Of Glory and Of Doom Comments
Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
This story needs some serious editing. The English used is quite difficult to understand at times. 2w1s
05/21/2023 15:42
Tara
2w1s definitely sound like a different book than anything that I have read, very interesting concept, could be a very good book
05/20/2023 11:48
Joele G
2w1s intro has capture my attention of the storyline; the twist and turns in this is intriguing
05/20/2023 08:31Kash Kash
2w1s The book has the concept already and it just need a proper execution and editing so it will be smooth to read. However, I like the concept that the goddess gave twin daughters to the Queen and by prophecy one will bring a disaster and one will bring prosperity.At birth, the Queen died and marked the one of his daughter to die. I was thinking the child would live and come back someday. 2w1s
05/20/2023 08:16
Nims karunarathne
2w1s I knew there’s a downfall coming the minute I read how the twin who’s supposed to bring doom was killed
05/20/2023 07:05Debra Sykes
2w1s I will be saving this book as I need to find out what's going to happen and it's complete intro was good too
05/20/2023 06:38Irma Beck
2w1s definitely a different twist of a story bit child sacrifice is a no no for me. not sure if I will read further
05/20/2023 06:15Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
2w1s This story needs some serious editing. The English used is quite difficult to understand at times.
05/20/2023 06:12
Reader-431917
2w1s I am not a huge fan of child sacrifice, I am not sure if I will read this book or not
05/20/2023 05:44
Lori Holden
2w1s I agree I do not agree with the sacrificing of one's child. maybe I will read it sooner or later.
05/20/2023 05:32Daisy Francisco
2w1s This is quite interesting but I don’t like the sacrificing one of your kids because of the prophecy but I guess I will try to understand the story
05/20/2023 05:11
Bizzybee🐝🌸
2w1s this has captivated me completely I’m excited to see where this goes and if I’m going to like it or not
05/20/2023 03:59breyannah pollard
2w1s it’s kind of messed up knowing that one of your children have to die because of what someone else says but it’s gained my attention so I’m going to add it to my library
05/20/2023 03:56
Tricia Freligh
2w1s this sounds interesting but I’m not sure I can really get into it. it is a completed story so I will add it now.
05/20/2023 03:19Lonnie Miller
2w1s The storyline sounds promising. I am sad that they kill a baby due to a prophecy. Hopefully that doesn't come back and bite them in the butt.
05/20/2023 03:14Me Myself
2w1s oh what an interesting premise. I like the title, the summary but was shocked by the details once I started reading .
05/20/2023 02:01Ashley
I am not sure how to feel about this one when it talks of killing a baby in the introduction. I hope it is one of those stories with a twist and she survived. I may have to come back to this one to find out. 2w1s
05/20/2023 01:33Mirela
2w1s - This chapter is sad. I know is hard sometimes to conceive kids and to loose the love of your life, but to kill un inocent baby it's unforgivable. The karma is always coming back. What if they killed the wrong baby?
05/20/2023 01:24Susan Long
2w1s this introduction has me interested. I hope it is as good as the intro is. I placed it in my library for later.
05/20/2023 01:11Caitlin Sullivan
2w1s.... I want to get into this and it does seem to be a unique take so here is hoping
05/19/2023 23:29Karooke
2w1s das Intro hört sich nicht wirklich spannend an und es hat mich nicht neugierig gemacht.. Aber jeder sollte selber mal rein lesen ..
05/19/2023 23:11
Michibeba
#2w1s# peeked my interest, and it is a completed book, and I could read the introduction with no issue, so I will go ahead and add it to my library
05/19/2023 21:44yes sir
2w1s the first 2 chapter I couldn't understand anything at all it's not clear I thought the Queen infertile then all of sudden she pregnant and dead and how father can do this to his baby kids grow how you teach them
05/19/2023 21:42Stephanie T-H
2w1s After reading the synopsis, I feel a bit confused as to what the plot of this story really is. The grammar of the synopsis is good so Imagine the story is written in the same style. However, I don't know what the story is about so I am going to pass.
05/19/2023 21:29Awurabena Afriyie Asare
2w1s. i believe if there is a prophecy that needs to be fulfilled, it should be well counselled
05/19/2023 21:11icuovrthere
2w1s the summary is interesting, but also do t give too much away. I'll try it and if I see improper grammar, I'll bail. I don't want to have to edit a book in my head just to read it
05/19/2023 20:46Evelyn Lee
2w1s- The plot is interesting but, there are at least two misspellings or incorrect grammar on each page. The book has a tone of telling the reader information instead of letting us read and find out ourselves - 2w1s
05/19/2023 19:39Reader-981734
2w1s - just wanted to read this book by reading its synopsis…. I like prophecies.
05/19/2023 19:17shamrockin_shan
2w1s - this is a different one than most
05/19/2023 17:56HM S
Am not so sure about this book yet but because I've started reading, I am willing to give it a go 😀
05/19/2023 17:03Alice Pinto
One more werewolf story, I really like this genre! the synopsis and introduction are interesting, I am adding it to my list 2w1s
05/19/2023 17:03Janaki Kollepalli
2w1s... god this is a very interesting plot... it is intriguing so guess I am gonna read it...
05/19/2023 16:31Vicki usher
2w1s# what a great plot its different and interesting . It is very intriguing and I can't wait to see what happens in the end
05/19/2023 16:19Martial Flor
2w1s this is such an interesting, intriguing idea! really well played :) the story could use some editing and proofreading, but I'm still on the positive side :)
05/19/2023 16:14
Amal Samir
2w1s, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next. It seems interesting and mysterious and has a good plot
05/19/2023 15:34Bianca Bratu
2w1s Really good story. I love the plot from what I read presented in the summary but I can’t wait to read more to see how it plays out.
05/19/2023 15:16Marie
This seems to be a good read. Needs a little wordsmithing but great start.2w1s
05/19/2023 15:05Reader-315746
why did the wife have to die? 😭 2w1s
05/19/2023 13:28John Robinson
2w1s This is a different story, I think that English may not be the author's first language and having read the start it could do with editing, but interesting.
05/19/2023 12:50Veronika Sladek
Nice short story 2w1s
05/19/2023 12:34
