The Unwanted Alpha Series (Complete Collection) Comments

  • Brandi Christine

    if his sense are so good. why didn’t he smell his mother on his mate after she threw her to the other territory? or smell her in the woods like the mother smelled him coming?

    09/04/2023 11:03
  • Joy Gilbreath

    enjoying it so far

    09/04/2023 10:54
  • Moça

    Awesome write

    09/04/2023 10:45
  • نرجس حسن

    تنؤتبنينتيتميارتميمايهفعيلورهينكسىةرزمسننؤذمدذءنلقخكي

    09/04/2023 10:43
  • نرجس حسن

    علي

    09/04/2023 10:36
  • Suzan Kuchenberg Woodard

    OMG this story has tweaked my interest.

    09/04/2023 10:31
  • نرجس حسن

    بهق

    09/04/2023 10:30
  • نرجس حسن

    غفتي

    09/04/2023 10:30
  • Barbra Starr

    I like the book so far

    09/04/2023 10:28
  • Julie Chamberlain-Woods

    great!!!

    09/04/2023 10:26
  • Hannah Rogos

    mom reminds me of my mom. only they succeeded and she blamed me and kicked me out the house. hope Eves mom comes around. even in a storybook my heart goes out to Eve.

    09/04/2023 10:25
  • Emily Chamberlain

    does Eros ever learn more about his biological parents?

    09/04/2023 10:24
  • Criselyn Levin

    is this the whole collection in one book or its one of the series? please tell me before I read it thanks

    09/04/2023 10:23
  • Emily Chamberlain

    do we ever find out what happens to Arex....I liked him..... to the author I love this series and you did a great job telling the story of Eve/Eros and Ally/Darius will we get a book about Eve and Eros son???

    09/04/2023 10:23
  • Cj Creel

    It seems like a good storyline. Pity I'll only get to read the first few chapters.

    09/04/2023 10:22
  • Ely Almosara-Patricio

    Exciting even at the beginning of the story!

    09/04/2023 10:21
  • Emily Chamberlain

    I am also confused as to Deimos' story....first he was the son of an Alpha who got into a fight and hit his head....then the next we know he is an Incubus from the underworld.... did the hit to his head remind him of who he was or something? I mean several people did say that his scent was either non-existent or weird....

    09/04/2023 10:18
  • Sheron James

    loving 🥰 it so far

    09/04/2023 10:15
  • Desiree da Silva

    loving mother my ass she didn't ask her what happened she just assumed eve's did something to herself poor eve's going through

    09/04/2023 10:15
  • Rebecca Brown

    love it

    09/04/2023 10:11
  • Emily Chamberlain

    do we ever find out who took Eve's picture from the bedroom??

    09/04/2023 10:00
  • Alta Van den Bergh

    Great

    09/04/2023 09:51
  • Renuka Coelho

    what happened to luna in the end. the last bit was when she snuck out of the office to see where eve got to. I’m so confused.

    09/04/2023 09:50
  • I’m confused he flipped cause she lied?? ended with you took my virginity then it goes to him with the girl in the kitchen n then her leaving. then the marks on her stomach? I’m lost

    09/04/2023 09:14
  • fricken snake

    09/04/2023 09:12
  • AVA OKC

    Eros… Ares… how many versions are there…keep the name consistent. needs better editing

    09/04/2023 08:46
  • stephanie tarwater

    love the story

    09/04/2023 08:45
  • eve annoys me like if you don’t let that man f**^k the s**it out of you already child

    09/04/2023 08:44
  • Philicia Campo

    hmmm

    09/04/2023 08:43
  • Iam loving what I am reading so far. So plz keep it coming.

    09/04/2023 08:41
  • sara moore

    love love love the whole book. I can’t find the 3rd book by searching. any advice?

    09/04/2023 08:39
  • Monique Smith

    wayyy to many inconsistencies. How is he a Lycanthrope if one of his parents aren't human, how you explained it numerous times, it could only happen if one of his parents came from the royal bloodline and the other was human so the lycanthrope can overpower the human half. This was confirmed by numerous characters. Also, how did Eve get those bruises if he wasn't cheating? Never explained. Just completely lost interest with all the jumping around and never circling back to explain...just soo many open ended storyline to finish book on.

    09/04/2023 08:38
  • Darlene Forney

    so am I at the end? I thought it was supposed to be a complete story, it ended with her losing the baby and the wraith not wanting to go into the room.... is that really the end?

    09/04/2023 08:37
  • Kate@AS

    Thank you all for loving K.K.Winter. The book is being edited and proofread. We will upload edited version soon!

    09/04/2023 08:35
  • just started already wanting to read all of it.

    09/04/2023 08:35
  • Detra Colbert

    Why Ally has to be just as clueless as Eve. Constantly making dumb & naive decisions. But, Wrath being her mate is horrible.

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • has anyone finished this? I’m not sure if I want to continue….I’m not getting the flow with Wrath, Demios, & the underworld prince. Not to mention the other characters in the story. I’m just not sure it’s worth it.

    09/04/2023 08:28
  • honestly loved the story.. and i belive this author has some good skills... i had me at the edge of anywhere i was seating while reading.... highly recommended

    09/04/2023 08:28
  • very good read until the end ,not good to leave it hanging with no ending very disappointed ☹️

    09/04/2023 08:27
  • Bonnie Burchette

    I hate books that I can't read all the wat through.

    09/04/2023 08:26
  • just started seems good

    09/04/2023 08:25
  • Detra Colbert

    Deimos character is so confusing to me. I'm not going to give spoilers; but I have questions

    09/04/2023 08:24
  • Detra Colbert

    I hate Eve's decision making skills. She always, sneaking, lying and running trying to stay safe. All she have to do is listen to Eros

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Sylvia wendland

    what happened after she lost the baby? any more chapters? so sad.

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Katherine Young

    idk if this gets explained but there are a lot of parts of the plot that don’t make sense throughout the book

    09/04/2023 08:18
  • where can we find the cursed princess book? I don’t see it.

    09/04/2023 08:16
  • Dd3

    kk winter... so far -I'm really enjoying your story... I'm having difficulties navigating on this site -but I look forward to reading more the moment that I figure this all out. ~Dd3

    09/04/2023 08:16
  • kitty5127

    chapter 64. what happened to his cousin Afia??? is she not a girl Eve could talk with??

    09/04/2023 08:15
  • umm.... why has Eros not noticed the cheating markes/scars on Eves stomach. I mean she is naked in front of him. you would think he could see them and at least ask what they are or how they got there. 🤔

    09/04/2023 08:15
  • GawviQ

    I absolutely love this story (😱 all the kinky things... my, my, my!) Thank you 🥰can't wait to read what's next 🤓

    09/04/2023 08:14
  • Carla McGuire

    Enjoying it so far.

    09/04/2023 08:14
  • the title says series... are all books combined into this one or are there others?

    09/04/2023 08:14
  • Lela LeeMasters

    Allie Rose is my daughter's name 😍🥰❤

    09/04/2023 08:14
  • Bonib2

    Oh Jesus, can't she sounds more pathetic?

    09/04/2023 08:11
  • Sylvia wendland

    Is this book one?

    09/04/2023 08:10
  • amber sweet

    you did an outstanding job on the series

    09/04/2023 07:57
  • Gabriela Marcano

    Is funny that she called her mother "loving" when that woman seems to be anything but

    09/04/2023 07:55
  • Sophie Raines

    the pupil of the eye is always black... the iris carries the color. just an FYI 😊

    09/04/2023 07:55
  • JMRasp

    It's a great book so far! Based off the comments I read, you must not be a native English speaker? The English is a little off here and there, but English is a difficult language and I give you so much credit for just sharing your creativity with us! I wouldn't have the guts to even begin writing in a second language. I wish there was a way we could help you out with the editting. It'd be nice to just highlight things as we read for feedback. Just to help you out more than just giving generalized criticism of the book as a whole. Either way, thanks for being brave and continuing to share your work! Love it and can't wait for more! 😊

    09/04/2023 07:55
  • Victoria Murray

    ok. I liked the book a lot. But what happened to Claudia? What about the watchers? Anto and Baka?

    09/04/2023 07:45
  • Amanda Ferguson

    lmao enjoed the prelude too the stories good work

    09/04/2023 07:44
  • Belinda Davies

    love love loved it hooked. can't wait to read the next one in the series

    09/04/2023 07:43
  • love the books. I wish it didn't end!! I would love a story of bea and sloth

    09/04/2023 07:30