The Vampire's Kitten Comments

  • Jamesia Shepherd

    is there going to be another book about the other sister

    05/17/2023 03:44

  • Deborah B

    shame this start is like a repeat of the first book in many ways, inclding nasty parent and ‘kitten’ descriptions

    04/23/2023 21:48

  • Rafael

    #r2e9# I iike the introduction. it seems a interesting story but I think I will read the first book and then this one. I hope to be a fun read

    04/08/2023 21:12

  • Marie K

    r2e9 enjoy reading it so far…

    04/08/2023 19:56

  • KayCee Kai Malanos

    r2e9 i love vampire stories.. intresting start of dtory.. already like the first chapters

    04/08/2023 18:33

  • Lindsay Ameel

    r2e9 Starts interesting

    04/08/2023 09:52

  • John Robinson

    r2e9 I have only read the first couple of chapters but like the story so far, it's intriguing hope it carries on being a good read.

    04/08/2023 09:48

  • Reader-731248

    r2e9 A good romance. This could be an interesting story to follow, and see how it goes.

    04/08/2023 09:05

  • Chluey Nicole Acanto

    r2e9 loving the book

    04/08/2023 07:21

  • pinkturtle

    r2e9 something different!!

    04/08/2023 05:01

  • Terrin Garis

    #r2e9# The story was good because of the plot but the writing could use some work to be less confusing

    04/08/2023 03:35

  • Christina

    r2e9. absolutely love this book! I love all the books! such a good story! have read multiple times.

    04/08/2023 00:08

  • Emalyn

    is Bastet and Damien in this book?

    03/09/2023 20:32

  • Marie Gaffney

    I also don’t like that the second Mauve came into the picture the entire story changed and revolves around her and fae. The story no longer feels like Mercy’s story or the story of the 3 sisters.

    10/30/2022 12:14

  • Marie Gaffney

    Another big disappointment is the fact that nothing is explained. Why did Edward go through all that trouble with having 3 powerful daughters. He spent so much time and energy on picking the right women and experiment on some to have 2 strong sisters and an even stronger one who was half recrent just to show up and say nah I don’t want you guys anymore. I mean really? I fully expected him to take Mauve and still do what he set out to do but nope. Very infuriating for a reader to have so little explained and to not have the battle we all waited for. SMH

    10/28/2022 22:52

  • Marie Gaffney

    I am definitely disappointed I haven’t exactly finished this yet but I’m almost done it. I was so sucked into book 1 and than this book started out great but than it definitely dragged to many things out before the battle. I can’t even call it a battle or a war that’s the biggest disappointment of all. Book 1 and almost all of book 2 was leading up to a war that never happens and that is like a slap in the face.

    10/28/2022 22:41

  • Sakina van bokhoven

    Can this be read as a stand alone?

    06/29/2022 07:08

  • Heather Barela

    ur books unfortunately are not the same value as the others that are not on the unlimited! ur writing is amiture at best… ur 1st book u couldn’t tell who was talking & jumped all over the place in the second half of the book… definitely not worth $30+ I highly doubt this one is any different.

    05/16/2022 02:13

  • Pamela L. Moore

    Look for anyone looking to read the second book. All three books are on Amazon.com. Also the second book doesn’t start off where the first book left off. Those Characters don’t come into the book until much later. I haven’t read the second yet. l just read the review of the second book. I’m buy all three books soon.

    02/01/2022 21:07

  • Reader-220923

    is this the continuation of the devil’s bride cause it doesn’t seem so

    01/24/2022 21:39

  • Terrie Clarissa

    book 3 part one is on Amazon, part two of book 3 is being written on the Authors website 😀

    01/21/2022 17:04

  • Malwina Ogrodowska

    Does anyone know when the new chapters are gonna be released?

    01/06/2022 10:31

  • Kerrie Pope

    I love these books. just waiting & waiting for the next chapters to read.

    01/05/2022 01:11

  • Charlotte George

    is this bast's and Octavia's sister

    11/29/2021 02:24

  • Vickie Puckett

    I loved the book, but what about Sinclair and the baby. Does Mercy and Alariac have any kids? Octavia and Kerr baby or babies. What about the twins?

    10/07/2021 05:45

  • Kitty Niyah

    i love this book😍

    09/30/2021 18:14

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:12

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    love that the stores flow into one and the addition of characters. just hope the sisters will make it through their father.

    09/20/2021 00:11

  • Victoria DeCuir Stewart

    I’m upset about the Sinclair situation!

    09/19/2021 22:25

  • Geana S

    I'm having an issue with this book being tied to The Devil's Bride. If it's tied to it as the next book how can this guy be the "Vampire King" when the Vampire king was still very much alive on the last page of the other book.

    09/16/2021 13:24

  • Erica Peralta

    what is the last chapter of the second book?

    09/14/2021 10:33

  • Kayla Marie Koepp

    please tell me what the nams of book 3 is

    09/11/2021 22:04

  • Anna Fellevik

    where can I find the martiarch? How Do I get to read the Contineu of this book????

    09/07/2021 10:46

  • Sarah Ramos

    this is not the same ppl from devils bride what a waste of money n time

    09/07/2021 06:42

  • Stephanie Bell

    which continents are where? Where are Bast and the others, and where are Alaric, Mercy, and William from?

    09/07/2021 05:14

  • Tara Williams

    soooo excited 😆😊😊😊

    09/06/2021 05:31

  • Stephanie Bell

    is the vampire kings bride the devils bride from Damiens point of view or is it a different story, and when can I read it?

    09/04/2021 04:55

  • Ingri Norville

    i can't fine the matriarch

    09/03/2021 04:30

  • Marcellene Essex

    so far so good it is somewhat like the devils bride but different

    08/29/2021 18:49

  • Piper McMillen

    is this supposed to be bast and Damien's daught or like a spin off

    08/10/2021 00:25

  • Faith Stringfellow

    ok I get it now she is the last element daughter

    07/15/2021 11:11

  • Faith Stringfellow

    kaykirita invite code 51TFNL I tried this and it says create a account then what am i design. there is nowhere I can find books

    07/15/2021 09:25

  • Faith Stringfellow

    I could not find u on instagram

    07/15/2021 09:16

  • Faith Stringfellow

    will you be starting where you finished in the devil's bride

    07/14/2021 07:20

  • Faith Stringfellow

    it says this is the 2nd book to the devil's bride but this does not follow from the first book. is the devil's bride a sequel or just multiple similar story line of the first book

    07/14/2021 07:19

  • Faith Stringfellow

    I can not find the matriarch

    07/12/2021 11:01

  • Karen D

    is the 3rd book being uploaded here like the last 2?

    07/10/2021 10:39

  • Shirley Culbreth

    Does anyone happen to know the name of the third book to the Devil's Bride, I'm almost done with the second book. I've asked on the search engine and nothing comes up. Can someone please help.

    06/08/2021 15:06

  • Madeline Ross

    when does Bast come in?

    06/05/2021 02:55

  • Alison Eardley

    is this the second book to the devils bride? x

    05/31/2021 13:56

  • Nisaiah Smith

    I have no idea why I laughed when he said he slaughtered the people in church for fun. why did I laugh at that 😂😂

    05/26/2021 03:56

  • Terrie Clarissa

    For those of you who don't know, a third book is being written but not on any of these writing apps. KeyKirita is posting on his own website on the app Spaces by Wix, under the name KeyKirita. The invite code is 51TFNL, there is a monthly fee to read the books, hope this helps.

    05/25/2021 03:38

  • Sheila

    It sucks if this is the end to this book. There could be so much more it's a great book not a good ending if it is 😔

    05/03/2021 15:01

  • HeatherP312

    it says “the end” so I’m guessing this book is done now? her Instagram is gone too.. hope everything is ok

    05/02/2021 11:20

  • Geraldine Ferraren

    is this book done?

    05/02/2021 03:26

  • Laura Chesshire

    i really like this book! there were a few areas in the book that takes time to tie together and almost stopped reading but I did like the plot twists and the ending is a good way to set up for the next book. @keykirita are you rewiting this book like the Matriarch? and wheb can we expect the 3rd book?

    04/27/2021 16:43

  • Tina-Marie Mason

    I don’t understand why M becomes such a B after things starts happening. I mean why act that way towards people you just met. it’s out of character for her

    04/15/2021 13:39

  • reader2121

    Sinclair needs to hurry up and find somebody so he could stop getting in the way of relationships.

    04/07/2021 04:03

  • reader2121

    I don’t know why but I don’t like Sinclair and mercy at all.

    04/07/2021 02:51

  • Jason Michael Kerns

    I would like some graphic penetration illustrations please

    04/04/2021 05:30

  • Jenny M Bloodworth

    anyone know why the Vampires Kitten isn’t loading? I was almost done reading it. 🥺

    03/31/2021 01:15

  • Reader-844888

    is the site down for the Vampires Kitten???

    03/22/2021 00:11

  • Shirley A. Culbreth

    it's sad how you let the two have their first love making interaction. that wasn't good at all. I gave it a negative 100. spitting in the face, then throwing against the wall, really!! not good at all. you could have done so much better than that. very disrespectful and disappointing.

    03/17/2021 01:24

  • Serena Hart

    I'm still trying to figure out how this book ties in with the Devil's Bride, a bit confused here. And I'm a little disappointed at the behavior of these Vampires when the ones in the Devil's Bride were so thoughtful and kind to the ones they fancied.

    03/11/2021 18:21

  • Reader-465340

    why can’t i load the monarch it says you have 4 book I hav it in libray w sev chap unlocked now won’t load I noticed this book has labeled as complete plaz say there more and if you’ve had to move story’s to diff app lik I’ve seen other authors due to rights ext pleas lev lik note at end let us kno where to find ya you are truly talented I’d still lov follow these stories!

    03/05/2021 02:21

  • Reader-465340

    it’s been awhile since update I hope all is well I lik raffery helps explain pull a lot together setup for a Sinclair side story well personally I love bast Lucifer and kids dyin for more if ur doin a well it b 4 acc if count octavias book.

    03/05/2021 02:12

  • Susanne Conley

    I'm curious....is this the book that follows the devils bride? I'm seriously pissed because I'm hanging in limbo from the devils bride....ugh

    03/02/2021 18:49

  • Kim Campbell

    love the book so far. is there going to be more

    02/28/2021 02:57

  • Emma L Landers-LeGros

    is this all for book 2? i absolutely love these 2 books but is that seriously how it will end? kinda disappointed. hopefully theres a book 3 if thats the end of book 2.

    02/24/2021 19:58

  • R.L.Marcelain

    Honestly, they never explained Basts parents. if it seems that he was experimenting with Recreants to sire powerful children, How is Bast his daughter? where is the connection between Jennifer and Edward? Who is Jennifer that Edward would know her? is that really her mother? Did know one else think of this?

    02/24/2021 03:05

  • R.L.Marcelain

    I honestly, a bit over this book. it was fantastic in the beginning then, it started to jump around a lot. Honestly, Olivia wanted Edward dead. they should've had the sisters kill him, and finish it then, decide what to do with the Elemental Kingdom. like Bast take it over considering she's not fully a Vampire. Olivia already has the shifters, Mercy, could learn to rule the recreants and has Aleric. Bast could unite the Kingdoms with Damien and rule the Elementals. Sinclair would be happy with Maeve. I honestly didn't see a point to create Rafferty. that's where it lost me.

    02/24/2021 03:00

  • R.L.Marcelain

    are there going to be any more updates??

    02/24/2021 02:50

  • Gloria Harris

    This do not have anything to do with the devils bride ...terrible thing to do have people start a book and don't finish the story

    02/23/2021 11:45

  • Hl Drake

    what the hell. Devils Bride ended on such a huge cliff hanger. why is this one not have the continuatio. WTF.

    02/23/2021 01:36

  • Dawn Skadan

    also want to know what happens to Rafferty.

    02/21/2021 20:01

  • Dawn Skadan

    yes book 3 please, if not that is the worst ending I've ever read.

    02/21/2021 19:59

  • Jamesia Shepherd

    book 3 is a must we want to know what happens to maeve and Sinclair and the baby and the rest of the group

    02/20/2021 09:00

  • Michelle Kretz

    book 3 is a must !

    02/19/2021 08:34

  • Shelby

    Sam and Samantha and of course Marcy and Alaric and how do the twins continue to grow

    02/16/2021 00:51

  • Shelby

    Maeve and Sinclair

    02/16/2021 00:49

  • Shelby

    there has to be more what happens with M and S

    02/16/2021 00:48

  • Enaria Czarnecki

    Do you get more coins daily? How do you read on without pay to get coins?

    02/15/2021 21:36

  • Amanda Caruana

    I can't believe it's the end!!! I absolutely LOVED this book!! Hoping there will be more to these characters x

    02/11/2021 22:05

  • Nelly Perez-Yip

    Sad to see it end.. Got so engrossed with all these characters.. Still so much I wish this book would had covered.. But I'm just a reader and not a writer.. Hope to read more of them in another book.. Would like to know about each of their lives and what became of them.. Their children and how they are all holding up.. What happened to Nancy, Edward and Amber?? Did they find their other siblings?? What happened Rafferty?? Just curious🤔.. Looking forward to any other books you write..

    02/11/2021 16:53

  • Reader-638620

    My favorite story yet, sad to see that the story is complete when there is so much room for development. Marcy and Alarik, Maeve and Sinclair, Sam and Samantha did not get the same opportunity to develop. I hope this stories continue to develop through another book? 💕

    02/11/2021 12:15

  • Byrdie Benton

    is there another book to this story I want to know about Sinclair and Maeve child and will the other characters have kids how will Octavia and Kerr child or children be please tell us if there are any more to this story

    02/11/2021 06:32

  • Michelle Kretz

    I would love to see your books as movies omg soo epic !! love them ❤️

    02/11/2021 00:30

  • Laura Chesshire

    OMG I love how this story is wrapping up. so happy to see Mercy has her powers back! As Maeve would say 'Bang on' (not sure if I used the expression correctly but its fun to say!) thaks KeyKirita!

    02/10/2021 22:08

  • Karessa Kaleka Dozier

    ssssooooo their brother was in their army. I wonder if he’ll come back

    02/10/2021 08:06

  • Karla Carlos

    Poor Sinclair 😔 what the twins did to him it was so wrong, he made them existence possible, protecting them before they came to this world , love them unconditionally and they played with his feelings, Sinclair feels betrayed by them. And also what they did to Mercy and Alaric.

    02/09/2021 03:49

  • Kirstin Blyton

    when are the next updates I have been waiting a week now

    02/08/2021 21:21

  • Jamesia Shepherd

    when is the next update

    02/08/2021 16:11

  • Becca Marie

    Great read. Is it to much to ask if you could focus more on Sam and Samantha's love story? Perhaps a book of their own..I love Sam and would like to know more about him and the women he loved.

    02/08/2021 13:33
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