The Songbird's Love Comments
Bella Jersey 2
disgusting but typically in this world
05/27/2021 14:29Taina Iosefo
Finally Eden knows more about her father, Pan and the Edge. I’m so loving this book more and more. Dante still worrying more about Eden than the Core. Love their little story together. 🥰
05/27/2021 14:18Auras Laura
the war is at the core's door😁
05/27/2021 13:24
Reader-875591
OMG so good 😍
05/27/2021 12:15nfau4714
Ahhhhh! I just finished ch. 17 and I'm losing my mind!!! Miss Jenny Fox you are BY FAR my favorite author on this platform. BY FAR!!!!!!!!!! I love this concept very different from all the other stories here.
05/27/2021 08:21
SuperWhoFly
Chapter 19: I LOVE Loir! 💜💜💜💜
05/27/2021 07:54SuperWhoFly
Chapter 15: Awesome! Love hearing about the history of The Core!
05/27/2021 07:23
Mina Song
I love this book so much! thank you for this book!!! I cannot wait until it’s published physically!!! I’m thinking PAN is some sort of AI that her Father created to help Eden. maybe he can’t go past the core itself but virtually he can.
05/27/2021 04:00Florie Frane
Oh! Maybe PAN is an AI or system security especially made by the Architect after he realized that the core he created is not what it supposed to be. And, PAN is the only part of the core that acts to protect the people (inside and outside of the core) before the whole world become the slaves of robots and dinotrux..😆😆 And that is why, ladies and gentlemen, PAN cannot leave the core.. Haha.. Just a theory..😅😁😁
05/27/2021 01:27Reader-397104
can’t wait for next update and whenever we find out more about Pan
05/27/2021 01:15
Beatriz Astorga Morales
I’m so excited to discover more about Pan, Adam and Eden’s father... 😱🤔🙃
05/27/2021 00:22Beatriz Astorga Morales
Love Dante!
05/27/2021 00:20Beatriz Astorga Morales
Amazing!!! can’t wait to read more!!! 😱🙃🤪
05/26/2021 23:41Drawkser
I can’t get enough of this book 😍😍😍😍😍😍
05/26/2021 23:10
Ahlie
can't wait for eden to see pan
05/26/2021 22:31
monteange
is Pan an AI of the core itself? I have a feeling Pan is the Core and that's why he is stuck in it.
05/26/2021 21:23
Katie Factor
So who is PAN really??? Is he actually her dad??? Or her brother that was supposedly killed??? I can't wait to find out!
05/26/2021 20:26Ludmila Bacova
a mysterious ending...
05/26/2021 20:23Alicia Flores
O think Pan is maybe like Loir unable to walk or something like that something that prevenrs him to go with jer on the real world... and can I just say I love Dante a little more right now 💖💖💖 he will never leave Eden alone 😍😍😍
05/26/2021 20:00Maureen Lawn
Sooo, could Pan be the Architect???
05/26/2021 19:51MReinanda
This story was already very interesting, but it just got better a hundred times.
05/26/2021 19:48
Reader-555364
Very, very good 😁👍👍👍 This is going to be sooooo awesome!
05/26/2021 19:25Alicia Flores
I knew Dante was not going to like to have Eden exposed like that he really loves her and he will protect her with his life... I hope they have a happy ending with baby's and all 😍
05/26/2021 15:59
rosie
this all just got real 😳
05/26/2021 12:24
Lally Devon
Wow 😯 Brilliant Jenny Fox 🦊 Eden commander in chief 😘❤️❤️❤️
05/26/2021 12:01
Maria Patricia
awesome 👍 😊 thank you Jenny Fox 🦊❤️
05/26/2021 10:10Bella Jersey 2
I could see Eden owning that bar
05/26/2021 08:27Bella Jersey 2
oh the made eye contact
05/26/2021 08:11Raluca Iolanda Dragoi
Eden will lead the army the new Edge! Dante will go crazy but both will fight against the Core! I realy hope you will give them a happy ending!
05/26/2021 07:28SuperWhoFly
So sad to see her mom circle like that. Great writing.
05/26/2021 05:29Taina Iosefo
oh man... cliffhanger.. hahaha can’t wait for the next update!!
05/26/2021 03:15Daviana Gustafson - Espinoza
ugh! I need moooorreeeee! thank you for the update!
05/26/2021 03:12Cecilia
Makes sense the Architect’s daughter would lead the new army of hackers, The Edge 2.0. 👍🏽 He was responsible for the last assembly. I am hoping once the Zodiac meeting/plan is concluded, Eden has an opportunity to get more background from Pan in private. He made a promise to keep her safe, to who? ...and his similar looks, could he be related somehow? And why does “A” and the Dragon seem to know more about her past then she does? “A” can’t be her dead brother. Nope! why would he leave her to survive alone? He’s a Zodiac and hacker too. This story just keeps getting better though.
05/26/2021 03:02
Zaida
So Pan just decided to show up? Excuse me sir! You owe Eden an apology, an explanation, another apology, and, and, and so much more! She's been through so much!
05/26/2021 02:35Karine Provencher
great story so far
05/26/2021 01:19Kelly Kearby Berger
oh pan is involved! shits about to get real
05/26/2021 00:31
Roseam
Pan in the holographic flesh. A new Edge. The plot thickens.
05/25/2021 23:38Edina Owens
omg.... i got chills😖😖😖😖
05/25/2021 23:25Ahlie
loving how dante is protective of eden and how eden thought of dante. so when pan was gone after making sure eden is okay, he went on to find members of the new edge😍
05/25/2021 23:21Reader-397104
Wow
05/25/2021 23:19
PoisonedPix
yes war!
05/25/2021 22:09Beatriz Astorga Morales
Love how protective is Dante!!! 🥰🥰🥰 Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! ☺️😅
05/25/2021 21:36Drawkser
Dante’s reaction 😍😍😍
05/25/2021 21:25MReinanda
And she is the owner of the Edge?
05/25/2021 20:18
Sarah Kidman
I loved this update
05/25/2021 19:58
SvS 🐝
damn Eden! you’re basically a zodiac of your own now. respect girl
05/25/2021 19:56
nemone van Der bliake
war with the core! And Eden owns the edge
05/25/2021 19:22Reader-555364
Wow!!! It’s all going to kick off!!!! 😁😁
05/25/2021 19:17Mulenga Mwamba
patiently waiting for an update
05/25/2021 18:50Wendy Pisani Hertel
desperate for an update!
05/25/2021 08:42SuperWhoFly
What an interesting story. Different from her other stories. I'm looking forward to reading more of this! 💜
05/25/2021 08:36Web Bookworm
I think Pan might be an uncle or grandfather. someone who was close with her dad & has the same skills. I can’t figure out A though...is it Adam since he pretended to be dead and created a new identity to hide who he was?
05/25/2021 04:53Monica Corbin
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!❤❤❤❤
05/25/2021 04:20linda
oh hell no. 🙈👌 I reread the whole book, so worth it! ❤ but not the waiting again. 😂🤯🙈🙏
05/24/2021 21:18Sharon MacDonald
instead of claim up, you should say she should of clammed up
05/24/2021 17:07
Adin Nahk
could A be Eden's father if not pan
05/24/2021 10:56Mulenga Mwamba
oh my goodness, when is the next update???? so excited
05/24/2021 09:18xian
omg I can’t wait for next chapter
05/24/2021 01:41Taina Iosefo
OMG OMG... I can’t believe there’s a hologram of PAN and then the Dragon asks Ghost while looking at Eden to join them. This is so so so so interesting.. I’m so excited for the next updates!! 😁
05/23/2021 22:10
Satrupa Mohapatra
wowww Dragon knew that Eden is ghost that's quite interesting..PAN is also involved with them that sounds good ..M eager to read the next chapter this story is getting more interesting day by day
05/23/2021 20:57
Lizard
Low key thought that Pan might be the Architect in hiding! I want to know so bad!!!!
05/23/2021 19:06rosie
holy cow!! now I’m super anxious. Dante has to be feeling on edge (no pun intended) and also proud and possessive right now. PAN!!!
05/23/2021 17:10Kelly Kearby Berger
oh my goodness! he got pan there and admitted she was the ghost !
05/23/2021 14:59Lally Devon
Just finish reading the last update Omg 😳 now I’m freaking wow was not expecting that at all can’t wait for the next update 🙏😘❤️❤️❤️
05/23/2021 14:06Lally Devon
I love 💕 Loir he is amazingly hilarious 🤣 😘❤️❤️❤️
05/23/2021 12:39Lally Devon
Omg 😳 he said the three words ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
05/23/2021 12:38Anne Embery
say WHHHAAAAATTTTTTT, Wow, that is .....just wow, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
05/23/2021 11:49Sara McGil
omg! what a cliffhanger.....!!
05/23/2021 10:35
Mhajay
Pan and Ghost reunited, , can't wait for next chapter
05/23/2021 10:13
Maika Pertille
ohhh really? such an episode and cliff hanger there, love it!!!
05/23/2021 09:22Sky Queen
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!
05/22/2021 23:08T.H.E. Miller.C
side note: I really think everyone should give Lior a thank you once in a while!
05/22/2021 22:42T.H.E. Miller.C
how long between updates or is it random?
05/22/2021 22:39T.H.E. Miller.C
love it:) thank you for this story, even if I have to wait forever for five minutes at a time... I need more!
05/22/2021 22:37Julia Lehmann
Damn, this was intense 😅😆
05/22/2021 21:50Zaida
DID OLD MAN LONG JUST OUT HER?!?! What is going on???
05/22/2021 21:32
Marie hollend
my head just popped🤯 and my heart beat just stopped😱 I should have waited to read this with the next update omg!!!!! I love this story can't get enough Right on Jenny Fox 😍
05/22/2021 20:41Hannah P
owner of the edge? can't wait for the next chapter to know more. excited to finally get to hear from pan as well
05/22/2021 16:35Maria Patricia
holy 😳😳😳😳😳! that's so cool 🥰😍
05/22/2021 15:07Auras Laura
what is this....so short 😔 untill next update😭
05/22/2021 13:57Roseam
Pan and Ghost..... interesting. The Dragon looks set to take the Core down.
05/22/2021 13:24Cecilia
Jenny you are the Queen of cliffhangers! Excellent 👏
05/22/2021 10:54
KrairedEyes
what? Pan? what!? everyone knows who Eden os!? what!? ... makes sense she own the Edge since her dad died. I kept trhing to scroll down hoping to read more 😅. Sorry but I was not missing this type of cliffhangers. so ready for next update
05/22/2021 08:57
Alyssa Ling
Changan- is not the name of the Chinese shirt. is cheong sum but only ladies will wear that.
05/22/2021 08:27IiyuminB
big oof I wasn't not ready for that cliffhanger.
05/22/2021 08:17Péntekné Horváth Andrea
wow!
05/22/2021 08:00
Lei Kela
omg omg cliffhanger!!!!! i need to know what happens next. so excited! 💕💕💕
05/22/2021 07:50Emmilie
arghhhhh omg can’t wait for the next chapter!
05/22/2021 06:44
Tamia Starkey
Major cliffhanger 😩
05/22/2021 05:59Inna McCans
oooooommmmgggg!!!! omg!!
05/22/2021 05:58Fatema Bhattacharya
Wowwww!! the last sentence was too much! I officially love this book.
05/22/2021 05:41Lauren Rendero
whatttttt
05/22/2021 05:29conso Africa
I just wanna know .... did Dante know this plan ? oh God !!!
05/22/2021 05:18
AA12345
Damn....Jenny u certainly know how to leave ur readers wanting more !
05/22/2021 04:56Reader-397104
how does he know she’s ghost?
05/22/2021 04:51Michelle Hill
OMG the owner of Edge?? wouldn’t that be Loir? and Pan!!!!! how does A. know who it is!?
05/22/2021 04:43Sanah Soliman Lestat Hym
ohmygod! Eden finally meeting Pan!!
05/22/2021 04:41M NC
omg how is the tigger going to react having her so far away
05/22/2021 04:38Hannah P
wow! pan finally and it's awesome
05/22/2021 04:16Reader-875591
holy moly!! this is so good!!!
05/22/2021 03:23
