The Alpha King's Hated Slave Comments

  • Nathalie Harris

    Hi Author did you publish your book on another platform?

    09/07/2023 17:31
  • Sam

    #bingeread a favorite for sure. some difficult scenes, but heart wrenching. I loved every bit. not at all what I thought it would be like, pleasantly surprised. loved loved.

    07/28/2023 03:18
  • Leeann Maheu

    I love this story third time reading it but I can’t understand the story line of time sequences. 6 months ago but Lucian been freed for 5 years???

    06/20/2023 06:23
  • natasha wakeford

    you guys will love this book. It takes you on an emotional rollercoaster.

    06/19/2023 19:41
  • Mirela

    4g5h An interesting story, thou is not quite my style. A slave who became a king looks for getting revenge on the previous king's daughter, making her a slave.

    04/01/2023 04:14
  • Mirela

    4g5h An interesting story, thou is not quite

    04/01/2023 04:10
  • Janet Kingston

    4g5h I am so in love this book. Very intriguing but the revenge is too horrible. I hope King Lucien will abolish slave introduction soon.

    03/31/2023 20:09
  • Julie Schmitt

    4g5h Added this to my library, interesting beginning but with most comments not sure how far I will go. Many state this is a difficult read to follow,I don’t want to have to work at a book, I want my reading to flow. Will have to wait and see.

    03/31/2023 15:27
  • Bianca Yetzke

    4g5h. I was hard to read this book but I loved it! there was so much going on and so many moving parts. I enjoyed the character growth and love that is shown in this book

    03/31/2023 12:40
  • Irma Beck

    4g5h I am finding it hard to read this book. The terrible abuse is had to absorb and to give the same revenge back is just too much. need some editing. hoping it will get better

    03/31/2023 06:58
  • Gemma Butler

    4g5h This book was a little too hard for me to read. It was difficult to follow the story in places.

    03/31/2023 06:53
  • Sumriti Singh

    4g5h all in all is a good book bt requires editing bcoz sometimes it gets really confusing to understand WT the author is trying to say den also character building is great.....

    03/31/2023 06:43
  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    4g5h This book requires serious editing. It is quite confusing trying to figure out what the author is trying to say.

    03/31/2023 06:31
  • Emily

    4g5h read this book a while ago I think on a different site and absolutely loved it. the growth of the characters is amazing

    03/31/2023 06:18
  • Lesley Crutchlow

    4g5h found the start a bit disturbing with the abuse, but continued to read i feel they are both victims trying to heal. look forward to continue reading to see where the story goes

    03/31/2023 06:18
  • zira

    4g5h they are both victim but too much hate most of the time ruin our reasoning and accepting being righteous...hope he find himself acceptance and forgiveness

    03/31/2023 06:07
  • Janey Harrison

    It's definitely a bit disturbing to read the abusive treatment of men and women. However it was the way things were and unquestioned in that era.The emotions of thier characters was excellent writing. This book had it all .Loved the way Vetta found redemption and Danika's compassion,strength and determination are amazing. The writer takes you on a journey into the past that's too exciting to put into words.

    01/25/2023 22:53
  • Tanya Dee Garcia

    I cried while Queen Danika gave her apology too Vetta.. I really hope Vetta just turns around and kills Coza instead!

    10/01/2022 21:45
  • Claire Galea

    I just topped up but money wasn't update here but my bank account was debited. any idea who I can ask for help?

    07/07/2022 12:59
  • Dasha Pearce

    am I missing something? this book is from Fox Novels and has different author

    06/17/2022 15:31
  • Reader-434135

    OK I can say that it took me a while to read this book. That’s because I couldn’t get past the first couple of chapters; they made me mad. Howerver, I forced myself to keep reading and I am going to say that the story is truly amazing. Some grammatical errors and tense errors but totally worth the read .

    06/08/2022 11:45
  • Toni Peden

    Just a suggestion, try running your story through Grammarly prior to posting. I've noticed you flip-flop between past and present tense a bit. Grammarly will help with that and with any other issues.

    04/06/2022 19:47
  • MiaMango

    i loved this book, what I didn’t understand was the title.. alpha usually is attached to werewolf stories… anyway loved it regardless I was addicted and read it all in 2 days!

    03/27/2022 10:23
  • Clarisa Revelo

    this was such an amazing journey, it was such an amazing read. I wanted it to end and not to end at the same time. thank yuu for such a wonderful story

    03/15/2022 01:49
  • 440

    I'm so glad I read this book. Quite the emotional rollercoaster but the ending makes all the ups and downs worth it. Great job author 💗👍

    03/07/2022 04:20
  • Mrs.Hyde

    So vetta has "redeemed" herself in the end. Got Lucien and Danika son calling her "Aunt"

    02/22/2022 04:26
  • Mrs.Hyde

    When Remetta told Vetta her nemesis comes it's either Kamara telling Lucien that Vetta knew all along Danika carried his child or Declan cause i feel because of jealousy maybe Vetta had something to do with Lucien thinking he's dead.

    02/22/2022 01:34
  • orchid91

    I've re-read this so many times now! Absolutely love it. Initially I was put off based on the treatment of Danika, it was really intense to read, but so glad I stuck with it!

    02/14/2022 20:31
  • Kira Turner

    about time vetta gets a beating to remind her of her place

    02/08/2022 19:02
  • ALTHEA CAZAR

    Hejejjeke

    02/08/2022 04:46
  • Hanen Shallop

    I do love the book btw

    02/07/2022 16:23
  • Hanen Shallop

    what is this? two chapter 19s we are losing points here! instead of getting my chapter 20!! very irritating!!

    02/07/2022 16:09
  • Keri Nathan

    I absolutely loved this book beautifully written... fell in love with the characters would love a sequel with all the kids😊 thank you author ❤❤❤

    02/05/2022 23:02
  • chioma mgbachi

    nice

    02/03/2022 22:28
  • atsila

    warning possible spoiler for anyone reading***** it's out of character for Danika to be happy about the slave trainer Kanady getting whipped & fired regardless of what he did.

    01/30/2022 03:25
  • MC Perry

    whose book is this actually? its on platforms under multiple authors names, the GN platform it’s been completed since November???

    01/27/2022 05:58
  • Helen Jayne

    I couldn't read this, perhaps the author should make the changes suggested in the comments to make reading it easier

    01/23/2022 05:18
  • Eli-May Martin

    yes!!!!! the end is nigh!!! been patiently waiting for weeks, King Lucian & Queen Danika finally!!

    01/20/2022 21:55
  • Samantha Ramsey

    This is my third time reading this book i love it. I wish Danika would have kept this additued. Not putting up with veta putting her hands on her and hurting her.

    01/20/2022 20:39
  • Jennifer Larimer

    you are a wonderful author!! such a great book!! I can't wait to see what else you write. great ending!!

    01/20/2022 18:55
  • Reader-623944

    I am sooo attached for this history I can’t stop read. I am in love with this🥰🥰🥰

    01/20/2022 14:53
  • Bela

    oh.. update please 😒🙄 I am waiting the scene of finding out that Declan was alive. nice story ❤️

    01/17/2022 16:58
  • annette slusser

    that is love beyond

    01/16/2022 04:36
  • Yong Nao

    love it

    01/13/2022 02:48
  • Avu Yeng

    enjoy it so far

    01/12/2022 11:20
  • Eli-May Martin

    ohhhhh come on load us up with the next volumes!!! have loved this entire series!!

    01/10/2022 12:49
  • Caroline C. Katongo

    I love this book,can’t stop reading

    01/09/2022 17:19
  • edith eboh

    very interesting

    01/08/2022 13:20
  • Suzan Jaff

    a

    01/07/2022 21:56
  • Carrie Peterson

    Is this book updating anytime soon

    12/31/2021 18:36
  • Anthony

    There he goes, Lord Rainydale. 🤣

    12/31/2021 14:28
  • Bethany Clulow

    Absolutely love this book!!!!! This book has been able to evoke emotions unlike any other I have read.. Thank you for writing such an amazing book that has kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. 😀 Awesome Author indeed.

    12/25/2021 12:07
  • Reader-444826

    this is the best book I have ever read in one of these apps

    12/24/2021 07:38
  • Chill Boahen

    this is the best book I've read so far and I'm in love with it

    12/20/2021 12:07
  • Stephanie Jade

    ah I thought it was complete so I've read it all in two days now I'm left hanging 😫😫😫 how often are chapters updated?

    12/18/2021 08:39
  • Reader-636366

    i enjoy alot reading the book

    12/15/2021 04:09
  • Terri

    hope she doesn't switch the herbs to make Danika to loose baby

    12/12/2021 14:57
  • Aizher Ermer

    really love this.. will wait for the update..

    12/11/2021 16:23
  • Alicia Caudill

    when will new chapters come out?

    12/11/2021 04:42
  • Meghan Lacy

    where is the rest of the story? is it just done after chapter 170?

    12/10/2021 21:17
  • AVA

    when will the second part be loaded for us to read?

    12/09/2021 06:15
  • AVA

    so this says there are 224 chapters here but it only has 170 viewable. did I miss something somewhere?

    12/08/2021 22:06
  • BookWorm R

    vetta is a mean bitch

    12/08/2021 02:35
  • Keri Nathan

    ohh that was amazing cant wait for the rest🥰🥰🥰🥰

    12/08/2021 01:32
  • Cassi Sarocky

    I feel like this story is copied from another, anyone else?

    12/06/2021 15:14
  • Tabatha Schill

    NovalCat has the whole book that's where I read it 📖 the auther of it is Adira Daisy

    12/02/2021 03:00
  • Tabatha Schill

    I love this story 📖❤ had me so addicted and wishing there was more

    12/02/2021 02:53
  • Kristina Mitchell

    is this a warewolf story? it says "alpha" but I don't see a tag. i'm just curious. looks like a great read!!

    12/02/2021 00:08
  • Ashàa

    it have a total of 307 chapters in G00dn0vel. go download it if you want 💕 currently reading chapter 202

    11/29/2021 07:27
  • sheikha99

    if you want to read the full story without paying then search it up on YouTube!

    11/27/2021 18:43
  • Paula Lewis

    hi everyone this book is on good novel and it’s complete

    11/19/2021 12:45
  • Sophia Inda

    I LOVE THIS BOOK. I am hopeful for an update soooooon :) a few comments have said the full version is posted to other reading apps. Cany anyone confirm that or tell me which apps?

    11/18/2021 15:39
  • blue2291

    this book has so many cheese lines from other movies and books . “music old as time “ , “you complete me “ lol

    11/16/2021 23:37
  • Paula Lewis

    when does this book get updated? anyone know? it doesn’t appear the author replies to any one

    11/15/2021 22:02
  • Imaad Khan

    plzzz update the next book.. the waiting is killing me

    11/15/2021 18:43
  • Keri Nathan

    love the book and its story line please update the suspense is killing me 😂💜

    11/15/2021 09:06
  • Keri Nathan

    when can we expect the next book???

    11/13/2021 10:29
  • Ella H

    Nice storyline, but a lot of word errors which stops good flow. Simple editing and spell check would help. Also, mixing too much current things with historical settings is problematic, such as burgers, electrical shock collars, references to King Kong, those type of things should be left out. Storyline is strong enough without them.

    11/13/2021 03:54
  • orchid91

    This book is really intense in places and difficult to read some of the abuse scenes that are portrayed, but that being said the plot is great and I've really found myself drawn into the story and the characters. Can't wait for part 3!!

    11/12/2021 18:59
  • Angel Hedge

    I love this book and hope to see what will happen to the child and the princess as well

    11/12/2021 09:14
  • Tuvo

    good book so far. Chapter 24 is posted twice

    11/12/2021 00:25
  • Meghan Lacy

    I really enjoy this book. has so many twist and turns. you are a good writer and a good author.

    11/11/2021 05:16
  • Chrissy Daugherty

    It’s a good book, but it has a crazy amount of errors. A good editor could do wonders. The duplicate chapters are also frustrating.

    11/11/2021 01:57
  • An Gelica

    made me cry.. poor dani.. sally is a loyal and great friend.

    11/10/2021 14:52
  • Alliah Francis

    I'm not one to write hate comments because I believe that if u don't like a book then just stop reading it and I did stop reading and I only skimmed then immediately deleted it from my library...but this book is just sick...the extreme torture, graphic detail of the act of rape and falling in love with ur rapist?!!...this is just down right traumatic and disregarding becuz I myself am a rape victim

    11/09/2021 13:32
  • Shaunica Titus

    chapter repeats

    11/09/2021 00:58
  • princess

    this is a great book, I read on different site

    11/02/2021 08:54
  • Socky

    Patiently waiting for an update. So many chapters in this book have made my cry. This is such a good story.

    10/29/2021 03:52
  • An Gelica

    do they have on the list of the same plot and story i can read on while we wait in vain

    10/28/2021 11:39
  • An Gelica

    how many weeks do they update this book, i binged read and bought subscription only to find out that this book is not finish.

    10/28/2021 11:38
  • nans@ky.

    just curious didn't she have a mask on that was locked.

    10/25/2021 15:57
  • Claudine Gaffar

    wonderful chapter please update asap!!!

    10/24/2021 20:30
  • Kasma Kalinggalan

    hope theres an update soon 🙏🙏🙏

    10/22/2021 16:40
  • Stephanie Alexander

    I know it’s complete on other apps but why can’t the author just post the whole thing here already 😭😭

    10/22/2021 01:27
  • Destiny Opute

    please update the full story

    10/21/2021 06:17
  • Anita Caxala

    my heart won’t take it if something happens to her 🥺 so sad

    10/20/2021 18:32
  • Reader-529093

    update plz

    10/20/2021 18:01
  • Jessy Castro

    the story is good but the grammar could be better

    10/18/2021 11:56
  • zoe

    when will the next update be plz

    10/17/2021 13:01
  • Ibbsah Khan

    nxt update plz??

    10/16/2021 02:08