Dark Desires Comments
Unlikely Optimist π€
hi guys! I decided not to make book 2 about this couple but they now have a completed story and 50k more words on am@z0n. print available as well π€ fated to fall is next up!
06/24/2023 16:44Mei Hellstormm
this book is finished. Not sure on #2, but you can find her on K****le, under the same name. Don't look for "dark desires" as a book as you'll get 4 or 5 different options/authors.
06/22/2023 20:32Heather Ashford
so I'm guessing book 2 never got done since it not posted shame
10/10/2022 04:51Z Alice
Finally got around to finishing this book! ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! Like this version more than the original! I need book 2!π€ππ€
08/04/2022 02:53Katrina Mason
Hi, love the book when will the second book be coming out would love to finish the story
06/09/2022 15:51Bri
Hi Unlikely Optimist, I read through some of the comments through here, and I think I read that you plan to release the part two of this book sometime early this year? just wondering if that timeframe was still valid or if it got pushed back? thank you for your writing, excited for more to come :)
03/08/2022 16:10Daughter of the Sun
I've never finished a book and immediately restarted reading it! This book is so good and I absolutely love each character (including Anubis, lol) π€£ I'm so looking forward to the next book!
02/04/2022 09:31Reader-286149
Best book ever!!!!!
01/23/2022 02:04Kristi Lyman
when is the next book expected to be out I just got done reading this one and I need more please
12/29/2021 11:10Karamea G
π€£π€£ βHalitosis is a valid reason for killing someoneβ π€£π€£ HYSTERICAL!
11/26/2021 03:38BluezCluez
great story.. i hope aisha and imset end up together
11/12/2021 05:02NitaApplebum
Is this story part of an ongoing series? Iβm only halfway through and need more of these gods in my life!
10/02/2021 00:39Z Alice
I came back to re-read the book and everythings different. Can I find the original chapters somewhere? not that the new edits are bad I just really liked the original not to mention I had like 5 or 6 chpaters left cause I didn't want to finish before book 2 was out because I didn't wnt cliffgamgers
09/04/2021 22:34Charonda Patterson
when do you think book 2 will begin? I liked the changes you made.
07/22/2021 21:06Justmee
Question? Do I need to reread this entire book? I see a lot of edits have been made. I feel like I'm missing to much.
07/13/2021 01:45sonia ceruti
loved this book! please finish it!!
07/06/2021 15:32TNB
π«π«π« apparently I need to follow all of your platforms for the rest of this story. Thank you for bringing culture to this realm of writing. I'm sad the story is finished but am excited to hear about your transition to Amazon.
07/03/2021 01:32wana blain
whyyy you are all leaving π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί you and another sista anyway whewwwwwwwww damn that was a good book ππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎ
06/26/2021 04:27Unlikely Optimist π€
all chapter rewrites are up β€οΈ check the note at the last chapter to find out more about book 2
06/25/2021 15:52Unlikely Optimist π€
Ok readers the first 36 chapter edits/ additions are up and complete. I still have several more chapters to post to get us back to the book one conclusion.
06/24/2021 04:55Denisha Collins
I'm enjoying the book but I'm confused as to why Aisha begged Tai to help her and why Osiris liked it so. Im guessing that will be answered in book 2. Why did he take her and he didn't like Aisha in the 1st place?
06/22/2021 00:41Unlikely Optimist π€
hey gang! after getting some great feedback on some of the changes I made to the story, Iβm going to go back and rework it a bit! Iβll post when everything is finished β€οΈ as always, the number chapters are new and the ones without numbers are old.
06/20/2021 18:07Lidiane Barros
ok I havent re read it but parts I have loved this book but this thing about being a virgin ? it actually takes part of the impact on their relationship etc I donβt like it π’π’ there was a weight about him had other concubine ls etc β¦ that made this time different β¦ π
06/20/2021 17:32Unlikely Optimist π€
update: all the updates up to chapter 27 are posted. so much has changed and been added π± so good lol almost done guys!
06/10/2021 12:51Unlikely Optimist π€
hey readers! PLEASE DONT READ RIGHT NOW! DD is finally getting its new edits, however it takes my editor some time to approve them all so the changes will show up little by little over the week. that means there are some chapters (w/ numbers in the title) that are edited and some that are original. the description will also be changing! TTYL π€
06/03/2021 12:09Lidiane Barros
so glad to hear the new one is coming soon .... I have been patiently waiting and my heart still breaks for Imset π’ being left by her π’
05/30/2021 08:32Unlikely Optimist π€
hey gang! Iβm currently editing/rewriting part one before I start part two. I wonβt be posting the new version until itβs all done and Iβll let you know when. main change: Iβm making Aisha a grown up. I felt too bad making bad things happen to a teen. and sheβll be in college not high school. the main meat of their relationship will not change.
05/25/2021 14:54Meshauna Charell
As a Black woman, I loved it!!! Brilliant, funny, sexy, dark, real! Beautiful π«
05/22/2021 00:26Brandie
I canβt wait for the updates π
05/05/2021 16:18Kristi Lyman
so when you update is it going to be called a different name or is it just going to start at the end of part 1
04/02/2021 00:25Unlikely Optimist π€
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03/25/2021 01:43Unlikely Optimist π€
Hey lovely readers! I see a lot of commenting about updates on my stories so I figured I should come chat for a second. I unfortunately have a chronic health condition that gives me trouble from time to time and right now Iβm struggling with pretty bad fatigue so the chapters are a lot harder to get through. i havenβt even been able to keep up with replying to your comments π© I hope youβll bear with me during this slow time as I really am trying hard to get chapters completed for you and start part 2! Hopefully youβll all stick around until Iβm feeling better! As always, much love and thanks so much for your support xoxoxoxo
03/24/2021 23:19Kristi Lyman
how soon are you starting part two I am hanging I want to know what's going happen ughhh I can't wait please hurry π
03/06/2021 03:08April Borchers
I read the whole thing in one night what will be the title of the next part
02/25/2021 12:08Reader-837796
I love this story, I donβt know how to feel about the ending...I totally understand it and why it had to end that way... but I do feel some kind of way...but that is the Mark of good writing, the details of the story stays with you well after youβve read it. Iβm looking forward to the next one!
02/24/2021 23:50Christinaa
amazing story cant wait for part 2 π€π€
02/24/2021 12:46Unlikely Optimist π€
hey yβall Iβll probably do one or two bonus chapters to fill in the gap between part 1 and where part 2 is going to start! I know itβs all a mess right now but itβll all make sense soon β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
02/19/2021 18:43Kristi Lyman
omg I can't believe she left with that dude when the man she loves was kissing her and wanted her. she passed the final test I figured she would have been super happy wth. please please start part 2 I don't know if I can wait to long. π. your writting is so great that I am so sucked in to this book I don't want it to end.
02/19/2021 18:05Arya
Can't wait for Part 2!
02/19/2021 16:08Au'Star_lie
π±π±π±π³π³π³π³π€―π€―π€―π€―π€― What the heck just happened and she finally snapped... at the worst time possible...
02/19/2021 15:15Krexroat619
That ending broke my heart! Who in the world is this Tai..? and Thoth seemed trustworthy, but completely tried to manipulate her. I hope Imset gets her back! I completely understand her wanting to escape, but to where!?! Oh the trepidation! That cliff-hanger just killed a part of my soul. π© Iβll be over here π in the corner wallowing in my grief until you release part 2.
02/19/2021 15:10Justmee
OMG π₯΄! Why Aisha? Why? She knew that God was influencing her feelings. I get it though. She'd been through so much. I just don't understand why she didn't reach out for Imset.... damn πͺπ! Optimist I don't know if we're cool anymore π π? You got my girl out here down bad π€¨ππ! That was an amazing ending. Not one I wished for but brilliant π€―
02/19/2021 14:54Marquita Harper
Disappointed and annoyed with Aisha. Wth did she expect. She called on a death God. Tai & Thoth setting her up to fail & she leaves with Tsi bbn blaming Imset. Tired of silly minded girls then she blames Imset for her doing drugs etc. Wow . I do like your writing and how you weave a story.
02/19/2021 12:49wana blain
Dammmmm π₯΅π₯΅π₯΅π₯΅π₯΅
02/19/2021 11:35TheUnlikelyO
sorry itβs a little late guys but itβs coming in the next hour or so β€οΈπ© itβs just so good!
02/19/2021 05:09Unlikely Optimist π€
hey lovely readers, just checking in to say part one of this story will be wrapped up either today or tomorrow and Iβll be posting all the last chapters at once. part 2 will start after Iβve lightened my story plate a little lol LOVE YOU β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ₯°π₯°
02/17/2021 16:55Justmee
This is the update I've been waiting on ππΎ! It was well worth the wait too π€€! This book just does something to me.. π₯΅π₯΄π
02/17/2021 10:15Au'Star_lie
Yay π update.. Great double update btw π π π
02/17/2021 03:09wana blain
π€π€π€π±π±π± Double chapter! Perfet gift for a birthday girl!! yassssssss
02/17/2021 02:05Kristi Lyman
I really really luke how this book is going I wish there was another update soon I am getting very sad thinking that it ends here its crazy. please write more
02/09/2021 01:58Unlikely Optimist π€
So sorry guys taking a small hiatus to finish another book so I can better divide my time! 4 books is too many π©π°π΅ bear with me! β€οΈ
02/07/2021 05:43wana blain
Hey Girl! Iβm a patient reader but I was wondering if you going to update anytime soon? Because I know the book by heart now π π π
02/07/2021 01:17THE WAZ FAM
started this one today! and already wanting more π€£
02/04/2021 21:21yowassup
that killed me hahaha i felt the embarrassment
02/03/2021 18:07Justmee
That Zaddy had me ππ! Awesome book π₯³! How often do you update?
01/31/2021 22:16wana blain
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01/28/2021 10:34Au'Star_lie
LMFAO ZADDY IMSET YASSSSSSππ
01/28/2021 05:33Scar
Iβm so hooked Iβve reread your book twice! Itβs anazing, def. one of my favorites!! β€οΈβ€οΈπ©
01/27/2021 08:04Marquita H
This was the first book I found by you and it was so intriguing that I searched any and everything you also wrote. Noe am reading three of your stories at once now. You are very talented. I canβt imagine the hard work of working on all of them at the same time.
01/27/2021 07:27Unlikely Optimist π€
I need a mental health day everyone β€οΈ I wonβt be posting today. try not to be too mad ππ½
01/26/2021 13:55wana blain
woow just stumbled upon this book and ... woow good work I canβt wait to see the update
01/26/2021 04:25Morgan Alys
this is amazing got hooked right away!! I need more lol
01/26/2021 02:44yowassup
i need an update
01/25/2021 09:03yowassup
bruh this is literally the last chapter
01/25/2021 09:03Maneka Mathews
I think she does need a backbone and Iβm with him on everyone meddling in his business
01/25/2021 04:10Au'Star_lie
Beautiful chapterπ§‘π§‘
01/20/2021 21:05Au'Star_lie
Oh yassss girl great chapter πππ
01/20/2021 06:54dee brack
You are the bomb.com!!! So talented!!
01/20/2021 04:18Au'Star_lie
Omgoodness I can't wait for the next chapter. Finally he sees he f**k*d upπ€£π€£.
01/17/2021 02:50Reader-837796
Sis! I stay waiting for your updates excited for each new chapter! I completely enjoy your writing! it gives me life! keep producing awesome work!!
01/13/2021 21:48Igottanuff
love it
01/13/2021 05:46Unlikely Optimist π€
Hey everyone! I added a new chapter between 1 & 2 and sometimes thereβs a little lag in the system! so if any chapters are out of order for you, thatβs probably why!
01/13/2021 02:56Jaz
haha only downside of the couple: lack of communication. but canβt wait to see what is next hehehe
01/12/2021 18:19Jaz
love the story.. I think it is my favorite book of yours
01/06/2021 17:58Au'Star_lie
This is an awesome story π can't wait for more.
12/31/2020 21:23Reader-837796
Great writing, great start!! iβve always loved Egyptology! super excited to continue reading!
12/29/2020 00:05Organized Chaos
story good af!! I loves me a grumpy man πππ
12/21/2020 22:30