yet), I’m pretty sure this is an old memory.
09/04/2023 08:05Edie Gyorki
why can't he just tell her how he feels!
09/04/2023 08:05i cant believe she is leaving again without even listening to him ☹️
09/04/2023 08:04Iris Lara
no he can't be dead he is more worthy then the other 3. WhAT THE HELL we all are team LUCIANO. author you can't do this to us Clara never purred to anyone but him.😞
09/04/2023 08:04Rosanna
nope not jumping to conclusions. i'll will be in denial of that meaning he was "dead dead". make no sense why she will still be getting treated in the hospital of fear of the kings wrath.
09/04/2023 08:04R.L.Marcelain
How often do you update?
09/04/2023 08:04