Determined. Comments
Blue Fish
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!! FINALLY!!!! How can he not know what happened? Was he truly so lost he couldn't feel what she was going through? I hope they can work it out BUT he has a lot of explaining to do and NEEDS to earn her forgiveness. I'm routing for them.
06/27/2021 17:58Sarah Kruger-Padgett
I am so addicted to this story. Even through all the tears I have cried I am still team Elijah. I hope in the furture he can redeem himself and prove himself worthy of Colt she deserves all the happiness she can get.
06/27/2021 17:03Candy Byers
I'm so hook on this book!!!!! 😍😍😍😍
06/26/2021 20:38
Sonia McLeod
thank you 045612 yes I agree Elijah needs to suffer for all the pain he put his mate though but I think it's his way off punishing himself especially after losing his daughter I am team Elijah also I hope they do find their way back to each other it will not be easy also he has her family who are so against him rightfully so can't wait for the next chapter 😘😘🇬🇧
06/26/2021 20:19
Amy Sabatino
are we gonna get a pov from elijah about everything and see her at the wedding
06/26/2021 19:11Amy Sabatino
when elijah destroyed Nora's play gym outside and took off. when he returned he tried giving colt lilacs which she is allergic to. colt slept alone woke up with Elijah in wolf form on the floor and covered him with a blanket. when colt woke up again the blanket was folded at the end of the bed with a single daisy lying on top
06/26/2021 17:03amber sweet
HaHa cant mess with us like that its mean. and daisies are her favorite
06/26/2021 16:54
Nichole83pa
Aren’t Daisys her favorite flower? I’m drawing a blank.. OH MY GOD I legit almost cried when I read you would be taking a 3 week break!! Need more!! Oh Lordy I’m scared how this is gonna go between them 🤦🏼♀️😩
06/26/2021 14:10Sonia McLeod
wait isn't she Allergic today as is if I remember correctly I think he still loves her this story is so sad and yet I always say I am not going to read it till it's finished but can't stay away 😘😘🇬🇧
06/26/2021 14:02Blue Fish
ME!!! I tried to find the part with the daisy but couldn't....probably because It was almost 2 am and I was tired 😆...lol. I'm mad at myself because I know there is a deeper meaning behind the flower ...So I'm sure he could smell her scent...so why did he leave? Did he see her? Did he see her new tattoo over his mark? Does he even give a rat's butt about her any more? I know lol you can't say yet... I'm just anxious to find out and seriously tired lol.
06/26/2021 07:06
olliesea_bengals
wait. where is the chapter about a second mate? I had surgery and on pain killers so I might have “drug read” some chapters. 🤣🤣🤣
06/25/2021 03:51Nichole83pa
Oh man I’m dying over here 😂 I try and hold off reading the chapters so I can have a few to read at once but that NEVER works. Cant wait for more and cant wait for the face to face (that will hopefully happen at the wedding)🙏
06/24/2021 15:48olliesea_bengals
What did she get for her tattoo??
06/24/2021 06:42Nichole83pa
Definitely think Colt needs a change of scenery but I have some questions (that hopefully you can answer) 1. If Colt were to end up with her other mate would Elijah feel it like Colt feels Elijah cheating on her? 2. Why won’t Colt allow the bond to be broken since it kinda already is? 3. Will we get an Elijah point of view chapter or two so we can see where his head is? obviously he’s still cheating and I don’t get why Colt is allowing her health to deteriorate for a man she no longer wants?? I love your writing!! Definitely need more
06/22/2021 19:00
L.Tucker
oh and when are we going to hear more about her second mate?
06/20/2021 23:18L.Tucker
of course Zach will accept. is she pregnant?
06/20/2021 23:17Tabitha Nichols
what exactly does “dead to me mean”? how is she going to endure the cheating without breaking the bond? if she broke the bond and hooked up with the other guy her soul would be hole? correct?
06/20/2021 04:25Nichole83pa
so the reason she has two mates is because she’s actually two people? I love all the new Colt information but when will we get some Colt Elijah one on one? I’m dying to see how that would go?
06/19/2021 18:00Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
thank you for this chapter....there is home yet for Colt to have babies!!!! she would make an awesome Mom.
06/19/2021 16:58
Lynora Crawford
With Colt being who she is, it doesn't surprise me that she refuses to remove the bond... despite all of the self-esteem and self-preservation training she did with Maeve.
06/17/2021 14:18Ellie Vasileva
I would think reality hits when Eli is hangover and that's why he gets drunk all over again to forget, his torment and point of view would probably explain as to why he is doing what he has been doing...love that story so far!
06/17/2021 13:20Donna Grogan
Thank you for answering the broken bond. Someone needs to knock some sense in her mate. What he did is wrong. But he is hurting and her gone for so long with no contact fueled his depression.
06/17/2021 13:10Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
what happened to the Male Wild Cat in Chapter 56?
06/17/2021 10:14Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
okay, she's not giving up on Eli, but how is she going to survive his cheating?
06/17/2021 10:08Tabitha Nichols
loved the sibling fight. not so loving her Elijah forgiveness. every time he sleeps with someone it puts her in a 2 day coma and that’s acceptable?
06/17/2021 03:09
rocknrollqueen91
Are we eventually heading towards a happy ending, or is this going to keep being super dark? I love your writing, I just want to be prepared!
06/17/2021 02:54Blue Fish
Oh sorry almost forgot to mention this.... I love how you wrote their sibling rivalry!!!
06/17/2021 02:27Blue Fish
Ok but does he know she's in the hospital and almost died? Has anyone told him anything??? Or is he to broken to even care?
06/17/2021 02:24Sniderin
Anyone else hoping for a Maeve and Zachary coupling??? Team Machary ❤❤❤
06/16/2021 22:42Donna Grogan
I think Zackary should go after Eli. To protect colt. Eli most to really gone. Because he should feel her pain . Plus she can't be pregnant she was gone for a long time.
06/16/2021 12:41Blue Fish
Is it the mate bond as she thinks? Does Eli know what's happening with Colt or is he to far gone mentally to even care at this point? I'm so 😥 at this point.
06/16/2021 10:26Megan Docchar
why do I get the feeling their gonna reveal she's pregnant or something 🤔
06/14/2021 15:07olliesea_bengals
I think Zachary will accept. He loves Colt (like a sister) and not just because I’m he’s honor bound to do it. Kalvin is probably (hopefully) going to beat the crap out of Elijah. I’m sure Colt and Maeve will do the unbinding and she gets control of her cat and wolf. I’m afraid Elijah will try to hurt or re-mark Colt afterwards in his insanity.
06/14/2021 04:57Sonia McLeod
you really don't give anything away left us with a cliffhanger I feel for Cole and Elijah they have fought so hard to be together I know he must feel like dying and that's why he is slowly destroying himself I think the Two of them need to be together to heal each other I hope that's where your taking this story I hope that's what his parents are going to ask Zachary to find Elijah to heal colt Well it's your story I just want a happy ending 😘😘🇬🇧
06/14/2021 01:40Nichole83pa
Girl, you have a way of making me route for “the bad guy” AKA Elijah It’s easy to judge but I want Colt and Eli to end up together (not sure if that’s possible) his shitty treatment of Colt isn’t cool but maybe they can come together and help heal each other? Also do I detect a possible spin off for Zachary?? Amazing writing just superb!!! 💕 Can’t wait for the next update
06/13/2021 17:49Blue Fish
When is the next update??
06/13/2021 15:17Blue Fish
Does Eli even know about Colt and what happened?? Is there any hope??😭
06/13/2021 15:16olliesea_bengals
Poor Colt 😞 she deserves so much more. I think this was the nail in the coffin of her so-called relationship with Elijah. I hope Kalvin rips out Elijah’s cheating, black, little heart. 🤬
06/13/2021 04:57
Gosia J
I hope that Eli is going to remeber who his mate is and how much she cold.give him ... love, family, peace, trust and warm heart. I just hope he does 🤞
06/12/2021 11:30
Colleen MJ
I sometimes wonder when has enough been too much. Has the last button been pushed that leaves Colt at the last straw. Wishing her dead and sleeping with Nora's mother may be a point he can't redeem himself from. Just a thought.
06/12/2021 04:56Sonia McLeod
poor Elijah he is blaming the wrong people his parents and mate when the blame lies with the killers I guess that's why he turns to Nora mother trying to make another baby to replace his daughter then lashing out at everyone I feel for him so 5 years from now him and cole will meet up again at Nora grave I am so sad right now for them both😘😘🇬🇧
06/12/2021 00:43Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
wow!!! I hope both of them can pull themselves together long enough to salvage their relationship and grow together as a power couple.
06/11/2021 19:41amber sweet
no ya did good I just hope Eli pulls his head out of his ass
06/08/2021 21:08Lynora Crawford
Poor Elijah...😢
06/08/2021 06:26Sonia McLeod
💔💔
06/08/2021 04:31Sonia McLeod
tell her she's mine love the video I guess Elijah never thought about that when he broke the bond I don't see how they will go from here he broke the trust and the bond by cheating 😘😘🇬🇧 thank you for the update
06/05/2021 22:27amber sweet
awesome chapter and added songs plz say Elijah doesn't finish his act and stops befor its to late. He and Colt deserve each other
06/05/2021 21:17
Jenn McCoy
so he broke the bond and that makes me furious but the fact he lied about Nora being his daughter is huge! yes I feel bad for him but he didn't start caring for her till colt and that forced him to open his eyes and he kept close to Nora for selfish reasons as well. he didn't deserve either. I hope he gets what's coming to him!
06/02/2021 19:18Sniderin
Aaaaand I'm no longer Team Elijah. I think the fact she had to break the bond to shift, though she chose not to, was an indication that Elijah wasn't meant for her. I'm so disappointed in him....
06/02/2021 07:09Nichole83pa
You have invested a lot of time into Elijahs back story and I may be the odd man out but I still have hope that he’s not actually the asshole that he seems to be. although it’s kinda hard to come back from abandoning your dying mate to have relations with someone else 10-20 feet away. Colt deserves an awesome ending I just wish it was with Elijah ☹️
06/01/2021 23:47
Kathy Conrady
I so want her done with Elijah and her and Zachary to get a 2nd chance together, who ditches Elijah's pack and he and Colt run her retreats together
06/01/2021 20:24Jenn McCoy
he deserves everything that's going to come his way. he is so selfish I've said that from the get go she deserves better! that wildcat that smelt her by the mountain hopefully would be better but what happened to him? Also I am truly appalled at Elijah he just keeps hurting her he clearly does not deserve her it would be nice if she could get wild cat and Zachary. he has always been so caring towards her trying to get Elijah to make the right choices but you can't make someone. cant wait to see where you take things. love the story much love
06/01/2021 03:11Lynora Crawford
Poor Colt...I am heartbroken for her.
06/01/2021 01:54Sarah Kruger-Padgett
i am so terribly heart broken 😢
06/01/2021 00:40Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
I love this story!!! but I'm with Mave on this one!!!
05/31/2021 22:17Sonia McLeod
wow I feel like I can't read anymore I feel sorry for Elijah but why did he hide it from his mate that he had a child I thought wolfs couldn't have a child unless it was with their mate now he is destroying colt because he is suffering I don't see how she will ever forgive him and I am sure he feels her suffering and still lies with bitch colt brothers and father are going to kill I don't understand why he would do this to colt 🥲🥲
05/31/2021 21:13Amy Sabatino
when is the next update
05/31/2021 21:05Nichole83pa
So who is the real Elijah? Is it the guy who so desperately tried to be a good mate to colt or this asshat that has zero regards for anyone’s feelings? How did he not sense her if Zachary did? Ahh so many questions!! This book has a way of grabbing your heart and squeezing. Excellent writing! I can’t wait for more! ❤️
05/31/2021 17:34Lynora Crawford
I suspected that about Nora. Poor Colt, though... that would be heart-shattering, no matter the reason for his words.
05/31/2021 15:59Sarah Kruger-Padgett
i am crying right now! i want them to work out
05/31/2021 15:36Karina Marthinsen
what and ass, i really do Hope she lets Jim go, and find someone who can love who she is, but i think shes about to shift, due to her emotion
05/31/2021 11:31amber sweet
really come on you couldnt have done 2 ch
05/31/2021 09:52olliesea_bengals
Oof, that last chapter … ouch. Poor Colt. The hits just keep coming.
05/31/2021 09:16amber sweet
with then decision to kill Elijah due to severing the mate bond? I hope you know what ur doing
05/30/2021 20:59Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
oh no...
05/28/2021 01:47amber sweet
oh no Elijah is probably loosing it.
05/27/2021 15:07Lynora Crawford
How heart-wrenching! With this development, I'm glad she chose not to break it... yes, I can sometimes be fickle in my sympathies for characters. As a side note, I'd just like to mention that it equally amuses and frustrates me that you give nothing away (about the developing story) in your responses, other than a "🤔" to everything. A lot of authors rush to reassure the readers, and while it's great to have that, you holding information until the chapters are released simply increases the intrigue and excitement for the next update. In short - thanks for being a great author!
05/27/2021 02:39Sonia McLeod
omg no not his sister poor Elijah so glad she decided not to break her bond because now he is going to need her more than ever I hope she doesn't get so angry and shift why she is by herself thank you for the update although it was sad 🥲
05/27/2021 00:46Sonia McLeod
poor Elijah he is not going to like that maybe she will still love him even after the unbinding spell I know he can't or won't give her up so easily 😘😘🇬🇧
05/27/2021 00:26Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
okay so no more Elijah? what happens to him? and who's the other guy?
05/25/2021 22:40Tabitha Nichols
is devoted out yet? I looked for it and didn’t see it.
05/25/2021 18:35Tabitha Nichols
thinking about it.., I’m glad you bond with Elijah will be broken. he tried to take so much away from her, including her life. she needs someone that will be her partner and not someone trying to dominate her.
05/25/2021 18:35Lynora Crawford
Hmm... I'd normally be devastated over something like what Maeve just revealed, but Colt has struggled so much with Elijah, (and he has such trouble learning) that I'm kind of rooting for her to go through with it. I'm really looking forward to how their story moves forward from that, or if Colt will choose a different path...
05/24/2021 00:24Amy Sabatino
so no more Elijah? what about that other guy
05/23/2021 11:33olliesea_bengals
Ahhh. Such a good update! Also, as someone who has had anemia issues for the last few years and is finally getting the proper care, take care of you!!! 😘 You mentioned a sequel… does that mean Determined is almost over? Please don’t leave us on an Elijah/Colt cliff hanger.
05/23/2021 11:29
gem lover2
I love the idea that there are different animal shifters. It's a very interesting idea. I haven't seen other stories on here with this kind of world. I'm kinda interested how different it is.
05/15/2021 21:31gem lover2
Elijah is becoming such a sweet guy ahhh!!!😍😍😍
05/14/2021 05:25Sonia McLeod
well Elijah is not going to like this after all that the 2 of them have been through I hope it Maeve mate and I don't think Colt would be able to handle 2 mates she can just about handle Elijah I can't believe he followed her now that's true love ❤️
05/13/2021 04:17Tabitha Nichols
I am hoping she doesn’t have 2 mates. the girl has had a hard life and should not have to be torn between 2 males. less stress more happy ending
05/12/2021 03:32L.Tucker
2 mates😂😂, that’s going to go over well 🤣🤣
05/11/2021 16:13Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
ooòh! my!!!! 2 mates!! Elijah is going to go ballistic!! can't wait!!!
05/11/2021 01:41
caroline p
that was wow! I am so ready for the next chapter! thank u!
05/10/2021 18:45Sarah Kruger-Padgett
I hope she doesn't have to choose between her two mates or animals. I want the 3 to be happy and accepting of each other. Hope that both mates are needed one for each animal! As hard as it is to be patient for updates I completely understand the lambing season I didn't have any luck with my ewes this year so no lambs.
05/10/2021 17:56Lynora Crawford
Oh my...Elijah is NOT likely to be happy about having to share his mate. I did NOT see that coming, but I'm quite curious to see where you take this!
05/10/2021 14:53amber sweet
I wish the update or a little more frequent I can't just sit here week after week please I have a feeling she didn't go in the water right I was trying to tell her something and be damned if that new guy is going to take Elijah's girl she's going to end up with two animals and two mates for those animals isn't she Elijah will not share this oughta be interesting
05/10/2021 14:19Amanda Jade
Elijah is not going to like this one bit. that's all I'm gonna say.
05/10/2021 13:46Karina Marthinsen
ohh how exciting, shes got 2 mates, wonder og its maeve or the new mate, who is in the water
05/10/2021 13:45amber sweet
when's the next update
05/03/2021 13:08Lacey June Naggs
I need an update!
04/29/2021 14:18Anna K. Querbach
congrats on the lambs!!! expecting anymore?
04/24/2021 15:16
PirateSwag
Ahhh! I just read the last couple of updates and gahh I thought they were headed in the right direction 😭 On a side note, I just spent a weekend in the Cherokee, NC area of the mountains so now I feel like I'm IN THE BOOK 😳 I love it 🥰
04/16/2021 23:33
Sonia Mcleod
omg I thought she was leaving him too that's why I asked if he is getting another mate boy he has a temper she has every right to be afraid of him he tried to attack her how are they to go on from this
04/15/2021 22:04Allison Underdonk Peterman
These are great chapters! I hope she is leaving the country to figure out stuff with her dad.i will be shocked if Elijah doesn't go 😆 looking forward to upcoming chapters
04/14/2021 13:03Lynora Crawford
So...I notice it now says "To be continued" instead of "updating." I really hope this doesn't mean you're taking a break from the story? I am enjoying this so much, and that was a HUGE thing she just dropped! I don't know how long I can wait for an update! 😉 Seriously though, wonderfully written, as always! If you are taking a hiatus, I'll still keep checking back for updates! 😊
04/14/2021 05:18Sonia Mcleod
thank you for the 2 chapters enjoyed it tell she said she is leaving poor Eli that was such a beautiful gesture giving her the house to help people like themselves again she seems lost will Eli get another mate 😘😘🇬🇧
04/13/2021 16:29Gosia J
Thank you :) for the update...I love your work its :)
04/13/2021 06:28Allison Underdonk Peterman
I am glad she is opening up his eyes and seeing things. its sweet that he has looked for her. I am still curious what he is hiding from her that he mentioned before. I do hope she gets her animals maybe a mixture of them? so she keeps both instincts. or if she doesn't maybe the shaman is able to secure that her children will for sure get theirs? which seems to scare her more then anything.
04/12/2021 14:58L.Tucker
I love this story. I’m hoping she gets her animals.
04/11/2021 22:30amber sweet
?can't wait for new chapters hopefully Elijah has his ahha moment
04/10/2021 14:32Jocelyn Cabillan Ortiz
I really love this book. I have a very good buddy of mine that was like Elijah. lol. he finally grew up in his late 40's!
04/09/2021 04:33
