The Alpha King's Hated Slave Comments
Nathalie Harris
Hi Author did you publish your book on another platform?
09/07/2023 17:31Sam
#bingeread a favorite for sure. some difficult scenes, but heart wrenching. I loved every bit. not at all what I thought it would be like, pleasantly surprised. loved loved.
07/28/2023 03:18Leeann Maheu
I love this story third time reading it but I can’t understand the story line of time sequences. 6 months ago but Lucian been freed for 5 years???
06/20/2023 06:23natasha wakeford
you guys will love this book. It takes you on an emotional rollercoaster.
06/19/2023 19:41Mirela
4g5h An interesting story, thou is not quite my style. A slave who became a king looks for getting revenge on the previous king's daughter, making her a slave.
04/01/2023 04:14Mirela
4g5h An interesting story, thou is not quite
04/01/2023 04:10Janet Kingston
4g5h I am so in love this book. Very intriguing but the revenge is too horrible. I hope King Lucien will abolish slave introduction soon.
03/31/2023 20:09Julie Schmitt
4g5h Added this to my library, interesting beginning but with most comments not sure how far I will go. Many state this is a difficult read to follow,I don’t want to have to work at a book, I want my reading to flow. Will have to wait and see.
03/31/2023 15:27Bianca Yetzke
4g5h. I was hard to read this book but I loved it! there was so much going on and so many moving parts. I enjoyed the character growth and love that is shown in this book
03/31/2023 12:40Irma Beck
4g5h I am finding it hard to read this book. The terrible abuse is had to absorb and to give the same revenge back is just too much. need some editing. hoping it will get better
03/31/2023 06:58Gemma Butler
4g5h This book was a little too hard for me to read. It was difficult to follow the story in places.
03/31/2023 06:53Sumriti Singh
4g5h all in all is a good book bt requires editing bcoz sometimes it gets really confusing to understand WT the author is trying to say den also character building is great.....
03/31/2023 06:43Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
4g5h This book requires serious editing. It is quite confusing trying to figure out what the author is trying to say.
03/31/2023 06:31Emily
4g5h read this book a while ago I think on a different site and absolutely loved it. the growth of the characters is amazing
03/31/2023 06:18Lesley Crutchlow
4g5h found the start a bit disturbing with the abuse, but continued to read i feel they are both victims trying to heal. look forward to continue reading to see where the story goes
03/31/2023 06:18zira
4g5h they are both victim but too much hate most of the time ruin our reasoning and accepting being righteous...hope he find himself acceptance and forgiveness
03/31/2023 06:07Janey Harrison
It's definitely a bit disturbing to read the abusive treatment of men and women. However it was the way things were and unquestioned in that era.The emotions of thier characters was excellent writing. This book had it all .Loved the way Vetta found redemption and Danika's compassion,strength and determination are amazing. The writer takes you on a journey into the past that's too exciting to put into words.
01/25/2023 22:53Tanya Dee Garcia
I cried while Queen Danika gave her apology too Vetta.. I really hope Vetta just turns around and kills Coza instead!
10/01/2022 21:45Claire Galea
I just topped up but money wasn't update here but my bank account was debited. any idea who I can ask for help?
07/07/2022 12:59Dasha Pearce
am I missing something? this book is from Fox Novels and has different author
06/17/2022 15:31Reader-434135
OK I can say that it took me a while to read this book. That’s because I couldn’t get past the first couple of chapters; they made me mad. Howerver, I forced myself to keep reading and I am going to say that the story is truly amazing. Some grammatical errors and tense errors but totally worth the read .
06/08/2022 11:45Toni Peden
Just a suggestion, try running your story through Grammarly prior to posting. I've noticed you flip-flop between past and present tense a bit. Grammarly will help with that and with any other issues.
04/06/2022 19:47MiaMango
i loved this book, what I didn’t understand was the title.. alpha usually is attached to werewolf stories… anyway loved it regardless I was addicted and read it all in 2 days!
03/27/2022 10:23Clarisa Revelo
this was such an amazing journey, it was such an amazing read. I wanted it to end and not to end at the same time. thank yuu for such a wonderful story
03/15/2022 01:49440
I'm so glad I read this book. Quite the emotional rollercoaster but the ending makes all the ups and downs worth it. Great job author 💗👍
03/07/2022 04:20Mrs.Hyde
So vetta has "redeemed" herself in the end. Got Lucien and Danika son calling her "Aunt"
02/22/2022 04:26Mrs.Hyde
When Remetta told Vetta her nemesis comes it's either Kamara telling Lucien that Vetta knew all along Danika carried his child or Declan cause i feel because of jealousy maybe Vetta had something to do with Lucien thinking he's dead.
02/22/2022 01:34orchid91
I've re-read this so many times now! Absolutely love it. Initially I was put off based on the treatment of Danika, it was really intense to read, but so glad I stuck with it!
02/14/2022 20:31Kira Turner
about time vetta gets a beating to remind her of her place
02/08/2022 19:02ALTHEA CAZAR
Hejejjeke
02/08/2022 04:46Hanen Shallop
I do love the book btw
02/07/2022 16:23Hanen Shallop
what is this? two chapter 19s we are losing points here! instead of getting my chapter 20!! very irritating!!
02/07/2022 16:09Keri Nathan
I absolutely loved this book beautifully written... fell in love with the characters would love a sequel with all the kids😊 thank you author ❤❤❤
02/05/2022 23:02chioma mgbachi
nice
02/03/2022 22:28atsila
warning possible spoiler for anyone reading***** it's out of character for Danika to be happy about the slave trainer Kanady getting whipped & fired regardless of what he did.
01/30/2022 03:25MC Perry
whose book is this actually? its on platforms under multiple authors names, the GN platform it’s been completed since November???
01/27/2022 05:58Helen Jayne
I couldn't read this, perhaps the author should make the changes suggested in the comments to make reading it easier
01/23/2022 05:18Eli-May Martin
yes!!!!! the end is nigh!!! been patiently waiting for weeks, King Lucian & Queen Danika finally!!
01/20/2022 21:55Samantha Ramsey
This is my third time reading this book i love it. I wish Danika would have kept this additued. Not putting up with veta putting her hands on her and hurting her.
01/20/2022 20:39Jennifer Larimer
you are a wonderful author!! such a great book!! I can't wait to see what else you write. great ending!!
01/20/2022 18:55Reader-623944
I am sooo attached for this history I can’t stop read. I am in love with this🥰🥰🥰
01/20/2022 14:53Bela
oh.. update please 😒🙄 I am waiting the scene of finding out that Declan was alive. nice story ❤️
01/17/2022 16:58annette slusser
that is love beyond
01/16/2022 04:36Yong Nao
love it
01/13/2022 02:48Avu Yeng
enjoy it so far
01/12/2022 11:20Eli-May Martin
ohhhhh come on load us up with the next volumes!!! have loved this entire series!!
01/10/2022 12:49Caroline C. Katongo
I love this book,can’t stop reading
01/09/2022 17:19edith eboh
very interesting
01/08/2022 13:20Suzan Jaff
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01/07/2022 21:56Carrie Peterson
Is this book updating anytime soon
12/31/2021 18:36Anthony
There he goes, Lord Rainydale. 🤣
12/31/2021 14:28Bethany Clulow
Absolutely love this book!!!!! This book has been able to evoke emotions unlike any other I have read.. Thank you for writing such an amazing book that has kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. 😀 Awesome Author indeed.
12/25/2021 12:07Reader-444826
this is the best book I have ever read in one of these apps
12/24/2021 07:38Chill Boahen
this is the best book I've read so far and I'm in love with it
12/20/2021 12:07Stephanie Jade
ah I thought it was complete so I've read it all in two days now I'm left hanging 😫😫😫 how often are chapters updated?
12/18/2021 08:39Reader-636366
i enjoy alot reading the book
12/15/2021 04:09Terri
hope she doesn't switch the herbs to make Danika to loose baby
12/12/2021 14:57Aizher Ermer
really love this.. will wait for the update..
12/11/2021 16:23Alicia Caudill
when will new chapters come out?
12/11/2021 04:42Meghan Lacy
where is the rest of the story? is it just done after chapter 170?
12/10/2021 21:17AVA
when will the second part be loaded for us to read?
12/09/2021 06:15AVA
so this says there are 224 chapters here but it only has 170 viewable. did I miss something somewhere?
12/08/2021 22:06BookWorm R
vetta is a mean bitch
12/08/2021 02:35Keri Nathan
ohh that was amazing cant wait for the rest🥰🥰🥰🥰
12/08/2021 01:32Cassi Sarocky
I feel like this story is copied from another, anyone else?
12/06/2021 15:14Tabatha Schill
NovalCat has the whole book that's where I read it 📖 the auther of it is Adira Daisy
12/02/2021 03:00Tabatha Schill
I love this story 📖❤ had me so addicted and wishing there was more
12/02/2021 02:53Kristina Mitchell
is this a warewolf story? it says "alpha" but I don't see a tag. i'm just curious. looks like a great read!!
12/02/2021 00:08Ashàa
it have a total of 307 chapters in G00dn0vel. go download it if you want 💕 currently reading chapter 202
11/29/2021 07:27sheikha99
if you want to read the full story without paying then search it up on YouTube!
11/27/2021 18:43Paula Lewis
hi everyone this book is on good novel and it’s complete
11/19/2021 12:45Sophia Inda
I LOVE THIS BOOK. I am hopeful for an update soooooon :) a few comments have said the full version is posted to other reading apps. Cany anyone confirm that or tell me which apps?
11/18/2021 15:39blue2291
this book has so many cheese lines from other movies and books . “music old as time “ , “you complete me “ lol
11/16/2021 23:37Paula Lewis
when does this book get updated? anyone know? it doesn’t appear the author replies to any one
11/15/2021 22:02Imaad Khan
plzzz update the next book.. the waiting is killing me
11/15/2021 18:43Keri Nathan
love the book and its story line please update the suspense is killing me 😂💜
11/15/2021 09:06Keri Nathan
when can we expect the next book???
11/13/2021 10:29Ella H
Nice storyline, but a lot of word errors which stops good flow. Simple editing and spell check would help. Also, mixing too much current things with historical settings is problematic, such as burgers, electrical shock collars, references to King Kong, those type of things should be left out. Storyline is strong enough without them.
11/13/2021 03:54orchid91
This book is really intense in places and difficult to read some of the abuse scenes that are portrayed, but that being said the plot is great and I've really found myself drawn into the story and the characters. Can't wait for part 3!!
11/12/2021 18:59Angel Hedge
I love this book and hope to see what will happen to the child and the princess as well
11/12/2021 09:14Tuvo
good book so far. Chapter 24 is posted twice
11/12/2021 00:25Meghan Lacy
I really enjoy this book. has so many twist and turns. you are a good writer and a good author.
11/11/2021 05:16Chrissy Daugherty
It’s a good book, but it has a crazy amount of errors. A good editor could do wonders. The duplicate chapters are also frustrating.
11/11/2021 01:57An Gelica
made me cry.. poor dani.. sally is a loyal and great friend.
11/10/2021 14:52Alliah Francis
I'm not one to write hate comments because I believe that if u don't like a book then just stop reading it and I did stop reading and I only skimmed then immediately deleted it from my library...but this book is just sick...the extreme torture, graphic detail of the act of rape and falling in love with ur rapist?!!...this is just down right traumatic and disregarding becuz I myself am a rape victim
11/09/2021 13:32Shaunica Titus
chapter repeats
11/09/2021 00:58princess
this is a great book, I read on different site
11/02/2021 08:54Socky
Patiently waiting for an update. So many chapters in this book have made my cry. This is such a good story.
10/29/2021 03:52An Gelica
do they have on the list of the same plot and story i can read on while we wait in vain
10/28/2021 11:39An Gelica
how many weeks do they update this book, i binged read and bought subscription only to find out that this book is not finish.
10/28/2021 11:38nans@ky.
just curious didn't she have a mask on that was locked.
10/25/2021 15:57Claudine Gaffar
wonderful chapter please update asap!!!
10/24/2021 20:30Kasma Kalinggalan
hope theres an update soon 🙏🙏🙏
10/22/2021 16:40Stephanie Alexander
I know it’s complete on other apps but why can’t the author just post the whole thing here already 😭😭
10/22/2021 01:27Destiny Opute
please update the full story
10/21/2021 06:17Anita Caxala
my heart won’t take it if something happens to her 🥺 so sad
10/20/2021 18:32Reader-529093
update plz
10/20/2021 18:01Jessy Castro
the story is good but the grammar could be better
10/18/2021 11:56zoe
when will the next update be plz
10/17/2021 13:01Ibbsah Khan
nxt update plz??
10/16/2021 02:08