My Father Is My Mate Comments

  • Gram

    this book is so slow at getting anywhere. can’t keep up with all the changes

    09/21/2023 05:56

  • Amber Chighizola

    Its so confusing. The story keeps changing

    07/31/2023 06:44

  • Elizabeth Harmon

    The grammarical errors assist, the story jumps around constantly. It makes it rather difficult to follow. The other thing that makes it difficult to read is the main character. She is incredibly rude and selfish. She is constantly judging everyone, including her friends and treating them like trash. She comes across as ignorant and abusive rather than cool and strong if character. I was hoping there was going to be character development and she would mature as she gained more strength. Unfortunately, I've made it a third of the way through the book and there is no inkling of this happening. I highly recommend skipping on this one. The story seems like it could have potentional, but I highly recommend the author to reread and rewrite this.

    07/22/2023 08:33

  • Rena D

    I've not read the book yet but I can see the comments. They are rude and unfair. I'll read your book and I pray that you get success in your book journey. I'll try my best to read this book but I'm honestly very busy but I'll make time. Dont give up. You'll prosper in the name of Jesus. Lots of love darling

    07/21/2023 18:35

  • Kendra

    I just can't follow what is supposed to be going on. Having a good idea for a story isn't enough, you have to be able to write it well enough for people to have even the slightest clue what's going on. You are supposed to be painting scenery, characters, interactions, and story lines with words. It's supposed to flow and make sense, not be disjointed and erratic. My kid just learned about all of this in 4th grade. This story is impossible to follow. It was an interesting story idea, but...... 🤷🏼‍♀️

    07/21/2023 17:57

  • Stephanie Godin Duval

    I am really having a hard time keeping track of what is going on. this book is all over the place.

    07/21/2023 17:13

  • Pricilla Carter

    this is awful. I couldn't get passed the Grammer the fact it starts with her in the house then shes at school.

    07/21/2023 16:53

  • Stephanie Godin Duval

    Chrisis is not her father, maybe her mother already had a child when they met.

    07/21/2023 16:27

  • Alexandra Little

    I cloudnt get past the grammar

    07/21/2023 15:43

  • Wendy Mansfield

    if my friends were like hers. I'd get new ones

    06/28/2023 03:45

  • Becca Marie

    This doesn't make sense. April would've been 6 yrs old when Chris turned 18. She would've been old enough to know his parents were mom and dad. Also, Chris should be 30 now that April is 18. Ugh! How on earth would April just act as if Chris was her dad this whole time when she was old enough to know better? Come on author get your story right!

    05/23/2023 17:17

  • Michelle Wong

    She's 18 and her father, Chris, is in his early 20's. Okay. 😁

    05/15/2023 15:12

  • Syl Xiao Lin

    I thought this story was complete. My bad. Please post the updated soon.

    05/09/2023 16:01

  • Donnie Hill-Barry

    im on chapter 11 and its alot going on in this book, I'm confused on some parts. the story line was interesting but I think im calling it quits.

    04/29/2023 15:15

  • Cath Colman

    This has got to be one of the worst written attempts at a book I've ever read. Just about everything is wrong with it content wise to make it a good read. A complete lack of understanding of how to write even the bones of a decent story. I'm guessing the author is pretty young? I don't care about the mileadi g title - shocker and attention grabber if nothing else. Shame about the garbled mess I gave up on paying for well before my purse was hit worse than my love of a good story.

    04/28/2023 22:29

  • North Rose 🌹

    This book is very poorly edited. Run on sentences, missing commas, just bad punctuation. Then the FL is so rude to everyone. I feel like the book was writen in another language then very badly translated.

    03/13/2023 04:20

  • Liz Sedio

    What the actual f**k?

    03/11/2023 23:56

  • Ali K

    those were my good seeing eyes

    03/10/2023 01:18