Between The Brothers Comments
Katieisright
I’m sorry but I can’t. This has so many grammatical errors that it actually doesn’t make any sense and is really hard to keep up with. the first paragraph alone is rife and the run on sentences mixed with grammatical inaccuries fried my brain. I read stories with mistakes and errors all the time but not multiple in the one sentence. This needs a complete review and overhaul.
06/15/2023 18:40Angie Puwane
5c9f I’m not sure if I should go ahead and and say “ English is not the author’s first language”. I at least feel that the books that we are given to review should be checked before short listed.
05/07/2023 17:53Kristin Christensen
5c9f struggling with a story with the grammatical errors, and sometimes third person writing will keep reading
05/07/2023 16:01Stephanie T-H
5c9f I gave the first chapter a shot as this has the potential to be an interesting read. However, the writing style is rife with grammatical errors and strange speaking cadence between the characters. I can't read it as currently written, perhaps if it gets edited I will come back to the story.
05/07/2023 11:51
Tricia Freligh
5c9f This sounds like it’s going to be a good story. I’m going to add it but I hope it will be a completed story soon.
05/07/2023 07:02
blubelle Reads
5c9f definitely on the bookshelf for a read soon
05/07/2023 05:40Linda Strandquist
5c9f nice start let's see where this goes. adding it to my library to read when I finish othersbinhave started
05/07/2023 04:12
Mirela
5c9f - Very interesting. She works to much, so she needs a break. And a good break is in the hands of a man or maybe two.
05/07/2023 04:01
Jan T
5c9f interesting introduction. I'm curious as to what is the dream the main character is talking about. the tags are intriguing
05/07/2023 03:40
Reader-778832
5c9f the blurb had me confused as I had to read it twice before realising it’s the authors style.
05/07/2023 03:09Reader-431917
5c9f this book introduction sounds very interesting. I will add it to my library to read after my current book 📚
05/07/2023 01:39Doobies
5c9f - Sounds interesting based off the intro, but I’m a bit hesitant due to all the awkward, minor grammatical errors that my eye caught while skimming the opening chapter.
05/07/2023 00:32
Joele G
5c9f read the intro seems to be very interesting; it really does seems to be a really good read; hard to follow
05/06/2023 23:34Bianca Bratu
5c9f Great story with an interesting story line. It has really peaked my interest so I added it to my library and I will surely continue reading it
05/06/2023 23:24Ashley
5c9f I think that love triangles are interesting to read about however I can't help but want everyone to have their happy endings and that isn't always the case with love triangles. I will have to see where this goes.
05/06/2023 22:53
Syl Xiao Lin
5c9f It seems like the first chapter badly needs edition. I added it to favs but I will wait in hopes it gets edited.
05/06/2023 22:18
Sammy
5c9f I read the blurb and the first chapter but unfortunately could not relate to the author's writing style or the storyline. I hope that the author gets some assistance with proofreading as it seems that English is not her first language. Good luck.
05/06/2023 22:09Gemma Butler
5c9f I’m not sure if English is maybe the authors first language as I struggled to read the book’s introduction. I love the concept of this book though
05/06/2023 22:09Me Myself
5c9f I do not like to write negative reviews but this book is so poorly written that I had to read the first sentence three times.
05/06/2023 21:57Lonnie Miller
5c9f The FL appears to a strong woman who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to go after it. The sentences seem disjointed and there isn't a flow from one to sentence to the next.
05/06/2023 21:53Irma Beck
5c9f I am not sure if I even want to read further. the grammar and sentence structure makes it really difficult to read this book
05/06/2023 20:55
Kitty-694016
5c9f. the lead sounds like someone who gets that she controls her own destiny. A love triangle between two brothers may make for interesting read
05/06/2023 20:46Karooke
5c9f naja das Intro hört sich nicht wirklich so spannend an und die Geschichte scheint nicht interessant zu sein...
05/06/2023 20:03Lynn Johnson
5c9f- The introduction seemed interesting but a little confusing. After trying to read the first chapter, would not recommend this book to anyone. Don't the author knows English. It definitely needs some serious editing.
05/06/2023 19:59Susan Long
5c9f I am having trouble understanding the beginning, maybe it's me but I can't seem to get into this story.
05/06/2023 19:11Susan Long
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05/06/2023 19:08yes sir
5c9f the first chapter confusing a little and is it she or he the editing not very good
05/06/2023 17:04Caitlin Sullivan
5c9f...I'm not sure about this book. it seems like wanting to have your cake and eat it too from the intro
05/06/2023 16:54Caitlin Sullivan
5c9f...I'm not sure about this book. it seems like wanting to have your cake and eat it too from the intro
05/06/2023 16:46Caitlin Sullivan
5c9f...I'm not sure about this book. it seems like wanting to have your cake and eat it too from the intro
05/06/2023 16:45Janaki Kollepalli
5c9f... It is impossible to understand what is being written in the first chapter... went above my head
05/06/2023 15:57icuovrthere
5c9f I had a hard time following the synopsis and I'm not sure what the first chapter actually said.
05/06/2023 15:32Debra Sykes
5c9f sorry but tried first chapter and it is not good could not understand what was going on I have read comments and they said author is not English speaking so will not be saving book
05/06/2023 15:16
Megan Phillips
5c9f the introduction is interesting but unfortunately I'm struggling keeping up with the book since I believe thw author doesn't typically speak English so it's a little difficult to keep up
05/06/2023 14:55Alice Pinto
5c9f i like the intrigue of this book, but I feel like I won’t be able to go on with the reading because I can’t seem to figure out how the author writes
05/06/2023 14:22
Michibeba
#5c9f# I worry about the comments about it being a hard read because of the obvious grammar issues that can be seen on the introduction of it, maybe after it has been edited I will come back to it
05/06/2023 13:57Reader-350476
5c9f This is really amazing love triangle story, it’s quite interesting and exciting
05/06/2023 12:45Ana
5c9f just from the intro i don't really know how I feel about a love triangle with 2 brothers
05/06/2023 12:34Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
5c9f Reading this story is extremely painful. It is so painful, I get a headache just trying to figure out what the author is trying to say.
05/06/2023 12:19Vicki usher
5c9f# That was an interesting, intriguing introduction has a little of everything in this story. I wonder what will happen
05/06/2023 12:16
Amal Samir
5c9f, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen in this love triangle. It seems interesting 😏
05/06/2023 12:12Kash Kash
5c9f I appreciate the writer's romance concept and writing.The woman works at the company who was in a complicated relationship with the first son of her Boss.Later on, the Boss' second son enters to become the new leader of the company to replace his father and become her current boss now.The question is who will win the heart of this beautiful woman Savannah. Though, I feel it's not like a first english based language when you read the lines.It really needs some more editing.
05/06/2023 12:05John Robinson
5c9f The description for this book is interesting which brother will she choose? I started to read the beginning of this book and I believe English may not be the author's first language as it isn't flowing that well although anyone writing in a language not their first has my admiration.
05/06/2023 09:05Fiona Hsu
5c9f Yay! looks like an amazing story
05/06/2023 08:38
