Between the Four Alphas Comments

mvdb

nope, not jealous 😏😅

Anamaria Papuc

That was kinda cruel 😳😞. Really? Kill your own kid?

Lisa Marie

no worries, despite English not being your native tongue you have done amazingly!! I'm really enjoy your story 💝

Edie Gyorki

is there an update schedule to this story?

Tabitha Groves

Th name Talia is soo familiar but I can't place it...That's not the name of her Puma, is it?

Taina Iosefo

Finally was able to catch up on everything. I was in for a lot happening. That’s a sweet but sad storyline with Talia. I hope Luciano can find Seth and tell her everything. Vlad was so good to be there for him.

Taina Iosefo

OMG .... was so excited to have all these updates!! Still wanting Luciano to find Seth and win her back. The others are good to her and she feels some kind of connection with each of them but still rooting for Luciano and Seth!! hehehe

Allison Underdonk Peterman

heck keep the last two as friends. they seem better that way and are fun to hang out with it seems. It seems her true main people are Vlad and Luciano but I am still totally team Luciano. I love his possessive, daddy attitude, his protective side, his sweet side, intimidating side. I just love him.

Allison Underdonk Peterman

I LOVE LUCIANO/DEMON!!!!! I could read just about them and Seth together being stubborn and teases and steamy scenes and games all day!!! I truly don't mind if the other alphas stay away. Also I wonder if he will say to Seth that he plans to impregnate and mark her? She will try and run and he will catch. so hot! He will flip when he finds out her dads plans

Jasmin Smith

lmao "as if we care" 😂😂😂😂

Jennifer Ballard

Is Anton a puma or something else? Maybe I missed that detail earlier in the book?

Lacey June Naggs

I hope he doesn't fall for Talia! I want him to get to Seth! And this girl is a distraction from that! Please don't let Luciano get with her

Allison Underdonk Peterman

I love how possessive Luciano is still it suits him. Ryder and Dom are very funny how they are. Vlad is the one I hope finds another girl who has part of his soul. Luciano can be king and have Seth. hehe I'm biased as ever I know

Shanan Middleton

love what the guys are doing for her!!! Go for it Seth!!!

Ellie Vasileva

To me, Seth's inability to face her problems comes from the way she grew up - no support system to build her strength, keeping her head down to survive until she can run away, and trying to grab every opportunity of joy life gives her, as she knows from her mother's untimely death that life can be unpredictable and cut short at any given moment. I personally hope she takes her rightful place as Alpha and the guys learn to see her as an equal, not someone who exists for their pleasure. I guess we will see...

dang!! 😉

Daisylion

idk how I feel about having these Luciano memory throw backs NOW with like no context as to what’s going on in the present lucianos mind like maybe two throw backs and then one to bring us to where everyone’s at and what they’re doing👀

caroline p

I am so loving this story!! thank u and I can't wait till the next uodate!!!

Sammy Jameson

Thank you for the quick updates. You’re an amazing writer 🌶🌶

Kim Cook Paige

I’m in love with this book. You’ve done an awesome job so far ! 😁👍🏼

cdunlap629@yahoo.com

When is the next update to this juicy story??!!

Sammy Jameson

OMG! 3 chapters?! I’m running around my house super excited. My kids think I’m crazy 😝

SINNOCENT

Happy New Year! Thank you for the updates! We're all totally stalking your story at this point... so this is a great New Year surprise 😄❤

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! love this book.

SINNOCENT

I can't decide 😫... but you're officially my new favorite author. Thanks again for all the updates!!!!

yeaasssssssssssss

Lynne King

Why always a cliffhanger??!

Anton would be a fantastic Beta!!!

Brandi

I think Clara likes Luciano

Reader-752417

this is getting goooid! lol

Stngray3

Ooohhh I hope they learned their lesson and now they get to grovel and make it up to her!!! 😁 so she can always have them all!!! hehehe 😝

Cassarndra Skarratt

perfection. please please let there be more

Anamaria Papuc

It was a bit of a rush ending ☹️ too abrupt. Is there any sequel or something? It's really weird the end. Just like that? THE END???

Anamaria Papuc

I just love the book 😍, not to mention Luciano, he is wow 😍

yeah disappointed that they all marked her etc

Monika Stanisławiak

Wow. That was hot. I can't wait to read the other two men in the action together and finały 5 of them at the same time as Seth has been daydreaming once

ok definitely going to be rereading this! when its done... and i don't reread books

Kirsten Burmeister

sorry to read that people have been pressuring you about more chapters, a second book etc....thank you so much for this amazing story and the naughty naughty epilogue chapters :) all the best and can't wait to read more of your work (as in: other books :D)

Ashley Mclagan Bonds

ohhh this has been my favorite so far i can't wait for the ending.... and book 2....

kathryn 1234

updates????

Sheretta Strong

Anastasia for the win! I love her!

Michelle Smart

Chapter 87: Ryder just found out he has a heart condition and nothing can be done. Did I read correctly? Couldn't find any mention of the heart condition in other chapters.

ya know what? I hope Luciano does fall for this new lady. he does actually deserve happiness too. the more I think about it - I’m leaning towards Dom and Ryder for Seth. They are understanding of her and seem to love her too. I think it’s a win win. And ehhh to Vlad lol

Viktória Halušková

haha the warning ⚠️😅😅 love it

THE WAZ FAM

I think this is a memory...

Byrdie Benton

please please please continue the story we have to know

Vtink08

Awe! Glad Seth calmed down enough to realize she does love Luciano, and the other 3 too. Can't wait to keep reading!

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 5: what did shout out to devil me? I think it’s funny when they call women a brat. whatever he brought out of her was not a 100% good.

Reader-371843

thank you! ❤️ loved it loved it loved it ❤️❤️😘

cjjames

The End? Please tell me this is an April Fools joke.

Iris Lara

Wow WOW! that broke my heart😞

Shakala

So I hope they all know that Seth is gonna kill them except Vlad.

caroline p

thank u so much!! I love this book and it is one of my favorites. u do an awesome job!! I am already planning on rereading it again very soon and have already started reading another of ur books. thank u!

Vtink08

This update is good!!! Can't wait for more!

nooooooooooooooo Luciano 😞❤️

Emma Hewitt

I was hoping she wud survive. well upset about this twist. poor girl I was hoping he wud kill everyone and look after her 😢 Seth doesnt need all the men she could share lmfao x

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 1: cold but oh well. better gets some books and porn junior or it’s gonna be blue balls for live

Rachelle Phillips

Maybe Luciano uses the human girl to find Seth... he better not fall for the human

Reader-371843

what a strange twist?! why is this happening? and I thought Seth would be his mate... I do not get the Thalia story line

Tiffany Nelson

please bring in updates. I'm dying here..... I need to know where this story ends before I start another. .

Tahiti_650

I’m all sorts of confused now. Please help me understand what is happening in this story

Allison Underdonk Peterman

I'm glad Luciano respected the alphas who backed out, and also not giving the counsel a show. I hope he stays determined to get Seth. It was also a brilliant idea for the other alphas to know when to back down. great job Author. side note. I'm sure Ryder is in heaven now 😆

Reader-310586

talia better be part of the past

Deb Warren

Omg I and dying waiting for the update. This is a nail biter. lol. 😀😀😀

We’re finally getting to the juicy parts!!! I can’t wait to read what happens next 😌

Allison Underdonk Peterman

those two are definitely up to something. they left something out when talking to Seth. A threesome maybe? share rooms? I can't wait to find out. curious what Luciano will say or do right now. will he find out who she's with?

Reader-167247

aren’t Seth and Anton boys names

Sydney Daniels

did the name of the book change? i got a new phone and had trouble finding the book at first

Taina Iosefo

I love how Seth enjoys her time with each guy. But I have noticed and I may be wrong but when she’s with Luciano she never really thinks of the other Alphas like she does when she’s with the others. Like it’s only Seth and Luciano and her mind is only on that. Unlike when she’s with the other Alphas she thinks of each of them. I don’t know just thinking her best choice would be Luciano if she would just hear him out with his reasonings of what/why he did what he did.

Allison Underdonk Peterman

I am totally still rooting for Luciano. I love the other ones but Luciano sticks out the most and most exciting for her and us to read about. I do hope Vlad tells him about the lion that showed up. I am also curious why the two men said as if we care? thats confusing as ever. I wonder if Vlad will be hurt when he finds out about Dominic

HeatherM1

Proud of Seth for deciding what SHE wants. Cannot wait for the next update!

Grace

the male, the female. really annoying when you've just said their name. makes me think there's another unnamed character 🙄

Taina Iosefo

NO NO NO NO.... oh man all hell is gonna break loose once Henry and Luciano show up at the house. Can’t wait for the next update!!

excitedly awaiting more chapters 🥰

Tiara Kharizzma

Patiently waiting for all 4 guys to meet

lakshmi poornima

can't get enough of this book....all I ever do is wait for updated chapters....thank you for the 2 new updates..... absolutely love your books....

DarlingMel

Omg can’t wait !!!!!

Kim Cook Paige

Wooooohooooooo ! I’m so hooked on this book you might as well just reel me in. 😂

HeatherM1

Felt spoiled with all the updates!! Thank you 🙏🏻 I love this story. I’m still pulling for her to end up with Luciano. I can’t wait to see where this story goes.

SINNOCENT

😭😭😭 We need moreeeeee

Krexroat619

Love that Vlad’s finally making a move! It was so exciting to see the other more aggressive and possessive side of his personality as well. 💗 I can’t wait to see how the story evolves from here!

Allison Underdonk Peterman

I have been waiting on Luciano or Demon to grab her again in public. he claims the first time at the club was to save her. Now I want him to just because he has mentioned him self he sees her as his. Her try and run he catches her and throws her over his shoulders.

Taina Iosefo

OMG.... thanks so much for the two updates.. so okay I hope Luciano doesn’t get too upset with Seth not telling him the truth as she didn’t know if she could trust him with some of his actions before. I hope he does find out how crazy her father is and actually save her instead of buying her off of her dad. Oh I so can’t wait for the next updates.

Sammy Jameson

Thank you for the updated chapters!

Amanda Caruana

ahhh I loved it

Allison Underdonk Peterman

definitely a talented author but I am totally team Luciano. I hope Vlad and Dom meet their chosen mates as well. I also hope her puma wakes up and becomes strong like the alpha she is. quick question in the beginning her and Anton were inseparable but all of a sudden he is moving in with a guy and not to worried about her knowing her past? thats the only thing that stung alittle

Domo

more more more more plz

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 4: what happened in her pass with an alpha that might makes her go into a panic attack?

Lynne King

Loving this story! 😍 Thank you!! 🥰

Lill Iv Lill

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Allison Underdonk Peterman

Well done! I am not disappointed at all! You done a great job throughout the entire story. Thank you for handling all our crazy comments and how needy we all were. I look forward to upcoming stories.

Stngray3

Talk about a great Christmas present with that chapter! And the fact that she was ready and willing to play the game.... ooohhh I can’t wait for the spiciness to come next 🌶🌶🌶

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: cave man style is coming. can Anton play straight? I want to know the catch of working that alpha event.

Donna DeNardo Grogan

ok he can't be dead maybe . He is Dead in side went. crazy. He loved her so much.

Annemarie Hermann

no no no! not cool she wakes up from a coma 9 months later it’s a dream and no explanation how the King gets killed. this is bull I don’t like it

nooooooooooooooooooooooo

Amanda Caruana

oh my gosh.... that's too much for me to take in one chapter let alone seth taking in waking up from a coma after 9 months my heart and head can't cope x

Lisa Miller

Can’t wait, I’m dying for an update

Lolamay

brooooo nooo imma die. frfr imma die.

Ashley Danielson

Oh man!!! I can't wait to see what happens. 4 men well technically 5 if you count the mysterious fiance. ugh I'm so excited to read whats next