PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • dr.penguin

    I don't mind paying

    09/18/2021 18:27

  • dr.penguin

    thats fine I don't mind paying its a good book

    09/18/2021 18:27

  • dr.penguin

    thats fine I don't mind paying its a good book

    09/18/2021 18:27

  • BexyCL

    such a breathtaking update!😭❤️

    09/17/2021 01:07

  • Katie Harrison

    dying for the next update - the week wait is killing me 😅🥰

    09/16/2021 21:06

  • Rose Rodriguez

    is this the end or is there more updates??

    09/16/2021 17:30

  • B Beau L

    I'm still crying laughing over *distasteful* Theia saying to herself "this shall leave me mute for a few days..." 🤣🙈💖 bless her sweet innocent heart 💖 x

    09/16/2021 03:39

  • LC9

    ha, I’ve reread it as well!!

    09/15/2021 22:21

  • QueenKae

    I just read this again and I love how Phobos is a wreck. He deserves every bit of what he is feeling. I wonder if he was also treating his brother weird and if we will see their relationship change.

    09/15/2021 21:13

  • Lucy Xiong

    I had to read this update a second time. I love it!!!

    09/15/2021 19:43

  • Jordan Retzer

    how do you guys turn on notifications for updates? I’ve looked all over the app.

    09/15/2021 18:20

  • Misty Sweat

    I love the book. what is your other book called?

    09/15/2021 11:28

  • Shona Collins

    I wait anxiously for the update I've read both books so far and I love them so much in adicted I couldn't even begin to make any fault I love the fact hes starting to open his stubborn eyes to her

    09/15/2021 07:10

  • Maria Megalogeni

    Phobos was such a beautiful soul when he was a juvenile - so aware, intelligent, kind and in touch with his emotions. I feel so sorry for what he has become and how withdrawn he is. Makes my heart bleed!

    09/14/2021 09:39

  • Paula Lewis

    ❤️❤️

    09/14/2021 05:01

  • Cat Ann

    Love how it has improved! the style is the same (old-worldly with words like ‘whilst’ and ‘beckons’) but with less unnecessary adjective words. I would suggest working on fewer run on sentences - keeping a sentence to a line or two by breaking it up (possibly even with a semicolon). It is also moving so much better! It was more ‘glacial’ pace than a slow burn before but now it really feels like stuff is happening and there is that ‘aw’ factor. 😄

    09/14/2021 03:46

  • Kayleen Ivers

    awesome!!! thanks for the update! made my Monday!

    09/13/2021 23:50

  • Lidiane Barros

    oh Lizzy I truly adore you too and what a great start of the week it means so much to us thank you my precious author you are one of a kind. So happy that they talked and sorted the virtue issue but I still worry with if he stayed true to her after demanding the same of her in a way lets hope so. I agree she needs to address his closeness with Moira. and I loved seeing their side of Kal’s Bday ❤️ wouldnt be nice if they mated by their 🌲😂😂 I think I recall Deimos marking Lumina when they were away from the pack so why not hahha but I know its too soon for them ….I can’t wait for more I know there will still be struggles but hoping for some loving and 🔥🔥 moments too hahaha again thank you ❤️❤️❤️

    09/13/2021 21:31

  • Laura McDonald

    great chapter, so glad theia finally said the truth!❤️ still annoyed at Phobos for the whole Moira thing though, it needs to be addressed! yes she was helping him in the evenings but what about all the time he spent with her during the day and all the flirty joke telling!! they did that right in front of Theias face with no regard for her or the fact that she has been unwell and clearly not coping! Phobos seemed like he just did not care! a ring is lovely and all but he should be taking care of his woman, not acting happy families with moira!!

    09/13/2021 20:19

  • Reader-106167

    I loved the update and that they finally spoke. I don’t like his double standards, though. He was happy to do other things with her but not kiss her?! Anyway, what really pisses me off is that Lumina thought of the freaking plane. And his own, for that matter. If this was possible, why didn’t he do this years ago? He’s acting like he got really poor, the moment he went to that place, when in fact he’s the eldest. He could have changed so many things by now, instead of becoming like them and made a difference. I guess that’s the story, though. Looking forward to more updates!

    09/13/2021 20:10

  • BluezCluez

    finally💙💙 so glad they had that convo abt the rumors.

    09/13/2021 20:01

  • Megsh826

    Now that they’ve settled *that* little detail, can they have an honest discussion about Moira? I understand that Phobos is close to her and that even Moira and Theia get along well, but they need to have a conversation about his relationship with her and the impact it’s having on his relationship with his mate.

    09/13/2021 19:30

  • Megsh826

    I was so excited to see this update! I squealed and I’m immediately had to close the app so that I would start speed reading just to know what happened. I find myself often taking multiple passes at the updates first I gobble it up, then I go back to savor the details. But always I find my heart is clenching and the emotions abound. I’m a greedy reader and I always want more! I can’t wait to reread the whole thing once it’s finished.

    09/13/2021 19:28

  • Tracy Rolston

    all this comments are making to read this now but I’m waiting a bit because I want a good bit of chapters to read before starting it 😆

    09/13/2021 18:51

  • Mel West

    Thank you Liz, I am so happy and was surprised by the update! I am proud of Theia for telling him the truth, he can really be a dull-witted beast!!! I was struggling with the last few updates because it felt like nothing was going to happen and she gets very depressed and just hides it. much love ❤️

    09/13/2021 17:51

  • Zora Parker

    wouldn’t it be perfect if Cronus was Moira mate?

    09/13/2021 16:48

  • Lilla Szakács

    Getting an update literally made my week!!! So stoked when I opened the app and found my wish had come true. Glad that the air has been cleared between Phobos and Theia…at last!

    09/13/2021 14:58

  • QueenKae

    Thank you for finding the time to update for us 😍! I had a feeling Phobos had heard the rumors. I hate he believed them without even asking her or his brother. We know he cared for her because of some of the little things he did (not sexual) like taking her to the trade, getting the spices, eating with and feeding her, and him making that ring just to name a few. He cared for her but was struggling to except her because of what he thought to be true. He has some making up to do. I feel like Phobos is probably more emotional than we think and he had his guard up with her 🤔.

    09/13/2021 14:26

  • Jordan Retzer

    we got ANOTHER UPDATE😱😱😱 my day is made!!!!!! love u Luna

    09/13/2021 12:15

  • B Beau L

    I knew you were gonna surprise us...I felt it in my bones 💖🌃🐺🌒🥰

    09/13/2021 06:03

  • B Beau L

    Luna Liz 💖 you are my favourite female 💖

    09/13/2021 05:34

  • Leticia Morales

    Thanks so much for the update!!!! I was so sad when you said there wouldn't be an update this week but got so excited when I received the update notification, you made my day!!! loved the chapter

    09/13/2021 05:11

  • Lucy Xiong

    OMG thank you Luna! it was such a nice surprise. love you!!! l forgot kal’s bday was held in theia and Phobos garden. gosh how heart wrenching is that? their memories flowing in. omg this update is what I been waiting for. I love it. ahhhh I can’t wait for next update

    09/13/2021 05:11

  • Ready Reader 1

    great chapter! I felt such relief that the truth is out. Hopefullh they will learn to communicate better. Thanks for the chapter Luna! ❤️ we simply adore you 💋

    09/13/2021 04:54

  • Shannon Paterno

    Yayy finally she told him!! Thank you for the amazing update!!🥰

    09/13/2021 04:25

  • Stephanie Satterfield

    thank you so much

    09/13/2021 03:12

  • LC9

    Omgosh! this last chappy almost made me cry!! so much emotion!! this was soo good! thank you! can’t wait to read more! so glad Theia held her own with him!!

    09/13/2021 03:04

  • Nita

    good she spoke her truth! now she needs to make him grovel hard!!!!!

    09/13/2021 02:58

  • Nita

    run from him Theia let’s see how much attention he’ll give Moria then!

    09/13/2021 02:41

  • Heather Anne

    loved the update ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    09/13/2021 02:36

  • Alexandria M. Villanueva

    yesss queen! love the update! can’t wait to see what happens.

    09/13/2021 02:20

  • Tabitha Vickers

    Thank you

    09/13/2021 01:52

  • Rachel Moye

    woo-hoo! Thank you!!! 😘 lesson is things aren't always as they seem 😁

    09/13/2021 01:42

  • Shea

    Thank you for the update! Loved it!!

    09/13/2021 01:29

  • susanashley

    You saved us with an update!!!🥰

    09/13/2021 01:20

  • Reader-254912

    yessss your the best 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼I love it finally I’m so happy he could love her like he should have from the start 😊😊😊

    09/13/2021 01:15

  • Susan Pearson

    So many emotions through the chapters! I was about to cry as she spoke of there past on the room. It brought me all the way back to the beginning. He has alot of making up to do! I also love that he had the ring on him 🥰

    09/13/2021 00:30

  • TNB

    Finally!!! I have been waiting for this crossover of the birthday party. I'm so happy for this unexpected update and the breakthrough. 💜💜💜

    09/13/2021 00:25

  • I am up to no good

    I am obsessed with your books! you are an amazing author!!! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for updates 💕💕💕 thank you for the surprise and I can’t wait for the next update.

    09/13/2021 00:12

  • Cass Birch

    well this just made my whole Monday!!! 💕💕💕

    09/12/2021 23:45

  • Shannon Hart

    thank you for the update. greatly appreciate it

    09/12/2021 23:09

  • Binge Reader

    Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I hope they can continue to speak openly now and grow together. I love how she speaks to him - “you dim witted beast”. Isn’t this true of so many men! Love the update. You are a beautiful writer!

    09/12/2021 23:07

  • Angelica Monteon

    so so very good! thank u for an amazing story

    09/12/2021 23:02

  • Julie Greenstreet

    love the updates , Big Thank You,, Just goes to show communication in a relationship is everything . Loving this story so far ,great work x

    09/12/2021 22:25

  • Vanessa White

    omg I can’t with this weekly update lol jk thank you for the surprise much thanks

    09/12/2021 22:14

  • Carol Dionne

    Thank you for this Luna ☺️

    09/12/2021 22:12

  • Reader-371843

    love the story! still angry at P though, T forgives him to easily… he needs to work for it! extremely hard!!

    09/12/2021 22:12

  • Philippa Rosemary

    uuugghhhh Phohos is an idiot...🤨🙄

    09/12/2021 22:05

  • Samantha Cokuslu

    what a great surprise! thank you so much for the update ❤️❤️❤️❤️ I’m so happy they finally spoke about this. can’t wait for next update!

    09/12/2021 22:03

  • Bonib2

    Thank you so much Luna Liz. This is a great chapter. ❤❤❤ I am glad Theia finally grow a ball and set him straight. ❤❤❤

    09/12/2021 21:54

  • ShyShy

    What a wonderful surprise! Thank you for the updates 🥰 I’m glad Theia told Phobos her truth!!!

    09/12/2021 21:54

  • Sharla Johnson

    Thank you so much! You made my day a million times better! Can't wait to see how long she can last before she gives in to her love. Hopefully he is a completely different alpha when they get back and the pack can see open love and how it isn't a weakness!

    09/12/2021 21:53

  • Kelly LeAnn Parham

    Thank you soooo much for the update!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰 cant wait for the next chapters!!!

    09/12/2021 21:50

  • Jennyjen

    😍😍🤩🤩

    09/12/2021 21:32

  • Kiera J

    Thank you so much for the update!

    09/12/2021 21:31

  • sara moore

    thank you !!! 😍😍

    09/12/2021 21:27

  • Victoria S

    Thank you for the update, so good that Theia finally told Phobos the truth and so good we didn't have to wait until next week. 😊🥰

    09/12/2021 21:09

  • Prettymoon

    😍🥰

    09/12/2021 20:39

  • Susan Pearson

    An update!!! I can't wait to read it... I'm at work!!! Thank You ❤❤❤❤ I was completely ready to wait the week

    09/12/2021 20:38

  • Katie Harrison

    finally!!! ❤️ Thank you

    09/12/2021 20:35

  • Whittney Carie

    What a great way to start my week!! Luna Liz you teese!! I was fully prepared to wait, but I am so excited!! This chapter was everything I have been waiting for!!

    09/12/2021 20:35

  • Reader-148264

    thank you 💜💜💜💜💜

    09/12/2021 20:29

  • Simone Zwick

    Thanks for the updates! I love your stories. Looking forward for the next 😊

    09/12/2021 20:27

  • dr.penguin

    this is the highlight of my week

    09/12/2021 20:27

  • Anna Yocum

    Thank you for the update! 2 months! She sulked for 2 months? I am glad she is showing Phobos some character, but at this point she either should start actively fixing their issues or just leave.

    09/12/2021 20:18

  • Christina Aldridge

    omg yay! she finally stands up for herself! ahhhh this is the perfect way to start my week! #bossbabe

    09/12/2021 20:16

  • Shona Collins

    oh god I'm dieing for an update

    09/11/2021 18:08

  • Anna Yocum

    Every sentence and event of this story is analyzed, studied, and reminded. I feel bad for Luna Liz as a minimal plot hole will be so visible. But at the same time it must be such a good feeling to create such characters and a story line that has readers anxious, happy, angry, irritated, elated and curious.

    09/10/2021 22:30

  • Saydi Hunter

    I think that everything Phobos does/doesnt do is always with his female in mind. Is it always the right way? Absolutely not, but I beleive his soul is entirely Theia minded. I would like to believe he is still fighting his wolf around her. She has not seen him (Phobos wolf) since he saved her in the alley and he seemed to relish in her company then so I do not beleive that he is repulsed by her. Also when they go to Deimos pack, Theia mourns but her wolf does not understand because the beast worships her. I think that Phobos is fearful of his beast coming out to mark Theia without her consent. Based off of the sea trip, and the past, he knows that Theia is terrified of that side of him. He doesnt want to scare her. Even their sexual postion in this chapter, with Theia on top, I believe that is startegic so that his beast would not come forth to pin Thiea down against her will. Theia was in control, in order to control his beast. Whatever it is, I’m here for it! I love Phobos, Theia, Vudce, Awan, Drahko, and Moira! All of em!

    09/10/2021 18:30

  • Ocey

    Theia needs to bloody say something - she is a Luna after all and it’s about time she bites back. Love her gentle and playful nature but want to see more of that 🔥 in her! Maybe his reason is genuine, if not kick him in the balls 😂. Phobos 🤦🏽‍♀️…he also needs to communicate with her. Bit sad how he is ok to use her for sexual pleasure but hah when it comes to a more intimate action he pushes her away. What is he waiting for…Hmm wonder if he thought something of when he saw Aegeus comfort Theia..but he must know she is innocent and inexperienced especially after this last chapter her shyness and questions. Aah can’t wait to read more my favourite story 💗

    09/10/2021 05:12

  • Reader-104306

    I only just finished hell |, but I’m so mad at Deimos for abandoning her, like I get it he has his mate but she’s like a sister to him and he just dropped her, and I hate Cronus for bossing her around and acting like she’s a baby, she isn’t! and Phobos left her when she was 18, I don’t care about the stupid mate bond I would’ve dropped his ass quicker than he could say sorry, and all of her friends are treating her like a baby aswell! she’s not a bloody baby! she can look after herself, and she just sits there and laughs at it, like can you not see everything that’s going on? are you blind?

    09/10/2021 04:18

  • Alexis M.

    Phoebos is seriously so maddening and Theia needs to grow a pair and tell him how it is. She is on my last nerve with this whole “virtue” thing, like stand up for yourself if you know your innocence tell your man that you are!!! clearly a good book me all in my feelings haha

    09/10/2021 03:33

  • Mel West

    I truly love your writing Liz but I am finding Phobos, maddening 🙁

    09/09/2021 22:47

  • Jordan Retzer

    this was hot! leave me on the edge! grateful for the update! thank u Luna 🥰 I think he either has kissed another or is scared he will lose control. I don’t think it has anything to do with her, obviously or he would treat her differently all together, so excited for more as always! I’ll be a patient pup tho 🥺😋🤪❤️

    09/09/2021 22:20

  • Saydi Hunter

    My goddess Theia!! A simple “Why? Do you still find me distasteful, do you believe me to be impure? About that I’m not!!” This was a great chapter and return by the way! I love how much Phobos is communicating and I feel like had she not run away they could hve resolved this but now we have to draaaagggg it out lol!! oh well I’m here for it all!!

    09/09/2021 19:59

  • B Beau L

    oh my gosh...is Moira getting a girl crush on Theia? (I yet again, accidentally missed the first part of Distasteful! 🙈 I swear my pup pawed my screen as I was talking to her and it went forward a section!)Theia interrupted what Moira was replying to her... I'm probably totally off kilter but hey... you never know!

    09/09/2021 18:05

  • B Beau L

    Is Phobos disgusted by Theias lips, thinking she has kissed (and done worse) with his brother Deimos...? or is he scared of his beast wanting to claim her... I presume it's the first though... I love these books ❤️❤️❤️

    09/09/2021 17:59

  • B Beau L

    I totally love this chappy Distasteful! I'm taking this Thursday 9th September 2021 update as next week's update...so I'm gonna just re read the whole lot to keep me satisfied. hopefully all you lot do the same to keep yourselves happy (and patient!) I'm going to read a bit of Deimos / TAVT too. That's my go to book when I want to get lost somewhere else while I patiently await for an update 💖💕

    09/09/2021 17:57

  • Lidiane Barros

    I truly hope that he is afraid of kissing her because his wolf will take over again BUT at the same time wouldn’t he be afraid to do the things he just did as well and the beast take over? why just the kiss ? Granted the beast came forward when she was 18 but not at the moment they kissed but when she touched him down there 😂 over his clothes so she just did something more intimate now and nothing from the beast so a bit conflicted here 🤔 Then if its because he thinks she has been with someone else thrn again doesn’t make sense then to do the things they just did and not kiss! if he has kissed Moira I will be utterly disappointed ☹️ now another point is yes they kissed last time when she was 18 but let’s remember the fact that he tried to kiss her when he was taking her from Chronus pack … while they were at her bedroom and she turned her head ??? so he didn’t mind kissing her that day ? and didn’t she give him a peck when he saved her outside that bar just recently before he came for her ? so this whole kissing thing needs to be a really good reason / have a damn good explanations 😂😂😂 I m going mad thinking about it Lizzy thanks again for the updates sad that there won’t be anymore soon but hope you are well 🙏🏻❤️ and looking forward to more chappies soon maybe next will be Kal’s Bday 🙌🏻❤️

    09/09/2021 17:31

  • Queen M

    Thank you Luna for the suprise update. Theyvare finally reunited but it is bitter sweet. I hope Theia can claim herself and listen to his reasoning, I truly think he can’t because his beast will come further and want to mark her. I truly thinks he is looking for her to accept him as he is now.

    09/09/2021 14:30

  • Nita

    oh Phobos get it together buddy…does his lips belong to another??? if so he better get ready for Theias departure surely she won’t tolerate that!!!!

    09/09/2021 12:17

  • Cassi1234

    Luna Liz I don’t think my heart can wait out that long for an update 🥺😭🥺😭😂

    09/09/2021 09:28

  • Reader-106167

    I think Phobos probably kissed someone and hence, he has a problem with kissing her cause he didn’t keep his promise or something similar. Really don’t think Theia is the problem, here, and this could have been easily resolved if she would have just asked him why. Lol.

    09/09/2021 09:24

  • natasha wakeford

    I'm thinking his rejection in kissing her is probably to do with his wolf as he appeared last time they kissed at 18

    09/09/2021 08:31

  • QueenKae

    I needed her to ask him what the hell his problem is?! Ain’t no way you about to keep using me to help you release and you shooting me looks of disgust 🤬🤬👊🏽🔪🔫🏹

    09/09/2021 06:57

  • YAB

    instead of walking away i would demand answers from him..

    09/09/2021 06:27

  • Carol Dionne

    No update 😤😭

    09/09/2021 04:22

  • Kiera J

    Looooove this book, love the newest chapters!

    09/09/2021 03:50

  • Angel Kowal

    Can someone please explain why Phobos does not want to kiss Theia before I bust a vein on my forehead?

    09/09/2021 03:18

  • Trisha Reynolds

    still hate him what an ass. she was faithful to him and he believes lies. she needs to leave him and live her life

    09/09/2021 03:15
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