My Brother's Bitch Comments

  • Debra Shahani

    I'm a little confused, the numbers don't add up. Jake left home at 16, served to terms in the marines. has been out for 2 years. that should make him 26 - 28. But then he says he wants to know what happened 18 years ago, which would make him 34?

    09/06/2023 16:46

  • Sierra Kinney

    I gotta say, after all the waiting and buildup, I'm pretty disappointed that we skipped over their first time. The book is tagged erotica... pretty vanilla if you ask me.

    08/02/2023 16:38

  • Ana Rivera

    This book 📖 is interesting 🤔 👌 😳 👀

    07/07/2023 23:29

  • ATk

    #winbonus

    07/05/2023 22:22

  • Reisha Campbell

    this book is giving me chills down my spine how sexy

    07/05/2023 16:16

  • Reisha Campbell

    OHHH the plot thickens

    07/05/2023 16:04

  • Reisha Campbell

    ohh I do not think that is a good idea

    07/05/2023 15:53

  • Reisha Campbell

    OMG well I did not seeing that coming what a twist

    07/05/2023 15:42

  • Reisha Campbell

    hey thT is not nice not nice at all

    07/05/2023 15:26

  • Reisha Campbell

    I like it so far so good

    07/05/2023 15:15

  • Reisha Campbell

    ok this is a great start starting to get hot

    07/05/2023 15:00

  • Shzaqte

    So far this is a good book, looking forward to the story. But have to ask, why in so many books is it said that "you have a new brother," or something along those lines. Imo they aren't siblings if they didn't grow up together or meet in adulthood. Don't ever force or have relationships expectations with people especially your kids

    06/15/2023 23:02

  • Daisy Francisco

    Payton-AS This is really a good book to read,it’s interesting and quite intriguing.I think I will add to my list,I love it

    06/15/2023 15:57

  • Ana

    Payton-AS I haven't heard of this book and it's not really something that I usually read I tend to read other styles of books but I have added it to my library to read at a later stage

    06/15/2023 11:06

  • Martial Flor

    Payton-AS I have actually had this story in my library for a while, I did read a few chapters back then and then kept it aside for "when I finish reading the three hundred books I'm reading now". and honestly I really want to start reading this again! it's quite well written and luckily it doesn't really go for the tacky approach

    06/15/2023 10:35

  • miss foodieeee😋😋😋

    Payton-As this is something I would wanna read but just having the thought of step bro romance just gives me cringe. Not offending whosever likes to read them but this just ain't my type 😁😁 though would like to read other books of the writer with other contents 😊😊😅😅

    06/15/2023 10:12

  • Joele G

    Payton-AS This story is very intriguing; not my norm of books to read but the story plot has gotten my attention; the writing of the story and characters are very well develop. Enjoying it so far.

    06/15/2023 07:47

  • Lori Holden

    Payton-AS. good intro, I have already added it. I am wondering why Payton has a bad feeling about Ronald. why didn't Ronald get along with his son and why be rude about how she dresses what is the mom's issue

    06/15/2023 07:28

  • Debra Sykes

    Payton-AS I am really enjoying this book even though its not my usual read. I had this book in my library but never started it now I've read 2 chapters and I will keep reading on. I don't like Paytons mom Jakes dad but also want to find out what happened.

    06/15/2023 06:21

  • Nims karunarathne

    Payton-AS this sounds incest and forbidden. but I can see how nicely it’s written and how perfectly the characters are developed. I think I’m gonna add story and give it a go. hopefully this will have an unexpected twist and ends in a good way.

    06/15/2023 06:08

  • Terri Bonomelli

    Payton-AS The characters in the book are well developed. I am really enjoying the chemistry between Payton and Jake and can't wait to see how it plays out. The hints of intrigue around Jake's mother's death add an interesting plot to the story.

    06/15/2023 04:26

  • Awurabena Afriyie Asare

    Payton-AS I believe this story would be an interesting story because the intro gives an in depth information on what to expect. Relationship between family members can be something else. Like this one they are not related by blood but by marriage. Any sexual relationship between Payton and her step brother may be frowned upon including both parents.

    06/15/2023 04:17

  • jules kc

    Payton-AS I like the story idea and I would love to continue this book. The authors style is nice and I'm always here for a tabu-subject, so I like the stepsister-stepbrother thing as they're not blood related, it's absolutely okay :)

    06/15/2023 04:07

  • Mirela

    PaytonAS It seems to be a good story. I like the idea of a badboy in the story that fall inlove with the innocent girl, but I kind of dislike the fact they are stepbrother and stepsister. I know they are not blood related but it's kind of creepy.

    06/15/2023 04:05

  • cutesnake

    Payton-AS. Seems like it wouldn't be my choice of book to read as the genre doesn't match my taste. Looks like it's an easy to figure out story as well. So yup next story.

    06/15/2023 04:03

  • exty

    Payton-AS this story has a good beginning when the female character wants to take a bold step but the introduction of the step brother makes it complicated.how I wish it was far distance cousin of her step father.but let me finish the book but I jump to conclusion.

    06/15/2023 03:54

  • Kristen Lewis

    Payton-AS The introduction just does not grab my attention. I can almost see the plot in my head, there is no pull, no mystery. Her step-brother moves in and they get together, there is no twist to intrigue you or distinguish this from any other forbidden love story.

    06/15/2023 03:34

  • Donna Pember

    Payton-AS I love the first few chapters of this book. Great storyline and writing. I will definitely be reading the rest of this book. Can't wait to see where the story goes

    06/15/2023 03:22

  • Karin Tuchman

    Payton-AS the introduction is erotic but the lack of mystery to pull you in to the book to make is exotic to the reader ti make it impossible to pass By it . it just feels like another taboo book and that's a miss . hope the writer can see that and maybe take the book to the next level .I hope for the future that the book will get the spice it needs because it failed to grab my attention

    06/15/2023 03:13

  • Janaki Kollepalli

    Payton-AS... the introduction is erotic but there is no mystery to attract you to say the story is unique or different... feels similar to incest or taboo relationships... but it really didn't feel exciting to grab my attention

    06/15/2023 03:08

  • Alyssa

    Payton-AS I really dislike it when titles of books are misleading. Her mom married his dad, that does not make them brother and sister. It’s painfully obvious from the first glance that Roland is an abusive, controlling jerk and her mom is thoroughly under his thumb. I’m just hoping he gets his comeuppance.

    06/15/2023 03:03

  • Kirsten Tooker

    Payton-AS The introduction didn’t grab my attention but I still decided to read a couple chapters to give it fair chance. Unfortunately it still wasn’t grabbing me so I’m afraid this going to be a pass.

    06/15/2023 02:56

  • Doobies

    Payton-AS - Intro left me feeling rather “meh”, but the first couple chapters seem much better than I expected based on the synopsis. I guess I’ll need to read a bit more before I make up my mind on this story. x

    06/15/2023 02:55

  • TinyReader

    Payton-AS Ignore the title, they are NOT related. The set up for the book does not even begin to describe the spice. Very mature content when it gets to it. And I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

    06/15/2023 02:16

  • icuovrthere

    Payton-AS the summary didn't really capture my attention, but upon reading other reviews people said to read the first couple chapters - and they are right. The first chapter introduces the key characters but has an feeling of mystery and a little suspense. I look forward to reading more to see if the chapters continue the same feeling and buildup

    06/15/2023 02:15

  • Jacquelyn Leedy

    Payton-AS I typically do not care for MC books. However, this one is good so far. I like the marine back story. I'm not a fan of the title. So far it's been mostly about Jake and his story. I'm curious when the author will begin to develop Payton more and the Payton/Jake relationship.

    06/15/2023 01:44

  • Tricia Freligh

    Payton-AS So after reading a couple of chapters I am hooked. I am really liking the story. The intro wasn’t that catching but I am glad a gave it a chance. I have added it to the library.

    06/15/2023 01:40

  • Tonya S. Eaddy

    Payton -AS. I was not going to read this story! But I am so glad that I did. It introduced me to a great author. After reading the first couple of chapters I was drawn in. I love the fact that there was follow through with the last chapter telling us what happened to Roland. I love a happily ever after with a realistic end. Payton and Jake seem like a couple I would love to hear about as they move on with life.

    06/15/2023 01:30

  • Ashley

    Payton-AS The introduction did not really catch my attention however I started reading the first couple of chapters and I do not want to stop. It is a short story so that is a plus. I will continue to read this and see how everything turns out.

    06/15/2023 01:04

  • Traci Williams

    Payton-AS Great start. The title is cringey, and I was fully prepared to be reading some raunchy story that bordered on incest. I’m pleasantly surprised that isn’t the case. I’m going to add this to my TBR list. The underlying story is really interesting, and I’m eager to see where it goes.

    06/15/2023 00:54

  • Sammy

    Payton-AS I can't say no to a MC story and after reading a few chapters, I added straight to my library. Glad that the book is completed, however, I did come across inconsistencies with the timelines and hoping that the story gets proofread because it has great potential.

    06/14/2023 23:39

  • Valkentina

    Payton-AS The story is really keeping you reading and the characters are well written. Roland depicts the classic shady ass soon to be politician, but the hot point are the stepbrothers, somehow seems sick to think of something like that, but on the other hand I really wanna know what they will do, and I hope Jake will protect Payton and Laura from Roland.

    06/14/2023 22:41

  • KKH

    Payton-AS Great start. it really pulls you in. The father Roland is a real piece of work. I can already tell he had something to do with the mom’s death and I’m sure a lot of other underhanded things going on in that city. Plus the way he treats his son and his wife. Appalling!

    06/14/2023 22:26

  • Fernanda Neto

    Payton-AS Na minha lista de leitura. A introdução levou-me a ler os primeiros capítulos e gostei. Espero que a história não desenvolva para uma mistura de humilação/submissão mas sim para uma relação em que a atracção cresce para algo maior.

    06/14/2023 21:57

  • AngelaCCoelho

    Payton-AS. But what an introduction is this OMG... with that alone you can see that the book must be very good, engaging and captivating. I haven't read anything by this author yet, but I can't wait to read this book. 🤩

    06/14/2023 21:49

  • Bianca Bratu

    Payton-AS I like this story even from the very first chapters. It seems to have a captivating plot so far, it got me hooked and I couldn’t stop reading. I added it to my libraru and I will surely finish it.

    06/14/2023 20:59

  • Kitty-694016

    Payton-AS. the title of this book leaves a lot to be desired. I am also not intrigued by the storyline. I like a good romance but this smacks of someone being taken advantage of. the first chapter has a great lead in for a person who enjoys this type of story. sadly this is way too close to home with the manipulations to be an enjoyable read for me

    06/14/2023 20:16

  • Anna Lipton

    Payton-AS. The introduction and the first couple of chapters had me hooked. I was a little skeptical at first with the title, but after I starting to read it, I could not stop.

    06/14/2023 20:07

  • Caitlin Sullivan

    Payton-AS ... so this book has caught my interest. I am a sucker for a good biker book, and though the step brother angle is a bit weird for me but I'll try it

    06/14/2023 20:05

  • Viking-Luna

    Payton-AS Good first chapter and definitely has added mystery to it. Best get reading the second chapter and see what happened with Father and Son becoming estranged.

    06/14/2023 19:51

  • Aisha Ali

    Payton-AS I really love book bikers they are so possessive and obsessed with their lovers I hope this one is just the same as the few ones I've read will be reading it soon enough

    06/14/2023 19:26

  • yes sir

    payton-as the introduction was good at first I was interested to read then after it's looked as different story not what I imagined I added it to my library to read more later

    06/14/2023 19:15

  • Sara Arfaei

    Payton-AS I am not really into this type of story, and I also don’t like the name. I don’t mind reading hot romance and sexy scenes through the stories, but when the whole story plot turns around sex and dirty talk, then I wouldn’t like to read it.

    06/14/2023 19:10

  • melalv28

    Payton-AS Aside from a not so great title, the book is intriguing from the very beginning. The instant attraction of both characters is fire. The plot of the book flows and the clues for plot twists are what will keep you reading.

    06/14/2023 18:55

  • aduke woolford

    Payton-AS This book has me enthralled I read the introduction and added it to my library it seems interesting so far, I like the writer's style and the themes chosen looking forward to continuing with the book.

    06/14/2023 18:38

  • JustBee

    Payton-AS This book has a lot of potential to be phenomenal, the plot is there and the writer has something good going on with the profile of each character. The title, synopsis and cover of the book are the unfortunate elements of this book. I am also not a fan of Motorcycle Club books, I just don’t understand the concept of a Motorcycle Club. But this book is really interesting and would recommend it to anyone.

    06/14/2023 18:18

  • Jill Robinson

    Payton-AS I really don't like the title of this book but putting that aside I love contemporary story. So have started reading the beginning of this story and so far it's really well written and draws you in, looking forward to reading more.

    06/14/2023 18:09

  • Reader-981734

    Payton-As: Another book to add to my reading list (which is growing fast). Only read the first few chapters, the story is entertaining so far. I like the writing and the story line. I already hate the step-father/father and feel bad for Payton’s mother….

    06/14/2023 17:55

  • Caroline Hubbard

    Payton-AS Normally I don't read contemporary books book I find myself enjoying this story very much. Another to add to my reading list. Looking forward to reading the rest of the book

    06/14/2023 17:37

  • Irma Beck

    Payton-AS What an interesting story line so far. loving the characters and looking forward to see how they unfold as well as the story line. loving how Jake introduced himself to Payton it was definitely a different idea and absolutely loved it. makes me wonder how their relationship is going to pan out definitely adding this my library. can't wait to read further.

    06/14/2023 17:36

  • Victoria Murray

    Payton-AS I have gotten to the third chapter and it is interesting so far. It didn't take long for the author to introduce the mystery in. I can already that this is going to see that there will be some steamy scenes and added it to my library.

    06/14/2023 16:34

  • Paula Almeida

    Payton-as. I have read a couple of books where the stepbrother or stepbrothers have been involved and I am super excited to read this book. I hope Payton and the stepbrother don’t have to jump over to many hurdles to be happy.

    06/14/2023 16:23

  • Ledia Cela

    Payton-AS I’m trying very hard to continued reading the story but I didn’t find myself on it… finally it’s not my type of book…

    06/14/2023 16:10

  • AmberLu

    Payton-AS i really dont know if i like this one. i think its not for me

    06/14/2023 16:08

  • WynnRN

    Payton-AS This was a great book! Well written and kept my interest throughout. Along with the romance and very hot steamy scenes there was danger and a twisty mystery that surprised me. I will definitely check out anything else written by this author... well done!

    06/14/2023 15:23

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    Payton-AS I tried really hard to like this story, but it is truly not for me. I had to shake myself awake several times ro read through a chapter. After a few chapters I just had to give up.

    06/14/2023 15:23

  • Helen M

    Payton-AS I really like a good MC Romance book. The introduction has piqued my interest and has raised soooo many questions that I just need to find the answers to. I'm definitely adding to my library to read later. Payton-AS

    06/14/2023 15:21

  • KMKC11

    Payton-AS I was a little iffy when I saw the title of this book but once I started reading, I couldn’t stop. Jake and Payton are so cute together and the secondary characters add so much to the story. I’m a little disappointed in the ending, I feel like some additional closure is needed for Jake and Payton (so, ahem sequel please!) but overall this is probably one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here.

    06/14/2023 14:40

  • Reader-231656

    Payton-AS i don’t think i was prepared for that one for sure. It feels good and the erotic side of the book is definitely top notch. i need more books like that to get its own movie or series as it’s soooo addictive.

    06/14/2023 14:34

  • Lisa Cuddeback

    Payton-AS The start of the book makes you think it will be a slow read but as you get further in, you will be hooked. The book is one you will not want to put down. Hanging on the edge of your seat to see what unfolds.

    06/14/2023 14:11

  • Brenda Kay

    Payton-AS what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.

    06/14/2023 13:41

  • Leré Saunderson

    Payton-AS Woah! Eroticism on steroids! I think we have all been at the place where we meet a guy and our best laid plans for our futures get placed aside to indulge in the affair. Who know, this could be love!

    06/14/2023 12:42

  • Efrat Katz

    Payton-AS the intro had me interested and I am definitely saving this to my library to read later. I like the biker motif and I hope it is well written enough to not ruin the mood

    06/14/2023 12:39

  • Kobie Stroebel

    Payton-AS love the first chapter

    06/14/2023 12:38

  • Vicki usher

    Payton-AS I already added this book to my library but am yet to read it. It looks like a very good read to me it's different and interesting, the introduction makes it intriguing its not a long introduction but it had me hooked. its definitely next on my list to read without a doubt.

    06/14/2023 12:37

  • Amal Samir

    Payton-AS, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next. The story line seems interesting and fun to read. I would like to see how she will deal with him.

    06/14/2023 12:14

  • Alice Pinto

    Payton-AS this genre of books isn’t normally the kind that I read. the synopsis isn’t very long, but it sets the mood of the story. I like the fact that there isn’t too much chapters.

    06/14/2023 12:07

  • SpudFoxy22

    Payton-AS definitely going to have to give this one a try like others have said the intro definitily got me interested 😍😍

    06/14/2023 12:04

  • SamVitto

    partly cute .. but also creepy

    05/13/2023 10:01

  • Bonnie M

    Are you still going to do a sequel

    04/21/2023 18:28

  • Trisha Sandhu

    can’t wait to read it!!! love these types of books

    04/13/2023 01:36

  • nasnas

    k8f6 This whole challenge makes me add more books to my reading list, look forward to reading it. Does anybody know it it's finished? And if it has a happy ending? I'm a sucker for happy endings.

    04/01/2023 23:39

  • Stacey Stratton

    k8f6 not sure about the title of the book, but the intro is super steamy! I’m definitely going to give it a try!

    04/01/2023 21:00

  • Megan Phillips

    k8f6- do not like the title of the book, but so far the start of the book is good.

    04/01/2023 20:36

  • John Robinson

    k8f6 Don't like the title but the beginning of the story is well written and makes me want to read more.

    04/01/2023 20:26

  • Terrin Garis

    #k8f6# Interesting Story - I enjoyed the intrigue and taboo nature of the book. Interested in reading more!

    04/01/2023 20:15

  • Vicki usher

    k8f6# I came across this book recently and it looks so good, I can't wait to start it. From the reviews I have seen looks like it will be a good one.

    04/01/2023 20:07

  • Gemma Butler

    k8f6 Interesting book introduction, although I’m not a fan of the title. I’ve added it to my library. Any updates if there is going to be a sequel?

    04/01/2023 20:06

  • Emily

    k8f6 absolutely loved the story. I didn’t think the title is fitting at all and I first hesitated to read it but the characters are lovely and worth the read

    04/01/2023 20:06

  • Angelz

    Love this Story!!!♡♡

    02/17/2023 05:31

  • Jennifer Andrus

    sequel????

    07/25/2022 18:54

  • Vicky Ilievska

    Will there be a sequel?

    06/20/2022 04:33

  • Rosemary Mwikali

    I love the book

    06/10/2022 16:28

  • astrea

    SAUNTERING not santuring. Use spellcheck

    06/09/2022 07:57

  • Theresa Robinson

    love the story pls fix the timeliness tho.

    05/06/2022 03:05

  • joselyn perez

    Hi so does the story end at chapter 65? or is there going to be more to this story?

    05/03/2022 00:12

  • Barbara Hunter

    really enjoying this book. great work!

    03/30/2022 07:16

  • ish85

    loving the book can't wait for more how fast do the the updates come

    03/28/2022 15:14

  • LBowers

    cannot wait for the next updat

    03/21/2022 04:25

  • TNB

    How often are updates?

    03/21/2022 02:42
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