PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • Reader-371843

    hahaha jealous P… that is good! I still hope T makes him crawl and beg. I am tired of his behaviour. extremely tired

    07/26/2021 14:03

  • Anna Yocum

    Will there be an explanation about why Phobos inherited a bunch of savages in the middle of nowhere while Deimos gets their father's pack? Is Phobos more at home with his pack since he has been going there most of his life? Or he had issues adjusting as well?

    07/26/2021 13:10

  • Anna Yocum

    I like Theia so much. Lumina was supposed to be badass Alpha but was so weak and submissive. Theia despite being pampered princess, much younger than Phobos, experiencing cultural shock, left in the dark about daily events, still stands up for herself to an entire pack of savages AND to their beast Alpha. Please keep Theia as strong.

    07/26/2021 13:04

  • Missy

    I’m still convince that Phobos and Moira are more than friends 😁

    07/26/2021 07:06

  • Miss Moondust

    I’ve been SO excited to get a glimpse of Phobos’s pack and see what they would be like. I think it’s definitely shown why his behaviours have changed with Theia as he’s been living such a different way of life among them. Can’t wait to read more!

    07/26/2021 06:51

  • LC9

    ooo!! this is getting good! love the discription on theses last four chapters. so glad Theia and Phobos are finally speaking up; hopefully soon to each other, so they both have some clarity!! Phobos shows his jealously…..does he understand or did he all this time understand how naive she is to this sex in general?

    07/26/2021 04:25

  • Nita

    I’m glad Theia finally showed him some of her strength! now for him to work

    07/26/2021 02:46

  • Ocey

    Yes Theia show Phobos you are worthy and he must show he is worthy of you too! Glad to see her strength coming through and embracing her self-worth like a Queen, love it. Still curious about Phobos relationship with Moira though.

    07/26/2021 02:08

  • Trisha Reynolds

    I’m really at a loss for words. still not a Phobos fan

    07/26/2021 01:31

  • Vanessa

    I find the contrast amusing, the differences between lumina and deimos relationship vs phobos and thei...phobos seems to be obsessed with having sex with thei like he is starving whereas lumina had to work hard to get deimos to do the deed! these brothers are soo different yet they cause frustration due to their lack in communication skills

    07/26/2021 00:53

  • Angel Kowal

    I'm confused, I thought Phobos saved himself for Theia? What's this talk of all his other women?

    07/26/2021 00:32

  • Mawusi Ford

    Phobos 👀👀🤣

    07/25/2021 23:58

  • Reader-148264

    so good 💜💜

    07/25/2021 23:35

  • YanyRose

    oh my god! I’m sooo glad Theia stood up for herself! 🙏🏻 I have a feeling Theia is A LOT stronger than we think!!! 💃🏻

    07/25/2021 22:44

  • Tina

    when will the next update can wait sitting on the edge of my couch 🛋😫

    07/25/2021 13:37

  • Johanne Davis

    I had tears in my eyes reading how she was feeling 😭

    07/24/2021 22:11

  • Jasmineflower

    what days is the story updated?

    07/24/2021 13:55

  • Lucy Xiong

    after reading it again, here merely put his scent on her. he didn’t want to harm her. he wanted to protect her at the same time controlling his beast. because Phobos knows his pack expects an heir and that they should mate. but he loves her and he would never want to harm his mate in any given situation. he still an alpha and wants to please his pack. he stayed away as much as possible but his pack wants their luna.... I’m just thinking and assuming.

    07/24/2021 03:50

  • Paula Lewis

    Luna Liz omg! your writing is amazing! I’m excited for the next chapters. I can’t wait to see how Theia grows as all females should.

    07/23/2021 23:25

  • Reader-371843

    I don’t understand where the rumors are coming from?? am I missing something? He is such an asswhole. he does not deserve her. I hope he rots in hell or she makes him beg for forgiveness. how can someone change so much?

    07/23/2021 23:22

  • Krystal Morgan

    I read way to fast to wait for updates.. I have got to start reading books that r complete!!

    07/23/2021 22:51

  • Cloud

    I’m assuming that Phobos has heard the rumors too 😔 I feel soo bad for her for he is treating her unfairly. - Impure

    07/23/2021 21:57

  • Becky Thompson

    OMG!!! pleeaasssee dont leave us hangin for weekend lol. ive been so addicted to this whole series!! absolutely love it by the way. i do have to say that i was hesitant to read this because i really did not like theia in diemos n luminas story. im seeing her POV and I'm begining to see.

    07/23/2021 18:52

  • Monica Prouty

    I love reading theia’s POV and comparing it to demios and lumina’s story

    07/23/2021 16:20

  • Sofia Ricci

    Luna Liz please don't let us 'Phobos fasting' for the entire weekend :)

    07/23/2021 13:57

  • sara moore

    oh this book is amazing.

    07/23/2021 12:21

  • Megsh826

    What a bold move from Phobos to ruin the moment. Such an idiot. If he truly thinks that about her, then all of his cold shoulder behavior makes so much sense. I need more chapters, ASAP.

    07/23/2021 06:16

  • FloA

    I am dying to read Phobos' point of view. I need to know what he is thinking.

    07/23/2021 00:28

  • dr.penguin

    why won't she actually communicate 🥲 in dying here

    07/22/2021 23:54

  • SydDavis

    My heart is aching. I'm dying. Luna Liz has smote me emotionally AGAIN! Ugh. Phobos is KILLING me! Theia is in emotional turmoil and he just blatantly calls her s*** without saying the word. Ugh.. I love this book! I'm dying.

    07/22/2021 21:57

  • Angel Kowal

    Luna you naughty naughty female you almost had me thinking Argus was his love child, lol. I really hope Theia finds her voice and this story doesn't become the werewolves version of 'Normal People' that series was so frustrating, to a point that I loathed it.

    07/22/2021 21:26

  • Contreras Lizzy

    I am truly impressed with your writing skills I have never loved a book this much except for just another but not as much as yours. even though Phobos frustrates me I know it’s because he is meant to show us his current self as a king of beast, I’m sure Theia will take him and show him how wrong he is. I also understand that word must have gotten around and he misinterpreted and that is why he now believes Theia is impure. I am really hoping Argus isn’t his pup specially since Phobos is pure I don’t know how it would be possible but some how I feel he might be his pup but it has to do with his beast although I hope not. BEST BOOK ON THIS SITE!

    07/22/2021 21:17

  • Heather Kelley

    She needs to do more than just slap his ass. How dare he!

    07/22/2021 20:56

  • Julie Greenstreet

    confused by last chapter , so has Phobos mated Theia or just humped her , as comparing with other book when at Kala 1st birthday she’s still untouched ?

    07/22/2021 20:21

  • Missy

    I have the feeling that Phobos and Moira are more than besties

    07/22/2021 20:10

  • Mel West

    oh my! so Phobos stayed pure and of course Theia did to, but why doesn’t anyone believe her? I truly love this story, but I am also afraid that this will be stretched out and torturously slow to him finally accepting her 🙁

    07/22/2021 20:04

  • QueenKae

    So Phobos got ahold of some rumors 2. I hope the light bulb comes on.

    07/22/2021 20:03

  • Carol Dionne

    Luna Liz…I just love how you address and answer everyone’s questions with such calmness and understanding..A TRUE Luna👸🏽!!!

    07/22/2021 18:52

  • ninja

    this story is starting to drive me crazy. I cannot wait to read more. so hooked on it! how often do you update?

    07/22/2021 16:31

  • Lidiane Barros

    gosh I know I already commented earlier today on the new chapters but I am so worried about the pup and the whole year that has passed without they mating - Liz please dont let the pup be his son and dont let him take another just because he thinks she did. it will be so beautiful of for once the male is also a virgin when they mate cause they usually aren’t…. 🙏🏻❤️

    07/22/2021 16:01

  • olliesea_bengals

    Great update (loving the long and multiple chapter updates) but my heart breaks for Theia once again. Why would Phobos hunt her down and drag her back only to insult and put her down again? She made it clear at 18 that she didn’t want him. I really hope Argus isn’t Phobos’ son that would only break Theia more. Maybe she’ll do as Lumina did and run to Cronus or Deimos and Lumina. I hope Phobos gets his head out of his ass soon.

    07/22/2021 13:52

  • Tiffy84

    I'm so mad at Phobos right now!! Why would he assume that she has been with other men? Just because she's pretty and has huge boobs? He is an a**!! The sad thing is it seems like he only rubbed against her so she's STILL a virgin(and so is he) and even a year later at Kal's party she's STILL a virgin! In that year's time, does he take another like a breeder just to sleep with someone? When will he find out the fact that he's seriously misjudged her? Will be apologize to her whenever he finds out? Is this why he didn't talk to her because he thinks that she's a whore and he's punishing her to be miserable because if what he assumes? So many questions!!

    07/22/2021 12:26

  • Sammy Bunting

    I am hoping argus is not actually phobos son as according to the others he has not touched anyone and waited for his luna.... I don't think anything will be said between the two and they both will continue to suffer in silence. The waiting is killing me and I think I will wait til a few chapters have been uploaded but every time I see an update I can't resist and just have to read... Such excellent writing LL xx

    07/22/2021 08:30

  • Nita

    so is Argus Phobos son from the other woman? and is she the woman who Theia is talking about to Lumina of why he hasn’t marked her yet? I hope Theia starts to act more on her impulse instead of fear for her sake.

    07/22/2021 08:01

  • Lidiane Barros

    whyyy ?!! why did I read this ? how will I have a whole weekend of waiting 😭😭 Lizzy you killing me lady!!! 😂 For those wondering my guess is that he didn’t took her virginity he was just “rubbing” if I may say - I think he was building himself up for it as it was his first time …. but I hope her reaction will make him wonder if he wrongly assumed she wasn’t a virgin but of course he wont say a thing he will keep his doubts and she will not say too. when they are back to Kal’s Bday its been one year and I don’t think they even have mated yet based on her talk to Lumina. I hope some more 🔥 happens between them on this year oh GOD … and just hope he doesn’t touch another and that Moira’s kid has nothing to do with him please…. This will be a long weekend 😭😭 beautiful chapters my dear Lizzy! ❤️

    07/22/2021 07:09

  • marianar

    gosh!!! when is the next update??!! Does anyone know how often LL updates? I’ve only just started reading this book and am desperate already!!!

    07/22/2021 06:59

  • Reader-254912

    wow is all I can say that was some serious reading I hope he changes and sees her the real her I’m so sad for her 😔

    07/22/2021 06:21

  • reader2121

    is Moira’s son his??

    07/22/2021 06:09

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    it's almost as though Lina would have been a great match for Phobos and of course Thiea, and Diemos got along well so they should have been mates. the moon goddess messed up in mating!

    07/22/2021 05:17

  • Binge Reader

    Ugh - I wish for her sake there would have been some blood on her dress so he would have felt like the ass that hes being to her.

    07/22/2021 05:02

  • LC9

    you did NOT disappoint! this is soo good!! he’s looking out for her that’s for sure! I wonder what he has witnessed or seen to make him assume she’s unpure!!

    07/22/2021 04:57

  • Rachel Moye

    I reads like he had penetrated her with forceful thrusts but wouldn't he smell the blood when he took her virginity?

    07/22/2021 04:55

  • Ready Reader 1

    Poor Theia has been through a lot. That long ass travel time, then she get there and the older lady treating her like a piece of meat. Just prepping her to be bedded and not answering any questions. That place is barbaric! Phobos was just going to treat their first night together as if it’s a one night stand. No foreplay, no kisses, and nothing romantic. I’m glad she slapped him and spoke her mind. He should ask her if she has been with someone else. not assume that she had.

    07/22/2021 03:33

  • Trisha Reynolds

    I can’t handle that he basically raped her and accused her of sleeping or fooling around with other men. she needs to leave or heaven forbid end her suffering. she should have never left with him. I so hate Phobos for this I can’t understand. I’m in tears for her. mate or not he is an ass

    07/22/2021 03:03

  • Whittney Carie

    This book is an emotional Rollercoaster that I just cannot get off of!! I just sit around waiting on the next update just to be heart broken for Theia again!! I really don't think he is as bad as we are reading, but he has so many misconceptions of her that they are never going to get anywhere at their current pace.

    07/22/2021 02:57

  • Queen M

    Luna Liz…love your writing first and foremost. I am excited to see how they unravel all there miss understandings. I wonder why he brought her to his pack now. I suspect that his pack pushed him to produce an heir. I am intrigued to learn more about his pack traditions. This last update feels like the story is finally starting. like everything before was an appetizer and this is the main course. I hope you get some rest. thank you for the long chapter.

    07/22/2021 02:54

  • Jessica

    I don’t understand why Phobos thinks she’s been with other men

    07/22/2021 02:00

  • Anna Yocum

    this book is breaking my heart and that's a lot considering these apps are plagued by books about cruel alphas acting like jerks to their mates.

    07/22/2021 01:57

  • TNB

    Whew give a tissue warning! I felt that slap and it was well deserved.

    07/22/2021 01:50

  • Angelica Monteon

    such a great story!

    07/22/2021 01:43

  • LRWood

    I don’t think he took her virginity. I think he was about to, but Theia told him to just do it and she would lay still.

    07/22/2021 01:33

  • Mawusi Ford

    omg to take her virginity like that she is going to be more broken than Lumina. I’m not sure how she is going to survive or even if she will want to. so sad

    07/22/2021 01:13

  • Carol Dionne

    Ok I have a stupid question but ummm…did he take her virginity or no? 🤔 Help a sister out please 🥴

    07/22/2021 00:42

  • BexyCL

    When he Phobos said those words, it was like a shot to the heart Luna Liz, I won’t even try to deny my pain. 😭

    07/22/2021 00:17

  • Vanessa

    oh my goodness luna liz!!! can things get any worse for Theia!!!! it seems to be going from bad to worse....I feel soo bad for her!! when phobos accused her of sleeping around I was furious, I wished she would have done more than given him a slap!! I feel like she is completely shattered!!

    07/22/2021 00:17

  • susanashley

    So good!!! Phobos needed to be bitch slapped!!

    07/22/2021 00:10

  • Tina

    hi Luna Liz hope the next update will be a big one Waiting patiently lol 🥰😍

    07/21/2021 08:36

  • Sky💕

    I adore Thiea! She is very kindhearted and Sweet 💖. Something his pack needs child 🥴.

    07/21/2021 03:17

  • Sky💕

    Ok, so Phobos two shadows I think is the friends he spoke about to Thiea when they were little and the guy she said didn’t speak to her is the guy who can’t speak at all and she has to use sign language to communicate. There is a girl as well, I wonder if she is the one Thiea was talking about his heart belongs to someone else when her and Lumina was talking. Because he did say they was the closest. Just thinking lol 🙃

    07/21/2021 02:58

  • Sky💕

    No he didn’t threatened my Cronus! And how you mad because she don’t want to go with you. I’m glad Theia is standing strong by her choice. He mad his and said she was not worthy. Not make him work for it Thiea girl.

    07/21/2021 01:12

  • Nita

    Theia doesn’t understand that how Phobos is towards her is exactly how Deimos was towards Lumina & now it’s Theia on the other end of being scrutinised by her male

    07/20/2021 22:45

  • Sky💕

    I screamed when Cronus called her and said her male is here for her 💀. Ok, so how does the mate bond work? Because when Lumina and Deimos they felt the mate bond off bat. But with them it’s different, even when she was 18 and he came to visit she didn’t feel it. But now that he’s come to get her years later, they look at each other and she feel at home.

    07/20/2021 18:00

  • Sky💕

    Awww. I feel bad for Thiea. Misunderstood and feeling unworthy. It breaks my heart that she thought about what it would be like if she no longer lived. 💔

    07/20/2021 13:43

  • Lidiane Barros

    ok I made this far - waited this long to read the new chapters but damn I wish I waited more 😂 things are making sense now with the timeline as well. Funny how he has no problem facing her touching her and he went to get her from her house but once they get to Deimos pack he can’t either look or get close to her 🤔 thanks Liz can’t wait for more as usual ❤️

    07/20/2021 07:30

  • Sky💕

    I understand Deimos and Theia’s relationship. They we’re each other’s support system, there for one another. And it’s nice to get her POV of how things was when she went to vist Deimos. And yes to us finally knowing what Lumina looks like! 😍 ❤️

    07/20/2021 05:07

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    This is one of my absolute favorites!

    07/19/2021 07:26

  • rose

    I swear, I check at least 3 times a day to see if Phebos and Theias story has been updated!! 😂 We all can’t wait to see what happens next! 💕

    07/18/2021 22:54

  • Reader-119061

    Ahhh! we are getting so close to the ending of the first books story. can’t wait to see what comes next! also, when will we be able to see from Phobos perspective?! Can’t wait to see what goes through his mind when he looks at her 🥰♥️

    07/18/2021 20:04

  • Niccole

    Hii, first of all, i have to tell you, your writing is immaculate. Leaves me spellbound and wanting more every damn time.❤ Which brings me to my question, do you have an update schedule? I mean no pressure to have one but i always prefer to know when you might update to ease my nerves and anticipation, because otherwise i literally come down here every hour to check if you updated🙃 Also i wanted to know if you have an instagram account for your writing, I'd LOVE to follow you if you do!

    07/18/2021 05:46

  • Amber-lee Stewart

    is it me or the writing has changed. I’m finding it hard to read and fallow now.

    07/17/2021 21:18

  • Lucy Xiong

    savoring every word to prolong my cravings of this book lol.

    07/17/2021 14:12

  • susanashley

    With most books I see an update and I'm happy. With this book I would need 50 updates a damn day to be satisfied! I am shamelessly addicted!!! 😂

    07/17/2021 13:00

  • Shamira Johnson

    Love your work can’t wait for the updates, plus are you writing about Alpha Cronus in another book

    07/17/2021 12:23

  • Sky💕

    So her parents wasn’t aware that he was her mate, but he and his father knew. I wonder how they knew. I’m sure I will find out lol. Also is the age gap between them 9 years apart?

    07/17/2021 05:53

  • 4amcripple

    I love her and hope to God he ends up begging her and that his people love her more than him. I'm petty, but he has broken this girl. she has the worst luck of all your characters and I can't stand him for hurting her.

    07/17/2021 05:39

  • BexyCL

    Luna Liz, I’ve read ‘Slay Me’ to many times today and I must confess that I can’t help the tears that threaten my eyes each time. I connect with our female Theia and I know that all this will make her stronger, even more worthy than she is now. For she’s everything a strong and a humble woman possesses and that, is far more than dominance or any form of violence.

    07/17/2021 05:29

  • Crystal

    I love your style of writing.

    07/17/2021 03:35

  • TNB

    I won't even complain about the cliffhanger. I absolutely love how you are weaving together Theia's strength beyond the bruteness of one's wolf. The way she has grown before my eyes has been amazing. I love how the stories interwine to show us both sides. I am looking forward to the next update

    07/17/2021 00:49

  • Jennifer Lopez C

    I just gotta say I love the choice of names. Greak God twin brothers. One meaning dread and terror and the other fear and panic.

    07/17/2021 00:48

  • Luna Liz

    Hello my little wolves ❤️ So a few readers have sent feedback about my writing saying that certain words seem forced and it could be written in simpler terms. I am somehow unable to reply to these comments weirdly no matter how hard I try 🤦🏽‍♀️ I just wanted to say thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it. From next chappy onwards, I will make it as simple as I can so you can all have a better reading experience. Next chappy, Theia shall journey to Phobos’s pack. I will update soon, stay tuned 💕 Thank you for your love and support! Happy reading, Liz

    07/16/2021 23:30

  • LC9

    wow!! I’m so sad for Theia!! I hope she is able to overcome to sadness and she becomes to be the woman she needs to be for herself as much as she loves Phobos!

    07/16/2021 23:23

  • Carol Dionne

    I know Phobos really loves her and is trying to toughen her up and prepare her for his pack.. I just hope she does not get lost in the process…

    07/16/2021 23:12

  • Elsa Rodarte

    I can feel Theia’s emotions and sadness as I was once treated like this. single now! Beautiful writing my Luna!

    07/16/2021 22:49

  • Griselda Castro Lamas

    I enjoy your writing; however, you rely on the thesaurus too much. Some of the words you are using do not fit the context. Sometimes the right word is simpler.

    07/16/2021 21:30

  • Vanessa

    luna liz why does phobos walk out on her when she tries to get close to him during their meal? I am still puzzles by this is it because he doesn't want to loose control die to his hidden desire for her or does he really feel repulsed by her?

    07/16/2021 20:15

  • Trisha Reynolds

    I cried my eyes out on this update. why can she not just go back and not live with him. he doesn’t want her she shouldn’t have to change who she is I felt a slap in the face when he is watching lumina. my heart breaks for Theia she deserves to live out her life alone than be with him. I really hate Phobos and I get they only have one mate but damn that I’d live alone rather than be treated like that

    07/16/2021 19:46

  • Sky💕

    Poor Demios! It seems he had it worse as a kid. Now I know why he was the way he was. You can't love if you have never been loved. And that's not to say his parents didn't love him, but he was only taught to be tough and not to be weak. Sadly, he went through that, but it made him a great father. Because he learned what not to do with his son! ❤️

    07/16/2021 05:47

  • ninja

    I am loving this book way more than the first. looking forward to see how the story goes!!! cannot wait for an update ♥️

    07/16/2021 05:02

  • YanyRose

    loving ALL the characters and the way you make them out to be Luna Liz! everything is falling into place with the way the story is evolving so far. theia was perceived a little different in TAVT but now we see her true intentions and feelings. ♥️ this book is my new addiction and I can’t get any work done because I tend to check for updates every half hour 😅

    07/15/2021 23:49

  • Reader-119061

    gahhhh!! I love this series so much! I check ever other day for updates and then read them so fast! 😭 Keep up the amazing work!!

    07/15/2021 22:28
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