The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

this is a beautiful story you had me crying when he was stabbed and then the chosen one smh had my emotions all over the place…I was content with what happened to her. will there be an epilogue?

How long hVe they been together? It seems a year but the last couple of chapters wording implies years

Red

Love this book, Luna Liz! 💚🍀 I can't get enough of this story and your writing style is wonderful. Keeps me wanting to read more. I have never been as engrossed with a book as much as I am with this one. Thank you for this amazing book. 💚💚🍀🍀🍀

Lisa Evonne Powers

this is the same exact story of another book in reading. Did you write under a different name?

Kristen Dianne

so like why do you have to unlock every chapter.. it’s annoying 💀

is this book finished?

Taylor Holley

loving this so far, slightly confused in this chapter how it went from ragon bursting in to Cronus taking her shopping tho? guessing was a name swap on accident

sofa scene copies a bit of Bridgerton, Daphne and Simon bedroom scene where she gets what she wants from him 🙈 good though!

that's was such a great read, thank you so much and I hope on more updates on Phobos, I actually started reading first.

I really love this book. I have never had so many emotions reading a book. Especially the chapter with the chosen in it.I found myself really upset. But why did he bring the chosen with him when she was given birth? He could have seen what the sex was and kept her at the other camp.And was he going to go through with it if she had a girl.

Dana Lynn

will there be a second book for Deimos and Lumina??

Tina Brooks

I love your story so far.

Cassie McNeely

is it just me? what is her name? did I miss it somewhere? it's always alpha, Luna or mate.

Reader-200729

Wow! I love your story!

Reader-134850

wenn ich schon pro Kapital zahlen muss wäre es echt nett wenn die Kapitel nicht DOPPELT! wären!

armay buckman

did Deimos really die..?

Jenny Best Camacho

wow !!! is all I can say. this story with its twist and turns had me at the edge. It played with my emotions, made me fall deep into it like it was mine to live. The best story I has came across. EXCELLENT!!!!

is this still ongoing? I'm up to the latest chapter, Naked. it's flipping brilliant 🥰🥰🥰

Ok. I like Thiea now lol. And I’m here for Lumina and Thies’s friendship! ❤️

Angel Last

hmmm

I love the way he loves her! He has grown so much. 😩💖

Sandra Smith Winston

I liked the beginning it was different

Reader-232328

isn’t this the same story as the one by lizy fatima, i’m confused

Tasha Thomas

why kill off deimks

Chelsea Kimchoy

I LOVE your book. I see and feel both sides but lumina is kind of making me upset. she is acting like a spoiled brat. Deimos is trying but she gave him hope just to rip it away the next day!

hey Luna Liz 💖🌃 chapter - make a wise desicion. Deimos has grey eyes... the beginning needs a little bit of editing like the rest of the book has been done (I'm sure you wrote that you were editing it backwards to the beginning? unless I've mistaken that with another author.) I find your writing, especially the later parts to the book, brilliant. this will be my 2nd time reading it in full. I personally would love more physical description of Lumina and Deimos, ages, heights, would be a lovely addition. 💖

how often are your updates?

Tina Shelton

I loved this book. It kept me intrigued. I didn't get bored at all. I would read until i fell asleep. Great job on this one. Can't wait to read the one with his brother. Has it been written and posted yet?

Reader-185116

how is she an alpha and she acting like a whole Mitch I the beginning 🤷🏽‍♀️

Rachel Moye

Where did that bad a$$ b*tch that killed that female and doesn't share go? It's was truly annoying to see her turn so weak! Lacks the the strength to stand by her conviction and it's so disappointing! Cronos is awesome!!

Just throw her away! I can’t stand her now! 😩

Melissa Lewis

i feel like Ragon is driving them apart. he always seem to interrupt them at the right exact moment.

EveUwU

so far the story is excellant. keep up the hard work.

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Ashley Pacheco

wait so deimos really does die?

Christinas Death

how did she get un handcuffed

Kimberly White

From the way it is written, I am going to guess that English is not this writers first language. Also, I'm getting tired of almost every werewolf story I read on these reading apps all starting off or containing a continuous theme of abusive mates. I'm over people glorifying it or using it as a crutch to propel their stories forward.

Tiffany Pendergrass

How often do you put out new chapters? I just finished what is available and ready for more :). I love it, thank you!

Nur Lights

I love it

Reader-176458

am definitely shipping Cronus and Luna

feedmebooks13

I like the story overall. It would be nice to have more information behind Deimos’ thinking sometimes. And it’s odd how suddenly they’ve been together for 3 years even though previous chapters make it seem like things have going on for maybe a year tops. Just weird to mention the timeframe so out of the blue. In later chapters the word “whilst” shows up A LOT ... would recommend a little more editing on that end as well.

Kayla Swick

I'm confused by this. it's the same story as the other Deimos. am I missing something?

Anisha S.

I just started and I must say why she made to seem weak. the minute she stepped in the hall and her aura gave me boss vibes and by the time she went back to her pack she was like a shrimp that couldn’t hold her own. ima keep reading to se if it gets better but I feel like the guy saves the day.

Jarrline Ogunti

I really hope she gets through to him.

thank you 🙏🏻❤️ I do have one question… the name of the new pup 👧

Ellen Shazel

If Ragon interrupt them 1 more time

Heather Littlefield

one minute he’s all over theia and the next she’s no where to be found?!?! wth

Roger Murtaugh

glad to see this here!!! this is amazing story!!! one of my favorites. The author is amazing as well!!! you guys will not be disappointed!!!

Jasmin Mortimer

I was not able to stop reading this book. I laughed, cried, and felt both of their pain. Awesome Book!

Ellen Shazel

You originally said Ragon burst into the room, now Cronus is the 1 that she's with🤔

yes please continue to write more POV

Luna Liz I purchased the old version Deimos, how can I download this version without having to repurchase?

Lisa Casalez

This is an amazing story so far.

Perfection love love the ending thank you

listen this book is taking me through so many emotions! lol “so now she’s your mate” Say it louder Cronus.

Beautiful

lmao...when she battled old girl. 🙌🏾

this was the best ending I could have wished for this book! absolutely perfection! loved it

Lucy Xiong

hehe I was hoping for a peek of phobo and theia story here lol

Fiso Tusitala

enjoying the beautiful story

Beautiful, love the ending with Deimos Pov 💗💗 hope you might sell hardcopies of your books in future I would buy such a great author.

Thank you for this story, love, love Deimos and Lumina. Love Deimos POV. Also reading Thobos and Theia. ❤

Kathryn Penaloza

I SHIP IT SO HARD- To think she used to despise him- Also, thank you author for blessing me with this incredibly written novel!!

BexyCL

My heart is swelled with pride!

Vaughn Allison

I do like it so far.

raven Coleman

Would u be jealous and my heart in pain are the same thing repeated

Kayla Swick

I can't believe it's over! my heart aches because it's over with, but I am so happy for them. tears of joy for sure. they both went through so much heartache and I do believe that in the end, Deimos finally deserved her. at first, she was too good for him, but he proved over time just have much he loved her and needed her. I can't wait to continue Phobos' story and I definitely can't wait for Cronus' story. he was also a favorite of mine.

Melody Cawthra

I have been through every single emotion in this story. I have felt the rawness & passion of your words. thank you for giving me Deimos’ POV. it ended their journey beautifully for me.

Beckyboone1

the latest chapter is beautiful! I am now reading through again. a random question...Will we ever find out why Ragon likes to take so many pictures of Lumina? Everytime I read that he has taken a picture it makes me laugh.

Fantastic story totally enjoyed reading this! looking forward to reading Phobos & Theia story

what happened to Theia? She’s suddenly gone.

I was so hoping that Deimos would finally have his redemption and be able to support Lumina to birth their second child. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story Luna Liz.

Candace Hays

the last book alpha of alphas, it's kinda sad. plus my last post was deleted

so glad they are finding each other again!! why was he crying though, what's makes him so worried to come together?

oh they definitely learned! 😂

Luna liz this ending was soo beautiful I cannot even put it into words!!! soo emotional it was perfect you are very talented!!!!

Jing Jing

she is exaggerating in my opinion. he didn't cheat on her, he is just following tradition. i understand she gets upset but it took her forever to forgive. 🫁

Sara Rastellini

great another weak female heroine who can't resist a hot guy for more than a paragraph...

Michelle Vogt

I never been an avid reader or who could sit and read for along period of time. You have completely changed me. There was so much eagerness that I couldn't put this down and I woke up wanting to read more. Thank you for this beautiful story.

Geli83

loving this story so much.

lizzylizard

getting through a good portion of this and I realized I don’t even know the main characters name as I’ve only heard her be referred as “alpha, mate and Luna.” does she have a name??

Carol Dionne

Yessss! I love it 🥰 They finally have a girl in the family 💕

Devin Dagbjorn

lots of weird sentences. Example: Closing my eyes shut. Do you ever close something open????

Will we find out more about what her friend the doctor wanted? He said he wanted to talk to her about something but some drama happened shortly after. I think she went into heat maybe 🤔.

I really fell into this story and enjoyed the evolution of the relationships. one of my fav reads so far. this definitely too me on a emotional roller coaster.

Prentella Wilkerson

Agreed! I'm tired of being angry. Now I'm skipping chapters to find peace and change. Sure, I'll go back and read it but she goes to the extreme. She embrace and except the good, but lose her mind with the bad ways of their traditions. I agree that he needs to be punished but not completely broken.

Bridgette Bastin

When will the next update be due?

Reader-675304

I love this story!

ELISABETTA HINES

Just started reading this book, THE ALPHA has already pissed me off 3 times. Can't wait to see what the Luna/Tribute will do. Interesting🥰

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Mary Alexander

I am done reading since he died.

Bri Winans

author why are you breaking my heart???😭😭💔💔 please tell me it gets happier!!!

Becky Oloarte

so it started good, it engaged me, however it quickly became repetitive, too repetitive for my taste, it makes the whole experience frustrating. I don't hate it by any means, but I'm not sure I'll finish it, It's becoming quite tiresome to read...

i don’t understand we pais for Deimos and now this one has been put on and with updates so we will have chapters here and there its not nice that we have to go from one to the other when reread it 😕 becaus I will read again as its an amazing book but now got bit confusing...and I has to find put by accident this one while waiting for updates on Deimos 😭.. also I did like the Deimos Book tittle better ...

Tilly Lueloff

skylyn just read till the end trust me

why is the original Deimos Alpha of Alphas no longer available?

Meghan wohlscheid

the way he treats her! I just started reading this story but so sad

I loved this book! I went from not liking Deimos to loving him. There was so much growth with him and I loved every bit of it. Growth as a man, as a father, and a lover ❤️. Let me head on over to read Phobos and Theia’s story. Hands down one of my favorite stories! 💞

Taurica Davis

is there a way to just buy the whole book at once? I love what I’ve read thus far.