WARNING 18+
"I, Ambrose Rita, accept Yulia Henzi as my mate!"
I wanted to laugh at the sight, but the silence shut me up. I was about to turn around but suddenly, a possessive arm wrapped around my waist and pulled me closer to his warm body. 
I could smell a mixture of cologne and musk that was both tantalizing and intimidating. My heart pounded as I tried to figure out who was talking and who was holding me.
But before I could figure it out, a chilling voice broke the silence and sent shivers down my spine.
"I can smell you, girl."
 The voice sounded like someone who'd been smoking for years, the tone low, husky, and threatening. It was warm and moist. Before I could react, he added, "At last, I have found you, my mate."


The Alpha King's Fated Mate

The kiss

the lead girl is acting like a child but tells the guy to don't treat her as a child. She's overly emotional, and the story has changed so it makes a bit difficult to stay on track and understand how everything flows. Four is idk but this is Ok

Uinise

so many errors such as graze instead of gaze, aloud instead of allowed, really need a proofreader 

The Alpha King's Fated Mate Comments

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