Fates Hands Comments

Patricia Lawhorn

love story just want to read more tell how

Megan Chance

so this is a good story but it’s so poorly written. run on sentences so you have to almost focus harder to understand what the writer is trying to say, then sometimes it’s in third person and sometimes it’s in first person. I just started chapter 7 and it says jacks name and how “he knew his boys were wanting fun” then it says “I can’t think of anything more fun than chasing fleabags.” it’s very confusing.

Tami Vanover

awesome story so far, drew me in right away!

Tasha Green

this is a good story. Mad I have to buy chapters to finish it.

Mariam Erinah

I'm enjoying this kind of torture

zara mughal

this is an awesome tale, one of the best books. I would really appreciate if some one can take a little time to check out 'A Place Unlike Home.' thankyou.

Yumiko Cairo Mitsu

I might like this one. keep on going

DebFou-019193

Archer I’d like to read a story on him meeting his mate. I’m sorry it’s over, I really enjoyed the story.

Sarah Alexander

loved these so much. I read from Duncan all the way to archers story in 2 days!!

Reader-120871

really enjoying reading this so far!

Angel

I am at chapter 6 and so far it ain’t bad. It is hard to put the story down

Julie Randy Cloyd

I am really enjoying your book. Thanks for getting me reading again.

Reader-463695

how does this work? I want to read the book...it's locked for how long? will I be able to complete the book???

Cindy Johnson

interesting

Brianna Helms

❤️❤️❤️

ashley descant

wonderful story so far

Elaine Garcia

I really enjoyed this story! the characters were just so real and the story lines pulled you in! Thank you for this!

Ruqoyyah siyanbola

This is a nice read.

Shebee1614

Let me tell you that king isn’t anything to mess with!!!

Rosalee Messier Laurin

enjoying reading this book, looking forward to the next chapters

Tara Dellinger

Loving this book so far!

Sherry Price

Loving this book so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reader-785643

Stop taking me to chapters I’ve already read!!!

Beth Kelley

really good I love it so far

Kelsey

My husband officially hates me I have not moved from my bed in almost 6 hours reading the first book I’m absolutely in love with it cannot wait to read the others!

Alanna Bedworth

oooh yes!!

Michelle F. Rivera

it's a great story so far... but I feel like it's on fast forward. like yesterday she's going to school and today she's a Luna.

Nada Noujaime

Amazing! Love the stories and the characters. Do not stop writing, these is definitely the best I've read in a long time. Worth the read! 😍

Leah Minnucci

do not start reading if you have plans or need to clean or have a job you need to get to. I am so addicted I can’t put it down. I made my husband order take out because I refused to stop reading to cook. This book is amazing!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! thank you for this amazing story.

K A Mears-Kolesnikoff Carter

Artemis and Apollo?? Really? The twin Greek deities; Apollo the Sun god and Artemis the moon goddess, goddess of the hunt, aka Diana 😁😄😃

TGI GISH

be easy using the name Winchester in vain...

Elissa J Martinez

Hi, Lori!...🙋🏻‍♀️. In what book does Jack, 'The Teddy Bear ', find his mate? I read this book first and now I am reading The Elixir, which talks about her. Is that book on here?...🤔

Cath Lufc Hopkins

great read looking forward to book three

Louise Shaw

am loving the story so far. cant put it down x

Chyril Hollins

getting good

Nicole Anne Cracknell

loving this so far !

Charleen Jones

fantastic story. totally enjoyed it. and rather than letting it go on forever you ended it and started a new book, which I can't wait to read. I'm so looking forward to it. thank you so very much.

Reader-583350

enjoying the story

Reader-535539

starting out great

Phenon Tingle

I love the trigger warnings thanks

Angelica Nicole Johnson

What a Fruit loop!! Her stepfather has only ever went after humans. Not another bear let alone a clan of them. He really is stupid as he is sadistic.

Patricia Phillips

I am loving this story very much

stanchy

Is this a single story book?

Ashtynne Davis

I really like Duncan!

Dawn Williams

An absolutely awesome read.

Kat Ellen

oh wow!!

Ana Afton

very good so far

Julia Woolard

how come I can’t find the 2nd book on here? and there’s a 3rd? yay! I’m so excited!! some one tell me where I can read the other books please!!!

Lisa Ramsey

it won't let me continue after it shows to scroll and tap here?? it's stupid that I can't get past that

Patryce Stillettos Critz

this book was amazing please tell me there will be more!

Mel Smith

❤️

Libby Greenham

what talent!!

Amanda Kotab

loved all the books, looking forward to seeing what the author has in store for the future characters. I do which that the stories were a bit longer chapter wise (love it so much I didn’t want it to end)

I love that he is not a black wolf - as per the usual Alpha!!

Kathy Bailey

great book so far

Lisa Dunagan

this was amazing book and I hope there will be more like them

chad anderson

books are fated hands, hidden, elixir

chad anderson

this needs to actually come out in book form so I can own it

Angie G. de Muñoz

STALKER! How romantic tho. 😆 😺 💘 ❤ 💋

omggg I’m dying 🤣🤣🤣

Linda Croft

what is book 2?

BookDragon

So happy for them!!

Crystal McNeil Nelson

who do you complain to when your double billed and it won’t unlock?

Jenniffer Martin

it says this book is complete but it looks like it is multiple books. is the full story finished? or just the first two books?

Freda Truitt

It is very good. It is keeping me glued to this book.

Kitty Lindberg

I need this in audiobook so I can clean house and know what happens.

Patryce Stillettos Critz

this book is amazing! I can’t put it down.

Lisa Clarke

I liked that you put the series in one.

is her name Adira or Adair??? it keeps changing.

ramona hall

loved this book

ashlei schwendinger

love the story. can't wait to finish reading

refreshing Alpha 💜 i love him already

Marshalee Hinds

i really love this book

Samantha Davidson

what happen to Anna & Auston, and how did Salena act when she learned who her true mate really was?

Ms. Stephie Davis

is there anyway I can buy the entire book and skip the scrolling issue!!! I’m invested and been thinking about this book all day.

bernice ajayi

interesting

Tonia Grundhauser

Lori, do you have any other books? I love your stories. I would like to but the whole book at one time. great books. thank you for an awesome read

Supreme Goddess

omg little kids smfh

Marie L Dank

i am loving your books I can’t put them down. I look forward to reading them.

Reader-885727

love!!!

ChairtyJune

omg this made me cry…. the poor king!!! my heart breaks for him!

Stacey Musterman

yeah no I don’t like the fact lily and the king being mates

Reader-191809

how do you buy the whole book? instead of buying by chapter?

Pauline Hicks Bourke

I have loved the 3 books thankyou so much cannot wait for the next books from you 💕

Elexis Craig

is Jack's name inspired from Titanic? lol because it just dawned on me that that was literally his name 😂😂

Rayia Lorraine

this is getting good

Sabrina Loray

hi Lori . I lov this book but can’t find the rest of it . is there a book 2

Donna Iceton

I’m loving this book

Basma Shamas

i loved reading this book. i still have around 13 chapters to finish the third book. i see you have a part 2 of 2. are you going to be updating this series with part 2 and when would be expect the update?

Jacqueline Johnson

love the book

Reader-165424

wish it was like a you get a key every hour to unlock the next chapter can’t wait I need to skip to chapter 12 I’ve red them all on another site don’t know what it was called but now I’m stuck at chapter 6 😭

Reader-846239

does anybody know what are the other two titles names. I would like to read them all from the first one to the last one

Jenna Smith

only comment I have about this chapter is explain what they look like in wolf form. it got a bit lost in transition here

Kassiopia Clark

love this story so far!

Laura Walters

I love how this book is turning out. I can't wait to finish reading it to see if she stays with them!

Eve Egüez

Are you going to add another story?

jade vargas

love it keep writing ✍ books like this

Charlie Biggs

can some one tell me what the first book is

Chantal White

wow these people are vile

Love Kayy

there are three books if you are reading spare story that is book one if you are reading jacks story that is book two and I believe it’s acher story that is book 3