PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • Carol Dionne

    I’m so happy 😭😭😭

    10/24/2021 01:15

  • Zelda Zokan

    wow.. i don’t know how to feel. Logically, i know this is werewolf fiction book & i know how Phobos is so i did not expect myself to feel panicked reading the chapters that i was most excited about. I’m a lover of dominance & even rape kink and although i kept trying to rationalize my panicked mind, i couldn’t help but feel my chest constrict every couple of sentences. I forced myself through cause of my great expectations in Liz but even reading the newest chapters where he’s taking her over & over, even though she wants it but knows she it too sore for it but he isn’t relenting.. it’s very hard to read and i haven’t been raped, i can only imagine what rape victims felt reading this, my heart goes out to them

    10/24/2021 00:41

  • Bonib2

    @Luna Liz, I want a Phoby baby for me also🥰😘 Thank you for updating two days early. This chapter is so sweet❤❤❤

    10/23/2021 23:56

  • Lee

    Finally marked each other! no more misunderstandings or insecurities and next a health baby boy. Looking forward to less drama and more interesting adventures and gatherings with family and friends. ❤️

    10/23/2021 23:15

  • Kristen Tedrow Cope

    I absolutely loved this chapter! I hope that she gets pregnant soon!

    10/23/2021 22:40

  • Julie Greenstreet

    love this update , finally no more confusion between them . Heartwarming💞💞💞

    10/23/2021 20:49

  • Elle 🧿

    I have just finished chapters ‘Our Queen’ and I am loving every moment 🥰. What I can’t work out is my feelings towards Moria and Vüdce? Are they genuine?What is Moria and Phobo’s relationship? why is he so close and almost comes across as a proctor for her and her son? Vüdce, I can’t make out if she’s just seen and done things, therefore she’s cranky and set in her ways or does she really want Theia to become their Queen? 😅🧐... I have too many questions ha. Plus, I loved that we got a glimmer of her wolf and she was feeling. I can’t WAIT until we meet her wolf! 🐺🥰

    10/23/2021 06:53

  • Jazmine Pratt

    when will phobos mark theia? I hope it's the next chapters!

    10/20/2021 21:23

  • Luv-Monkee

    I have been following this story from the other book! I love it. please update!! We are just at the good point-they finally talked!

    10/20/2021 17:10

  • Christy Starnes

    quick question if a Phobos is 14 and there's a 9 years age gap how old is it Theia

    10/20/2021 07:48

  • Kelly LeAnn Parham

    I just wonder when and "if" Phobos will mark Theia!!! She's been waiting forever. I wonder of he will let her mark him!?!?!?!? 🤔😕

    10/19/2021 15:32

  • natasha wakeford

    👏❤️🎉 omg love love love it 🌟

    10/18/2021 10:54

  • WatUpG

    Loved this read thank you 💜 🙏

    10/18/2021 08:43

  • Anri Cenoz

    I really like your attitude agains people and there comments warning them from the beginning so that tou dont waste any ones time i cant wait to read this book going to start today

    10/18/2021 06:24

  • Desire

    Aww

    10/18/2021 02:42

  • Trisha Reynolds

    just a quick question now that they have mated. have they officially marked each other as well?

    10/18/2021 00:26

  • Lee

    That was intense. Theia had Phobos sweating bullets trying to restraint himself 🔥😂🔥❤️

    10/17/2021 23:28

  • Reader-254912

    heck yeah that’s what I’m taking about 🤩🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼you make that beast your own Theia 👏👏👏great chapter loved it 😊

    10/17/2021 20:03

  • Vonnie

    Yaaaaaaaay!!…. update 🥰

    10/17/2021 20:03

  • Bonib2

    Attagirl Theia❤💃💃💃👌

    10/17/2021 20:02

  • Binge Reader

    so many misunderstandings between Phobos and Theia. Hopefully they will continue to get them all out into the open, so they can heal and love!!!

    10/17/2021 19:44

  • bub Moye

    It's a Rollercoaster 😍😬 I do not understand the hatred that's spawned from this last chapter. A story of soul mates, people who complete one another, so I'll received. Being a survivor, myself, I assure you this is far from that!!!! Speaking of shame and glorification as if it actually applies is disconcerting. Im living in a country where our children's history books now say we peacefully acquired our land from the native Indians as if this country wasn't built on their blood. Everything being so sugar-coated (poo-painted gold) that everything is offensive and considered controversial 😶

    10/17/2021 19:26

  • Paula Lewis

    ok loving Phobos! I need more updates…… yeah I know I’m not very patient 😕

    10/17/2021 18:35

  • TNB

    While most seem to be unhappy about the never delicate Phobos handling of Theia, I'm excited at her matching his energy and her finally acting out on her sexual energy. Theia has been giving us peaks of her sexual nature she is still bashful and Phobos has NEVER been delicate as he battles with his beast constantly. I'm excited for the shift and her becoming a little vixen 😏

    10/15/2021 15:39

  • Rose Rodriguez

    update????

    10/14/2021 22:05

  • Jazmine Pratt

    when will the next update be?

    10/13/2021 22:59

  • Desire

    y’all crying over rape for fiction, and I’m here asking for updates

    10/13/2021 16:13

  • Laisha Naizeth Hiraldo Serraty

    wow!!!

    10/13/2021 05:37

  • Missy

    Thank you Luna Liz for the brilliant chapters. You never disappoint your readers.

    10/12/2021 17:15

  • Lee

    Theia get ready for tomorrow At least Phobos will be more gentle than his wolf. then you’ll get used to it.

    10/12/2021 17:10

  • natasha wakeford

    love love loved it still loving it.. so enjoying the joining of these two. although they have got closer quicker than lumina and Deimos. xx

    10/12/2021 14:45

  • rose

    Hi Liz… Regardless of your claims that these last chapters are “not rape scenes” I regret to inform you that they are, in fact, the legal definition of rape. Look it up if you don’t believe me. I re-read the chapters to see what I was misunderstanding. However, she clearly states “no”, and is sobbing/resisting him and he replies with “it’s my wolfs right” and continues. Your readers are supposed to know she wanted this and “read between the lines”??! What lines? There is no rational way to justify around this. If your intention is to not portray rape, but animalistic desire, do better. This distinction is not evident in your writing if you have to “clear up speculation” in the comment section. You have a true creative talent and I have enjoyed these books. I wish you the best - author - but will no longer participate in this journey.

    10/11/2021 20:05

  • rose

    Those of you who would try to shame me into silence by demanding I “stop whining and crying”… you have no idea how strong and resilient I am. What I have survived in “the real world” would bring you to your knees. I am fearless, and as as such, I will use my voice to speak my truth. As a daughter of a survivor of spousal sexual violence, as a granddaughter to a survivor of incestuous rape, as a professional who works with women/children in shelters, as an educator and ally for women’s rights - this topic is NOT debatable. So, no, I will never “shut up.”

    10/11/2021 19:58

  • Luna Liz

    Hello little wolves ♥️ Let me be CLEAR on the last few chappies to avoid confusion and speculation. 1. Phobos is not normal. I have warned you all of this so many times to prepare you all for these chapters. His beast is an ANIMAL not a human but with animal instincts and he sees Theia simply as how a male wolf will see a female wolf. Phobos has no control over this male. 2. Theia when she says ‘NO’ it is not the kind of no where a she’s saying she doesn’t want to mate for as you all know she rushed the mating when Phobos chose to wait because he knew this is what she will undergo. She says no because he is unable to give her time to adjust to the new experience. She’s scared/ highly innocent just like one would be during their first time. You will see in next chappies the change in her demeanor how her fear is settled and she welcomes their mating.

    10/11/2021 10:18

  • Reader-254912

    I think people are failing to realize Phobos is half beast hes not like any other male wolf that is why he was scared to be with Theia it wasn’t rape she wanted him too she was scared because she didn’t know how his beast would be but she loves Phobos and she wants his pups and him also being a virgin how could he prepare her fully if he himself didn’t know either I mean come on you guys are being way to harsh. taking this way out of context. they love each other and he is trying just as she is too it’s normal to be scared .🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️

    10/11/2021 02:36

  • QueenKae

    I feel like he could’ve done more to prepare her or waited until she was in heat and maybe it wouldn’t have been so bad. Theia threw me off 2. I’m not sure what she learned in her pack but what does she expect as far as foreplay. I mean if I have to take all that d yes! Eat me Alpha 😋😂. This chapter was cringy for me. I know they knew what was coming and that it would be rough with him and his beast but yeah…

    10/11/2021 02:18

  • Trimble Claudia

    it's just rape

    10/11/2021 01:36

  • rose

    I love a bit of kink, dominance, and spice but these last chapters need to come with a warning at the beginning. These were rape scenes - plain and simple- and crossed a moral line. Toxic behaviors and lack of consent should not be normalized as “entertainment.” I’m very disappointed in this author for her role in perpetuating sexual violence and abuse as “erotic” and equally disgusted with the readers that paise this and see no wrongdoing. Feeling sick for the victims and survivors of domestic violence. Think that’s my cue to stop reading this book - which I originally adored 😢

    10/11/2021 00:52

  • Anna Yocum

    Ok pardon my technicalities but how does Phobos know so much about his sexual likes and dislikes? In sexual experience he is equal to a fumbling teenager. Fine he has studied, and wolves of his pack aren't discreet, but damn he acts like a sex God, while he is a virgin who has barely any experience kissing a girl.

    10/11/2021 00:42

  • Binge Reader

    Going to be honest – I don’t really know how I felt about this chapter. I am trying to think rationally and balance the fact that this is a werewolf book and what I know about Phobus with my natural human reaction to what I just read.

    10/10/2021 23:29

  • WatUpG

    Omgosh it's here fuuck darling you're spoiling us 6 chapters yeah baby less go see what that dirty male has in store for our beautiful Theia 💜💜🙏

    10/10/2021 22:58

  • Trimble Claudia

    That was great written peace ✌

    10/10/2021 21:07

  • Reader-254912

    omg I just can’t wow this was awesome 👏 I can’t wait for the next day oh I know it’s gonna be good once again you out did yourself 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼

    10/10/2021 20:25

  • Bonib2

    Awww, Luna Liz, I cannot wait for the second night. It is worth all the waiting these past week or so. Poor Phobos though. 😂❤❤❤

    10/10/2021 19:58

  • Reader-148264

    that was so worth the wait 💜💜 amazing writing

    10/10/2021 19:48

  • Lidiane Barros

    this was so so good !!! I can wait for more … poor Phobos I feel for him … his first time and he didn’t even get to finish himself 🤣🤣🤣

    10/10/2021 19:34

  • Johanne Davis

    omg I loved this update!!! I can't wait for their second night

    10/10/2021 19:03

  • Desire

    are we getting update today?

    10/10/2021 17:33

  • Reader-106167

    When is the next update for this book? It’s been too long

    10/10/2021 10:25

  • QueenKae

    It’s almost Sunday 😊!

    10/10/2021 02:08

  • me_nume

    no update this week??

    10/08/2021 02:20

  • B Beau L

    so my fellow wolves 🐺 I was hasty with my excitement of the new chappy coming out Monday! it's getting updated by our Luna Liz 💖 MONDAY 11TH OCTOBER (NEXT WEEK! 6 DAYS AWAY!) ITS GOING TO A LONGER CHAPTER 😍😍😍 OH MY GOODNESS HOW EXCITING FOR US ALL! SO fill your boots with Deimos...re read some Phobos and in the comment section write what you loved about each chappy, what got you fuming, what you can't wait for in their love and life story. 💖💖💖

    10/04/2021 23:18

  • Krystal Morgan

    ugh I've been unpatiently stalker for updates N realized u said not until the 11th... I'm dying here 😭 🤣 💀

    10/04/2021 19:43

  • Missy

    waiting for updates 😊

    10/04/2021 18:16

  • Ish Ming

    why the chapters are short?

    10/04/2021 10:16

  • Anna

    waiting please

    10/04/2021 06:35

  • orchids_purple

    @Luna Liz Monday🙈🙈🙈🙈

    10/04/2021 06:24

  • WatUpG

    Omgosh it's Monday in NZ

    10/04/2021 04:32

  • Bonib2

    Soooo basically it is okey for the males to sleep with the pack's village bicycles before they met their fated ones but the female should be pure and untouched? Isn't that a bit prejudiced and archaic?

    10/03/2021 15:48

  • Rodleen Dalli

    So looking forward, make this chapter long and don't leave us hanging pleeaaaassseee I beg you Luna.

    10/03/2021 14:41

  • Tricia Johnson

    hurry up and mate

    10/02/2021 13:14

  • Henrietta Blessing Ebokaiwe

    OMG, Luna you are doing a very good job, can't wait for Phobos and Thia to be one one....... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    10/02/2021 07:05

  • Ekalissa

    Finally… I’m dying of thirstiness here lol

    10/01/2021 23:24

  • Rhonda Pruitt

    come on Phobes!!!! Finally 😜😀

    10/01/2021 18:30

  • Mel West

    Finally!!!! I can’t wait

    10/01/2021 07:22

  • Nita

    omg can’t wait for Theia to get it on with the beast! 😁😊

    10/01/2021 06:15

  • WatUpG

    Omgosh we're getting there I love how playful they are now he knows she kept it all for him crack up dirty male 🤣🤣🤣🤣 thank you for the double update Monday seems like an eternity away difinitely reading this again once completed. Can't wait for the next update 💜 🙏

    10/01/2021 05:05

  • Tinisha Mack

    I don't mind a lot of chapters if they are eventful. I just don't want to read something not revelant that waste my money.

    10/01/2021 03:38

  • B Beau L

    so...the ceremony and Theia's seductive dance, I presume will be preceding the "I only want a taste..." the introduction we all read for Phobos...how exciting 🤩🤭🤫💖🐺🌓🐺💖

    10/01/2021 00:46

  • Bonib2

    I can't wait for the mating ceremony or the wilderness, whatever comes first1😁🍑🍽🥂 Thanks for the update @Luna Liz ❤❤❤

    10/01/2021 00:40

  • B Beau L

    I love the nose nudging...my fella and me do this 😍🥰💖

    09/30/2021 23:52

  • B Beau L

    yay! so excited! looked ALL day for an update and here we is! 😜 😍💥🔥

    09/30/2021 23:19

  • Ekalissa

    can’t wait!!!!

    09/30/2021 22:03

  • Samantha Cokuslu

    YASSSS! I am so excited 🔥 😍

    09/30/2021 21:49

  • Stephanie Satterfield

    Guurrlll feed your beast

    09/30/2021 21:25

  • Hira Arif

    😍😍

    09/30/2021 14:43

  • Jordan Retzer

    BEST DAY EVER

    09/29/2021 20:16

  • Lidiane Barros

    oh gosh again I couldn’t resist saving for the weekend 🙄 damm please he knows he needs to prepare he and they both want it so … what ia the wait for ? 😂😂🔥🔥 lets get down to business soon I am sure there will be different dramas and twists ahead ❤️❤️❤️ loving Phobos now but Theia on this last update was quite childish I hope she stops with this soon 🙏🏻🥰 dying for more.

    09/29/2021 16:23

  • YAB

    Omg Im lost for words.. the chemistry is sizzling!! ♥️🔥😍

    09/29/2021 15:01

  • orchids_purple

    Luna liz could you please update a chappy tommrow..please please. n yup Phoby baby is too much at times😈😈😉

    09/29/2021 15:00

  • WatUpG

    They need to hurry up and get laid can't she see its only ever her now gotta wait another week for next update thank you 💜 🙏

    09/29/2021 09:19

  • Megsh826

    I want to see them shift already. Are they freaking werewolves or not? Theia barely acknowledges her wolf and it is basically irrelevant to the story at this point.

    09/29/2021 03:31

  • Ocey

    Theias next heat must be close, surely Phobos won’t be able to resist her then…also wonder if there are traditions in this pack like TAVT that will cause issues for Theia and Phobos - I am hoping not but still a lot of chapters to go so have a feeling there is still something else to come 😩. The way Phobos opened up in this chapter loved it 💗

    09/29/2021 03:11

  • rose

    Great update! Gotta ask though, why are the chapters so short and broken up like that? Other author chapter updates on this site are much longer so I’m confused about the word count claim.

    09/29/2021 01:50

  • TNB

    Am I the only one who got excited at him f*king her senseless? Yes....ummok lol. I'm so glad he FINALLY addressed his relationship with Moria. While I love Theia her jealousy with starting to grate my nerves.

    09/29/2021 00:47

  • QueenKae

    It took him long enough to tell her she did good but he knows she could do so much more and about his relationship with Moira. Once he found out about her relationship with his brother he should’ve been more open with her about his. He knew it was bothering her. He said he wouldn’t reject her for Theia I mean how was she supposed to feel?! He’s slowly getting it. I’m trying not to pull my hair out here 😂. IDC what anyone says after a year of being so near your mate and not mating you would be a train wreck, dumpster fire, $hit show 2. 🤣🤣

    09/28/2021 23:55

  • B Beau L

    ...and I dropped my phone on my face 🤣 brilliant chappy ending! short and hot! as per! brilliant! gonna re read the last few chaps to keep me sane until the next update! 🙏🐺🌓🐺🙏

    09/28/2021 21:33

  • Nita

    I think I’d feel exactly how Theia feels! moira occupies to much of Phobos attention as far as I see!

    09/28/2021 21:22

  • Nat

    I love this book! I thought for sure this last update would be at least the mating update when I saw the mild content warning then I was like “oh”. The update wasn’t disappointing (at all) but know that their mating and marking is highly anticipated. I have no doubt that beast man will deliver something epic. I have a feeling those 1:1 night trainings will be steamily difficult but I know Phobos has the restraint of a monk. This book is so interesting! oh my! I can’t stand waiting for updates but as soon as I see one I must read asap 🤣

    09/28/2021 20:39

  • B Beau L

    Luna Liz 💖 thank you! I needed this chappy so bad right now...X

    09/28/2021 19:25

  • ssyl

    Nice update! Thanks! You mentioned another update soon - May I check when it would be? :)

    09/28/2021 18:07

  • Zora Parker

    well for once he is actually talking to her. that’s an important step

    09/28/2021 18:00

  • Rodleen Dalli

    keep them.coming 😁

    09/28/2021 17:47

  • RobynP

    does she have a social media page on FB or Instagram

    09/28/2021 16:46

  • Binge Reader

    Well, I guess I’ll stop waiting for this week’s update. I love this book so I won’t complain as long as the book isn’t abandoned as several others I was reading. I hate investing into books to have the author leave them unfinished. Please don’t do that with this book!!!

    09/27/2021 21:32

  • B Beau L

    can't wait for this week's update...🥰

    09/27/2021 19:01

  • QueenKae

    I love how we can now comment on paragraphs and chapters now! Can’t wait for the next update 😊.

    09/27/2021 14:03

  • Mellie NewMe Perez

    Please update soon

    09/26/2021 21:17

  • Pam Burke

    im not pushing but when will we get an update I keep looking n hoping 🙏

    09/26/2021 19:21

  • 13ang

    hopefully well see a chapter soon.....

    09/26/2021 18:32
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