Seducing Mr. Perfect Comments

  • Danielle Sidney

    This story has some real potential, but it could really use a thorough go-over from an editor with some grammatical updates and plot definition. I understand that English is not everyone’s native tongue, but some assistance could really bring out the quality of writing.

    06/09/2023 19:23
  • Kathleen

    um, can I be honest? I like the storyline but I get lost at what’s happening. one time it’s jaden, then it’s karen. it’s confusing and hard to read. I almost thought jaden’s brother is calling him a karen. hahahahaha. anyway I’ll try to finish it.

    06/09/2023 00:08
  • LouValfa

    it needs a big review.

    06/08/2023 19:54
  • Ledia Cela

    😜

    06/08/2023 17:13