Unbreakable Comments

Meaghan Prue

dang marii don't leave on the good part sigh def gonna need the husband right now

London Henderson

This has to be one of my favorite series yet. Can not wait to see where you take this!

Jael Brown

You know Marii really has knack for setting up a good battle man when I tell you it's about to go down. Hopefully all of Apophis's puppets will perish in this battle and our avatars can finally have a happy life. You can not run from your past because it has a way of catching up to you.

Kecina_Janice

My heart literally broke for Nuria 😤😭 I can’t wait for Johnathan to be off’d and never come back because his evilness and stupid minions all have to go!

Meaghan Prue

marii what color are artemis eyes

Reader-670952

Oh my when is the next update

Jemma

omg Artemis and Nuria 😂😂😂😂😅

Analiza

oh boy i love it....

Analiza

will neron and kiya mate?

This chapter was just the sweetest! I am so excited to see their relationship develop!

DAMMMNNNNNNNN 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭😳😳😳😳😳😳

Nina072

this was a cool update, how awesome that we met nerons grandparents. his grandmother is so cute and it will be cool to get more insight into their foresight and maybe even more their family history.

Lynora Crawford

I love how close they're getting...and that Kiya has actually matured enough to analyze her feelings, and begin to accept them, instead of simply refusing to acknowledge anything! 😊

Meaghan Prue

omg that comment I made before about Jonathan and Odessa wait I better not say don't want to say too much but yeah this is disgusting what a word

Selene Murf

JPrice is gonna make insane trouble, and Ariel better watch out... Well Mara. OMG SHITE.... JUST...... GOT...... 🤭 REAL......

Selene Murf

Um think i lost my comments, dam.. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Cant wait for more.

Jael Brown

Oynx is to funny, that cockblock joke had me rolling. I can't get enough of Kiya and Neron their relationship is really heating up

Lynora Crawford

Aww, I love that Neron's whole family barged into their moment. 🥰

Jael Brown

Kiya thought with her Kitty while holding her kitty for a minute there.🤗🤗🤗🤗 Goddess bless these avatars with the strength to take Jonathan down for good. None of them deserve to have their happy ending ruined by Jonathan's evil,wicked, butt

Lynora Crawford

...and I'm back on the edge of my seat with this latest update! Marii, you truly know how to enrapture your audience!

can't wait for the next update 🙈 this is so good

Meaghan Prue

marii if in that twisted mind of yours this story is going in the direction I think it is is there a chance that neron and Nuria due to some very evil magic will be forgetting there mates cause that does seem the type for the nasty skank to do use magic to get neron all to herself

Analiza

wow, finally it is official... thanks for this chapter Mari...

Nina072

awe that's sad, they sere used to settle a debt. that hurts my heart the poor children, urgh alpha Jackson just needs to be yeeted into the sun. omg! no wait, not the sun but into a black hole at least 3 galaxies over. at least. I hope they can get liberty out, I cant imagine what hes done to her after they disappeared.

Selene Murf

"... Divine protection from your psychopathic, zombie father.." Gold, just absolute Gold! 😁 🥇

Nina072

URGH I NEED IT TO BE TOMORROW LIKE YESTERDAY!!!!!!

Nina072

yall watching kiya and neron be surrogate parents to the girls is warming my cold, dead heart. its pretty cute.

Analiza

when is the next chapter? im excitrd to read...

Sherisa Weston

Wait how were Lunas flirting with her when they have mates? Haha

Jael Brown

Damn for a minute there I thought I was going to have to a very long cold shower. Kiya you have a very strong resolve because honey once the fire is started it's best to put it out. A big part of me wanted them to complete the deed but that other part (you that small voice on the back of my head) was screaming not yet the timing is off. I mean was it the mate bond or her hormones acting up from the Supermoon that caused her to kiss Neron only time will tell. Wystan is so annoying and you know you are exuding some powerful pheromones when everyone wants you. Thank Goddess Neron and.her family are their to keep all of these alphas and Luna's at Bay otherwise Kiya would be in some serious trouble.

Nina072

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 omg onxy!!!! 🤦🏻‍♀️ why you torturing that man? that's not fair! lmao

Leyla Land

I just love, love, love kiya and Neron together. They have gone through so much; together and individually and they have both grown so much. Their relationship is so sweet. Kiya is super adorable when she is being shy and can then also be so strong and bad ass. And Neron is the pefect gentleman but can kill for his women. I get so excited everytime a new chapter is added!! I check almost eveyday lol you do such a great job its one of my favorite stories at the moment. I wish it was complete so I can just read all of it in one sitting but I also don’t want it to end ever!!! ❤️ its the best kind of predicament 😂

Lynora Crawford

Damn...I suspect this must be why Phoebe never talks about Oregon. Truly Marii wouldn't be so cruel as to bring us through this while journey, just to have them fail now, but I am practically on the edge of my seat with angst!

I absolutely loved it! The way Neron helped her see past her insecurities and pain replacing every bad memory with a good one... with love. I mean how many men would even do that! I can only imagine how tough it must have been for Kia. Being scared and jet craving it. It took immense trust for all that to happen and I'm so happy for her. She goy her fireworks 😁

Meaghan Prue

@marii solaria marii how come we can't share the book

When Sunday is to far away 🥺🥺🥺

Nina072

"we dont do that here" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Nina072

I laughed a lot at these two chapters. artemis took me by surprise, onyx didnt. lol a leave it to nuria to bet on them. great updates as always marii.

Carol Hatton

OMG!! Kiya!!! I was NOT expecting her to do that! I’m like Neron…. IS THIS REALLY HAPPENING?!! BTW.. am I the only one checking every hour for an update?!! 😂

Analiza

when is the update? please im really excited of the love story of kiya and neron...

Nina072

this update was EVERYTHING!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 "the reincarnation of a gnat"..."the human anus" I died!💀and eyyyyyy girl got her first nut. well... artemis did....but still; first pleasurable nut busted. noice.

Lynora Crawford

I've always enjoyed reading from the guy's POV, but Onyx's POV takes things to a whole new level! His personality absolutely cracks me up!

Jael Brown

Something wicked this way comes, I don't know who or what followed her out there but whatever it is it is not good. My question is did Selene really beckon for her to come or is this Apopis's behind playing tricks on her to get her alone. I can't wait for the next update!!!

Lynora Crawford

Kiya's reaction to Nailah, was downright hysterical...ESPECIALLY with the audience surrounding her! Artemis' commentary was the icing on the cake, though!

Sunday is too far away... 😭This story is so good Marii.

The last line is so powerful! Neron has grown so much!

Jody Reid

loving this... please update soon

Saki J. Gibson

That rush of power she keeps feeling is concerning. I think it’s an Alpha who will eventually try to claim her… Or it could be the Egyptian God

Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

Selene Murf

Didn't think they would even make it to the main event! ❤️ 🤠 ❤️

Nina072

if you dont understand the affects of trauma on an individual its fine but do not make cold and callous comments and think nothing of it just shows how little some people know about trauma. cold, callous, ignorant and so unbalibaly rude fictional character or not. person who made that comment, you deserve a knock upside the head for that. "it's been eight years....blag blah blah". unfrackingbelieable.

Nina072

me running to google translate to see if its dirty:😈🏃‍♀️ me when I find out its cute: 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 ohhhhmahgoodness

Jemma

so, I took Neron’s car. 🤣

Nina072

YOOOOOOOOOOOO I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!! oh come on that's just not fair, of all people to bring back. I mean I get it, but forking shirt balls!!!! it's about to go down! so much worse than what I thought was going to happen. what a curve ball! I thought wed be rid of this pest for good.

Please keep this going… you two love and need each other. Please just finally give in!!!!

Soo... since Jiys is SO close to Being at this point, will she go I to heat at this conference? Cause that would be a whole new set of problems.

Jael Brown

I am glad both of them kept their composure and didn't rush into doing something that their wolves wanted. It was cute how they played with one another. Who are the two girls named in the letter and why was the letter given to Kiya and Neron. Wystan is a tool, and he better back down before he gets smacked down.It would do Neron some good if he would talk about his visions. Why did this ability of his emerge now and not before, what was blocking it from being activati?

Meaghan Prue

why is everyone comments getting repeated like 3 and 4 times

Mez

Everyone is so excited that they’re jumping on the mating train 😂 While I am very happy those two finally kissed (with our girl initiating), I don’t want them to do the Devil’s tango right away. We need to remember that Kiya is a survivor of rape. I can imagine that’ll bring about fears involving intimacy as she stated earlier in the book. I don’t think she’d jump right away into sex if that part of her trauma hasn’t been addressed yet, in my opinion. I don’t think there has been a mention of her sexual trauma in this book so far. A lot of us want Kiya and Neron to fük, but we need to also think realistically about Kiya’s reactions to it. That’ll be the BIGGEST and HARDEST step she’s ever taken.

Leyla Land

one thing get confused about. Does Kiya like women? or is she into both? or is Neron the only man she is attracted to because he’s her mate.

Mez

🧐 The rush of power can be from anything! Could be from Apophis, somehow, poking around? Or maybe it’s from a reaction to something of some sort? Another avatar in the vicinity? Or because Kiya is connected to the moon, could it be from that? Ahhhhhhh so many questions! Wystan is a douchenugget and Alpha Jackson has me side-eyeing. Boooy Neron is really being tested now 😂

Nina072

WATCH SOMEONE IS WORKING WITH THE LOVECRAFTIAN HORCRUX GOD! (mad god)OOOOOOHHHH😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 DUUUUUDE!

Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

Mrs.Hyde

How does Nuria have all this "experience" to have sex with Phoebe? I didn't think in the three years she been on earth that she had been with anyone else?

Jael Brown

I am so glad Phoebe accepted Nuria, I am over here balling my eyes out. This chapter was so sweet Marii, love the updates

Christy G

Oh my Onyx! Dirty wolfie. Lol!

Wow…. 😭😭 Neron and Nuria are really the same and I love the fact Nuria still think of Neron happiness too 🤧🤧🤧

MP14

Yes!!!!! Don’t mind me while I do the happy dance over here. Can’t wait to see how their relationship progresses.

i love onyx 🤣🤣🤣 he is so funny

Jael Brown

Hahaha this was a cute chapter, will they be able to survive being this close to one another for three days. I glad he didn't follow Oynx's advice or Kiya would have smacked them both into the middle of the Atlantic and have Violetta summon forth a great big hurricane. Oh goddess give them strength!!!

Kecina_Janice

“Smack that ass like a drum” mannnn I am CACKLING! I love Onyx and his cheekiness

Jael Brown

I can wait to see how things are going to go down between Nuria and Phoebe. Things certainly are heating up between Kiya and Neron, looks like the weather is not the only thing hot in Florida (because trust it's hot as hell in Florida). Marii do you think you will ever do some bonus content about what happened to Kiya's enemies when Selene pretty much banished them to the wolf underworld. Just curious to know how they are fairing.

Nina072

"do you want another one?" hahaha onyx was behind that one, I know it.

I loved this update as we got to meet the grandparents & a piece of weaponry for when the time is right!!!

Reader-457826

would be good to see Kiya and Nerons relationship move along a bit. either do it or leave it. this tap dance between them is getting a bit old considering the 2nd book was the same. they get close, they move apart, they get close, they move apart…

Perla G.

nnot for being a perv but I hope thwy mate be4 the serpent comes to their realm unmated they are a powerhouse mated yeesh I can only hope & wonder I adore Kiya & Neron ..so looking foward to their development🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍🤨🤨

Karla Carlos

I can't stop the smile on my face at the end of this chapter 😀😍 finally their bond is healed and please now give them the opportunity to experience it.

Bad wolf... Bad bad wolf 😉 And Neron, did you... really regret looking? 😂🤣😅 Am I the only one who thinks they both are BIG FLIRTS? I hope not. Oh I am excited for the next chapters!!!

Bad wolf... Bad bad wolf 😉 And Neron, did you... really regret looking? 😂🤣😅 Am I the only one who thinks they both are BIG FLIRTS? I hope not. Oh I am excited for the next chapters!!!

Nina072

great update, I understand kiya perfectly. wystan is already grossing me tf out, and I wanted to know what Onyx was gonna say!!!!

Mrs.Hyde

Oh I can't wait until Kiya & Neron see each other again. I wonder if Valerian still has that stick up his butt. I curious the interaction Kiya will have with all of them....

Bonib2

How many times Kiya gonna die in one story Marii? If Neron is having that vision will she stay dead? I know she asked the goddess not to give her a second chance mate. Will she and Neron reconciled before she meet her maker again?

Meaghan Prue

that last line of chapter 14 haha but he is right neron lol

Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

Sherisa Weston

I really believe another avatar is in the building hmm

Kecina_Janice

Ahhhh I need more! I wish it was a double update, but I know you’re busy with school.

Jael Brown

I am over here toppled over dying from laughing myself. But it's sweet how much Nuria cares for Phoebe, even in her overzealous, jealous rage.

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Mrs.Hyde

I'm happy Onyx got to experience these intimate moments with Artemis

Nina072

well......definitely wasnt expecting all this gushiness, between these two particularly hmm. But let's talk about Nuria and Phoebe!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 how cute is that pairing!!!!!!! oh yes they are mates! I'm way excited for those two, I'm also super curious about our boy Darien; There was still something about a secret Mara was keeping. 🙃 I'm also curious as to how Abigail's cousin came to live in the pack; The developments have been great.

Sherisa Weston

I wonder what that weird rush of power was? Another avatar? I feel like there is going to be danger and her instincts felt it

I remember in the last book, Phoebe said to Neron... "The owl's special" 🥰

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

Onyx is this close to decapitating Wyston...lol

Jemma

omg Nuria 😅😅😂😂😂😂

Don’t resist Kiyah, please don’t!! I really hope Neron can work through & heal so he can become one w/her 😍

Nina072

omg nuria it's just tea!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Nina072

there is a powerful supernatural I'm there, only a powerful could detect another powerful; I'm definitely thinking another avatar, the end there makes me think someone is using another supernatural to spy, or maybe kids. either way, neither is good. ohhhhhhh what's going on!!!! and poor liberty, dont even know and I already feel for her; Alpha jackson is a ding dong, probably just as bad as Johnathan. urgh wystan, just urgh someone step on this roach already. *shutters*

Kelly Thompson

After Neron's mother returned was there a confrontation between her and Kiya's birth parents?

waiting for Neron and Kiya to come together. Both have come a long way. nuria is so funny🤣