Sex with my billionaire boss Comments
Beatriz Gonzales
Its a good story line, but its all over the place, you have no backround story of any of the characters. One paragraph will be under her POV, but then the next its his POV, and then when the author writes "Quinn POV" they have his mixed in as well. The grammer is pretty bad, its like they tried to translate it or something. Also its like the author is trying to rush the story, even though its only the first chapter. But the story line in itself is good. It would be nice if we got more background on whats going on.
08/05/2023 19:57