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"Feee... but, Sir."
"You want to see me have dinner, don't you? Then, feed me."
"Hmm... alright, Sir."
"How about you? Have you eaten?"
"Then order back some food for yourself. And right now, it's too late at night. So, you better stay here."
"WHAT?!" I couldn't help but exclaim loudly enough after being surprised to hear the sentence my boss had just said. Words of disbelief would come out of the man's mouth.
Being caught in a love triangle has become all too familiar. But what if Savannah Wilder finds herself trapped in a tangled web of love with two brothers? Dylan McCarter, her original love interest, and his younger brother, Duke McCarter.
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Katieisright
I’m sorry but I can’t. This has so many grammatical errors that it actually doesn’t make any sense and is really hard to keep up with. the first paragraph alone is rife and the run on sentences mixed with grammatical inaccuries fried my brain. I read stories with mistakes and errors all the time but not multiple in the one sentence. This needs a complete review and overhaul.
06/15/2023 18:40Angie Puwane
5c9f I’m not sure if I should go ahead and and say “ English is not the author’s first language”. I at least feel that the books that we are given to review should be checked before short listed.
05/07/2023 17:53Kristin Christensen
5c9f struggling with a story with the grammatical errors, and sometimes third person writing will keep reading
05/07/2023 16:01Stephanie T-H
5c9f I gave the first chapter a shot as this has the potential to be an interesting read. However, the writing style is rife with grammatical errors and strange speaking cadence between the characters. I can't read it as currently written, perhaps if it gets edited I will come back to the story.
05/07/2023 11:51
Tricia Freligh
5c9f This sounds like it’s going to be a good story. I’m going to add it but I hope it will be a completed story soon.
05/07/2023 07:02
blubelle Reads
5c9f definitely on the bookshelf for a read soon
05/07/2023 05:40Linda Strandquist
5c9f nice start let's see where this goes. adding it to my library to read when I finish othersbinhave started
05/07/2023 04:12
Mirela
5c9f - Very interesting. She works to much, so she needs a break. And a good break is in the hands of a man or maybe two.
05/07/2023 04:01
Jan T
5c9f interesting introduction. I'm curious as to what is the dream the main character is talking about. the tags are intriguing
05/07/2023 03:40
Reader-778832
5c9f the blurb had me confused as I had to read it twice before realising it’s the authors style.
05/07/2023 03:09
