Fates Hands Comments

Trisha Wilder

This is a really good story and plot. There are some shortcomings but nothing that a writer won't develop over time. This is my first story by you and I like it very much. I will be looking for your other titles when I finish this one. One grammar mistake I really want to point out is the use of the word 'of' when it should be 'have'. This is very common and I don't want to offend an author. For example, "He should of known better." When we talk it does sound like "of". But it should be, "He should *have* known better." I don't want to be be grammar nerd but if it were me, I would want to know. It's how I learned. Have a great day! 💗

Amanda Levis

okay... did not see that coming 😳 at all. well alright then 2bd chance mate.

Jäyce

I'm so invested in this series... WHY!

Daniela Mirandha

i've been reading non stop÷!!!

Esther Eric Egagah

I don't usually read about wolf but dis very storyline is interesting to read can't wait to see what ll happen to Eric n lilly n their pack. they re so wicked.

Reader-845602

good story but I’m confused, the prince mentions a brother early on in the book, who he refused to loose the throne to but later after he dies the king says he has no heirs and is thinking of making Duncan king, what happened to the other brother?

Jenaris Rosello

I’m loving the store would love to watch if it was turned into Netflix series honestly I love her name Adira but u misspelled it couple times threw me off a little Adair but I was like huh

Brittany BreeBree Blackwell

loved the book. I'd also love to know where Adira's(Spare's) mother is? or who? since she is only Lillys half sister. Think that would be awesome book for a lead up to this one. other wise that's the only thing nagging me is wanting to know about Adiras mother.

Angelina Wines

Good story so far

Natalie Rose Nitschke

love the were bears idea of justice.

Reader-525663

so far so good

Debbie Burley

Very interesting can't wait to keep reading

Tanya Ammons

This is the 1st book I've read and loving it! what are the other 2 books? I would really like to read them all.

Tammy L Wicks Sims

good so far. holds my attention very well

Reader-591650

update schedule?

I really enjoyed the way this story started out, but I’m really struggling to keep going. The character development is tough, so that I don’t even really care about them. And the are parts to the story that could be developed more to build up the climax, but instead it moves so quickly. There is a problem or a bad person- boom, it’s over, then on to the next thing. I’m really hoping that it gets better, because the story itself is really interesting, but the execution is tough to follow.

Samantha Farrar

where is jacks story!!

Chrissy 808

This story is really enjoyable and the story telling is unique. I like it!

Jaqi Jenkins

yeeesss Adira true queen behavior

Priscilla Renee Palacios-Johnson

loving it

luanne nye

wonderful story so far

Daphney Price

I need to know about Acher! More please.

Lee Derby

seems pretty good reading so far. up to chapter 6

Elmarie Oosthuizen

you Amazing finished your first book in prob 4 to 5 hours

Janette

absolutely love this along with jacks story keep it coming 🤗

Stephanie Smoot

loved the characters. based loosely on Cinderella?

Greanna Barrow

ready for more

Marlene Tuazon

Good story

Christy Linville Spradlin

love the characters

Christy Linville Spradlin

very good story

Lori Ameling

Every evening two chapters

Meek

what is the title of the 1st book

Natasha Fouche

Really enjoying the story

Rebecca Mathes

people like that don’t need children

Kathileen Marie Pendergrass

awesome story, can't wait for more.

Reader-259856

good story do far

Emily Franchino

been sucked in!

Blueforeva-02

I kept seeing this advertised and I kept wanting to read it but kept telling myself not to but I am so glad I finally caved! it’s so good!

Sheso Real

great story so far wishbthe chapters were longer

Allison Thorn

loving this so far

Nikki Lush

loving this book

Karla Declet

how many more chapters after this one?

Jenine Jensen

really enjoying the read so far

How often is this updated? Dying for next chapters

Heather Hopkins

I'm just wondering what the other books in the series are?

Lori Ameling

Hello everyone, I am sorry I can't post tonight, my dad was having troubles and I have to be with him. I will post double tomorrow. again I am sorry. thanks

Leanne Barbour

love the story so far

kellie hudson

Really needs to watch the tenses and person switches, gets quite irritating

Marcel MaryJane

wow

Tonya Ray

omg I haven't read a good book in so long I haven't been able to put it down and walk away thank you

Bonnie Stewart

this story keep pulling me in. well done !

Reader-117503

When will more chapters be added? This keeps you thinking…”What next?”.

Reader-207768

Great book, though I do have a question. Doesnt Archer have a different mate in book 2?

sue gillis

really enjoying this book

N Hen-swis

love the story but may I suggest you go back and correct people's names. you have the dead prince call his brother one name then you use another. wrong werelion as leader.

Cici Chavez-Marquez

love the book so far

NoAmii Hacks

omg... you are an amazing writer, you should definitely join millysworld.. your book is edgy, fun and super exciting

Reader-891678

I wouldn’t have let any of the enforcers live honestly. Let the Alpha wonder and come looking.

Sara Owens

What about Jake in Fates Hands? Are we going to get his story? Please 🙏

Daniel Jimenez

this is a really good read. I am hesitant to continue to the second book because I just fell in love with Duncan and Adria that it will be hard not having them too much focused in the second book

Ania K.

Good :)

Nickie Bonds

this is a good book I'm ready to read all of it

Judy Jay B Banda

lovely story

Sadi Henkaline

Adira is one letter off from my name. (Sadira) 🖤 I've never had a story use anything that even remotely makes me think of my name.

Cynthia Cindy Estrada Long

enjoying so far!

Melissa Bell

when is the book for the spin off of this

Carmen Adorno

please how do u unlock! help me

Reader-169525

the base of the story which you have here is a great start. I think you need to fill out the story there are so many ways to fill out the characters world. you did in ways fill out some parts but just not enough through the rest of story. when describing characters and places your painting a picture for your reader so the can see, hear and smell every bit of the scenes set. these are wolves so add the smells sometimes. get creative with the way you paint the scenes and characters. characters need to feel real so readers can connect and want to know them. you start with giving them emotion but it was anger and love that’s it. I’d like more backstory as well as motivation for why characters are the way they are better descriptors for the way they feel give them range make sure readers have better understanding of the shifters in this world why they act as they do. I didn’t like the way everything moved so fast without a better healing process.

Crystal S. Jacobson

I’m so hooked!! can’t wait to read to the end. good job!

Audrea Isaac

this is a real good book so far

Lizbeth Rosas

enjoying so far

Rose Rogerio Cardoso

how do you unlock chapters?

Stacey Thomson

it's good so far

Angie Tiger Lazcano

did anyone passed the chapter 6???? started showing error messages after chapter 6

MAUREEN BOWMAKER

Very captivating

Emily Hinton

I thought Marnie wolf was Hera?

Steph Leschner

read the first 10 chapters but could r get into it as I’m not a fan of how it is written. sry.

Jill Faver

I finally gave into reading this book after so many ads for it. not disappointed

Fatima Williams

I love this chapters so far

I really like the books. Please keep up the great work.

Katrina Feighan

Good read so far

Karen Haney

love this but i can't get into chapter 6

this book has the potential to be something amazing but the author struggles to keep up with the story line and forgets characters or changes their names

Nonie Gonzalez

how do you unlock chapters

Tina Moxley-Hamilton

awesome storyline.

Vanessa Thomas

great story so far looking for more

Nifemi Ani Kuponiyi

I love this book.. how do I continue reading

Randi Holden

I'm Sooooooo hooked!!! neeeeeeeddddddddd moreeeeeeeee

Tricia Yesildal

would drove to be able to read this . says scroll but won't let you .

Candice

I am hooked great story so far

Pauline Tanner

good so far

Kari Wall

The plot was ok. The writing needs polishing big time. 3/5 starts...

Kimberly Pevehouse

very well written, with interesting characters.

Carol Ann Hurter

Love this story

Aniemerr Dela Cruz

nice story

Reader-196417

I’m curious as to how this book start in a first person point a view of spare and jumped to 3rd person

Reader-282727

enjoyed the book. I have not read a book in a long time. work, life, school, have been in the way. I read a piece on FB and decided to continue. may I say, you captured the audience. thank you for bringing me back to reading.

Stephanie Warren

love book one and on book two cart put down

Susan Fuehrer

Good start

Melissa Anderson

kind of saw that coming.