The Moon's Blessing Comments
Jules Marie
m8n2 I really enjoyed this book. The intro pulled me in and the book kept me throughout. Well done.
04/02/2023 16:02
Megan Phillips
m8n2- this book is exactly what I like to read, by just reading the little introduction it pulled me right in. can't wait to dig into this one!
04/02/2023 15:55
Reader-350476
m8n2 I just read the introduction and rejection it’s painful but in the end there will be second chance or regret for the Mean Alpha,looking forward to read more chapters to this book
04/02/2023 14:16Gemma Rookes
m8n2 very good start. I like that it's short and sweet. will enjoy reading this book as it goes on x
04/02/2023 13:18Debra Sykes
m8n2 can't wait to start this book already had in my library but never started it but read intro again and will be reading it this time just finishing another book first
04/02/2023 13:17Vicki usher
m8n2# Once I read the introduction I had to add the book to my library. I love a good rejection book, like to see the growth in the characters.
04/02/2023 13:12John Robinson
m8n2 I like the start and it's a nice short ish story will definitely be reading this very interesting start.
04/02/2023 13:08Gemma Butler
m8n2 The introduction to this book has me intrigued. I’ve added it to my library and can’t wait to continue reading
04/02/2023 13:06
Urmajesty
This story started off with a lot of mundane details in the beginning, then progressed to less details and then in a rush ending. Also, I'm actually rather disappointed that the the first alpha wasn't given a redemption moment to fulfill this so called bond with his her. Instead the timeline is pushed ahead to 3 years later and another alpha is added, with everything all happening all at once. Rather disappointing.
01/25/2023 03:13Vilma Carpin Buhawe
hers and her brother's birthday are one week and a half apart? is she adopted?
01/24/2023 21:27Reader-774586
enjoyed this book so much,didn’t put it down till it was finished.Will there be a sequel?Please write another ❤️
11/02/2022 17:41Kristina Mitchell
just finished reading and I really enjoyed this book! I'd still love to read a sequel and possibly explore their lives and the children given they are half royals, or even explore what Alexiana being a princess means for her and Jax in the future when her parents stwp down. Alexi being a Princess, I'm sure, makes her and her family a target to radicals or rogues etc. I just feel there is so much more that can be explored especially with the long lost biological ROYAL parents and stuff. could you please let me know your thoughts?
04/18/2022 05:30Kristina Mitchell
will you be making this into a series? I'd love to continue to follow alexiana and Jaxon's story. I'm about 2/3 through the book and LOVE it so far.
04/18/2022 00:50Novella Myers
a little to much detail starting off but funny and good read.
04/08/2022 00:47
Briana Schoenfeld
I love that something is location based in my back yard.
03/22/2022 02:51Claudia Almendra
for once an interesting book that was short and sweet. did not go on and on. more books should be like this.
03/21/2022 08:14AZ Trouble
10-28-21: I found this to be an interesting story with an ending that wasn’t expected. I do agree with another commenter about double details in relation to POVs. Perhaps POVs could be written in conjunction to stay on track during the story telling.
10/28/2021 20:02
Grace Palma
could have been so much better with out all the double details had to stop reading and move to another story.
09/19/2021 04:59
Dania O
Cute
08/15/2021 06:20Dania O
I like how she uses different languages for each type of culture and doesn't just use English as a latina myself.
08/15/2021 05:47
fantasydream
I'm wondering why the front of the book has a white girl with blonde hair on it, when the girl in the girl in the book in Latino with black hair 🤔 I'd suggest a change.
08/12/2021 03:46Patricia Lewis
Funny that they come from Visalia, California since I live in that town 😁
08/11/2021 13:07
Alaire
I can't even get past the first few chapters. there is too much detail. for example in James Pattersons books: They walked into an office where the desk and chair were placed perfectly in the middle. that's that! he expects you to know what a desk and chair look like.. who cares what color they are.. there is just to much irrelevant details here.
08/11/2021 07:54Jenny Best Camacho
excellent story, I read it all in one day. Short story but very detailed. Btw she didn’t dry towel her hair for ten times, just saying!!!
08/09/2021 21:34melissa schoelkopf
too much minute detail. i.e. she took a shower, don't need to know that it was the perfect temp and she did other unimportant things before hand. you lose the reader with too much fluff
08/08/2021 22:59Tyara Harris
Chap 4: I am confused on why she is so upset about her dad stepping down from being a Beta. She stated it in an earlier chapter that she knew he was going to.
08/08/2021 20:24Joanne Patrick-Allan
At first I wasn't going to read but I like all the comments Bella Jersey 2 wrote. I'll give it a read and see what it's like.
08/08/2021 08:13Rachel Harbor
OMG! I really am having a hard time reading this story. It has Potential, but too much unnecessary detail. I don’t care that she took a shower for the 100th time in a day and towel dried her hair and body with a green towel. also the math doesn’t add up. she has a brother who is a year older than herself and their birthday is a week apart, but both turning 18? that’s not a year apart. I want to continue but honestly the way the story is written reminds me of a high schooler tell their friend a story… honestly the author has potential I just think they need to revise the story. I understand writing takes a talent and I’d like to see the author succeed.
08/08/2021 07:37Elizabeth Schonauer
oh my gawd. I've never read a book with my town in it. Tulare, Ca. lawd have mercy.
06/17/2021 04:33Amber Perry
ok first chapter I see 2 major flaws....1 is that her and her brother are both turning 18 within 2 weeks of each other yet they are not twins.... obviously they MUST NOT BE related really!!!!! And 2 is that school is only a month or 2 long?????? the story says " In addition, today is Friday and the first day back to school (thank the Moon Goddess); I am finally a senior." then later it says " You see, Carson is next in line for the Beta position and our father is going to hand him the position after Alpha Greyson retires and Kyle steps in as Alpha. So basically, that'll happen in next month after we graduate." idk any school inn this country that has a school year of only 2 months!!!!!!
06/07/2021 11:44
Kiarla
the amount of insignificant detail is overwhelming. first time I've stopped reading a book because it was too painful to read about how she towel dried her hair for the tenth time
06/07/2021 03:35Tabitha Nichols
the story is very detailed, so detailed that I find myself skimming the writing to actually get to the story.
06/04/2021 11:49Floreadsalot O
it's her 18th but her brothers less than a month ago? math the math don't add up
03/25/2021 05:05Susan Grace Lester-Toney
nice love reading
03/20/2021 07:29
Bella Jersey 2
completing the mating bond: I was nice but you might want to buff up somewhat. maybe you’re cool with talking about the passion. you know what they thought, felt, crave, and wanting to share that
02/05/2021 23:39Bella Jersey 2
the final goodbyes: we forgot how much Carson paid in this war. he lost his Mom and Dad. thank god he has his mate or he be losing it. does Carson not want to be Alpha I think he do a damn fine job. he also has a strong Luna that’s got his back
02/05/2021 23:27Bella Jersey 2
final goodbyes: congratulations to real man/alpha/mate Alpha Kyle
02/05/2021 23:12Bella Jersey 2
the final goodbyes: Kyle was a stupid selfish a$$hole. he died a hero’s death. he also died a true mate’s death. he sacrificed his happiness so Lexi can be happy. see Lexi he lived to his faith in him. makes me cry
02/05/2021 23:10Bella Jersey 2
the final war: I can see another sacrifice coming
02/05/2021 23:04Bella Jersey 2
the second traitor you threw me a curveball
02/05/2021 22:57Bella Jersey 2
I can’t decide: he was the second traitor the whole time
02/05/2021 22:33Bella Jersey 2
I can’t decide: what Jaxon talk doing their marking right sounds delicious. the better have oxygen, water, Gatorade, and food standing by. they could add whip cream and chocolate syrup just saying
02/05/2021 22:16Bella Jersey 2
she’s gone: we need the second traitor. I have an pleasant we can make Eric demise slow and painfully. let’s start by skinning him alive. I’m like this idea
02/05/2021 22:11Bella Jersey 2
she’s gone: you jumped the a little by tell me. my real life and Lexi are similar with parents death Mom (2011) Dad (2013)
02/05/2021 22:07Bella Jersey 2
truth be told 2: it’s scary how cold blooded he is. he had to poison her Mom or Carson
02/04/2021 18:04Bella Jersey 2
truth be told: the rogues knew who Lexi was the whole time. they purposely poisoned her father. that hurts the worse.
02/04/2021 14:43Bella Jersey 2
time to meet them: I think we broke Bri over there
02/04/2021 08:06Bella Jersey 2
they are here: if that’s not an oh fuck moment I don’t know what else is
02/04/2021 07:44Bella Jersey 2
getting to know her: Jaxon sound perfect. now the little boy alpha can go play with his toys
02/04/2021 06:43Bella Jersey 2
getting to know her: first gotta do any of those men know about what in private means. Mom should’ve taken her to that damn shed
02/04/2021 06:39Bella Jersey 2
the explanation: congratulations to our boy Kyle asshole of year!
02/04/2021 06:10Bella Jersey 2
the truth: why did Mom not Dad tell her the truth about who she is?
02/04/2021 05:48Bella Jersey 2
the truth: there’s is a big sign over Kyle head saying I’m so fuckin stupid
02/04/2021 05:48Bella Jersey 2
Alpha Jaxon: damn straight girlfriend. please tell me boy alpha is not stupid enough to challenge real man Alpha Jaxon
02/04/2021 05:19Bella Jersey 2
alpha Jaxon: is it bad that I want to watch him beat Kyle up?! no I don’t think so
02/04/2021 05:15Bella Jersey 2
beta’s death: i hope Kyle is not alpha. maybe his Dad can bypass him. I couldn’t imagine this would make a good pack environment
02/04/2021 05:02Bella Jersey 2
a beta’s death: that bitch better hope I never catch her
02/04/2021 04:46Bella Jersey 2
birthday ruined: I feel bad for Kyle’s wolf HE wants his mate. Kyle the boy can get reality check he rejected her. Lexi accepted now the little boy can go play with his games
02/04/2021 04:15Bella Jersey 2
the ceremony part 3: damn straight you go girl put that BOY in his place
02/04/2021 03:25Bella Jersey 2
the ceremony part 2: why would someone want to poison her Dad. if it’s the flozzy from the cafeteria god help her
02/04/2021 03:07Bella Jersey 2
the ceremony part 2: reminds me of when my Dad told me he had cancer
02/04/2021 03:05Bella Jersey 2
the ceremony part 1: I’m curious so what’s up Dad
02/04/2021 02:58Bella Jersey 2
chapter 3: awww how sweet
02/04/2021 02:49Bella Jersey 2
chapter 2: I’m glad Carson found his mate. I wonder why Kyle was at the lake last night
02/04/2021 02:42Bella Jersey 2
chapter 1: interesting first day
02/04/2021 02:09
Cindy A
I loved the book but I would like to know what happened with Carson and his mate plus her friends Briana and Brandon... glad that this book had a happy ending
01/31/2021 06:06
Katie Factor
I'm confused in the first chapter. At first she's saying it's their first day back to school and she's finally a senior, but then when she's talking about her brother taking over the beta position, she says it'll happen in a month after they graduate. Is their school year only a month long?
01/30/2021 12:20
Mala
ok, reading the second paragraph and I will be finishing this book wether I like it or not. I live in Visalia,Ca lol so random
01/29/2021 04:25Weeb Lord
Wow, I liked this story. Thankfully I was lucky to finish reading the story while the story was free
01/29/2021 01:57
Anna Morris
well i haven't even gotten past the first chapter yet ,but i absolutely love how you done the intro to this book. can't wait to see how it plays out and if it holds my attention.
01/29/2021 01:24
crustyspecs
Ok so.... what I have a problem with is spending money on the next chapter and more than half is just copy pasted from the previous chapter... I'll give it a few more chapters but if it continues.. byyee
01/29/2021 01:18
Legend of Gru
I’m currently on the chapter Birthday and I was wondering if you could clear up this whole issue with Alex and Carson’s age difference is they are blood siblings. If they are then shouldn’t Carson be turning 19 instead of 18 because there is no way they could have had a 1.5 week difference between them, especially if Alex is turning 18 as well. otherwise it’s an interesting read
01/07/2021 10:15
