Untouchable (The Moonlight Avatar Series Collection) Comments

Visitor

does anyone know if this series will continue? I am enthralled with the characters and plot twists.

Linda G

very depressing can't finish

Visitor

yeah this book was good till she forgave them I just can't finish it it's upsetting

Visitor

Odessa is going to be executed before this is over.

Visitor

Problem is, their excuses for her treatment would still be considered by them to be the same. They would still blame her for going to the woods, etc. If you can blame a 9 year old for being a kid, you would still do it.

Erika Potter

there are some things that are unforgettable including these fiction stories. it isn't ok that she is going back to him. makes her look weak

Demonica Wingate

I am so sick of books when the main character doesn't fight she gonna get punish anyway so mine as well kick ass

Manitú Quintero

where can we find the rest of the book 🥺🥺 or the other book 😭😭😭

Visitor

I really wish the author wouldn't try to use a vocabulary that's outside their understanding. A more "impressive" word that is incorrect stalls the reading flow to try and figure out what word should be there instead. Use the simpler word if you know what it means or use a dictionary/thesaurus if you don't.

Visitor

This book is so beautifully written. I cried so much due to the fact I know that pain and sadness. Thank you author for this. Can't wait to start Book 2!

mimbutzki

Chapter 21 contains the most beautiful and accurate description of depression i ever read. thank you for that.

Visitor

and no unless u abuse her family and mate for 10years nothing that happens to them is forgivable

Visitor

no he was an abuser dosent matter if he repents or not. it's not okay. she better never accept him back

Debbie Simpson

I loved these three books how stinking long do we have to wait for the 4th book in the set to finish the story off and see how things end up with Kiya and Neron they have to get together and get everything settled so they can live peaceful

Kelsi Tate

I love this book. wish it was one that I could put on my book shelf at home

Visitor

What's with all these mate bond sparks / "Kiya did not reject Neron and should still feel the sparks" bit? They both rejected each other 5 years ago!!!!!!

Visitor

a pack full of followers

Visitor

so sad and makes me mad how they treated her

Jacy Winter

I want to cry but this a lot of people around me right now 😭

Visitor

omg 😥

Visitor

still at Ch. 37 now but let me say this first... I hope she does not forgive those in Zircon and please can this be a story where the lead girl does NOT end up with her (ex) mate?!! She does not lose heaven entry points if she does not forgive them. They vilified her at 9 yrs old because she had blood stains on her?! Please.

Visitor

It started off great. And then highly sucked because she forgave her family and mate for 9 years of abuse! she was 9 years old when they started abusing her! a child! and she just.... forgives them because they are oh so sorry? hahahaha yeah no

Veronica Rose

I Hate Neron

Erika Potter

she has an NJ tube not feeding tube. I have feeding tube it's a GJ tube which goes into your intestines

Visitor

what happened with the owl?

Nemisis Kharma

Mercedes Lackey is one of my favorite writers. good choice!

Visitor

He deserves everything he's feeling he wants to have her now but everyone in that pack needs to atone for that actions the whole pack needs to get on their knees and beg for forgiveness

Visitor

Does this also have the book rejected mate reborn

Visitor

amazing!! cant stop reading

Lonnie Bronco

#bingeread This story is unbelievably good. The storyline is engaging and the plots are off the chart dramatic, evil, frustrating, sweet, hot, etc... The FL and supporting characters are well developed and grow and evolve with the story. Expect the unexpected!

I can't finish this series as it appear she goes back to her abusive mate

Allison Kerpash

to adorn something means to decorate it, not to wear it. You adorn a shawl with a brooch. You adorn a dress with jewelry. You don a dress.

Selli Dang

z8b3 love love loveeeee this book and the books in this series! they are very well written and I will urge you to give this book a go

Reader-731248

z8b3 I love this kind of stories. I am looking forward to giving it a try.

Irma Beck

z8b3 it seems like an interesting read thus far. Will definitely need to read further. boy my library is just growing with these challenges.

Vicki usher

z8b3# OMG that introduction grabs you and pulls you right in. How have I missed this book before. This book my ruin my marriage because I may just have to binge this bad boy.

z8b3 another great story from an awesome author I can't wait to read it woohoo! this is good

Emily

z8b3 I loved the entire series. she’s a great author and deserves all the recognition.! definitely recommend her also u might wanna check pat re on for her

John Robinson

k4u5 The beginning of this story is heartbreaking, the poor Halima she's treated so badly by everyone so unfair.

Athomas15

z8b3 this series is so good! the author develops the story well. can’t wait to finish

k4u6 Wow, once again I bypassed this book a few times, what a mistake. The first chapter grabbed me and I found myself immersed into the story. I can't wait to see how she gets revenge.

Sue Flaherty

z8b3 Ohhh sounds so good, definitely adding to my library. Have so many fantastic books added already.

Jasmine Hurley

z8b3 Such a good start!! I wasn’t quite sure based on the title and even the description had me hesitating, but after reading the prologue I’m hooked! definitely adding to my library and can’t wait to read more!

John Robinson

z8b3 So this looks like it's going to be an interesting story. I was a bit reluctant to read at first due to the length however it looks to be 3 books in 1, Untouchable then Unhinged and Unbreakable. Just started to read the beginning and I won't lie it's hard just hoping for better things to come for Halima.

Donna Pember

#k4u6# I can't wait to read this book. Looks like it will be a very interesting book.

Julie Schmitt

k4u6 Love the introduction to Untouchable (Moonlight Avatar Series Collection). I have added to my library for a future read, but I now am working on 20+ books to read and growing for a list.

Rafael

#k4u6# I love the introduction. it seems very interesting supernatural story. is going to be fun read it. the character is seems more interesting every time I read the intro again.

Sharon Dsouza

#z8b3# i just love this book... it is an amazing book with an amazing storyline... it has made me cry, get angry and happy seeing the bonds and her strength just loved it. it is a must read book!

Karin Hancard

not bad

Noneyab

I hate the lack of communication. obviously the bite means something. especially if it keeps making itself known

Noneyab

hello, he sounds like Odessa

Tania K

This book was beautifully written the writer is very talented. Keep up the good work!

Marii Solaria

Dear Readers, updates are SUSPENDED until further notice.

Sam Murray

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Beegee Eliotte

I love this book although I would habe like it if Klya did not get with Neron. To me that is

I love the diversity of the characters. I haven’t been able to put this book down! ❤️

Mandy Mundy

any idea when the book will be continued. I'm dying to get to the end and find out what happens. this is by far one of my fav books now

zara mughal

love the way the story is told. really enjoyable read. also, a humble request, can someone please take a little time and check out A Place Unlike Home. Thankyou♥︎

Dana Harley

I am loving this story so far ❤❤❤

Ashley

🥺 when is the next book coming?

Sheila Searcy

love your book. hard to put down. I find myself reading late into the night

Samantha Merrill

I can’t read it. very well written. too well written

Kimberly Buchanan

too bad Darian and Kira couldn't be mates, they would understand the pain of rejection and cherish their bond.

Marii Solaria

1/29/2022 Hello my readers! Quick update. Due to exams next week for both my Pharmacology and Intergrated Health Care classes (both on the same day 😵), updates will be pushed until next weekend. Writing is the last thing on my mind right now 😅

Sherry Armstrong

what is the name of the 2nd book I really want to read more. thank you for the great book.

Cata Catalins

I really hope book 3 is the last one! And I love the way they evolved during the journey they went. Congrats, Marii!

Reader-863789

Damn that was deep. I’m glad she’s making Neron work. I mean a part of me wants them together but I definitely DON’T want her to make it easy and if they don’t get back, she has every right not to love him. so if they don’t complete the bond, then I’d rather they both stay solo. Great story.

Petra Du Plessis

is this the first book

Reader-357800

Was hoping you wouldn’t have Neron fall into darkness. They already went through this with Kiya.

Neva Dat

I just want them to go ahead and mark each our it will probably keep asshat out his head as well

2 wrong don't make a right...

Katrina Miller-Whittaker

Amen to the quote at the beginning of the chapter

Reader-863789

Odessa should have never been in his bed! Especially after talking to the moon goddess. Give her the boat. I feel bad for her true mate

onyinye everest

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭ohhhh

Ta1sha

so funny and so cute I can’t stop picturing nuria in the tree waving at her brother so funny

🥰🥰

there are some battles you can't fight alone. She needs to talk with the other avatar and friends, specially the Alpha.

Vampire is getting me very annoyed, even when all counts in love and war.

Robin Austin Haas

yes phoebe would definitely know something

Samantha Johnson

this book is soooo good

Robin Austin Haas

really good story

Book is good, I know I read one soooo similar to this one, but this story is really good.

Robin Austin Haas

I'm loving ❤ the quotes before each chapter! bravo to the author

Shebee1614

I’m loving this book and I’m hoping she and the Beta become mates, although she aske the Goddess to not give her another. She deserves that type of love with another

love this story tho wish I could follow

Reader-357800

please please let them both fight together and not let Jonathan mess with Neron

Cynthia Nicole Duvall

love love love!!!! can’t wait for an update when you are rested!!!

3 guesses that Odessa is Darien's mate

At least there are people who care about her but can't do much about her current situation

Ta1sha

neron

Shebee1614

So much for that wish

Well that was a steamy chapter!!!😮😮

Sharda Sietaram

This is a good book, so far!

Ta1sha

heron definitely earned forgivenesses

Fale

Oh goddess the female lead gets more and more fascinating. Girl you’re so lucky I’m not Nuria 🤣 Uff and I also need a hand fan every time I see Neron’s name too lol 😩

Ta1sha

wow so much has happened and now her life couldn’t be anymore easy. going to keep reading hoping for her to find happiness. fingers crossed. I wonder if the bad guy is related to neron

IzzyB302

You are a wonderful author. I can’t wait to see what the future has in store for you! This series is phenomenal. ❤️

Fale

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 again… Onyx hahaha love it!

Kristi Baker

my heart breaks every time I read how she was abused.......

Lena James

the "Never get poisoned." line.. Good advice! really broke up the tension, I wasnt expecting it. Laughed so hard for no reason 🤣