The Lunas Second Chance Mate Comments
IceQueen
I haven't finished the book yet, I'm about half way though, I like the book for the most part but the character development isn't as great as it could be, however there is some development but people's nasty comments through out the book does ruin it for me a little
05/28/2023 02:49Reader-838612
yep, I couldn’t even finish the last 8 chapters the FL just becomes so pathetic as the story continues. Her disrespect of her own mate is gross. the things she expects him to tolerate are just sickening. Everything becomes so “yuck” is the second books that I just had to stop reading. I just can’t….save your money. it’s not worth the disgusting sniveling mess she becomes. and swear if I had to read the word “Darling” one more time I would have to stab my own eyes out. just yuck. the first book is okay, you don’t really care about the main characters but the “second book” is just makes you want to punch the FL in her hypocritical face. uuuggghhhh!
05/15/2023 13:37Reader-838612
the lead female character is just grossing me out at this point. her allowing herself to be disrespected over and over is sickening. her is tolerance of sexual assault by the same character over and over is disgusting. making her mate stand by and say nothing is beyond the pail. the “darling” is just super cringe worthy. it’s bad enough on it’s own but the author’s over use of it drastically diminishing the appeal of the ML. FL went from being tolerable to f’ing pathetic. allowing yourself to be abused doesn’t make you a good person….allowing the man you supposedly love to have to tolerate and watch that abuse makes you even worse especially when you belittle when he defends you. gross, gross, GROSS.
05/15/2023 12:34Julie Miller
7b9h Putting down for future book, will definitely consider for a next read seems really interesting. love the introduction
04/03/2023 03:52Reader-731248
7b9h I think the plot seems quite good, and it will be very interesting to see how the story develops.
04/02/2023 11:00Kerry Graham
7b9h I have started reading this book and I am really enjoying it so far and cannot wait to see what happens
04/02/2023 07:42nasnas
7b9h This whole challenge makes me add more books to my reading list, look forward to reading it. Does anybody know it it's finished? And if it has a happy ending? I'm a sucker for happy endings.
04/02/2023 05:59Reader-529162
#7b9h# I haven’t started on this book proper and from the get go it looks kinda messy.
04/02/2023 02:58Terrin Garis
#7b9h# There were times it felt a bit redundant seeing things from multiple points of view.The plot is meh and the characters are disappointing. Killed some time but half in the book, the magic is gone....
04/02/2023 02:20Margie Cole
really enjoyed this book, such a shame it ended so abruptly, leaving everyone wondering what happened to the main characters in this story
03/27/2023 19:49Vilma Carpin Buhawe
is Alpha Jacob a vampire? Why would they take blood from her everyday for the Alpha? This is too much evil to treat a sibling especially from a twin. Twins shares a special bond. I read a lot like these,same plots. Family cruelties beyond comprehension towards their siblings or child. Recycled!
01/26/2023 21:19Isabel Lopez (Izzy)
hi, Ive read both parts of a sample reading. how can I get the full series please and thank you
01/11/2023 22:18Reader-417846
what a bitch her sister is and why are they this to her
01/10/2023 01:42Lori Chace-Lopes
will there be a book 3!? I love this story! there are so many Loose ends”. Need more please!!! ❤️
07/06/2022 18:32Patty Wolohan Sikora
I was reading a book and I can’t find it! It’s about twins and the second born twin was named Spare. Can you help me find it!?
06/17/2022 03:24Erlene Cassidy
what is the title of the second book so I can read it?
05/24/2022 20:01Alexandra Nala S
what's the second book about? Jennifer's revenge?
05/24/2022 12:42Karen Lee Gladden
I really enjoyed this book. Thank you.
05/19/2022 01:07AmberABee
is this book finished?
04/28/2022 17:16Jodie Trevino
awesome story publish this story, I would buy.
04/19/2022 05:15Amber-lee Stewart
I love love love all of your books!! usually I get bored quickly but not with yours!
03/14/2022 00:00Barbara McLaren
hi cool story so far are there any updates soon
02/27/2022 18:33Lori Ameling
Would love more updates.😁 very good story so far.
02/18/2022 08:35Cristina Maria Verhest
so I'm just wondering is there more chapters to this book instead of just seven or is this a book where chapter by chapter comes out once every two weeks because if I read this and it gets good I don't want to sit there and have to stop because it's done
02/12/2022 18:12