"I, Alpha Richard Brown, reject you, Jane Biller, as my mate and Luna.”

 "I'm sorry but I can't accept your rejection because I have no wolf.“

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Jane Biller was a late bloomer who got  rejected by her first mate, a notorious Alpha-King, Richard Brown. Years later, she makes a resounding comeback as a strong, wolf girl. It's no surprise that Richard would want her back. But then again, Jane doesn't wanna have anything to do with him, especially now that she has a second-chance mate.

What becomes of her when Richard vows to have her back, despite the odds? Would she stick to her second-chance mate, or return to a man who rejected her at the onset?

The Rejected Luna

Ok, first of all the storyline is really good, atleast as far as I have read. But the grammar got so bad after the fourth chapter. Sometimes even the tenses get mixed up and it feels like a pain to continue reading. Also the quotation marks are all over the place which makes reading this story very hard. Furthermore the part of the main character getting strong and training seems really rushed and unfinished. 
The idea is great, but I would really work on the implementation of it. Please get yourself a provereader or editor whose native language is English. Because if the book was written grammatically correct I’m sure I would actually enjoy it. 

Niviera

If her wolf is dead for real, I’ll stop reading this story.😤

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