My Father Is My Mate

My Father Is My Mate

Inga Nonkanyezi

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Introduction

I followed the amazing scent of hot chocolate and mint I was I closed my eyes and inhaled the amazing smell I smiled and realized I was just a few steps away from meeting my mate
I was already planning what we are gonna do for the rest of our lives and how many kids we will have I thanked the moon goddess silently for this wonderful gift
I followed the scent to the big bizarre kitchen my Father made claiming "you will have space for cooking dear" his gruffy deep voice
No!!!
How could this happen? I shook my head in disbelief my heart beat's pace went up I felt myself getting warm and sweaty I dropped my books
My mouth hung in shock and disbelief my dad looked up and saw me his eyes widened in shock. That's the last thing I saw before falling.
April lives in a small town with her father Chris, the Alpha of their pack. She was told by Chris that her mother died when she was very young. She always knows that her father no longer has a wife because of her.
The pain grows up with her, she expected the pain will be relieved after she turned 18 and everything will be ok.
But what if she is the mate of her father, how will things go on? Will her father accept his ‘daughter’ as his mate or they will still have each other as a family rather than a mate?
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Comments

  • Gram

    this book is so slow at getting anywhere. can’t keep up with all the changes

    09/21/2023 05:56
  • Amber Chighizola

    Its so confusing. The story keeps changing

    07/31/2023 06:44
  • Elizabeth Harmon

    The grammarical errors assist, the story jumps around constantly. It makes it rather difficult to follow. The other thing that makes it difficult to read is the main character. She is incredibly rude and selfish. She is constantly judging everyone, including her friends and treating them like trash. She comes across as ignorant and abusive rather than cool and strong if character. I was hoping there was going to be character development and she would mature as she gained more strength. Unfortunately, I've made it a third of the way through the book and there is no inkling of this happening. I highly recommend skipping on this one. The story seems like it could have potentional, but I highly recommend the author to reread and rewrite this.

    07/22/2023 08:33
  • Rena D

    I've not read the book yet but I can see the comments. They are rude and unfair. I'll read your book and I pray that you get success in your book journey. I'll try my best to read this book but I'm honestly very busy but I'll make time. Dont give up. You'll prosper in the name of Jesus. Lots of love darling

    07/21/2023 18:35
  • Kendra

    I just can't follow what is supposed to be going on. Having a good idea for a story isn't enough, you have to be able to write it well enough for people to have even the slightest clue what's going on. You are supposed to be painting scenery, characters, interactions, and story lines with words. It's supposed to flow and make sense, not be disjointed and erratic. My kid just learned about all of this in 4th grade. This story is impossible to follow. It was an interesting story idea, but...... 🤷🏼‍♀️

    07/21/2023 17:57
  • Stephanie Godin Duval

    I am really having a hard time keeping track of what is going on. this book is all over the place.

    07/21/2023 17:13
  • Pricilla Carter

    this is awful. I couldn't get passed the Grammer the fact it starts with her in the house then shes at school.

    07/21/2023 16:53
  • Stephanie Godin Duval

    Chrisis is not her father, maybe her mother already had a child when they met.

    07/21/2023 16:27
  • Alexandra Little

    I cloudnt get past the grammar

    07/21/2023 15:43
  • Wendy Mansfield

    if my friends were like hers. I'd get new ones

    06/28/2023 03:45