The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

Viola Richards

love this book

Chacha Smalls Mentxaka

so what did he lie about that made her run?

Lysette Nunez

love this story

Melissa Lewis

I'm glad you stated Cronos will bring them together, because i was already getting anxious thinking he will break them apart.

i noticed that this author has another book called “Deimos” that is similar to this one.

Charmain Hooker

I’m upto the chapter breathe, I’m so into it but the way she is hurtin him n him her I didn’t I wanna go on haha, is it worth me doin so

Animelover Calhoun

when will we get an update

wait…so he is for real dead?

Tasha Thomas

why kill off dsimos I don't get it

Reader-720443

he matures a lot throughout the book and she just doesn’t 🤦🏽‍♀️

Tammy Payne

I love this book. I’m just said that they are always in turmoil. She wants babies. Let her have babies and be happy.

Reader-096642

I still don’t know her actual name!

Kayla Swick

omg I cried. I am so happy he has a daughter. so very happy. I can also understand why he is strict. it's hard to go from one lifestyle to another because you are trying to do better than your father before you. I understand him. I'm so glad they are happy. this is so amazing and if you ever decide to publish this whether it be self published or through a publishing company, I would buy it in a heartbeat!

thank you for sharing your talents. I enjoyed this book! I can’t wait to read what Phobos and Theia bring on their journey!!

Leisa Tapsell

omg I swear these 2 have bipolar, it’s actually getting ridiculous

natasha wakeford

loved it and so happy you e done another for phobo and theia xx

Love the story, love that she found strength but confused if Deimos was intimate with Theia isn’t that worse than the chosen one although the chapters with the chosen one pained me to read (sending her away to protect her and then bringing her back when Lumina was ready to give birth that cut deep 🥺). Beautiful story overall with the development of characters.

Reader-099611

no good. don’t don’t do it

This was truly and amazing read. I laughed, I cried and my heart pained for Lumina and Demois. I wanted them to have their girl(female). Can’t wait for his POV.

I have really enjoyed this book. I love the author’s language throughout, every time Deimos speaks and says, “yes?” I melt. As this story comes to a close I really hope we hear just a smidge of Phobos & Thiea, that we get to meet Cronos mate & an epilogue with a bow on top! Thank you for a story that really had me feeling all the feels💕

Cronus went straight for Deimo's kneck with his words boi 🤣🥰

It's good to know his point of view.❤

lil'momma25

I don't understand why the hell he keeps putting off mating with her! They have had the Luna ceremony they are together so why wait? So dumb

hm I purchased the Deimos book and I’ve read it till the actual last chapter now I came to read this one and only a few things have changed so far so I’m not sure if it’s worth purchasing this one, can anyone enlighten me if there’s any significant difference between this book and the other one? thanks

She's_Loved

Some parts of the story really baffle me; Rogan tells Luna that Deimos thinks about her all the time, yet he interrupts them as an emergency to tell Deimos to tell her the truth 🤔 Who's side are you on Rogan I'm confused 😕

Bri Winans

Ugh!! What changed in Deimos's eyes????? Like... What caused him to do a 180°???? Is it ever going to explain this??!! Please tell me!!

Reader-009082

so wait did he have sex with the chosen or did he just choose her with the intent to have sex if the child was not a boy?

lil'momma25

I hope she gets to end up with Cronus her mate is an ass

wow such a powerful story! it has really pulled my heartstrings in certain paragraphs where it has brought me to tears! I’ve never read a book that has touched me like this before 😊💜

Robyn Elizabeth Dethloff

chapter “ our farewell” has a entire section of many paragraphs that is double written the editors need to look at.... thank you

Evelyn Selva

I'm so heart broke oh how she lost her pack...is sad.

I’m loving this story although sometimes I find it a little confusing, like important info has been left out or it jumps around abruptly. but can’t stop reading

Julie O'Connor

I just used points to unlock a chapter that was identical to the chapter I read yesterday...... pain of my heart and would you be jealous

Demetria Rocha

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Natasha Shepherd

I’m crying at what happens to him 😭😭 Whyyyyyyyy

Victoria Christine Wyles

this was an amazing story. I found myself drawn into it. crying my eyes out at times.

Waoooo my second favorite story... I have to be honest it took me almost to the edge with the Alpha male personality, but I'm far now from that and love how their love and relationship is not base in trust and real meaning of love. Thank you Author. Question; is the story complete? is says on going but I have not see any updates, I'm not even close to the end but I was just wondering.

Omayra Gomez

why, why would you kill him off???

Alexis Schaffner

loved it… can’t wait for the next one PHOBOS

Catie

This was amazing and well written. I enjoyed it immensely through thick and thin. Satisfying character evolution.

Julie Greenstreet

wow thank you for this beautiful piece of work, never have I read a book that brought so many raw emotions forward , helping me release pent up emotions I never knew were within from a past betrayal. Thank you , please advise of other works of yours

Animelover Calhoun

waiting on updates

I love the new Deimos. opening up and letting his walls down. ❤️

this book has quickly become my favorite I love the way you write, I love how demois and Lumina communicate, the terms they use their endearment and wording is foreign and beautiful to me! I wish I spoke so much from the heart. I see you....

I loved Deimos view! it really showed how she broke down his walls time and time again and then stitched them back together with her love and by baring her soul to his and his to her....

Remy Bergez

My heart breaks for her, legit I almost cried when her Mate continually breaks her heart and spirit and claims ignorance 💔 😢 He doesn't deserve her!

Elizabeth Stephens

is there any way i could get my eyes on the original one that you had to remove please?? i started readin it online then got to chapter "who is she" n couldn't read it or further..... i honestly have to say I prefer how you were writin that one more than this one bein edited version

Neva Shay Spencer

how often do you update I dont want to get side tracked and miss an update so into both of your books in this series now so amazing!!!

Hello my females ❤️ I just wished to inform you there is one last epilogue I shall put out and from there I shall publish a few DEIMOS POV chappies for you to indulge it so you can acquire a glimpse into his heart! I apologize I am not updating regularly TAVT because it is in a way complete and I am so occupied working on PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Hope you are enjoying TAVT! Thank you for your love and support 💕 Happy reading, Liz

Reader-867183

I mean… he put her through hell, her life appears far worse and she should have stronger trust issues than him. yet somehow she’s always the lost puppy following him. waiting on him. it’s ridiculous really. so far, all I see is that he lost his parents. she was humiliated, in a cell much of her life locked away, had to fight for everything she had, not Even Named- yet he’s so much more bruised than her? she pines for him, yet he doesn’t as any other mate with her?! I’m tired of it really! he’s lost my trust.

Reader-867183

so far it seems to me she’s been through far worse and let him in. why can’t he let her in?! why is she always begging for his love yet he barely gives to her?!

I am completely engrossed in this story and I’m dying to read more, even though it’s turned me into a complete emotional wreck!

oh Liz thank you so much once again I love your writing… I hope we see a little girl coming soon on the epilogues and I am loving Phobos already! 🙏🏻❤️

Rose SB

Far too often you are duplicating paragraphs. So you need a proofreader?

Ellen Mcbroom

hmm don’t trust him

Reader-890821

goooooooood

Karen Childers

I loved this book…. I cried when their souls joined…. finally!!!! beautifully written 🥰

Astrid Motik

Kinda dont like d lead as he shows nothing but being an egoistical ass

Rebecc S

the plots are engaging! good job!

Magdolna Szabo

Why you put the alpha female in weak character?She most be reject him at all cost!You put her in humiliet all the time thats shame!

just reading the private BBQ part with Jace. is Ragon into men? sweet if he is. just wondering. also be lovely to see Elriam, Ragon and Jace with someone xxx

EmiSky

Such a emotional roller coaster!! i got to the italy pack bbq and no am sooo sad.. Someone tell me its not true 😱😱

bells

I canNOT put this book down omg!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stephanie Diekmann

seriously??. im bored at this point...

Reader-933003

reading this is painful , started with good story line but grammar is awful, there no insight into their behaviour or back story, I’m done the grammar just makes it too difficult to read

Ke'Londa Escalante

why did you kill him off without at least letting her have his pups?

Samantha Johnson

omg... You are brilliant for this book. It is beautiful!

Cheynne Zacharias

I read 2 chapters back to back that were the exact same but written differently?

Sara Rastellini

I'm highly disappointed strong my foot she can't even protect her pack, big talk no action. and I had such high hopes that have been dashed before the second chapter....

Rochelle Massey

good book so far

what the hell are they hiding from her her? it better not be a arranged marriage!

Beth Piontkowski

did they have sex?

beautiful simply beautiful I love this book it make me cry so much but also laugh and angry so many emotions... so happy for them... I wanna a baby girl. i am not ready for the end. but want to see Elriam and Chronus mates

Booklover99

Hey Luna 😘 I am waiting patiently for the next epilogue. I really love your book sooo much like I have no words to express myself. You write so emotionally that I feel it in my heart. I loved how the characters developed and how strong the female character is. I have read your book twice and I cannot stop myself from reading again. Pleasee update TAVT ASAP. I am dying 😩

Reader-099242

this last chapter was so amazing and everything I’ve been waiting for. their relationship has always been so special but after going through that really rough time, it makes this chapter so much more meaningful. I’m going to miss this book and these character

I will be looking forward to reading about “King Kal” & his sister when they grow up 😁😁

Mrs. Camden

i am really liking this book. more than any other book ive read.

wait, so what happened with the necklace from the market? I cannot for the life of me find it appearing again in the story.

Margaret Kuntschik

i have just started reading this book. So far I am enjoying it.

Rule 30

ye guys not cool all the spoilers... even if there are plot twist it's as if ppl would scream "Jon snow died". who cares what's next. don't ruin important part of a story even if it's not the absolute end 😔

is there an eta for the next chapter? i loved the story thus far the naked chapter was just beautiful!

Angel Lee Blackwell

so far I like it

Heather Wood

I have fallen in love with these characters and can’t wait to see how their story progresses. Beautifully written-heart wrenching- this makes a good read for me. I love when stories bring out intense emotions from me.. keep up the great work, I’ll be patiently waiting for updates 💕

kitty5127

a Luna is equal to an alpha so why is she not acting like the alpha she is??

very disappointed with the “Seduction & Punishment” chapter when she sparred with the Kind Alpha. I expected more out of her fighting skills against him because she’s suppose to be the Alpha Female. So badass she sat in the second seat at the Alpha conference. I don’t even think the King broke out in a sweat.

Enough is enough! I know the whole chosen mate thing was a slap in the face, extremely hurtful! So either leave or forgive him! This man is suffering and he clearly loves her dirty drawers. At this point, she’s just being spiteful and petty. Not a good look at all!

Paula Lewis

love your stories! I can’t wait to read them all

Jane Above Story

I really adore this book. her wolf wants to submit but she stays strong like a true alpha. it's cute! the feelings and emotions are so overwhelming! and the scene she was being abused by rogues, I was about to cry!!

Krystal A Beyal

he's nice to her now and she just falls in his lap. stupid female.

Mineliz Pham

can’t get Enough of the story, i’m just so twisted I want her to forgive him but at the same time I want her to make it hard for him. and she has made it really hard so far

Samantha

I’m reading TAVT and Phobos semi-concurrently and just realized my major confusion with the two stories…isn’t the oldest male (or female in TAVT) typically the Alpha? Phobos is Deimos’ older brother so do we find out why Phobos winds up not being the Alpha of Alphas? L.o.v.e the stories so far but just haven’t been able to wrap my head around that. Thank you for any clarification!😊

Kira Madden

I'm confused. Is she a strong alpha or is she another whiny woman who can't do anything when it comes to a male alpha?

Reader-020316

this is my first time crying to a level of sobbing because of a book after new moon and Harry potter book 7. this book is amazing so far.

Reader-286149

I truly enjoyed the story! it was well written so I could just let myself fall into the story and not worry about grammatical errors, etc! Rich characters, I wish Lumina had forgiven Deimos sooner but in the end they found their way back🥰 I hope you are or will write about Phobos & Theia as well as Cronus: they each deserve a story of their own. Again thank for sharing your gift!

Sarah-jane Wilson

bit annoyed with her! she says why did he not just once choose her over his pack but he did he chose to take the silver knife that was meant for her in Italy. surely there is no greater sacrifice he could have given?

Lady Scorcher

If she’s suppose to be an alpha why is it all she ever does is cry. So far all she’s done is kill that 1 female she thought he was sleeping with. where’s her dominance? I hope she asserts herself soon because I’m not having much respect for this tear filled submissive.

Kaiyere Jones

I have never in the hundreds of books I have read had a story humble, weaked strengthen and tear open my soul the way that this book did 😢 I love love loved the poetic writing of it 👍👍👍 wonderfully written

Reader-176458

are the Deimos POV chapters out yet?

Beckyboone1

Do we ever find out what Jace wanted to talk to Lumina about right before her heat?

Christie Rayner

Can yall please stop writing major plot twists in the comments.. they show up everytime I log on its killing the story for me.