Untouchable (The Moonlight Avatar Series Collection) Comments

  • Ashley Greene

    I can't finish this series as it appear she goes back to her abusive mate

    08/04/2023 21:06

  • Lonnie Bronco

    #bingeread This story is unbelievably good. The storyline is engaging and the plots are off the chart dramatic, evil, frustrating, sweet, hot, etc... The FL and supporting characters are well developed and grow and evolve with the story. Expect the unexpected!

    07/26/2023 20:37

  • Allison Kerpash

    to adorn something means to decorate it, not to wear it. You adorn a shawl with a brooch. You adorn a dress with jewelry. You don a dress.

    07/13/2023 11:32

  • Jan T

    z8b3 another great story from an awesome author I can't wait to read it woohoo! this is good

    04/13/2023 00:00

  • Emily

    z8b3 I loved the entire series. she’s a great author and deserves all the recognition.! definitely recommend her also u might wanna check pat re on for her

    04/12/2023 22:39

  • Reader-731248

    z8b3 I love this kind of stories. I am looking forward to giving it a try.

    04/12/2023 22:29

  • Martial Flor

    z8b3 So far, this book is amazing. The characters are captivating, and the story line has me enthralled. I can't wait to read more

    04/12/2023 20:38

  • Sue Flaherty

    z8b3 Ohhh sounds so good, definitely adding to my library. Have so many fantastic books added already.

    04/12/2023 18:33

  • Irma Beck

    z8b3 it seems like an interesting read thus far. Will definitely need to read further. boy my library is just growing with these challenges.

    04/12/2023 15:22

  • Sharon Dsouza

    #z8b3# i just love this book... it is an amazing book with an amazing storyline... it has made me cry, get angry and happy seeing the bonds and her strength just loved it. it is a must read book!

    04/12/2023 13:15

  • John Robinson

    z8b3 So this looks like it's going to be an interesting story. I was a bit reluctant to read at first due to the length however it looks to be 3 books in 1, Untouchable then Unhinged and Unbreakable. Just started to read the beginning and I won't lie it's hard just hoping for better things to come for Halima.

    04/12/2023 08:49

  • Selli Dang

    z8b3 love love loveeeee this book and the books in this series! they are very well written and I will urge you to give this book a go

    04/12/2023 07:16

  • Jasmine Hurley

    z8b3 Such a good start!! I wasn’t quite sure based on the title and even the description had me hesitating, but after reading the prologue I’m hooked! definitely adding to my library and can’t wait to read more!

    04/12/2023 01:39

  • Athomas15

    z8b3 this series is so good! the author develops the story well. can’t wait to finish

    04/12/2023 01:02

  • Vicki usher

    z8b3# OMG that introduction grabs you and pulls you right in. How have I missed this book before. This book my ruin my marriage because I may just have to binge this bad boy.

    04/12/2023 00:22

  • Phyllis Neel

    k4u6 Wow, once again I bypassed this book a few times, what a mistake. The first chapter grabbed me and I found myself immersed into the story. I can't wait to see how she gets revenge.

    04/01/2023 00:56

  • Julie Schmitt

    k4u6 Love the introduction to Untouchable (Moonlight Avatar Series Collection). I have added to my library for a future read, but I now am working on 20+ books to read and growing for a list.

    03/31/2023 16:14

  • John Robinson

    k4u5 The beginning of this story is heartbreaking, the poor Halima she's treated so badly by everyone so unfair.

    03/31/2023 13:23

  • Donna Pember

    #k4u6# I can't wait to read this book. Looks like it will be a very interesting book.

    03/31/2023 13:17

  • Rafael

    #k4u6# I love the introduction. it seems very interesting supernatural story. is going to be fun read it. the character is seems more interesting every time I read the intro again.

    03/31/2023 13:12

  • Karin Hancard

    not bad

    02/01/2023 06:42

  • Noneyab

    hello, he sounds like Odessa

    01/04/2023 19:12

  • Noneyab

    I hate the lack of communication. obviously the bite means something. especially if it keeps making itself known

    01/04/2023 18:36

  • Majbritt Larsen

    Noooo damnit again you autor ruin a Perfect good badass woman who can fend for herself. And turn her in to a needy wimpering woman. The idiot redjected her. His trap She schould not easyli fall into. 😣☹😠

    10/13/2022 00:59

  • Tania K

    This book was beautifully written the writer is very talented. Keep up the good work!

    09/15/2022 21:44

  • Fale

    Whattttt!!! that’s it I’m coming into your page on Facebook. I’m a huge fan of yours and your writing 🥰♥️

    04/25/2022 16:35

  • Marii Solaria

    Dear Readers, updates are SUSPENDED until further notice.

    03/31/2022 03:56

  • Beegee Eliotte

    I love this book although I would habe like it if Klya did not get with Neron. To me that is

    03/30/2022 07:42

  • Sam Murray

    ub

    03/24/2022 12:45

  • kar3n

    I love the diversity of the characters. I haven’t been able to put this book down! ❤️

    03/13/2022 14:57

  • Tammie Gooding

    I, don't get it she is a White Wolf,a Delta,she's been trained by witch,so why is she so damn helpless!

    03/07/2022 07:32

  • Mandy Mundy

    any idea when the book will be continued. I'm dying to get to the end and find out what happens. this is by far one of my fav books now

    03/07/2022 02:33

  • Aena Zahid

    love the way the story is told. really enjoyable read. also, a humble request, can someone please take a little time and check out A Place Unlike Home. Thankyou♥︎

    03/06/2022 18:29

  • Samantha Merrill

    I can’t read it. very well written. too well written

    03/05/2022 13:48

  • Ashley

    🥺 when is the next book coming?

    03/02/2022 04:23

  • Dana Harley

    I am loving this story so far ❤❤❤

    02/27/2022 20:20

  • Sheila Searcy

    love your book. hard to put down. I find myself reading late into the night

    02/26/2022 19:39

  • Sherry Armstrong

    what is the name of the 2nd book I really want to read more. thank you for the great book.

    02/02/2022 00:26

  • Marii Solaria

    1/29/2022 Hello my readers! Quick update. Due to exams next week for both my Pharmacology and Intergrated Health Care classes (both on the same day 😵), updates will be pushed until next weekend. Writing is the last thing on my mind right now 😅

    01/30/2022 04:10

  • Kimberly Buchanan

    too bad Darian and Kira couldn't be mates, they would understand the pain of rejection and cherish their bond.

    01/24/2022 07:58

  • Marii Solaria

    ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Important Note to my readers, both old and new ⭐️⭐️⭐️: All three of my books are in the process of EXTENSIVE EDITING. Yes, there are some errors and inconsistencies, but I am working on the manuscripts to flesh it out and remove those errors. Once they are finished, I will update accordingly. That being said, please refrain from commenting edits under every small error you see. Comment after comment with a sentence rewrite without actually commenting on the content of the story or delivering constructive criticism is becoming extremely bothersome. Give me some grace. I am human and working hard to ensure my content is error free. Thank you.

    01/22/2022 16:56

  • Reader-863789

    Damn that was deep. I’m glad she’s making Neron work. I mean a part of me wants them together but I definitely DON’T want her to make it easy and if they don’t get back, she has every right not to love him. so if they don’t complete the bond, then I’d rather they both stay solo. Great story.

    01/19/2022 22:27

  • Reader-863789

    Odessa should have never been in his bed! Especially after talking to the moon goddess. Give her the boat. I feel bad for her true mate

    01/18/2022 09:03

  • onyinye everest

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭ohhhh

    01/15/2022 17:50

  • Petra Du Plessis

    is this the first book

    01/12/2022 16:19

  • Cata Catalins

    I really hope book 3 is the last one! And I love the way they evolved during the journey they went. Congrats, Marii!

    01/10/2022 19:57

  • Sae

    i genuinely don’t think he deserves to be with her. i think she should end with someone else and he can deal with the consequences of that. Sure, he used to be a different person a shitty one to be exact but even then now that he has changed it doesn’t mean they should end up together. If they do, I’ll be a bit disappointed lol.

    01/07/2022 18:32

  • Neva Dat

    I just want them to go ahead and mark each our it will probably keep asshat out his head as well

    01/06/2022 06:56

  • Reader-357800

    Was hoping you wouldn’t have Neron fall into darkness. They already went through this with Kiya.

    01/05/2022 08:01

  • Maria Perez

    there are some battles you can't fight alone. She needs to talk with the other avatar and friends, specially the Alpha.

    12/27/2021 16:05

  • Maria Perez

    2 wrong don't make a right...

    12/27/2021 15:57

  • Maria Perez

    Vampire is getting me very annoyed, even when all counts in love and war.

    12/27/2021 15:46

  • Katrina Miller-Whittaker

    Amen to the quote at the beginning of the chapter

    12/15/2021 18:55

  • Ta1sha

    so funny and so cute I can’t stop picturing nuria in the tree waving at her brother so funny

    12/15/2021 05:58

  • Sara Zaghari

    🥰🥰

    12/07/2021 20:35

  • Sharda Sietaram

    This is a good book, so far!

    12/03/2021 21:47

  • Reader-357800

    please please let them both fight together and not let Jonathan mess with Neron

    11/26/2021 16:48

  • Shebee1614

    So much for that wish

    11/19/2021 20:51

  • Shebee1614

    I’m loving this book and I’m hoping she and the Beta become mates, although she aske the Goddess to not give her another. She deserves that type of love with another

    11/19/2021 20:46

  • Robin Austin Haas

    I'm loving ❤ the quotes before each chapter! bravo to the author

    11/16/2021 23:05

  • Hunei85

    Well that was a steamy chapter!!!😮😮

    11/15/2021 03:13

  • Robin Austin Haas

    yes phoebe would definitely know something

    11/14/2021 08:15

  • Robin Austin Haas

    really good story

    11/13/2021 09:41

  • Mailena

    Book is good, I know I read one soooo similar to this one, but this story is really good.

    11/09/2021 15:54

  • Ta1sha

    neron

    11/04/2021 04:42

  • Ta1sha

    heron definitely earned forgivenesses

    11/04/2021 04:42

  • Samantha Johnson

    this book is soooo good

    11/04/2021 02:41

  • Kara Lam

    3 guesses that Odessa is Darien's mate

    11/01/2021 16:14

  • Fale

    Oh goddess the female lead gets more and more fascinating. Girl you’re so lucky I’m not Nuria 🤣 Uff and I also need a hand fan every time I see Neron’s name too lol 😩

    10/30/2021 21:17

  • melissa dillard

    love this story tho wish I could follow

    10/28/2021 04:35

  • melissa dillard

    oh my goodness tried to unlock says I need paypal don't have one guess I will never know how it ends

    10/28/2021 04:34

  • IzzyB302

    You are a wonderful author. I can’t wait to see what the future has in store for you! This series is phenomenal. ❤️

    10/27/2021 02:11

  • Cynthia Nicole Duvall

    love love love!!!! can’t wait for an update when you are rested!!!

    10/26/2021 20:59

  • Kara Lam

    At least there are people who care about her but can't do much about her current situation

    10/25/2021 03:21

  • Marii Solaria

    Hi, readers ❤️ I just wanted to update you all on something important. I’m pausing updates for Unbreakable for a week. I’ll be taking a break to rest and rejuvenate. Right now, I’m mentally, physically, and creatively exhausted from nursing school and my other commitments outside of writing. I’ll be back to my normal update schedule on Monday, October 25th. As a refresher, my updates are on Wednesdays and Sundays. Please go to my Instagram @ mariisolaria for a detailed explanation. Thank you for your support. I’ll see you all soon ❤️

    10/19/2021 01:24

  • Shramona Chatterjee

    Hey are your books also available in Kindle..please let me know..

    10/18/2021 19:15

  • Rose

    hmmm I am a bit suspicious of Allha Johnathan. something tells me that at least 1 of those “omegas” is actually his daughter. but he doesn’t have high views of women and see them as weak. and he probably punishes Liberty for not bearing a male.

    10/12/2021 08:41

  • Kristi Baker

    my heart breaks every time I read how she was abused.......

    10/12/2021 01:35

  • Fale

    🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 again… Onyx hahaha love it!

    10/11/2021 16:06

  • Nina072

    if you dont understand trauma and its effects on an individual that's fine but do not make cold and callused comments and think nothing of it. just goes to show how little some people know about trauma. cold, callused and so unbelievably rude fictional character or not. person who made that comment, you deserve a knock upside the heard for that comment. and I'm being nice. "it's been eight years.....blah blah blah". unfrackingbelievable.

    10/11/2021 16:02

  • Reader-983354

    I have forgiven Neron he has changed and I want them together. He is doing his best to show that he’s changed and he is a better person and he loves her. There will be no one else for Kiya the mood goddess herself handpicked him for her. I hope they get together real soon. Kiya needs some real loving to erase the past from her mind.

    10/10/2021 19:45

  • Ta1sha

    wow so much has happened and now her life couldn’t be anymore easy. going to keep reading hoping for her to find happiness. fingers crossed. I wonder if the bad guy is related to neron

    10/07/2021 19:10

  • Hunei85

    oh my goddess!!!! It’s about that time for Kiya and Neron to solidify their bond!!!! I wonder if Aloha Johnathan will be brought back as their undoing by Apophis? just a thought

    10/06/2021 16:12

  • Ta1sha

    aww I was wondering what happened to Diana.

    10/06/2021 06:29

  • Ta1sha

    wow I’m glad Nero is sorry and others to but I still don’t think he has earned her respect or forgiveness. can’t wait to read on

    10/05/2021 04:58

  • mercy A

    finally!!

    10/03/2021 21:55

  • Book lover

    think I waiting order the hard copy of this. now to find it.

    09/30/2021 18:34

  • Lena James

    the "Never get poisoned." line.. Good advice! really broke up the tension, I wasnt expecting it. Laughed so hard for no reason 🤣

    09/30/2021 15:54

  • Ta1sha

    I’m so nervous for kiya and how things will go when Nero sees her

    09/27/2021 01:59

  • Ta1sha

    already on chapter 31 so nervous

    09/26/2021 02:09

  • Ta1sha

    yay thank you for the info of how she changed her name Awsome. I got inpatient I should have known you got this

    09/25/2021 21:02

  • Ta1sha

    Nero deserves to suffer so does everyone in that pack no pity for their guilt. Guilt does not make everything ok. They could better themselves and learn from it.

    09/25/2021 19:08

  • Ta1sha

    wait no warning on the name change or did I miss something halima= kiya now

    09/25/2021 17:28

  • Ta1sha

    I love halimas attitude towards getting better. I hope this is good coming her way finally

    09/25/2021 13:00

  • Ta1sha

    wow that was a powerful chapter I’m even in more tears than the previous chapters.

    09/24/2021 22:33

  • Ashley Hauck

    I hated Neron at first, as I'm sure everyone did. however now he's changed so much and I stg I will be entirely heart broken for months to come if this book closes without them together in the end

    09/24/2021 01:57

  • Pklj Ghj

    nub tycoon game but I have a lot

    09/23/2021 18:00

  • Fale

    😂 here goes Onyx again 🤣

    09/20/2021 01:31

  • Fale

    😂 here goes Onyx again 🤣

    09/20/2021 01:31

  • mercy A

    I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

    09/19/2021 21:14
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