The Mafia King's abandoned bride Comments

Anjenette

disappointing. the fmc is almost stupidly nieve. you would of thought she didn't grow up in a city or that she wasn't adopted in a bad environment. or that she'd had no jobs like the stories say she does. also doesn't say what her age I'd but what the write put in college age. the write make her sounds like she's under 15 with how nieve child like she's made out to be.it doesn't take well over a week to figure out your family doesn't like you when they show it to your face specially them saying they lost you at a young age & treat the adopted daughter better because she just has better rich people manners. I'm only at chapter 15 which I don't think I can keep going when it's not realistic & the writer wrote the fmc to not have normal human self awareness.