Years ago, Paul MacKenzie left Apple Bay with a broken heart after his mother chose his abusive stepfather over him, yet despite all the struggles he faced on his own, Paul grew up and became a successful novelist. 

Serena Ellison was just a kid when her best-friend's brother and childhood crush left home without a word. Years later, fate crosses their paths during a Hawaiian vacation where Serena decides she must convince him to return home before it's too late to mend broken bonds.

Going Home

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this was a great book.  I would recommend it and this Authors writing style. Nicely done.

Lu Fierro

Karen Kovac

really liking this book!  thank you.  over 40 chapters in so far. 

please give your story an ending!  that is so great when authors finish without dragging on for months. 

correction... "That's been a little TOUGH..." Tough was the missing word. Thank you for reading and (it seems) liking my story! your comment means a lot to me! Thank you!

fyi, this story is about two chapters shy of an ending. The outlines have been written, now I need to fill them with satisfying content that hopefully will please most readers, as well as finding an acceptable way to strip George completely so that he and Paul have a realistic beginning.  That's been a little what with the trauma he inflicted when Paul was helpless. I'm working on it and thinking about it often.

hi. I updated yesterday. hopefully you read. It took me some time to get the feeling I was looking for, I was also updating another story. My Muse drives but I'm always happy where she stops. Thank you! 

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