Werewolf's Heartsong Comments

  • Reader-120123

    great so far. really like characters and where story is going

    10/30/2023 14:24

  • Visitor

    great read

    10/30/2023 12:43

  • Visitor

    👏🏻👏🏻

    10/30/2023 09:09

  • Visitor

    its a fun read

    10/30/2023 07:35

  • Rachie O'Brien

    I really like the story, the story itself is excellent and the author clearly has a lot of potential but the constant pov switching is giving me whiplash and it really ruins the flow of the story. especially the unnecessary switching for just 1 paragraph. also the lack of any speech marks at all is very irritating and completely ruins the book. everything said by the characters should be in speech marks. that is how the reader is supposed to know that a character is speaking. this is a very big mistake in the world of writing and the author very much needs to go back through the entire story and correct it. no writer worth their salt would leave such a tremendous mistake uncorrected.

    10/30/2023 06:31

  • Visitor

    love this story!!!!!!

    10/30/2023 03:50

  • Rose Dykstra

    I am loving this story

    10/30/2023 02:14

  • Visitor

    it’s great to see a strong female werewolf

    10/29/2023 23:42

  • Visitor

    I love when they say the broken someone

    10/29/2023 20:39

  • Visitor

    I like it, but do you really need to give 4 different points of view. Also you don't need to retell the same thing over and over. You can make your point without going over what happened over and over.

    10/29/2023 19:30

  • Mirjam Hertog

    #halloweenvibe i love it!!!

    10/29/2023 18:51

  • Destiny Lynn

    #halloweenvibe

    10/29/2023 18:22

  • Teach

    So good!! #HalloweenVibe#

    10/29/2023 13:53

  • Teach

    Love this!! #Halloween Vibe#

    10/29/2023 13:52

  • Visitor

    wonder why the alpha couldn't stop the family

    10/29/2023 07:19

  • Visitor

    great well written

    10/29/2023 06:33

  • Lisa Ellinas

    #HalloweenVibe!

    10/29/2023 06:32

  • Ossanna Kouyoumdjian

    #HalloweenVibe!

    10/29/2023 04:56

  • Visitor

    love it

    10/29/2023 01:11

  • Visitor

    Love it ❤️❤️

    10/28/2023 22:34

  • Visitor

    👍

    10/28/2023 17:37

  • Visitor

    can’t wait to read the other books

    10/28/2023 17:19

  • Visitor

    👍

    10/28/2023 12:43

  • Visitor

    👍

    10/28/2023 12:18

  • Visitor

    ❤️❤️

    10/28/2023 11:19

  • Visitor

    I love this book

    10/28/2023 10:28

  • Visitor

    such an amazing heroine

    10/28/2023 07:20

  • Visitor

    loving the main character

    10/28/2023 05:00

  • Visitor

    loving it

    10/28/2023 04:48

  • Visitor

    love the start

    10/28/2023 04:47

  • Visitor

    i am enjoying this

    10/28/2023 04:39

  • Velsetta Manzetti

    I've read this story under a different name but I can't think of what it was

    10/28/2023 03:46

  • Visitor

    is there a way to bookmark chapters?

    10/28/2023 02:44

  • Visitor

    love the story so far

    10/27/2023 23:31

  • Visitor

    living this story

    10/27/2023 22:40

  • Kelli Brown

    love the story so far!!

    10/27/2023 15:03

  • Visitor

    like story so far

    10/27/2023 14:27

  • Precious Awosile

    #winbonus

    10/27/2023 12:11

  • Visitor

    loving story so far, just wish I could open chapters faster

    10/27/2023 11:43

  • Visitor

    great story

    10/27/2023 00:47

  • Visitor

    I'm liking this story so far and I am excited for what's to come

    10/26/2023 22:40

  • Leila Kaljuvee

    I love this book, have red it 3 times already 😍🤩 #HalloweenVibe!

    10/26/2023 18:45

  • meriah thomas

    love the story so far

    10/26/2023 16:35

  • Visitor

    I love this story can't stop reading

    10/26/2023 16:29

  • Aimee Montoya

    Ah yes the ever helpful cat...... but we love them too much and put up with their antics regardless of what mischief they create. love the story

    10/25/2023 21:29

  • Sarah Abbott

    totally loving it

    10/25/2023 18:41

  • Visitor

    love it

    10/25/2023 17:39

  • Rebecca Konisimo

    Amazing

    10/25/2023 08:46

  • Visitor

    I like this story content

    10/25/2023 06:34

  • Visitor

    I love this book

    10/25/2023 03:59

  • Visitor

    can't wait until they finally meet

    10/24/2023 19:06

  • Norma Gomez

    I love your storie so far.

    10/24/2023 18:34

  • Visitor

    i live the story!

    10/24/2023 13:27

  • Visitor

    good story I love it

    10/24/2023 02:13

  • Marina Deoudes

    This paragraph alone would have saved the time it took to read the first 60+ chapters, but, we'd miss a bunch of the story that way!

    10/24/2023 01:55

  • Visitor

    when will chapter 24 be ready?

    10/23/2023 23:42

  • Clarita Nora

    although I had some comments, I do like the book😍

    10/23/2023 19:19

  • Barbara Deane Mackie Redmon

    Enjoying the book so far.

    10/23/2023 18:38

  • Visitor

    good story. I agree with a previous comment that you can over describe things. other than that excellent 👍

    10/22/2023 23:50

  • Melissa Norwood

    good never forget or forgive... and those girls neither don't let them be in her life anymore..she need to go to her own mansion.

    10/22/2023 15:40

  • Visitor

    Sometimes you really do overdescribe things. Sometimes twice from 2 pov. You got a great story, there's no need to do that.

    10/22/2023 11:10

  • Visitor

    great book so far

    10/22/2023 02:13

  • Visitor

    really enjoying this book.

    10/21/2023 21:16

  • Melissa Norwood

    she need to find things out her self pfft

    10/21/2023 18:13

  • Visitor

    love the book

    10/21/2023 17:23

  • Lea-Dale Newbould-falconer

    really enjoying it so fare

    10/21/2023 15:57

  • Visitor

    this is a really good read.

    10/21/2023 12:57

  • Charlette Williams

    I love your books but I think you overly detailed about something's that are not necessary to fill in word count but not enough of them speaking

    10/21/2023 04:19

  • Visitor

    I do wonder why the Alpha hasn't just kicked her parents and Sarah out of the pack

    10/21/2023 01:43

  • Moira Buist

    why will it not open after chapter 138

    10/20/2023 16:11

  • Morgan Nelson

    I like that this isn't like all the other werewolf books I've read were the male is suffocatingly protective. He let's her do her thing. I need this and all other books after on my shelf!

    10/20/2023 16:07

  • Sarah Pinkney

    I am enjoying this story at the moment

    10/20/2023 11:20

  • Visitor

    her mom is trash

    10/20/2023 04:00

  • Charlette Williams

    😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

    10/19/2023 03:59

  • Paula Rossbach

    paragraph long descriptions of the outdoors really necessary? And there are a lot of them.

    10/19/2023 02:01

  • Veronica Miller

    so enjoy

    10/18/2023 17:19

  • Phyllis Cypert Brooks

    I'm so enjoying this book.

    10/18/2023 03:26

  • Reader-399905

    I’m enjoying this book.

    10/17/2023 16:26

  • Leeanne MOKA

    cool

    10/17/2023 03:39

  • dAnnemarie Kane

    her sister Sarah is horrid

    10/16/2023 17:40

  • Christina Scholl

    Everytime I go to my library the story starts at beginning again pain in the ass if you ask me

    10/16/2023 15:45

  • Ziggy Montero

    the chapter is thesame story with diffirent Pov..

    10/16/2023 13:53

  • Maso Taofitau

    loving this book

    10/16/2023 13:39

  • Belinda Webb

    this is the best written story I have read on these sites.

    10/16/2023 07:53

  • Sharon Perger

    reading for the second time and still enjoying it.

    10/16/2023 07:09

  • Cheryl Millmaker

    so far.great

    10/16/2023 03:34

  • Barbara Speicher

    the story is still going great, so far loving it

    10/15/2023 21:19

  • marshalee hinds

    I am really loving this book, this should be made into a movie

    10/15/2023 20:55

  • Angel Brdar

    me

    10/15/2023 05:03

  • Myle Sundy

    loving this story

    10/15/2023 03:11

  • Christina Roblyer

    love the story unfortunately can't finish it so I'm deleting it

    10/15/2023 00:14

  • JessyGisela Ramirez

    loving the plot line so far!!

    10/14/2023 16:09

  • Tara Dyer

    amazing story

    10/14/2023 04:30

  • Drema Jarvis

    so far I love it

    10/14/2023 01:06

  • Nicole Foy

    love this story

    10/13/2023 23:24

  • Kela D Wylie

    This is good so far...only on Chapter 8.....we shall see

    10/13/2023 22:45

  • Kazmisadaf kazmi

    It's Cinderella is a living with werewolf

    10/13/2023 11:33

  • Reader-639447

    am beginning to appreciate the story

    10/12/2023 06:18

  • Kelle C

    🩷🩷🩷

    10/12/2023 04:28

  • Lori Wight

    When is she getting lessons on social graces. How to dress appropriately for occasions other than training would be a good place to start. She's having dinner with many invited guests & she wears a tank top & shorts with no underwear. Not appropriate dinner attire!

    10/12/2023 03:33
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