His Burning Gaze Comments
Frances Carter
this should scare her a little more… Adrian has made it known he doesn’t want to share her. why isn’t she thinking he could Lock her away
09/05/2023 22:39Frances Carter
ugh new it was a dream honestly I just want her with Adrian ugh
08/29/2023 05:24
Reader-268415
wish I could just buy the book :(
08/08/2023 00:52Daisy Francisco
Adrian-AS I love this book already and the first chapter is interesting and quite funny specially the characters
06/30/2023 13:12Esther Samuel
Adrian-AS so loving this book already😁 oh she got sharp mouth and I love how the author makes some comment funny like note to younger self don't get married straight out of high school to escape your problems vos the follow you everywhere.😀 adding it to my library
06/29/2023 11:01Martial Flor
Adrian-AS This book is so, sooo good. the kind of "good" that makes you go "yay" when you see it among the suggestions, even if you're already reading it 😂 the female lead's arc is a real , radical transformation you can only cheer for :)
06/29/2023 08:50Chawada Musvaire
Adrian-AS Loving Jenny’s sparky personality already. She’s the breath of fresh air that her friend needs in this season. I’m enjoying the chilled vibes start to the story and the fact that I’m engaged without and drama 🥰Looking forward experiencing the story unfold and watching our girl get her groove back
06/29/2023 08:19
Joele G
This book is already in my library and 25 chapters in already. I’ve been really enjoying this story; all I can say Hot & Steamy; it does have a really good storyline and it just keeps getting better. Adrian-AS
06/29/2023 07:59Angela Aleixo
Adrian-AS the cover is hot, the intro makes the book quite interesting. it's the first time that actually considering this book, not that i don't like this kind of book, but because i never came across with it. it caught my ey, goin to give it a try.
06/29/2023 07:56Ana
Adrian-AS To be honest this isn't something that I usually would read as it's not really my style I'm sure it's a great read for others that like this style but in saying that I will give it a chance and read a few chapters to see how I go.
06/29/2023 06:48Leré Saunderson
Adrian-AS The cover is steamy hot! For once I am glad that the heroine is not portrayed as a sweet angel that has never seen a man in her life and never had any sort of relationship before. It makes for more realistic reading. Book seems well-written.
06/29/2023 06:24Aisha Ali
Adrian-AS I really love a good reverse harem book I don't know why and this one shows to be a great book already added to the library can't wait to start it
06/29/2023 06:10Debra Sykes
Adrian-AS I'm not really into books like this but still read some of it, it is well written it's just not for me but if it's your thing you should enjoy it. hopefully the main female gains her confidence that she needs.
06/29/2023 05:56Reader-431917
Adrian-AS I had added this book to my library 📚 a while back and had forgotten about it. I am glad it came up again as a reminder. I am definitely going to be reading this book next on my to be read list
06/29/2023 05:47
Tricia Freligh
Adrian-AS so I have added this book to my library. all I can say if that it sounds d like it’s going to be good. I have read the first few chapters and can I say wow. I loving the story so far. it is a great
06/29/2023 05:36lia
Adrian-AS. The starting of the book and tags aren't really my type. Like I don't mind steamy scenes but it just like that out of the bat with no characters Introduction puts me off. Though to each his own so I may not like it but others may.
06/29/2023 04:30Karin Tuchman
Adrian-AS I wish the introduction had more information about the story itself and not just a cutout of a very sexual or hot scene in the book . it was a good introduction but it was lacking . I understand from the introduction that adrian is a bit possessive so it feels like a cat and mouse game. I will got it a chance.
06/29/2023 04:05Terri Bonomelli
Adrian-AS I am enjoying this book. It pulled me in to the story quickly. It's going to be fun watching Adrian pull Leah out of her shell. I can't wait to read how the rest of vacation goes!
06/29/2023 03:56Kirsten Tooker
Adrian-AS I wish the introduction had more actual information on the story besides the two little sentences sandwiched between two extracts from the story. I wasn’t really impressed with the first three chapters so I probably won’t be adding it to my library.
06/29/2023 03:32Cortney Melton
Adrian-AS I’ve read the first 10 chapters of this. OMG! Steamy start to this book. it keeps your attention span and brings you in for more. Her inexperience and naïveté make her character even more entertaining to read about. Cant wait to read more of this one.
06/29/2023 02:57
Aly_sohn
wow. this starts off with a bang. I've added this one to my library to be read next. the writing style is fantastic with minimal grammar mistakes. great story so far. will definitely keep reading. Adrian-AS
06/29/2023 02:49Donna Pember
Adrian-AS The first few chapters were hot. This looks like it will be a steamy book to read. I can't wait to read the rest of the story and see where it goes
06/29/2023 02:16Me Myself
Adrian-AS I read this book a while ago. If you are looking for steamy you found it. they even have hot peppers next to the hot, hotter and hottest chapters. Later on the book tries to develop plot twists but it got a little convoluted. all in all it was good for the steamy scenes.
06/29/2023 00:28Doobies
Adrian-AS - I found the 2-sentence synopsis, sandwiched between two excerpts, in the intro to be rather confusing. I would recommend removing at least one of the excerpts and writing more than two sentences to describe what this book is about.
06/28/2023 23:45
WynnRN
I had previously unlocked all the chapters as this is one of my favorite genres so this story was already in my to be read que. This story has a great flow, is easy to read, and holds your interest... before I knew it I was several chapters in. When a book takes you out of the everyday world and allows you to daydream or fantasize then that is a success in my opinion! Adrian-AS
06/28/2023 22:50TinyReader
Adrian-AS His Burning Gaze was action packed and so very steamy! At first, everything seemed a bit all over the place but it tied in nicely at the end. I was so glad the female antagonist got her just dues because she put Leah (and Adrian) through some unnecessary stuff. Good binge read.
06/28/2023 22:39Joele G
Adrian-AS This book is already in my library and 25 chapters in already. I’ve been really enjoying this story; all I can say Hot & Steamy; it does have a really good story plot already and it just keeps building and gets even better. It’s an easy read and easy to follow.
06/28/2023 22:12jules kc
Adrian-AS I liked the idea when I read the description, although I was not able to really catch what the book really is about. The introduction was good, but she already spilled all the details and secrets and it is always like "oh I am the shy, innocent, lovely girl and he is the bad boy and cheated on me". I do not think anyone would really talk about themselves that way without wanting to earn sympathy from others. Kind of annoyed me a bit although I still like the main character.
06/28/2023 22:11
LouValfa
Adrian-AS, I suggest the introduction to be rewritten. At a first sight it just seems a sex story but it’s more than that. I’ve added it to my library but I’m not sur when I will read it. one day…
06/28/2023 21:56
Lori Holden
Adrian-AS. Yes the Intro need a bit more about the story but I read the first chapter and it had more info. The first chapter had me wanting to read more. I have added it to my library and will read it sooner or later.
06/28/2023 21:41Irma Beck
Adrian-AS not a bad story line so far. definitely interesting and captivating as well as a fantasy of most women. I mean who wouldn't want to be made to cum flying high in the air. looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds
06/28/2023 21:38
Sammy
Adrian-AS I would suggest editing the blurb to a synopsis of the story instead of an extract and especially not a sex scene as this puts some readers off. A bit of proofreading is also required, however, the storyline has good flow and the reading experience looks promising.
06/28/2023 21:35Sara Arfaei
Adrian-AS Could be a good story but the intro doesn’t give any insight into the story, it‘s just a sex scene! So I‘m not sure if I like this one. It is not my favorite genre either so don’t think it‘s for me!
06/28/2023 20:29JustBee
Adrian-AS The sneak peek of what’s to come in the synopsis is just so unnecessary. The mini heated is then cut off to give few lines of the female protagonist’s profile then back to a heated scene. This makes me wonder if the writer believes the only way to grab the reader’s attention is to have a heated as the first thing to read and that some readers are just thirst readers.
06/28/2023 19:34Michelle van der Kleij
Adrian-as started this book and for so far i’m liking it, i hope she develop a little bit more confidence although, i will add it to the library for further Reading in the future
06/28/2023 19:27Bianca Bratu
Adrian-AS The plot of this story has so many twists and turns it feels like a rollercoaster but this is exaclty why I love a good story. I can’t wait to read more and find out what happens next in this story.
06/28/2023 19:23Lonnie Miller
Adrian-AS Lthe plot twists and turns. The characters continue to evolve as the story progresses. The story line flows as it envelops the characters in the changing situations and settings. Very well written. This book is really not my cup of tea for personal reasons. BDSM is not something I'm comfortable with. I hate the word master in the context of control over another person. (My issue, no one else's)
06/28/2023 19:16Malin Sandström
Adrian-AS. I hope that Leah continues to grow and not think she is not worth anything just because she is divorced. it will also be interesting to see if Adrian realises that he needs to change how he has been behaving and that leah has managed to capture his heart. I am excited to find out how what will happen when they are back to regular life after that special variation.
06/28/2023 19:08Ann-Sofie Ahlgren
Omg what a gentleman! I really like this Cameron guy. But of course I also wonder how it will turn out with Adrian. The way he left her at the “resort” was pretty disturbing, but I really hope he makes up for it if she shall give him another chance-if the story will happen that way. Adrian-AS
06/28/2023 18:54
Michibeba
#Adrian-AS# the introduction does not give anything away, other than it’s an erotica book, I usually need more of the story to spark an interest, I might continue to read it later on.
06/28/2023 17:56Sharon Milton
Adrian-AS So started this book I liked what I am reading I will carry on reading as I am interested where this is going and how far things will go with these two
06/28/2023 17:52yes sir
adrian-as it's interesting I really wan to know that there's hotel like this for real ??? the book already in my library that mean I like it
06/28/2023 17:50Caitlin Sullivan
Adrian-AS .... so I was intrigued and a little confused after reading the intro. The start of the story is ok, but I'm not sure about the guy. I can't tell if he is a good guy
06/28/2023 17:46Ashley P
Adrian-AS I'm maybe 30 chapters in, pretty decent. the main female is a bit aggravating at times and the dialogue can be a bit juvenile. overall it doesn't take away from the story. she doesn't have her harem yet where I'm at in the book so we shall see how it continues to develop.
06/28/2023 17:45a j
Adrian-AS this is an interesting start to the book. I don’t like that she feels her worth is tied to being married. I am curious to see how her character develops and hope she grows stronger
06/28/2023 17:02Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
Adrian-AS I am not really sure about this story. Should I read on ? Or should I look elsewhere for another story to read ? I cannot decide either way. I will hold back for now.
06/28/2023 17:02Brenda Kay
Adrian-AS what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.
06/28/2023 16:43Awurabena Afriyie Asare
Adrian-AS Honestly I really do not like men who thinks once they have been married to a woman, try can control her. It's not very right for any individual to control the other no matter the circumstances. But I just hope that Leah has the best of her life in this journey after her bad divorce.
06/28/2023 16:20Helen M
Adrian-AS The introduction doesn't really provide a lot of information. It sounds like it's a reverse harem theme but I can't say for sure. I'm also not sure how being adopted and the divorce are connected. I'm undecided whether to read this one or not. If the introduction is any indication, the actual chapters might just be jumping all over the place. Adrian-AS
06/28/2023 16:04Diana
Adrian-as I have no idea what to think of it... I find the introduction direct and short. I'm not drawn to further reading... I don't usually read these kinds of books
06/28/2023 15:46Alice Pinto
Adrian-AS I am not the biggest fan of this genre of books normally. the introduction is pretty short and doesn’t give a lot of information. but it is intriguing and I can understand why people like this book
06/28/2023 15:21Kristen
Adrian-AS The introduction doesn't give you any hint to the story. That being said, I read the first few chapters and I am definitely hooked! I really want to see how she discovers herself and if they end up together.
06/28/2023 15:21Fernanda Neto
Adrian-AS Um livro cujo primeiro capítulo me prendeu logo e me fez adicionar imediatamente à lista da minha biblioteca. Sem dar muitas pistas, faz querer saber os próximos passos e descobrir como esta lagarta se vai transformar numa linda borboleta.
06/28/2023 15:16Merle Langevoord
Adrian-AS the introduction was spicy but not holding allot of information about the story. hopefully the story has a good plot to it. it sure promise to be interesting if there are more scènes like the intro.
06/28/2023 15:11ANTONELLA CASSAR
Adrian-AS it starts in a very erotic way but there's not much info in the introduction. will have to read more into the story so maybe a good plot will be defined. we will see
06/28/2023 14:34Janaki Kollepalli
Adrian-AS... The introduction is erotic but not specific about the characters... so can't define if this has any essence in the characters or there are only erotic scenes ... confusing
06/28/2023 14:29Rafael
Adrian-AS. the introduction doesn't have many information about the story. it seems a interesting scene but I need more information. I will added it in my library but I don't know if I am going to read it soon.
06/28/2023 13:56Karooke
Adrian-AS wow das Intro ist echt erregend 😅 auch wenn die Art der Geschichte nicht wirklich meins ist, hat mich das Intro echt neugierig gemacht und ich werde mal dieses Buch lesen 🤭 added
06/28/2023 13:44Gemma Butler
Adrian-AS Oh wow! Now that introduction has me hooked. I’ve added it straight into my library and can’t wait to start reading it, I just need to finish my current book so I can give it my undivided attention
06/28/2023 13:41
Amal Samir
Adrian-AS, the intro doesn't illustrate much about the story line, but it intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next. I have the book in my library. I read some of the first chapters, it is so good. It's funny and interesting to read.
06/28/2023 13:36KMKC11
Adrian-AS The summary doesn’t give much away in terms of the storyline but it is well written. This story seems different from ones I’ve read in the past here and based on I’ve read of this one, I’m adding it to my library as I’m dying to know how it plays out.
06/28/2023 13:32Paula Almeida
Adrian-as. this is definitely an interesting book to me. I am really curious on what will happen with Adrian and Leah. I want to know if her ex husband will cause trouble and will here three men help her.
06/28/2023 13:31
Kitty-694016
Adrian-AS. the summary while well written gives very little information about the story line. After reading the first chapter, though, there is more of a sense of what the plot is. The first chapter does well at introducing the female lead and giving the background of who she is. The same for her friend. the story is enough to gain my interest and this is one I will most likely add to my reading list
06/28/2023 13:14Vicki usher
Adrian-AS The introduction could tell us more about the story then it does but the excerpt was interesting. It sounds different and naughty I am intrigued to read more. It's in my library and I look forward to reading it as it looks well written and is complete so will dive straight into it.
06/28/2023 12:50Efrat Katz
Adrian-AS the excerpt description of the book is not not the best choice, it was a little off putting. I was expecting something not well written, but the first chapter actually flows pretty well.
06/28/2023 12:37John Robinson
Adrian-AS In my opinion it would have been better to give a brief description of the story rather than an excerpt. When I started to read it I found it really well written and it's completed, will definitely be reading more.
06/28/2023 12:31Aikaterini Gkogkou
this is an amazing book with an amazing and very captivating story. I loved how the characters have evolved from the start to the last chapter. The connection between the characters gave a nice touch in the whole story. Highly recommend! “Adrian-AS”
06/28/2023 12:08So So
OMG I love this book!! Totally recommend reading this!! Please write more books author! Dying to read another one of your books!
06/21/2023 03:48Toni Benson
called it!
06/02/2023 22:21Mycheller
🔥🔥🔥
05/27/2023 22:34
Kyla Ren
x2c5 I love love love this book. Adrian is my favourite character 😍
04/24/2023 12:19yes sir
p6y8 wow wow and wow it's really good I like it and I think she need that change very much , it's nice interesting and new
04/20/2023 22:05Cortney Melton
p6y8 Oh my God!!!! So need a resort like this. I can totally see myself in her. This is heating up fast, can’t wait to see what Adrian does next.
04/20/2023 14:36Phyllis Neel
p6y8 Hot, hot, hot! I am interested because it's so well written. I want to see where this leads and it's now in my library! Let the games begin!
04/01/2023 01:01Jules Marie
p6y8 very hot, many scenes very well written. But more convoluted than it needed to be. Just not my cup lf tea. Kudos to the writer for her efforts.
03/31/2023 21:26E Ferreira
Like the saying goes " a wolf in sheeps clothing" this is what this book is. Well written, love the suspense...
01/14/2023 15:31Kathleen Moses
Leah really needs a Sex Therapist. Is this Stockholm Syndrome or just horniness?
01/01/2023 02:40
zZZzzz
no wonder it is call burning gaze
12/02/2022 05:54zoey
I love the rhythm of the storyline. it gets me hooked chapter by chapter. Believe me, it is worth the investment. 👍👍
12/02/2022 05:15
RDK
love jenny!
12/02/2022 03:36Amelia Watson
although it is promoted as a hot story. But for me, it is really a sweet one and it warms me a lot. Thanks for creating such a lovely girl.🤞🤞
12/02/2022 03:27
Tan
Thank u, Ann. Love it 💓💓
12/02/2022 03:10Carol Stewart
I really loved this story 😃
11/25/2022 10:04agnes
thanks for the 🤩🌶🌶🌶
11/25/2022 07:48Ann Moore Writing
Book is complete, but I have some editing to do before I mark it complete! Thank you to everyone who commented a constructive note!
10/26/2022 11:51Ann Moore Writing
Okay Book Fam! Last Chapter was posted! This book is now complete!
10/25/2022 21:51Nora Velazquez
she called cameron another mans name. did anyone else catch that?
10/22/2022 12:01Lynsey Mitchell
OMG i love it so far keep it going and will there be a book 2
10/21/2022 11:37Ann Moore Writing
Hey book Fam! No update today, chapter 80 will be out tomorrow. I have a some suggestions from my editor that I am working on.
10/14/2022 17:57
booknerd🤪
The juicy book drama started out slow, but once you get invested in their world… my oh my the men, drama, and spicyyyyy are just off the chart! Kudos to the author on the many plot twists!
10/12/2022 10:35Ann Moore Writing
Just wanted to take a moment and thank you all for the views, bookmarks, comments, catching my editing slips, and over all… thank you for being you!
10/11/2022 22:35
Kristina Larzalere
Hi. just came across your book and it sounds so good. how offen do you update it?
10/10/2022 22:02smuttyreader82
Love this book! I was rooting for Adrian, until I met Graham. More please!
10/07/2022 16:34Nicole Craig
looking forward to reading it
10/03/2022 05:31Monica Corbin
I'm loving this story so far.... and rooting for Adrian! 😘
10/01/2022 14:36Ann Moore Writing
Book Fam! Tomorrow’s chapter is “The Hot One ⚠️”. I gave it a trigger warning for rape context. Just wanted to post a wanting here, also posted it heading of the chapter.
10/01/2022 00:21Carol Harris-Downing
hey...I'm new to your book but let me just say that I am here for it ALL!!!! Just let me know when I can buy the book.
09/29/2022 16:59
Sherisa Weston
Does the amount of Chilli peppers 🌶 equate to how many men that will be in the intimate scenes together for the chapters?
09/28/2022 15:18Reader-616491
Love it so far….. can’t wait for more.
09/28/2022 09:47Ann Moore Writing
Hey book fam! We are trending tonight! New readers, I update daily never missing more than 3 days a month. Book should be finished by October 2022! Welcome and enjoy the ride of Leah’s life! I’m super active here and have all social medias!
09/28/2022 02:40
