Dark Desires Comments

  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    hi guys! I decided not to make book 2 about this couple but they now have a completed story and 50k more words on am@z0n. print available as well πŸ–€ fated to fall is next up!

    06/24/2023 16:44
  • Mei Hellstormm

    this book is finished. Not sure on #2, but you can find her on K****le, under the same name. Don't look for "dark desires" as a book as you'll get 4 or 5 different options/authors.

    06/22/2023 20:32
  • Heather Ashford

    so I'm guessing book 2 never got done since it not posted shame

    10/10/2022 04:51
  • Z Alice

    Finally got around to finishing this book! ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! Like this version more than the original! I need book 2!πŸ–€πŸ’™πŸ–€

    08/04/2022 02:53
  • Katrina Mason

    Hi, love the book when will the second book be coming out would love to finish the story

    06/09/2022 15:51
  • Bri

    Hi Unlikely Optimist, I read through some of the comments through here, and I think I read that you plan to release the part two of this book sometime early this year? just wondering if that timeframe was still valid or if it got pushed back? thank you for your writing, excited for more to come :)

    03/08/2022 16:10
  • Daughter of the Sun

    I've never finished a book and immediately restarted reading it! This book is so good and I absolutely love each character (including Anubis, lol) 🀣 I'm so looking forward to the next book!

    02/04/2022 09:31
  • Reader-286149

    Best book ever!!!!!

    01/23/2022 02:04
  • Kristi Lyman

    when is the next book expected to be out I just got done reading this one and I need more please

    12/29/2021 11:10
  • Karamea G

    🀣🀣 β€œHalitosis is a valid reason for killing someone” 🀣🀣 HYSTERICAL!

    11/26/2021 03:38
  • BluezCluez

    great story.. i hope aisha and imset end up together

    11/12/2021 05:02
  • NitaApplebum

    Is this story part of an ongoing series? I’m only halfway through and need more of these gods in my life!

    10/02/2021 00:39
  • Z Alice

    I came back to re-read the book and everythings different. Can I find the original chapters somewhere? not that the new edits are bad I just really liked the original not to mention I had like 5 or 6 chpaters left cause I didn't want to finish before book 2 was out because I didn't wnt cliffgamgers

    09/04/2021 22:34
  • Charonda Patterson

    when do you think book 2 will begin? I liked the changes you made.

    07/22/2021 21:06
  • Justmee

    Question? Do I need to reread this entire book? I see a lot of edits have been made. I feel like I'm missing to much.

    07/13/2021 01:45
  • sonia ceruti

    loved this book! please finish it!!

    07/06/2021 15:32
  • TNB

    😫😫😫 apparently I need to follow all of your platforms for the rest of this story. Thank you for bringing culture to this realm of writing. I'm sad the story is finished but am excited to hear about your transition to Amazon.

    07/03/2021 01:32
  • wana blain

    whyyy you are all leaving πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί you and another sista anyway whewwwwwwwww damn that was a good book πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎ

    06/26/2021 04:27
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    all chapter rewrites are up ❀️ check the note at the last chapter to find out more about book 2

    06/25/2021 15:52
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    Ok readers the first 36 chapter edits/ additions are up and complete. I still have several more chapters to post to get us back to the book one conclusion.

    06/24/2021 04:55
  • Denisha Collins

    I'm enjoying the book but I'm confused as to why Aisha begged Tai to help her and why Osiris liked it so. Im guessing that will be answered in book 2. Why did he take her and he didn't like Aisha in the 1st place?

    06/22/2021 00:41
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    hey gang! after getting some great feedback on some of the changes I made to the story, I’m going to go back and rework it a bit! I’ll post when everything is finished ❀️ as always, the number chapters are new and the ones without numbers are old.

    06/20/2021 18:07
  • Lidiane Barros

    ok I havent re read it but parts I have loved this book but this thing about being a virgin ? it actually takes part of the impact on their relationship etc I don’t like it 😒😒 there was a weight about him had other concubine ls etc … that made this time different … πŸ˜•

    06/20/2021 17:32
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    update: all the updates up to chapter 27 are posted. so much has changed and been added 😱 so good lol almost done guys!

    06/10/2021 12:51
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    hey readers! PLEASE DONT READ RIGHT NOW! DD is finally getting its new edits, however it takes my editor some time to approve them all so the changes will show up little by little over the week. that means there are some chapters (w/ numbers in the title) that are edited and some that are original. the description will also be changing! TTYL πŸ–€

    06/03/2021 12:09
  • Lidiane Barros

    so glad to hear the new one is coming soon .... I have been patiently waiting and my heart still breaks for Imset 😒 being left by her 😒

    05/30/2021 08:32
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    hey gang! I’m currently editing/rewriting part one before I start part two. I won’t be posting the new version until it’s all done and I’ll let you know when. main change: I’m making Aisha a grown up. I felt too bad making bad things happen to a teen. and she’ll be in college not high school. the main meat of their relationship will not change.

    05/25/2021 14:54
  • Meshauna Charell

    As a Black woman, I loved it!!! Brilliant, funny, sexy, dark, real! Beautiful πŸ’«

    05/22/2021 00:26
  • Brandie

    I can’t wait for the updates 😊

    05/05/2021 16:18
  • Kristi Lyman

    so when you update is it going to be called a different name or is it just going to start at the end of part 1

    04/02/2021 00:25
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    03/25/2021 01:43
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    Hey lovely readers! I see a lot of commenting about updates on my stories so I figured I should come chat for a second. I unfortunately have a chronic health condition that gives me trouble from time to time and right now I’m struggling with pretty bad fatigue so the chapters are a lot harder to get through. i haven’t even been able to keep up with replying to your comments 😩 I hope you’ll bear with me during this slow time as I really am trying hard to get chapters completed for you and start part 2! Hopefully you’ll all stick around until I’m feeling better! As always, much love and thanks so much for your support xoxoxoxo

    03/24/2021 23:19
  • Kristi Lyman

    how soon are you starting part two I am hanging I want to know what's going happen ughhh I can't wait please hurry πŸ˜‰

    03/06/2021 03:08
  • April Borchers

    I read the whole thing in one night what will be the title of the next part

    02/25/2021 12:08
  • Reader-837796

    I love this story, I don’t know how to feel about the ending...I totally understand it and why it had to end that way... but I do feel some kind of way...but that is the Mark of good writing, the details of the story stays with you well after you’ve read it. I’m looking forward to the next one!

    02/24/2021 23:50
  • Christinaa

    amazing story cant wait for part 2 πŸ€—πŸ€—

    02/24/2021 12:46
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    hey y’all I’ll probably do one or two bonus chapters to fill in the gap between part 1 and where part 2 is going to start! I know it’s all a mess right now but it’ll all make sense soon ❀️❀️❀️

    02/19/2021 18:43
  • Kristi Lyman

    omg I can't believe she left with that dude when the man she loves was kissing her and wanted her. she passed the final test I figured she would have been super happy wth. please please start part 2 I don't know if I can wait to long. 😘. your writting is so great that I am so sucked in to this book I don't want it to end.

    02/19/2021 18:05
  • Arya

    Can't wait for Part 2!

    02/19/2021 16:08
  • Au'Star_lie

    😱😱😱😳😳😳😳🀯🀯🀯🀯🀯 What the heck just happened and she finally snapped... at the worst time possible...

    02/19/2021 15:15
  • Krexroat619

    That ending broke my heart! Who in the world is this Tai..? and Thoth seemed trustworthy, but completely tried to manipulate her. I hope Imset gets her back! I completely understand her wanting to escape, but to where!?! Oh the trepidation! That cliff-hanger just killed a part of my soul. 😩 I’ll be over here πŸ‘ˆ in the corner wallowing in my grief until you release part 2.

    02/19/2021 15:10
  • Justmee

    OMG πŸ₯΄! Why Aisha? Why? She knew that God was influencing her feelings. I get it though. She'd been through so much. I just don't understand why she didn't reach out for Imset.... damn πŸ˜ͺπŸ˜”! Optimist I don't know if we're cool anymore πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚? You got my girl out here down bad πŸ€¨πŸ™„πŸ˜‚! That was an amazing ending. Not one I wished for but brilliant 🀯

    02/19/2021 14:54
  • Marquita Harper

    Disappointed and annoyed with Aisha. Wth did she expect. She called on a death God. Tai & Thoth setting her up to fail & she leaves with Tsi bbn blaming Imset. Tired of silly minded girls then she blames Imset for her doing drugs etc. Wow . I do like your writing and how you weave a story.

    02/19/2021 12:49
  • wana blain

    Dammmmm πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΅

    02/19/2021 11:35
  • TheUnlikelyO

    sorry it’s a little late guys but it’s coming in the next hour or so ❀️😩 it’s just so good!

    02/19/2021 05:09
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    hey lovely readers, just checking in to say part one of this story will be wrapped up either today or tomorrow and I’ll be posting all the last chapters at once. part 2 will start after I’ve lightened my story plate a little lol LOVE YOU ❀️❀️❀️πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

    02/17/2021 16:55
  • Justmee

    This is the update I've been waiting on πŸ’ƒπŸΎ! It was well worth the wait too 🀀! This book just does something to me.. πŸ₯΅πŸ₯΄πŸ˜‚

    02/17/2021 10:15
  • Au'Star_lie

    Yay πŸ™Œ update.. Great double update btw πŸ‘Œ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

    02/17/2021 03:09
  • wana blain

    πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜± Double chapter! Perfet gift for a birthday girl!! yassssssss

    02/17/2021 02:05
  • Kristi Lyman

    I really really luke how this book is going I wish there was another update soon I am getting very sad thinking that it ends here its crazy. please write more

    02/09/2021 01:58
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    So sorry guys taking a small hiatus to finish another book so I can better divide my time! 4 books is too many 😩😰😡 bear with me! ❀️

    02/07/2021 05:43
  • wana blain

    Hey Girl! I’m a patient reader but I was wondering if you going to update anytime soon? Because I know the book by heart now πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

    02/07/2021 01:17
  • THE WAZ FAM

    started this one today! and already wanting more 🀣

    02/04/2021 21:21
  • yowassup

    that killed me hahaha i felt the embarrassment

    02/03/2021 18:07
  • Justmee

    That Zaddy had me πŸ’€πŸ˜‚! Awesome book πŸ₯³! How often do you update?

    01/31/2021 22:16
  • wana blain

    πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

    01/28/2021 10:34
  • Au'Star_lie

    LMFAO ZADDY IMSET YASSSSSSπŸŽ†πŸŽ†

    01/28/2021 05:33
  • Scar

    I’m so hooked I’ve reread your book twice! It’s anazing, def. one of my favorites!! ❀️❀️😩

    01/27/2021 08:04
  • Marquita H

    This was the first book I found by you and it was so intriguing that I searched any and everything you also wrote. Noe am reading three of your stories at once now. You are very talented. I can’t imagine the hard work of working on all of them at the same time.

    01/27/2021 07:27
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    I need a mental health day everyone ❀️ I won’t be posting today. try not to be too mad πŸ™πŸ½

    01/26/2021 13:55
  • wana blain

    woow just stumbled upon this book and ... woow good work I can’t wait to see the update

    01/26/2021 04:25
  • Morgan Alys

    this is amazing got hooked right away!! I need more lol

    01/26/2021 02:44
  • yowassup

    i need an update

    01/25/2021 09:03
  • yowassup

    bruh this is literally the last chapter

    01/25/2021 09:03
  • Maneka Mathews

    I think she does need a backbone and I’m with him on everyone meddling in his business

    01/25/2021 04:10
  • Au'Star_lie

    Beautiful chapter🧑🧑

    01/20/2021 21:05
  • Au'Star_lie

    Oh yassss girl great chapter πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    01/20/2021 06:54
  • dee brack

    You are the bomb.com!!! So talented!!

    01/20/2021 04:18
  • Au'Star_lie

    Omgoodness I can't wait for the next chapter. Finally he sees he f**k*d up🀣🀣.

    01/17/2021 02:50
  • Reader-837796

    Sis! I stay waiting for your updates excited for each new chapter! I completely enjoy your writing! it gives me life! keep producing awesome work!!

    01/13/2021 21:48
  • Igottanuff

    love it

    01/13/2021 05:46
  • Unlikely Optimist πŸ–€

    Hey everyone! I added a new chapter between 1 & 2 and sometimes there’s a little lag in the system! so if any chapters are out of order for you, that’s probably why!

    01/13/2021 02:56
  • Jaz

    haha only downside of the couple: lack of communication. but can’t wait to see what is next hehehe

    01/12/2021 18:19
  • Jaz

    love the story.. I think it is my favorite book of yours

    01/06/2021 17:58
  • Au'Star_lie

    This is an awesome story πŸ‘ can't wait for more.

    12/31/2020 21:23
  • Reader-837796

    Great writing, great start!! i’ve always loved Egyptology! super excited to continue reading!

    12/29/2020 00:05
  • Organized Chaos

    story good af!! I loves me a grumpy man πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    12/21/2020 22:30

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