Alpha at the Door (Edited Version) Comments

  • Margie Armitage

    I’m loving this story so far! but it’s amputated, not decapitated :)

    09/04/2023 08:13

  • supergirl

    This is the edited version? It is littered with errors

    09/04/2023 08:13

  • Bonnie Dishman

    how many more chapters until this book is complete

    09/04/2023 08:11

  • when is next next chapter open.

    09/04/2023 08:11

  • RainHero21 this book is part of my top 5 reads, but is there a schedule for the updates???

    09/04/2023 08:11

  • memory cloud

    I saw that there are two versions and read your comments about version 2 being better. Which one is version 2; the one made on 3/2021 or 6/2020? The contents look the same roughly...

    09/04/2023 08:11

  • I am really enjoying this book; however, I am curious how this is an edited version since there are a lot of grammatical errors and mixed up wording. I wish I could edit some of the stories I have read.

    09/04/2023 08:10

  • Sara Rastellini

    I like the story but you grammar is atrocious!

    09/04/2023 08:09

  • Tenesia Tee

    so this is the same as the 1st version, just revised. so same characters place time and events, right? it’s not like where V is the were (queen/ druglord) and he is the human that saves her lol. that would be worth the read. the roles reversed. lol.

    09/04/2023 08:09

  • Wcha

    wow intriguing first chapter

    09/04/2023 08:09

  • when is chapter 16 open alpha at the door edited version open now🙏🙏🙏🙏

    09/04/2023 08:08

  • Wendy Virginia

    loving this book! keep up the amazing work

    09/04/2023 08:08

  • RainHero21

    Hi Guys new chapter is now up. Red Tenshi, thankyou all for your support ❤ 🙏

    09/04/2023 08:07

  • Brandy Hunter

    love the book want to know when the next update to the next chapter is

    09/04/2023 08:07

  • So many mistakes and it's almost as if English wasn't the first language.

    09/04/2023 08:07

  • Tritana Graham

    UUUHHHHMMMMMM I been throughly entertained and I must say werewolf version of 365 IND. 💋💋💋💋

    09/04/2023 08:01

  • Tritana Graham

    When this book finally comes to an end. I am going to seriously miss ("TROY")🐺. He needs to be in three to five more ALPHA novels. Troy has made me laugh so much and his love of much I must say is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 my favorite is Chris Brown "Take Down"

    09/04/2023 08:00

  • Donna DeNardo Grogan

    I am enjoying this book. Love Matoe he makes me laugh.His personality is the best.

    09/04/2023 08:00

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Hi just a point you know chapter 18 is publisch 2 Times? Same text in chapter but first is just named 18 and sscund is named 18. Give me the dame Phone. Just want you to know Great story so far 👍🌹❤️

    09/04/2023 07:58

  • Andrea Clennon

    I wanna read this soo bad!!! ... but I can't read something that isn't completed 😥 my ocd and need to know the ending keeps me from reading 😭😭

    09/04/2023 07:57

  • RainHero21

    Hi everyone, please follow me on twitter, I just signed up today, Rainhero21. So far I have 0 followers 😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 07:55

  • Tarnisha Brinson

    @RaibHero21 love this book.. when will u be updating i can't wait to see what happens nexr

    09/04/2023 07:55

  • Melissa Conaway

    please update soon!

    09/04/2023 07:52

  • Reader-945758

    uh this is the exact plot of 365 plus werewolf.

    09/04/2023 07:51

  • I am not worried s out the mistakes I would just like updates as it is a great story💜

    09/04/2023 07:47

  • Donna Medders Holt

    I never heard of the word teasefully before. Is that new ?

    09/04/2023 07:40

  • Tritana Graham

    RainHero21 Please write another ALPHA werewolf book with characters werewolf characters like them. and put Troy with another ALPHA like Ares. I am going to miss this story. I was truly entertained from being to the end. you did a superb job!

    09/04/2023 07:39

  • Wendy Sparks

    I love it

    09/04/2023 07:37

  • Brenda Foreman

    Loving this book so far.

    09/04/2023 07:31

  • R.L.Marcelain

    Not sure how I feel about this book. It reeks of Stockholm syndrome in Veeras case. it's evident that she's his soulmate but, he did not have to kidnap her and sexually take advantage of her for months. I have read a number of shifter books and none of them kidnapped the girl and seduced her into submission. I do find it hilarious when his Grandmother beats his ass. What is the point of turning her friends? when is the next update? I am curious about the Tenshi, to see what happens with that part of the story.

    09/04/2023 07:30
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