The Unwanted Alpha Series (Complete Collection) Comments

  • Lori Overby

    What a chapter title

    12/17/2023 16:09

  • K. K. Winter

    1. Dear readers, let me bring your attention to something. This is a book I wrote a very long time ago, years back when I barely started writing.

    08/06/2023 10:57

  • Annette Coppini

    had to stop reading. it was dragging on and on

    08/06/2023 04:59

  • Suzanne Stone

    I've already purchased the 1st book as a stand alone. I shouldn't have to buy it again. 😞

    07/13/2023 17:13

  • Jacqueline Sharp

    eve has to be the stupidest person I've ever read

    07/08/2023 16:35

  • SAMANTHA GANGALOO

    although I love the book I had to stop reading everyone was becoming to ridiculous and frustrating with everyone hiding Eve from Eros...

    07/08/2023 16:16

  • Anne Wallace

    I was waiting for the pregnancy to come into play considering they stopped using condoms. But, I wouldn't trust cookies made by the Luna either just yet..or tea

    07/07/2023 16:11

  • Reader-Djemi

    aim so in love with this book😍

    06/28/2023 21:12

  • Avd

    u3i8 I love it, it is interesting. I can not take down the book, I have to read the most what I can in one day.

    06/27/2023 17:20

  • brittany groves

    i literally cannot stop reading I absolutely love this

    06/23/2023 01:53

  • Portia Atkinson

    this is a good book from what I have read so far

    05/03/2023 16:16

  • Reader-Dragon Lady

    Wow. She almost gets raped and all her mother could think of was being in a scandal.

    04/30/2023 05:04

  • Darling Stewart

    6L4Q6L. I like this one. It jumped right into the grittiness. Caught my attention right away.

    04/28/2023 08:45

  • Me Myself

    u3i8 Interesting book so far. I hope the story is complete so we can enjoy it to the end.

    04/06/2023 01:07

  • Rafael

    #u3i8# I like the introduction a lot. it seems a intersport story and I have not read something similar. so of course I add it in my library. is going to be my next book when I finished the one I am read it now

    04/05/2023 19:29

  • Debra Sykes

    u3i8 like what l have read so far hope I can get to reading more later every one says it's good and I agree

    04/05/2023 17:53

  • Sammy

    u3i8 I started this book today and it is very interesting Had me hooked with the first few chapters. Needs a bit of proofreading but otherwise looking forward to finishing the books

    04/05/2023 14:49

  • Bianca Yetzke

    u3i8. I loved this book. eve thought she could fight it but Eros showed her! I finished the book and I’m in to the second one.

    04/05/2023 13:16

  • Kristen Tedrow Cope

    u3i8. just read the introduction and sounds like an interesting read. will be checking it out.

    04/05/2023 11:28

  • Marie Van Veen

    u3i8 only just started this book,couldnt resist it afther reading the introduction .liking do far would recomminend giving it a go

    04/05/2023 10:27

  • Vicki usher

    u3i8# only just started this book, couldn't resist it after reading the introduction. liking it so far would recommend giving it a go

    04/05/2023 07:08

  • Christina

    u3i8 i absolutely loved this book. I would read it over and over again! I love this writer and all the stories that have been done!

    04/05/2023 04:06

  • Martial Flor

    u3i8 I love how he is mated to a human which he adores, but how is a monster to everyone including his mother. The love he shows his mate shows that no one is a monster with the ones they truly love

    04/05/2023 01:03

  • Reader-731248

    #6n7m# i am only a few chapters in, but it seems like a really good story this far.

    03/30/2023 11:21

  • Julie Mejia Zertuche

    6n7m Just started this story and so far it's really good, I haven't been able to put it down. Worth the read!!

    03/30/2023 02:28

  • Terrin Garis

    #6n7m# Jesus. I can't even with the mom. That is a toxic relationship that is bound to cause a lot of issues for that poor girl further in the book.

    03/29/2023 21:55

  • Harmony

    6n7m I just started this but I am thoroughly enjoying it so far. This is an amazing book thus far.

    03/29/2023 21:50

  • Mirela

    6n7m one of my favorite books. She is a human, him a dangerous wolf and her saviour. A dangerous love with a lot of plots and challenges.

    03/29/2023 21:48

  • Bianca Yetzke

    6N7m I love this book! it’s tragic what happened to eve in the beginning but I love that her mate saved her! it’s going to be a wild ride with lots of ups and downs.

    03/29/2023 21:45

  • Deborah L Dawdy

    #6n7m# This story catches your attention right away and draws you in. The mysterious stranger who saves Eve must be her mate and yet he shows patience and restraint with her after saving her from her would-be rapists.

    03/29/2023 21:40

  • Emily

    6n7m start of the book seems really interesting will definitely check it out. people were saying the chapters are really short but will try to look at it!

    03/29/2023 21:36

  • Donna Kelly

    6n7m. Loving the start of this book mysterious vigilante saves woman who I'm thinking is his mate. Looking forward to reading through more chapters of this book abd seeing where this will lead to.

    03/29/2023 21:27

  • Jeniffer Barnes Hurt

    #6n7m# "The Unwanted Alpha", I really loved this series. I really think everyone should read it. There are some grammatical errors, but I can get through those easily.

    03/29/2023 21:22

  • Martial Flor

    6n7m His mate is human, ans he's great with her. With everyone else he's the absolute worst. It's a story that shows the power of love. You'll find magical/dark creatures, kidnapping, rape, deceit, kids eventually...

    03/29/2023 21:19

  • Michibeba

    #6n7m# This seems like a very interesting story, it’s hard to find an unwanted Alpha, it is usually an unwanted female in shifter stories

    03/29/2023 21:12

  • pausch

    could be interesting, but hoping that the female lead is not again a sad and poor damsel in distress 6n7m

    03/29/2023 21:04

  • TSF

    What in the world do you mean by "they need to remove systems", then the nurse came in & "took the systems out of her arm"? I'm a nurse, I never heard of anything like that. Where you trying to refer to an IV line? I still don't get how Mary suddenly became an old woman when she had just miscarried a baby when you first introduced her to the book.

    03/19/2023 20:24

  • Reader-585150

    anyone who thinks being turned on and wanting someone is rape. doesn’t know much. it’s called sex. it can be hard and rough which is what I think the writer lent here. but no one would say yes rape me, I want you.

    03/16/2023 17:07

  • FureverHisLuna

    soooo good but the chapters are to short

    03/11/2023 03:38

  • Chloe Cullen

    anyone know where I can find the promised princess??

    03/02/2023 20:28

  • Samantha Payne

    I’m enjoying the story but it is a lot for such short chapters.

    01/04/2023 03:56

  • Beth Bussey

    Where's the full series?? Also "The Promised Princess" book??

    12/27/2022 01:03

  • Tanya Jade Spade

    anyways...

    12/23/2022 12:29

  • Rhonda Bentley

    Love your work. Sorry you had trouble. Hope to read your work in the future. Good luck.

    12/05/2022 04:36

  • Lucy

    okay so I read the alpha’s daughter and Eros father was a vampire/ werewolf hybrid isn’t this part of that series?

    11/17/2022 02:38

  • Karen Jackson-Neufeld

    this is an awesome series! I have read it at least 3 times now! highly recommend this 👌 👏 💖

    11/05/2022 22:39

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    10/22/2022 06:23

  • Khadi'jia Janea

    I’m invested in this book because I’ve read so far in now, but it’s definitely a struggle read. the story has the potential to be really good, but the level of grammatical errors is OUTRAGEOUS! like did no one proof read before posting my god! That alone makes this a struggle to read.

    10/15/2022 13:23

  • mybella

    To earn her trust Eros really needs to try to kill her a few times

    10/05/2022 06:04

  • mybella

    good god eve is an idiot

    09/20/2022 05:27

  • mybella

    why is the cheating episode being ignored? I know that he didn't cheat, the luna likely had the effects of her mate transferred to eve instead, but not confronting Eros makes no sense.

    09/20/2022 00:35

  • Reader-839393

    is this a bdsm book? sub play? dominant?

    09/08/2022 16:52

  • SoUlTrEsVee

    I'm not sure if I missed it but there isn't really a description of Aros and what he looks like. why was he wearing a mask all the time?

    06/11/2022 21:22

  • Stephanie Stern

    I enjoyed the story

    05/22/2022 03:35

  • Mary Silhouette Arboleda

    sorry, couldn't stand the lame writing. i'm out

    05/19/2022 13:20

  • tina

    I thought Kali died

    05/17/2022 13:29

  • Tracy Guilford

    I haven't read the book yet, but wondering if the author could tell us what order the books are in the alpha series. So we know where to start with the first book

    05/12/2022 16:11

  • aJoHarr

    I wanted to love this book, but everytime I came back to keep reading I was more confused than the last. at least in the second book in this title.

    03/12/2022 08:59

  • Michelle F. Rivera

    IS THIS BOOK 1???

    03/06/2022 04:36

  • Andrea Bouffard

    Love it ! Just started it ! I saw it was seld on amazon, but it not available in this moment. is it gonna be printed again ? I really really want to buy a copy !

    02/26/2022 21:08

  • April Williams

    I meant to say Mythical characters not methodical in my last comment but I think both work if you think about it.In the final paragraphs where the Princess gives birth it brought back words my mum told me about childbirth, " Once you have held your child in your arms for the first time you immediately forget the pain." In my own life I never got to have that but during 1 miscarriage. I remember being in labour and after 10 minutes after I lost my child I forgot the pain only to have a different pain in my heart. So am glad she put that part in because it meant my mum was right.

    02/26/2022 05:21

  • April Williams

    loved the first and was surprised by the 2nd book. I was astounded by how you used the methodical characters in a way that made me want to read more and I did. I love the ending and look forward to new one coming. Thank you for a wonderful read and help ease my invalid body and take me away from my own opain. I have even started writing again after 40 yrs. Don't know if anyone will see it but found my love again.

    02/26/2022 05:03

  • aJoHarr

    she says, “is that the boy?” but when he dropped her off, she knew him very well. He said he visited them daily….

    02/22/2022 21:21

  • Brandi Christine

    if his sense are so good. why didn’t he smell his mother on his mate after she threw her to the other territory? or smell her in the woods like the mother smelled him coming?

    02/10/2022 12:29

  • Rebecca Brown

    love it

    01/24/2022 00:34

  • Sheron James

    loving 🥰 it so far

    01/24/2022 00:22

  • Joy Gilbreath

    enjoying it so far

    01/23/2022 18:52

  • Moça

    Awesome write

    01/19/2022 18:38

  • نرجس حسن

    تنؤتبنينتيتميارتميمايهفعيلورهينكسىةرزمسننؤذمدذءنلقخكي

    01/17/2022 18:27

  • نرجس حسن

    بهق

    01/17/2022 18:26

  • نرجس حسن

    غفتي

    01/17/2022 18:26

  • نرجس حسن

    علي

    01/17/2022 18:26

  • Barbra Starr

    I like the book so far

    01/17/2022 03:09

  • Ely Almosara-Patricio

    Exciting even at the beginning of the story!

    01/15/2022 08:14

  • Suzan Kuchenberg Woodard

    OMG this story has tweaked my interest.

    01/12/2022 21:40

  • Hannah Rogos

    mom reminds me of my mom. only they succeeded and she blamed me and kicked me out the house. hope Eves mom comes around. even in a storybook my heart goes out to Eve.

    01/12/2022 16:31

  • Criselyn Levin

    is this the whole collection in one book or its one of the series? please tell me before I read it thanks

    01/12/2022 05:30

  • Cj Creel

    It seems like a good storyline. Pity I'll only get to read the first few chapters.

    01/11/2022 06:49

  • Alta Van den Bergh

    Great

    01/09/2022 15:54

  • Emily Chamberlain

    does Eros ever learn more about his biological parents?

    01/08/2022 06:33

  • Emily Chamberlain

    I am also confused as to Deimos' story....first he was the son of an Alpha who got into a fight and hit his head....then the next we know he is an Incubus from the underworld.... did the hit to his head remind him of who he was or something? I mean several people did say that his scent was either non-existent or weird....

    01/08/2022 06:32

  • Emily Chamberlain

    do we ever find out what happens to Arex....I liked him..... to the author I love this series and you did a great job telling the story of Eve/Eros and Ally/Darius will we get a book about Eve and Eros son???

    01/08/2022 05:54

  • RonDeb Pattison

    if you want a lot of readers dont have locked chapters its stupid

    01/07/2022 23:13

  • Julie Chamberlain-Woods

    great!!!

    01/07/2022 22:15

  • Emily Chamberlain

    do we ever find out who took Eve's picture from the bedroom??

    01/06/2022 00:50

  • Desiree da Silva

    loving mother my ass she didn't ask her what happened she just assumed eve's did something to herself poor eve's going through

    01/02/2022 00:21

  • Renuka Coelho

    what happened to luna in the end. the last bit was when she snuck out of the office to see where eve got to. I’m so confused.

    11/30/2021 11:57

  • Dani Smith

    this book needs to be a paperback love it !!

    11/20/2021 07:06

  • Nicci

    fricken snake

    11/01/2021 20:26

  • AVA

    these chapters are entirely too short smh

    10/17/2021 14:14

  • Tina Mattson McFalls

    I’m confused he flipped cause she lied?? ended with you took my virginity then it goes to him with the girl in the kitchen n then her leaving. then the marks on her stomach? I’m lost

    10/07/2021 10:26

  • stephanie tarwater

    love the story

    10/05/2021 17:15

  • Bonib2

    a bit inconsistent as she spent talking to Luna for awhile before they head over to puma territory. If Zoey kissed him as he claimed right after Eve left, she should have felt it right away not hours later. Also he should not have let Zoey kissed him. He wasn't very convincing. He should have thrown her skanky ass out of his apartment and went after Eve,,, but adds drama to the story.

    09/10/2021 17:30

  • AVA

    Eros… Ares… how many versions are there…keep the name consistent. needs better editing

    09/09/2021 16:33

  • Monique Smith

    wayyy to many inconsistencies. How is he a Lycanthrope if one of his parents aren't human, how you explained it numerous times, it could only happen if one of his parents came from the royal bloodline and the other was human so the lycanthrope can overpower the human half. This was confirmed by numerous characters. Also, how did Eve get those bruises if he wasn't cheating? Never explained. Just completely lost interest with all the jumping around and never circling back to explain...just soo many open ended storyline to finish book on.

    09/04/2021 15:30

  • Jane Glick

    very good read until the end ,not good to leave it hanging with no ending very disappointed ☹️

    09/04/2021 14:58

  • Katherine Young

    idk if this gets explained but there are a lot of parts of the plot that don’t make sense throughout the book

    09/03/2021 01:34

  • Philicia Campo

    hmmm

    09/01/2021 15:53

  • Jourdan Coleman

    eve annoys me like if you don’t let that man f**^k the s**it out of you already child

    08/31/2021 20:56

  • Lela LeeMasters

    Allie Rose is my daughter's name 😍🥰❤

    08/29/2021 16:25
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