When a Billionaire Falls for a Surrogate Mother Comments
Vin Vin
the naming truly a mess. chicago and charles everhwhere. and Fiona is giving up so easily eventho she alr have Rhoads family background now. i can understand the dissapointment of grandma and that dagmar. darwin need to be hit hard, his regret only shorterm before he become vengeful again. he never repentant. otherwise its good, i hope it will finish properly and have satisfying ending
07/27/2024 21:32Visitor
the last chapter was a mess. double copies of almost every paragraph. I remember quite a few chapters back being the complete chapter before but seemed to be mis-numbered then the right chapter (all put under the one chapter). the he/she constantly changing especially when talking about Ashton. the story line is great if you can keep everything straight.
06/01/2024 05:29Kathyann Gordon
love the intro 😍
05/04/2024 11:27