My Pickpocket Luna Comments

Althea Siefert

I've read several chapters and I just can't read any more. The translation is poor, where there are strings of words that make no sense. The incorrect use of pronouns adds even more confusion to the story. I got to chapter 7 I think and the female lead's name changed at the beginning of it, but then it continues with just pronouns. It reads as if the chapter belongs in a different story. That's when I stopped reading. The storyline has promise, but the translation really needs a lot of work in order to turn this into an enjoyable read.